Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Stealing Sexy Keiko’s Lust


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(The Nakamura home…)

 

It was close to noon today. Most of the people that lived in the middle class Oak Meadows neighborhood were either at work or school, as it was monday. A yellow car pulled up to the Nakamura home after rushing down the highway to get back. The sounds of DJ K-Booty’s latest mixtape pulsed from the car’s speakers. The sound was so loud the car’s music could be heard several blocks down. As the car inched closer to the garage, the garage door began to raise up. The yellow vehicle pulled into the garage and parked, and the booming bass filled music ended abruptly. Stepping out of the car, the driver revealed herself to be a buxom, curvaceous and shapely young woman, who appeared to be in her 20’s. Her wide hips, thick thighs and rotund ass were hugged by a pair of tight rainbow tye dye patterned yoga sweatpants. Her healthily sized mammaries were barely contained by her skin tight white t-shirt. The woman’s face was obscured by the brim of a white baseball cap she wore on her head. A set of squared off bangs hung from underneath her hat and lined her forehead. The woman’s eyes were a cherry red hue and had a soulful look to them. The light bags underneath gave away the fact that she was tired.

 

The white haired woman walked inside of her home and took off her cap, which was soaked with her forehead sweat on the inside, and tossed it onto a nearby couch. The walls of her residence was adorned with several framed pictures of herself and her little brother Eiji Nakamura. The young woman was Keiko Nakamura. She worked at a local dentists office as a hygienist by day and worked a second part time job working nights at a World Mart warehouse. She had taken this job to help pay for Eiji’s horrendous knee injury which had derailed his promising future in the NBA. Eiji’s former college refused to cover the bills after several doctors determined he wouldn’t play basketball again. It was exhausting work but Keiko believed it necessary to help her brother.

 

Keiko walked upstairs to her bedroom and immediately started undressing when she walked in. She kicked off her white sneakers before pulling her shirt over her head and tossing it into a laundry basket on the other side of the room. Next she pulled down her pants to the floor and flung them into the laundry basket with her foot. All that was left was her underwear which consisted of a gray thong which had a black waistband that had the word “PINK” printed on it along with a matching sports bra which had a similar black band on the bottom. She took them off before heading into her master bathroom. Keiko stepped into the shower and turned the hot water nozzle.

 

SIZZZZZZZZZZZZ!

 

“Ahhhhhhh!~” Keiko sighed deeply as the warm and gentle spray of water hit her smooth, ivory skin. She stood there for a moment with her eyes closed. The 4 spray nozzles in the shower caressed her body with relaxing jets of water. It had been a rough night on the job for her which was spent unloading hundreds of heavy boxes from a truck and then stocking merchandise from said boxes onto store shelves. It being back to school season made it even more taxing as trucks brought in bigger loads to be stocked. She was supposed to be at her primary job today but she requested the day off due to an important event that was going on.

 

The silver haired hottie then turned off the other 3 spray nozzles only leaving the main one on. She then reached for the bottle of body wash and her loofah, which were sitting on a shelf inside of the shower. Keiko raised the bottle of body wash above her and drizzled herself with the orange translucent gel that was stored inside of the bottle. The soap had a tropical scent to it which was a mixture of pineapple, citrus and hibiscus blossoms. Keiko rubbed the soap on her body with her hands. Bubbles formed on her tits massaged them and squeezed them with her fingers. Next she grabbed her loofah and applied more body wash to it.

 

“Ahhhh…..oooohhh!” sounded the white haired, crimson eyed beauty as she began to wash herself with the loofah. She washed all over but paid specific attention to her pussy. She used the loofah like a sex toy, in fact it actually was one; from a new line of common household necessities that can be used for self play. It served a dual purpose for Keiko, getting her clean and getting her off at the same time! She rubbed her pussy in a back forth motion, lightly stroking her vaginal walls on the way to hitting her clit with the power loofah. Her moans gradually grew louder with each passing minute. Eventually she dropped the loofah and dug in with her index and middle fingers. She gradually picked up speed, pushing in and out with her fingers, hitting her own g-spot immediately. Keiko entered her own thoughts imagining that she was with a handsome bull cocked stud.

 

“Annhhh… A Little faster, come on, give it to me!” Keiko moaned to herself while picking up the pace. She pressed her clitoris with the pad of her finger. She then reached up and grabbed the shower head, detaching it from the slot it was sitting in. The busty woman then adjusted the spray setting until the multiple thin streams of water converged into a single thick, high pressure beam. She spread her warm hole open with two fingers and lowered the sprayer head with her other hand, blasting herself with the jet stream of water.

 

“AHHHH! YESSSS! FUCK ME HARD, FUCK!”

 

By moving the sprayer head back and forth, Keiko created dildo/vibrator effect with the water. Its jet stream was powerful yet gentle enough to stimulate her throbbing clit.

 

“UGGGH! I WANT YOU TO FUCK ME HARDER! MAKE THIS PUSSY YOURS! POUND IT WITH THAT BIG COCK!” Keiko screamed to her imaginary sex partner. She leaned forward and pressed up against shower wall with her shoulder for support. She began to shake while inching closer and closer to a climax, with every passing second bringing her closer to rapture.

 

ALMOST THERE! I’m gonna cummmmm!”

 

Keiko pushed her fingers even deeper into her hole while still spraying with the water. She trembled even more and her legs began to give as she was gripped with the intense sensation of orgasmic bliss!

 

UMMMMPH! AHHHH YESSZZ!” Keiko wailed, the bathing beauty dropping the spray head to the floor! She grabbed the steel towel rack in the shower to keep from falling to the floor. She stood for a moment, let out a deep breath as the sensation subsided. Keiko then turned off the water and stepped out of the shower. After drying off with a towel, she grabbed a bottle of deep moisturizing lotion and squeezed some into her hand. Its scent matched the tropical aroma of her body wash, for she ordered them as part of a set from one of those makeup/ skincare websites. This is how Keiko kept her ivory skin in such pristine condition. The red eyed woman rubbed the lotion all over her body starting with the arms. While applying the lotion, she swung her hefty hips in a circle, dancing to the beat of DJ K-Booty’s mix of hip hop songs.

 

She put one foot on top of the toilet seat so she could lotion down her leg. She rubbed down her meaty thigh, moving her hands in a slow back and forth motion. She bent over slightly in order to get the other parts of her leg.

 

After finishing her legs, Keiko grabbed the bottle of lotion once more and danced her way over to the mirror and began playing with the bottle of lotion as if it were a live dick in her hands. She playfully gestured like she was performing oral on the lotion bottle before squeezing it and shooting thick white liquid all over her magnificent breasts! Keiko then put the bottle down and started rubbing the lotion on her tits, shaking and playing with them; admiring herself in the mirror.

 

Once she was finished in the bathroom, Keiko grabbed her robe from a hook that was hanging on the bathroom door. It was a velvet maroon colored gown which had purple fur trim around the collar and on the ends of the sleeves. After putting on her robe, she walked over to a dresser in her bedroom and opened a drawer. Keiko grabbed a black pair of stockings out of it and sat down on the edge of the bed to put them on.

 

As the ivory princess walked out of her bedroom, she suddenly felt a presence near her, but before she could react she felt something hard poke her in the back. However it wasn’t the head of a hard dick that was poking her, it was the cold muzzle of a handgun that was sticking her!

 

“Don’t move hoe!” Ordered a forceful voice from behind Keiko.

 

“Listen up bitch. If you do everything I tell you to do, I just might let you live. If you don’t, this ain’t gonna end well for you!” Said the voice.

 

“I’ll do anything you want, please don’t kill me.” Keiko pleaded.

 

“First things first, I want all your money, jewelry, whatever you got!”

 

“Ok, I got some stuff in my room.”

 

“Let’s get it then bitch!” Demanded the robber. Keiko walked back to her bedroom and approached her jewelry box. The criminal followed and kept his pistol raised in Keiko’s direction. The silver haired maiden looked over her shoulder at the intruder. He was over 6 feet tall in height. He wore a pair of denim jean shorts and a white “Wife beater” style tank top shirt. His clothing revealed his ethnicity to Keiko, that of a black man. His face was obscured by the black ski mask he was wearing. His orange colored eyes reflected confidence as well as excitement for what he was doing. The criminal pulled a bag from the waistband of his shorts and opened it up.

 

“Hurry up hoe! Quit stallin me! Put everything in the bag NOW!” Keiko opened up her jewelry box and hurriedly poured its contents into the bag.

 

“What else you got?! If I catch you holdin’ out on me I’m gonna kill you!” declared the robber.

 

“I have some cash up here.” Keiko admitted as she dashed over to her bed. She lifted up her mattress with one hand and swept out 6 bundles of cash, $1, $5, $10, $20, $50 and $100 bills onto the floor. The robber walked up and held the bag open for her

 

“You know what to do bitch, I gotta have all that right’chea!” Remarked the robber. Keiko put all the money into the bag.

 

“I got more cash, credit and debit cards in my purse downstairs!”

 

“Get yo ass up then. Lets go hoe! And put your hands up!” Ordered the robber as he pointed his gun at Keiko again. She walked out of her room and slowly walked down the stairs with her hands up. The robber followed, keeping her at gunpoint as they made their way down to the first floor.

 

“Look at dat body! You thicker than a bowl of oatmeal!” The criminal admitted as he followed his scantily clad hostage down the stairs.

 

“And don’t try no slick shit either!” Added the robber while gesturing with his gun. After getting downstairs the pair moved to the living room. Keiko walked towards the couch with her hands still high in the air.

 

“My purse is on the couch.” Keiko said.

 

“Cash, credit cards, change, I need all that.”

 

Keiko dumped the contents of her purse into the robber’s outstretched bag. Several condoms fell into the bag.

 

“Thanks for the rubbers bitch. They’ll be handy later!” the criminal joked while nodding at her. The criminal looked around for a moment, scanning for any more objects he could take. As he scanned the room, the robber locked his eyes on a door in the kitchen. Shortly after, he saw her car keys

 

“Let’s see what’s in the garage!” Ordered the armed man, while waving his gun at Keiko. The dental hygienist sauntered over to the garage door with her hands still raised high.

 

“Open the door, hoe!” Barked the home invader. Keiko did as she was told, opening the door hesitantly. She didn’t want to lose her car, but in this situation it was going to be her car or her life! The criminal could hear her deep nervous breaths as she entered the garage. The interior was a wide area that could hold 2 vehicles. The back wall of the room was lined with waffle-like metal grating which held up several bicycles that hung on the wall. The wall directly across from the entrance door was lined with gray and blue cabinets which were full of light bulbs, extension cords and other miscellaneous objects. In the very back of the garage a lawn mower, weed wacker and a leaf blower sat near the door which led to the home’s backyard. Keiko’s car, a yellow 2 door coupe, sat parked in the center of the garage. It was in pristine condition. Its slick shine was the result of a drive thru car wash she stopped at on the way home.

 

“Bet you work your ass off to afford this ride. Don’t worry boo, I’ll take good care of it for you.” Joked the criminal while rubbing the hood of the car with one hand.

 

“Take it! JUST TAKE IT! That’s everything! Can you please go now?!”

 

“I don’t think that’s everything yet” remarked the criminal with a sinister grin. He then proceeded to size her up, looking up and down her busty, curvy frame. The whites of Keiko’s enlarged while her irises shrunk down to tiny circles as she realized what was now on the armed assailant’s mind. Her lower lip trembled and her legs quivered, almost causing her to lose balance; as if they were made of linguine. The young man held the gun at his waist, pointing it at Keiko as he reached out toward her. He gently rubbed her face and flashed a smirk before moving closer to her. The home invader leaned in to kiss Keiko, causing her to turn her head away from him.

 

PLEASE DON’T!” Keiko hollered in hopes the robber would stop. However, he persisted, and since he couldn’t kiss her lips he targeted her neck. He pecked her lightly. Keiko gave a mixed reaction to this.

 

“Please stop! Don’t do this!” Begged the woman with the crimson eyes. Though she pleaded for the man to stop, her body signaled something else. Her nipples slowly hardened as the man pressed up against her breasts. Keiko offered no physical resistance to the man’s advances and her demands for him to stop gave way, being replaced with deep heavy breaths. The invader reached down towards the belt that tied around the waist of the robe and undid the knot that held her robe closed. The robe then parted to the sides, exposing her bare front to the criminal. He stopped to look down at her thick curves, before grabbing hold of her heavy melons. He squeezed and tugged them roughly, as if he were playing with putty. Backed up against the door of her vehicle, Keiko had very little she could do about this. The man had a gun and even if he didn’t, there was no way she could beat him in a physical struggle.

 

YOU DON’T HAVE TO DO THIS! PLEASE STOP! I CAN GET YOU MORE MONEY!” Keiko begged, but the man ignored her words and proceeded on.

 

“Lemme see what that ass is about!” The man ordered, which prompted Keiko to turn and move away from the door of the car. The goon then put one hand on her hip as he slowly moved behind her. Keiko’s hesitancy to fight back made the thug feel comfortable enough to put down his gun. He laid it on top of the vehicle and reached around to front of Keiko’s body. He slid his hand up her right side before briefly stopping. He then removed his left hand from her hip and brazenly pulled the ski mask off of his head allowing Keiko to his face. This was indeed an idiotic action for him to take because this enables Keiko, to identify him to the police. However, his overconfidence and lust made him careless.

 

“Tsskk…” Sighed the elder Nakamura sibling as she felt, the thief’s left hand return to her waistline. The busty silver haired woman looked down as he crept lower and lower with his fingers, inching closer and closer to her pussy. Her nipples continued to harden as he squeezed her right one in between his thumb and index fingers, lightly pressing down it and rubbing it in between his digits.

 

“This is so wrong, but it feels good….” Keiko hissed.

 

Keiko instinctively let out a soft purring moan as the unknown assailant planted kisses along the side of her neck. Her body became tense and tight in reaction to the continued touching as she debated what was going on in her mind. Her brain told her no, this was wrong, however Keiko could not deny how good the criminal’s touch felt. Her warm slit began to glisten from the juices that were gradually starting to flow.

 

“Ahhhhhhhhh~” Keiko sounded as she felt the man’s fingers caress the outer area of her vaj. He moved his fingers back and forth, almost as if he were teasing Keiko by not reaching inside of her immediately. The invader continued to grope her humongous breasts while moving closer to the opening of her pussy with his fingers.

 

“I shouldn’t be letting this happen, but the way I feel is….” Keiko said, conflicted about the situation at hand, Jerome’s hand to be specific. It had been a while since Keiko had enjoyed some 1 on 1 time with a man due to her putting in overtime hours at work and helping her little brother with rehabilitating his knee injury.

 

Keiko opened her mouth in surprise as she felt the criminal’s trouser snake getting stiff. The tent in his pants gradually rose up, spreading her ass cheeks apart. The thick red eyed hottie then started moving her hips back and forth, initiating a dry hump version of hotdogging. This movement was reflexive, thoughtless, due to the feel of a big dick between her buns compelled her to react to her attacker in this way. Sensing that Keiko was close to surrendering to him willingly, the robber moved his fingers once more, finally making contact with Keiko’s pussy. He rubbed his fingers along the edges of her pussy lips, causing her to yelp just a bit. Her heartbeat quickened as a response and so did her breaths.

 

“Ahhh…Unnghh…please….Don’t…” Keiko begged weakly. But at this point it was clear ‘Don’t’ actually meant ‘Do’. The invader pushed his middle finger into Keiko, followed by his index, slowly probing while also softly jabbing her clit. Her eyes widened before rolling upwards in response to the fingering the criminal was giving her.

 

“Keiko, it’s time. Go to the living room.” Instructed a voice from within the bag that contained Keiko’s belongings. It was the voice Sori, the digital assistant within her phone’s Operating system. Keiko immediately stepped forward and closed her robe.

 

“Enough! We have to take a little break now Jerome.” Announced the robed beauty.

 

“Break?! Comonnnnnnnn! We were just getting to the GOOD part!” Whined Jerome.

 

“Today is the BSU orientation. My brother has a presentation that I REFUSE to miss.” Keiko explained before leaving the garage and reentering her home.

 

“Really, you stopped me for that?! You could have DVRed that!” Jerome tried to reason, unconcerned with Keiko’s need to watch the Orientation.

 

“Yes, I did, If you have a problem, the door is right there.” Remarked Keiko sharply, her demeanor quickly shifting from the damsel in distress she pretended to be minutes earlier.

 

“That was my first time getting to do the ‘That’” in regards to the home invasion fantasy Keiko interrupted. Jerome continued to complain. However, he chose to stay and followed Keiko to the couch.

 

“There’s always time for that Jerome. Have a little patience please.” Keiko quipped back. The crimson eyed maiden before walking over to the refrigerator. She grabbed herself a soda out of the fridge and sat down at the edge of the couch.

 

“And now for the first Annual BSU orientation special coming to you live from Busteez Slut University.” Announced the TV show host.

 

Keiko and Jerome watched on as Taiyohime delivered her opening speech, which was interrupted by the arrival of first year student Xavier Williams. Keiko watched on attentively, eagerly awaiting her brother’s turn to take the Busteez stage. She, like many others in their teens and twenties, had seen Koko’s multi-platform hit piece post against him and got enjoyment from seeing him diss her with his battle freestyle.

 

“Just look at Koko! She got roasted!” Keiko remarked with a giggle. Jerome sat there unenthusiastically playing on his phone, not at all paying attention to the TV or caring what’s happening at orientation. She clapped her hands as the rage filled rapping first presenter left the stage.

 

Surprisingly enough, Keiko was familiar with some of the students who presented. Violette Beauregard was a mainstay in tabloid magazines and online gossip columns and had been since she first made a guest appearance on the Wellington’s World Tv show. She was also familiar with Hitomi Shinoda, the popular online streaming personality. The pair continued to watch the Orientation special until it was Eiji’s turn. Keiko watched attentively as her younger brother spoke. She steeled herself as the footage of the injury sequence played. This was her first time seeing it since it happened live. Keiko had tried to erase this gruesome sight from her memory…. She kept a straight face but not for long, as her brother’s words would start to affect her.

 

“But when I was rehabbing from my injury, that was something I had to do alone….” Keiko recalled seeing him struggling to exercise his injured leg, relearning how to stand up and later walk. Keiko missed out on most of this process because she had to work in order to put food on the table, maintain a place for them to stay and keep the lights on. Keiko regretted not taking a more active role in Eiji’s recovery. Tears welled up in her eyes as he continued. Keiko’s emotions ran the full gamut as Eiji continued to speak…

 

“I love the attention, the fame, the headlines about me! I love the money!…. But more importantly I love the competition and of course, I LOVE TO FUCK!!”…Keiko then busted out with laughter at this candid admission from her brother.

 

Eiji then sat down in his chair on stage and scooped some ice into his shot glass and poured himself a healthy shot of whiskey.

 

“I know you guys don’t have any whiskey to take a shot with me, hell some of you are already sauced courtesy of Jade.” Joked the youth. Keiko got out of her seat and sprinted to the refrigerator. She grabbed a bottle of Riesling wine and 2 glasses and rushed back to her seat. She poured one glass for Jerome and the other for herself.

 

“If you have something to drink with you, water, soda, coffee, whatever, raise it up in the air.”

 

THAT’S WHAT I’M TALKIN ABOUT BRO! YOU CAN WIN THIS!” Keiko yelled while standing again and raising her glass in the air. Jerome remained seated and raised his glass in a half assed, indifferent kind of way.

 

“This is a new beginning for me…To my future and yours BSU!” Eiji proclaimed forcefully before leading the crowd in taking a drink. He guzzled down a double shot like it was water before taking another pause. Keiko clapped her hands loudly and cheered him on as he made his delivered the final point of his presentation.

 

I WILL BECOME A SUPERSTAR IN THIS INDUSTRY AND GET BACK EVERYTHING I LOST!” Announced the fiery 1st year recruit.

 

Keiko continued to cheer until Eiji left the stage and the TV broadcast transitioned to a commercial break. She turned the TV off and looked over to Jerome, still seated on the other end of the couch.

 

“So I guess you had a lot to deal with, you know with him being hurt and all.” Jerome remarked in a fake “concerned” tone. As Jerome opened his mouth to speak again, Keiko pressed her fingers against his lips, aware that he didn’t genuinely care about her and Eiji’s struggles.

 

“We both know YOU aren’t here to talk about that with me.” Keiko interrupted. She then removed her finger from his lips.

 

“Let’s finish what we started…” She continued as she grabbed his gun off of the coffee table and pointed it at him.

 

“We left off with you STICKING me up” Keiko said with a seductive smile; before leaning towards the faux roleplaying robber. Jerome moved towards her. Keiko closed her eyes as their lips met, placing her hand on one of his cheeks. Jerome reached out and grabbed her sumptuous booty with both hands and pulled her towards him. The sexy ivory hottie swirled her tongue around in Jerome’s mouth. Her lips and tongue tasted of fresh honey mixed with the sweet grape taste of the wine she drank.

 

“Mmmmm…ahhhhhh” she moaned and panted as Jerome opened her robe. Keiko shrugged her shoulders and shimmied her way out of it. Letting the robe fall to the floor. She then rose from a seated position on the couch to a kneeling posture, so that her jumbo sized tits were right in her partner’s face. Keiko shook her torso from side to side, slapping him across the face. The house guest grinned as she smacked him around with her soft, pillowy mounds of flesh. Jerome wrapped his arms around her and flicked his tongue out and poked her tit with its tip.

 

“Ahhh… ooooowwwwooww!” Keiko whined as her nipples grew stiff on the tip of his tongue. He used his tongue like a paint brush, creating a work of art on the breasts in front of him. Goosebumps on and around Keiko’s areolas as grasped her right nipple between his teeth. Her heartbeat sped up once more as she felt a surge of adrenaline course through her veins.

 

“Harrrrderrr” Keiko begged. Jerome responded by grabbing hold of her giant tetas. He squeezed and tugged away at them while also pinching her flesh. The painful sensation created an immense pleasure for Keiko, causing her to tremble once more. Jerome then felt a light wetness on the leg of his jeans. She felt the bulge in his pants swell again and brush up against her inner thigh. To tease him even more, the white haired girl rocked back and forth, dry humping the man’s rod with her meaty thighs.

 

“Ooohhh! It’s so big! I wanna see it…..I wanna suck it! Pull it out!” Keiko demanded. The “Attacker” unzipped his pants and Keiko grabbed the legs of his pants and crawled backwards, slowly pulling off his expensive designer denim jeans. He raised up off of the couch slightly to make it easier to get his pants off. The red eyed temptress slid off his pants and boxer shorts simultaneously and dropped them to the floor before leaning in closer to his waist region. Keiko grabbed hold of Jerome’s dick and started working it with her hand. He possessed a decent sized cock which fit with his stout muscular build. Jerome groaned lightly in response to the strokes, watching her tits bounce with her back and forth wrist.

 

“Keep growing for me.” Keiko encouraged me. Jerome quickly responded and extended into a fully erect state. Thick veins swelled underneath the skin.

 

“It’s been a while!” remarked the dental assistant, eying the big cock before her like it was a porterhouse steak. The last year had been a busy one for Keiko, one filled with grueling 15+ hour workdays. This was the sacrifice she made for Eiji’s sake and because of that, she didn’t get to mingle like a single woman in her twenties usually does. She then stopped jerking him off and parted her lips, slowly inching closer to the tip of his dick. After opening her mouth, she stopped just short touching its head with her lips.

 

“Do you want me to suck you this big fat cock?” Keiko asked in a sweet tone.

 

“Hell yeah bitch…You know what to do.” Jerome replied

 

Keiko pressed her purple painted lips around the head of Jerome’s dong, squeezing tightly with her mouth.

 

MMMMMPH! HUGUUH! GUUURR! MMMMM!” Keiko moaned as she sucked away. She coated his dick in her saliva, some of which ran down her chin and dropped onto her tits. It was like she moved completely on instinct, her lips, tongue and jaw worked in harmony. Each time she bobbed her head forward, Keiko consumed another inch.

 

AUUGHH! MUUF! GLUG!” Keiko gagged as took his cock in the back of her throat for the first time.

 

COUGH! COUGH!

 

Keiko pulled her head back momentarily to cough.

 

“Too much dick for you?!” Jerome joked.

 

“How about a little more!” he followed up. Jerome then thrust his hips upwards, jamming his dick in her throat. Keiko gagged to the point of nearly pulling away again and losing her breakfast, however she placed her hands on Jerome’s legs for support.

 

GUGH! CLUG! UNNNGHHH! UMMMMMPH!” Gurgled the thicc crimson eyed woman.

 

OOOH! That’s right you dirty hoe. Be a good girl and have some more.” Jerome remarked with a smirk as he pumped his hips faster. The pretend thug then placed his hand on the back of Keiko’s head and grabbed a big handful of her hair. First with 1 hand and then both, the man proceeded to quite literally face fuck her. Keiko looked up at him as if she were smiling at Jerome with her eyes. She had gotten used to the throat throttling rather quickly, showing that her initial struggles were merely a case of bedroom rust from not having not been with a man in years.

 

The busty hygienist then closed her mouth around Jerome’s cock, clamping down on it like a pitbull biting a fleeing intruder on the ass.

 

MMMPPPH! UNNGH! SWIIICCK SLURRRRP!!!” Keiko sounded as she aggressively gulped down his meat. She lowered her head quickly, bobbing back and forth like a piston. The white goddess gobbled down his full length over and over. Jerome’s groans grew louder and louder, progressing into full blown moaning.

 

SWO, WUT WURR U SAWAWAYING?” Keiko mumbled while continuing to suck away.

 

“God damn! You got that fire head bitch!” Jerome praised. Keiko opened her mouth and released the vice-like grip she had on his dick. She then proceeded to lick his dong, starting with the tip. She flicked her tongue up and down, poking at his cockhead causing her partner to giggle heavily.

 

“Too much mouth for you huh?” Keiko asked with a sarcastic smirk. She grabbed his cock by the tip and latched on to the side of his shaft

 

SMMUUUWAACK SMMUUUWAACK SMMUUUWAACK!

 

She held his dong by its tip and went down its side like she was munching on some corn on the cob. Keiko started on the left side of his length, moved to the right side and finally, the underside, massaging and tickling his balls with the palm of her hand and the tips of her fingers.

 

OH SHIT! OH SHIT! OH SHIT! OH SHIT! I’M GONNA NUTTT!” Jerome hollered. They busty woman with Ruby colored eyes grabbed her mega mammaries with both hands.

 

SMACK!

 

A tremor-like force surged through Keiko’s fleshy melons creating a ripple effect around Jerome’s dick!

 

DAAAAMN!” He screamed as cum erupted from his dick. The temptress raised her hands and put them up in the air palms outward like she did earlier when Jerome had her at gunpoint earlier. Without using her hands at all, Keiko smushed his pole in between her tetas and moved them up and down in an alternating up and down pattern. Semen rained down on Keiko’s head, some hitting the top of her head, some hitting her beautiful face before dripping down to her tits.

 

“This is a stick up! Gimme all your cum now!” She joked while milking the viscous white fluid from him. Some of it dropped down on her tongue while she was talking which she didn’t intend to happen. She swallowed the acrid tasting fluid, not reacting to the bitter taste through facial expressions. She then turned around and got on all fours, spreading her snatch open with two fingers.

 

“So what are you gonna do with all this Mr. Home invader?” Keiko asked with a devilish smile. She turned around and assumed the position, getting on all fours. Jerome moved behind Keiko and grabbed a big handful of ass, leaning forward while holding his dick in the other hand. Before he could push his way in, Keiko turned back around to face him.

 

“Remember what I told you on the phone.” Keiko chided, reminding him of something they agreed upon prior to the meeting.

 

“Yeah…” Jerome acknowledged with a sigh before taking off his pants completely. Reaching into his pants pocket, Jerome pulled out a condom and held it up.

 

“Good!” Keiko remarked in response while taking the condom from him. After opening up the wrapper, Keiko put the condom in between her lips and lowered her head. She hugged the tip of his cock with her lips, aligning the opening of the rubber with it. The sexy nymph leaned in slowly gradually opening her mouth wider to slide the condom on, eventually covering his entire length with the snug fitting latex cock coat.

 

“Now, we’re ready!” she said with a seductive grin as she turned her back and assumed the position again.

 

The muscular man pushed his dick inside of Keiko, an audible POPPING noise can be heard.

 

AHHHHH!” Keiko sighed deeply and immediately as soon as she felt Jerome’s first thrust. Jerome held on to her bubble booty with both hands as he explored Keiko’s hole. It was tight and wet, with a feeling of warmth unlike any woman he had been with before. She was unlike any of the many women Jerome had bedded before both in maturity and sexual skill, for Keiko was real woman compared to the girls Jerome spent his time with. Keiko smiled as the pretend gangster probed deeper, gradually putting in more effort as he fucked her longer.

 

CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP!

 

OOOOH! Fuck my pussy, like a REAL gangster!” Keiko cooed while holding on to the arm of the chair. Jerome responded swiftly and pumped his hips forward with more force. The sexpot’s pussy grew wetter and wetter with each passing moment, relaxing and conforming itself to the make believe thug’s hefty flesh rod! The loud slapping of flesh mixed with Keiko’s moans drowned out all other forms of sound in the room, including her phone which was ringing inside of Jerome’s trash bag.

 

Elsewhere, at the same time, Eiji stood in the security area of the main entrance to the arena. He had stopped there after leaving the stage. He held the phone as it rang over and over.

 

“Hey! I’m busy and can’t answer right now, you know what to do, leave me a message after the beep! BEEP!” said the voicemail on Keiko’s phone. Eiji silently pushed the red end call icon on his touch screen and typed a short text message.

 

“Did you see it?” He asked in the message before pushing the send button. He stood there for about two minutes waiting for a response. It took a lot for him to get on stage and humble himself before the world so he was eager to hear his sister’s thoughts. However, since Keiko was preoccupied, their feedback session would have to wait until later. Meanwhile back at the Nakamura home……

 

ANNHHH! UNNGGHH! That dick is so good! OWWWOWWW!” Keiko screamed as Jerome plugged her furiously. Her body rocked and leaned forward as Jerome pounded away. The sweat drops from her face and tits created a squeaking noise and her face and body rubbed into the leather of the couch.

 

UMMMMMPH! How does it feel? You like this pussy huh?”

 

YOU GOT THAT FIRE!” Jerome replied before groaning again.

 

YAHHH! GIVE TO ME! I WANT IT! I GOTTA HAVE IT. I WANT THAT THUG LIFE DICK! AHHHH!” Keiko wailed loudly while bouncing her ass against him. She matched his rhythm and pace, increasing her intensity to equal Jerome’s. The faux criminal then repositioned himself and got on his feet, assuming a squatting position. Jerome fucked her with greater force and used his legs to generate more power. The couch moved slightly with each forward thrust. The leather squealed repeatedly due to the friction between it and Keiko’s body. Her love juiced dripped off of his cock and trickled down her thighs between thunderous pumps.

 

“Bitch, I got a question for you! WHO’S THE MAN?!

 

UUUWAAAAAHH! YOU ARE ROMEY ROME!

 

WHO OWNS THAT PUSSY?!

 

YOU DO?

 

YOU LOVE THIS DICK DON’T YA… YOU DIRTY SLUT!

 

YES! YES! YES! I lOVE IT! I CAN FEEL IT ALL OVER MY BODY! KEEP GOING! TAKE THAT PUSSY!” Keiko howled while grabbing the arm of the couch tightly. Eiji’s big sister then raised her legs off of the couch and scissored them around Jerome’s waist, creating a variation of the wheelbarrow position. She squeezed Jerome’s hips tightly, thrusting backwards with her hips and using her legs to pull Jerome’s hips into her, effectively controlling his thrusts and movements herself. Impressed with Keiko’s skill, Jerome remained still and allowed Keiko to use him as her living, breathing vibrator!

 

UNNNNGHHH! IT’S SO DEEP! OOH YEAH! OOH YEAH! OOH YEAH! I FEEL FUCKING GREAT!” Keiko moaned.

 

She swung her hips from side to side while backing up against Jerome, sliding herself back and forth on his dick. He held on to the top of the couch with one hand and the arm of the couch with the other. The feel of Keiko’s pussy was so exquisite that it didn’t matter that Jerome was wearing a condom.

 

I WANT YOU TO FUCK ME AS HARD AS YOU CAN!” Keiko demanded while releasing the grip she had on him with her legs. She then turned around and laid down on her back and stretched out on the couch.

 

“I can do that.” Jerome replied with a smirk while grabbing a hold of her ankles. He spread her legs open and drove his dick into Keiko. Jerome went to town on her and battering rammed her like a swat team knocking down a door.

 

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!

 

AHHH! OOOUUUGHH! WHOOOAA! YESSSS! THAT’S WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT, YESSSS!” Keiko screamed in pleasure. Keiko began to move her hips instinctively, syncing with the pace and rhythm of her partner. She grasped the sides of his ripped abdominal muscles, squeezing and pinching his sides while he rocked her over and over potent, powerful thrusts.

 

OOOH SHIT! YOUR DICK IS SO FUCKING BIG! I THINK I’M ABOUT TO BLOW!” Wailed Keiko. Jerome pulled his hips all the way back and pumped with all of his strength. Knowing that Keiko was close to the point of climax her poured it on like a dump truck!

 

WHAM! BAM! BOOM! POP!

 

OHHHHH! I’M ABOUT TO… I’M GONNA CUMMMM OWWWW! AHHHHH!” bellowed the red eyed treat as total euphoria gripped her. Keiko’s face contorted as she unconsciously tightened up her pussy’s hold on Jerome’s schlong. She quaked with joyous satisfaction while Jerome let out a yell as he pulled out of Keiko’s pussy. He pulled the condom off before jerkin his gherkin with several quick strokes.

 

OH SHIIIIIIT!

 

Jerome shot a thick load of cum, letting it out in several bursts, splattering Keiko’s stomach and tits with his seed, grunting loudly until he was finished. Afterward he flopped backwards onto the arm of the couch.

 

“God damn! You know what you’re doing! We should go another round, without a condom.” Jerome suggested. Keiko sat up and then rose to her and walked over to the kitchen.

 

“Uhhhh NO! I won’t be your NEXT baby mama Mr. Jerome Caffey!” snapped Keiko while wiping Jerome’s cum off of her body. Jerome couldn’t help but laugh at her remark.

 

“So you got jokes now huh.” Jerome said while putting on his underwear and pants.

 

“I wasn’t joking. At this rate you’re gonna be paying more money in child support than the millions the warriors are paying you.” She added. The ‘warriors’ Keiko mentioned are the World City Warriors, World City’s professional basketball team.

 

“I was just sayin, there’s more money waiting for you if you accept my offer. You know you need it to pay your brother’s debts.” Replied the NBA player.

 

“No thanks, but since we’re talking money, just pay me so you can leave.” Keiko asserted while picking up her robe off the floor. After putting his shirt back on Jerome pulled out a thick knot of hundred dollar bills from his pocket.

 

“All business huh… You should try to have more fun doing this baby.” Jerome commented while approaching Keiko

 

“I’m not one of your fangirl groupies, or your gold digger baby mamas, Jerome. This is STRICTLY a transactional relationship we have.” Replied Keiko in a deadpan tone. Jerome peeled off a few thousand worth of bills and extended his hand. However when Keiko reached to grab the money Jerome pulled his hand back.

 

“Nuh uh uhhhhh… Now what do you say?”

 

“I say give me my money now.” Keiko demanded with a glare.

 

“I really don’t have to pay you anything. Being unlicensed and all, you couldn’t do anything if I left without giving you a dime. Doing sex work without an Adult Entertainer’s License is a crime. You could get fined and even serve time for that Keiko.”

 

“If you walk out that door every woman in the city will find out that you’re ripping off sex workers and not paying them for their services. And if I say it, some others are bound to come out and talk too. You really don’t need that in your second year on the team do you? You’re coming off the bench. It’s not like you set the NBA on fire with your play last year so you’re not untouchable. You can pay me or you can take your chances with the media and answer questions about dicking and dashing all season.” Keiko retorted.

 

“So it’s like that… Here bitch!” Jerome remarked as he disrespectfully dropped the money on the carpet before walking away.”

 

“Fucking asshole!” grumbled the unlicensed woman while picking up the money. It was at that moment she realized she was supposed to call Eiji right after his presentation. She walked over to the trash bag that contained her belongings. She went into the bag and pulled out her phone. Her screen showed that she had 3 missed calls and a text message from Eiji.

 

“Shit!!!” cursed Eiji’s big sister. She immediately called back but got no answer.


 

(Story by User: Strider_Seiryu)

 

(Trivia)

• Keiko’s Voice Actress is Allegra Clark, who voices Noel Niihashi from Burn the Witch, Maki Zenin from Jujutsu Kaisen, and White Blood Cell U-1196 from Cells at Work! Code Black.

• Keiko’s Seiyū is Atsuko Tanaka, who voices Bayonetta from the Bayonetta series and Motoko Kusanagi from Ghost in the Shell.

• The character was originally conceived as a Bleach OC part of the ‘Road of Legends‘ series. Set 40 years after the end of the Bleach Manga, Road of Legends tells a tale of new heroes in the battle for the fate of the world. In this series, Keiko is an Echt Quincy from the Nakamura Clan, one of the oldest surviving Quincy bloodlines. She is the daughter of two former Wandenreich soldiers who settled down in Karakura Town after Ichigo Kurosaki defeated Yhwach. One night, a mysterious Shinigami with a captain’s haori attacked and abducted her. In the two years that have passed since her disappeared, Keiko’s brother Eiji hasn’t given up on finding her and now with the help of his new found friends, he has vowed to rescue her from the Shinigami.

• In Bleach: Road of Legends, after Keiko awakened her powers, she was designated with the epithet “A” for “The Ascension” by Kaiser, current leader of the Quincys

• Prior to Eiji’s career ending knee injury, Keiko, a dental hygienist, aspired to be a dentist and run her own clinic. She is very particular about oral hygiene and is turned off by men with bad breath and or men who don’t take care of their teeth.

• In Welcome to BSU, Keiko and her brother Eiji are biological siblings. However in Bleach: Road of Legends, Eiji is adopted.


• Jerone is voiced by Carl Jones, who is a writer and producer for animated show “The Boondocks” and voices Thugnificent and The Booty Warrior.

• Jerome’s Seiyū is Nobuyuki Hiyama, who voices Ikkaku Madarame from Bleach.

• Jerome is a parody of modern professional athletes. Many are known for having a lot of kids, baby mamas and having to pay child support.

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Marorin
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Marorin
2 years ago

Certainly love this idea in the beginning with Keiko using that loofa to stimulate herself there. Specifically loved the detail to her bouncing, imagined some sort of music as she swayed and grinded against the music. In terms of the second part where she’s being manhandled at first I wasn’t all in for the subject, but that changed when it turned out to be fake hahaha. I got swindled like an idiot!~ It’s made pretty well all the same though. Back to the orientation, I couldn’t help to laugh when Keiko started to egg his bro off too, hah. I also chuckled and enjoyed her taking control of the ‘robbery’ too. Nice little twist on that~ 

Lizardon888X
Lizardon888X
2 years ago

Lizardon here

So happy to see another chapter of my favorite story in the website and this one like always was another bang no pun intended lol

We have finally the introduction of Eiji’s older sister, and she is already a favorite of Mine. I found só adorable that she cares so much about her brother that pretty much gives all the profit of her Jobs to help him with his problems.

Now about her character design, it’s one of the best in my opinion She’s so beautiful plus hot asf. And the pictures in question for the chapter was a nice touch too.

We have her returning from somewhere to her house and doing her routine before that what i think is leaving for her other job. Then She suddenly ambushed by a robber. Gotta Tell that this surprises me and the situation was both dangerous and hot as She slowly starts to enjoy what was happening with her. I was surprised when all this was revealed tô bê just a parody of these robber porn films and couldn’t help but laugh a lot 😂

Resuming the sex scene, i really enjoyed, She is really good and skilled i Wonder How skilled She is in comparison with the girls introduced until now in the séries, also the most impressive is that she was almost one year without bang anyone and she still performs in this level, so she’s probably Very very good If we take a sex tier list in this series lmfao.

About the Jerome character i Wonder If We’re gonna see him again, looks like that he’s really got interested in her.

Anyways i have a question, some actually lol:

By the detailed description of her thicc body, i Wonder if She is bigger more towards her booty or her jugs lol and is Keiko a player of some sports? Looks like She was returning from somewhere in the beginning like gym or something like that?

Also why She hás white hair? Is because one of the parents?

What’s her Measurements?

Well enough questions amazing chapter and Can’t wait for more 😁

9.5/10

Hugs Lizardon 🤗

Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Lizardon888X

Welcome back lizardon!.I’m happy to see you back in the comments!

I was hoping to show the type of sister and woman Keiko is. She was in school to become a full fledged dentist. She has chosen to sacrifice a lot in terms of time and her own career to help Eiji. I will elaborate on that more later in the story. Glad you like her design. It’s changed a little since I first created the character however I think she looks better than the original version right now.

She is fairly skilled given her age, she’s in the 24-26 age range. As far as her and Jerome go, Its unlikely they will be a couple. He has a lot going on in his life that she doesn’t want to deal with. Keiko is very stubborn and strong willed. She doesn’t necessarily want to do these things for money but she wants to clear her brother’s debt, which is also her debt.

Jerome may appear again, you will have to see. To answer some of your other questions, Keiko thiccness leans moreso towards her boobs however she still has some weight in the back. I’m not sure of her measurements yet but she is pretty heavy up top. One of her parents does have white hair, just not sure which one. She used to play basketball, she taught Eiji how to play. She chose not to pursue a professional basketball career because there isn’t much interest in the Women’s league. Also she has always had an interest in working in the medical field.

Thank you again for your continued support!

Skaddix
Skaddix
2 years ago

Good as usual…I can see Jerome playing his best game of the season after this bang session and getting obsessed lol.

Xcelsior
Xcelsior
2 years ago

BSU always a banger.

Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Xcelsior

Thanks! I’m glad you think it is.

Jojoleo
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Jojoleo
2 years ago

Well I’ll be damn can’t believe we back into BSU. Well time wait again for other chapter like manga on hiatus. But jokes aside this was a good story seeing how hard Eiji sister works to help and support him. Love her design. It’s crazy after all these year how this little fan series has grown and the character design got better. It going to be a wait but can’t wait to see more this story with the cast and what happens next.

Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Jojoleo

What up Jojo. Lol at the hiatus remark. I recall people saying that about Hunter X Hunter a lot.

Sorry for the delay. In real life I work 2 Jobs and I have had some health struggles. I have had complications with diabetes and I had I minor stroke last year. We are currently approaching the end of the orientation storyline and I believe chapter releases will get faster in the next story arc because the content will be easier to write. Im hoping for 2 chapters a month.

I have some surprises in store in the future!

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
2 years ago

Now that’s an opening I wasn’t expecting. And surprisingly, I was disappointed when it was revealed to be an act… though that might be more due to the story getting derailed for entrance ceremony. Luckily it still looks like Keiko will still hopefully be seeing Mei for needing a way to earn some cash and a way to due sex stuff without the license.

And, damn! If that’s the first fucking she’s had since in years, I can’t wait to see her get into the swing of things.

Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

I’m sorry to disappoint. I hope you enjoyed chapter anyway.

Yes Keiko has been in a sexual drought for about a year at least. She has dedicated not just her money to helping Eiji but a lot of time as well. From being at home with him 24 hours a day when he couldn’t stand or walk to helping him do his rehab. She didn’t really have time for herself. As for getting back into the swing of things, Keiko has already refreshed her memory with her encounter with Jerome lol.Thank you for continuing to support my efforts as a writer and stay tuned for more!

Citizen V
Citizen V
2 years ago

This was a surprise and twist never thought we would get to meet Eiji sister, but a welcome surprise. It’s interesting seeing how family members react to the orientation. I’m surprised she is unlicensed and isn’t with actual call girl agency.

Interesting chapter, I’m not gonna lie you had me in the beginning with the robbery but then I kinda laughed when it was revealed to be a fantasy role play.

Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Citizen V

What up V! Yeah, she’s unlicensed and I the future I will cover more about unlicensed sex workers, the rules/laws that govern the Adult Entertainment industry and the government agency that regulates the AE world; The AEWA. The last time Mei appeared I included a detail in her office that almost no one noticed. She is a former AEWA Special Agent. Im glad you liked the joke and the chapter itself. Thank you for your continued support of my writing and characters!

Hiryu
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2 years ago

I knew it had to be a brand new entry for Welcome to BSU due to the MHA chapter being brought out much earlier in the week. And it definitely doesn’t disappoint, as it’s a more than welcome surprise!

But right now my thoughts on this entire chapter are basically just like this: What the fuck did I just read here?? 😳

I really wasn’t expecting this kind of scenario to go down here! But at the same time, it certainly keeps things fresh and unpredictable. Something even I can appreciate. 😆

But I’ll cut to the chase this time. This was really impressively written. More so given that today we got ourselves a really good look at Keiko, who we now know as Eiji’s sister and a character I already love. I find it interesting that she’s working as a dentist as one of her jobs. Very nice. Plus she’s also a fan of Kaede’s DJ work, which is also cool. And she even tries to keep up with the big orientation, more so since her brother is on it. Good to see she’s responsible. Though I do have to admit that I wouldn’t have expected her to be into home invasion fantasies or in general fantasies that extreme! That and it also gave us a pretty good idea of what her sex life is like. Intriguing. 🤔 On a side note, I love the actresses picked for her below too. 😎

Which leads me to Jerome, her hookup. Yeah, not gonna lie, this dude made me do this reaction right towards the end. > 🙄 We learned that he’s a basketball player for World City’s NBA team, meaning he has more money and hookups than he knows what to do with them. Sure it might have been just sex for Keiko, who is also an unlicensed sex worker, but she’s still a woman who has some standards. Very respectable.

Finally, the sex itself and the fantasy before it broke were written astonishingly. Including the dirty talk. That was all very organic and unique.

Well, that’s it from me for now. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter of Welcome to BSU. And I’m hoping the next time we see Keiko in action, she has a more respectful partner. I like her already! 😆

Keep up the awesome work! 🙂

Last edited 2 years ago by Hiryu
Strider_Seiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Hiryu

Its been a while Hiryu, what up? Glad you liked the chapter. Keiko has been around almost from the beginning. She is one of the early designs I adopted from RT.

This chapter was meant to take everyone by surprise. She’s not actually a full fledged dentist yet. She is a Hygienist. That is typically someone that does the teeth cleaning, X-rays etc. Its like the dentist equivalent to a nurse. Keiko wants to become a dentist and open her own clinic. That’s all I can say for now.

Keiko has had a sexual drought for about a year, as she has been working a lot to pay Eiji’s debts. Jerome is the first guy she’s had in a long time. She’s a little rusty skill wise.

Jerome is inspired by the headlines that appear on celebrity gossip sites and what goes on in social media and youtube. Professional athletes, especially basketball players are in the news for stuff that has nothing to do with their play on the court/field. I found the idea of him having several kids by several different women and having a tremendous amount of child support to pay funny. He is excessive with whatever hes doing. He doesn’t have to pay sex workers to get laid, and gets a lot of girls by being himself, he just likes to do it because its an adventure.

I’m glad you guys like the fake robbery roleplay scenario btw. Keiko and Jerome will both be appearing again at some point.

Hiryu
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2 years ago
Reply to  Strider_Seiryu

I really appreciate the insight on all this. Especially with both Keiko and Jerome.

Thanks for taking the time to clarify things some more!

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
2 years ago

I’ve gotta say, for a girl that has to pay so much money for her brother’s medical problems, Keiko sure can afford some helluva nice cars. I’m not that much into them but that car doesn’t seem to be anything cheap or affordable for someone who works two jobs to support her brother. Either way, great job as always by describing Keiko and her outfit. You REALLY excell at that! The whole thing with the “robbery” was done surprisingly well and gave all the right emotions. I’m kinda glad that there wasn’t an explanation or anything beforehand and that it started and ended so apruptly. It really felt like a dangerous, yet incredibly kinky, situation at first that had me guess how things would go. So having that aprupt ending with them watching Eiji’s performance was really neat and stopped things from going too out of hand. The continuation of their forplay and it going into a full-on hot and steamy sex scene in the living room was fantastic and I just like that shift between their dynamic. Keiko in particular showed so much emotions in that chapter (acting all helpless at first, playfull and naughty in the middle until getting all professional at the end), which makes her quite a favorite of mine already. The sex was AWESOME!!! Her dental/oral skills were put to great use, especially with the added description about the taste of Jerome’s cum. And the ending really showed how calculating and witty she really is. I like her!

Great from start to finish. Sure, there were several moments were the grammar/writing didn’t really resonate with me (maybe that’s just me) but overall I really loved it.
8,5/10

Strider_Seiryu
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Lol at you pointing out the car. That background choice was mine. I like how those cars look. I structured the robbery sequence the way I did to create suspense. If I announced the robbery was just a roleplay it wouldn’t have had any effect. I was shooting to create an unpredictable feeling for readers as the story played out. Keiko has a lot of range and is a good “actor” lol. I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for continuing to read.