Heartly Induction Ritual
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โYou really insist on staying with us?โ Trafalgar Law asked, leaning back against the wall of the Polar Tangโs canteen. His piercing yellow eyes rested on Shyarly who ate the goulash from her bowl as if she hadnโt already drunk the combined sperm of most members of the Heart Pirates.
โNot me!โ Camie raised her hand, whilst biting down on the burger that the man called Uni had prepared for her, โI jushd wanna shtay until โou meet Lupphy again!โ she explained between two bites.
โCamie, remember your manners!โ chided the much bigger shark mermaid, having wiped her mouth with a napkin before talking. โBut yeah! After looking into the future one last time and seeing what it has in store for us, I simply couldnโt sit back and waste my life on Fish-Man Island!โ
Monet, who sat right in front of the two mermaids objected, โYou canโt, darling!โ Crossing her arms in front of her well-endowed chest, she pouted at the black haired woman. โShe only wants to stay on the crew because she lusts after you! She canโt even contribute in any way to your efforts in becoming the Pirate King!โ she then argued surprisingly reasonably, especially given her bias against the mermaid.
โTsk! And here I thought you enjoyed our time with Law togetherโฆ!โ Shyarly clicked her tongue before continuing to eat her goulash.
โYou knowโฆ You got a point, Monet!โ Law agreed with a nod, much to Camieโs shock. โI wonโt take freeloaders on my ship! Iโm not like Straw Hat-ya who just takes a bunch of Princesses with him because theyโre friends or something. Even with our history togetherโฆ Iโm still a pirate and this ocean is a dangerous place! Anyone who canโt pull his weight on a ship will sooner or later end up as fish food!โ
For a moment, Camie looked as if she wanted to protest in her former bossโ name, but a quick raise of the pale madamโs hand silenced her before she could even say anything. โHmmm, I see. Well, this isnโt exactly a surprise. Iโve already anticipated that the prospect of neverending sex with me wonโt be enough to convince you!โ
โThatโs right!โ Monet turned into snow and flew back to Law, where she then turned solid again, hugging herself against his arm, โDarling has me for that already! AND Iโm an excellent cartographer and log keeper, and can hold my own in combat!โ she boasted while pressing her tits tightly around Lawโs tattooed arm and resting her head on his shoulder.
โWHAT??!โ Penguin gasped, โBut captain, you canโt just throw Madam Shyarly out like that! Not after how sheโฆ took care of all of us during our training!โ
โOnly because you and Shachi lasted longer than all the others together when she sucked you off. That still doesnโt mean that Iโll take her on board!โ Law grunted matter of factly, while trying to get his hand out of the greenetteโs strong hold. โIf anything, it means that your training has been way too lax the last couple weeks. We only managed to fight the Straw Hats to a draw because of a numerical advantage and because I swapped Zoro-yaโs and Black Leg-yaโs personalitiesโฆ Thatโs unacceptable!โ
โAye, captain!โ Penguin let his head hang in defeat as he leaned against his trusted spear for support, while knowing full well that the Surgeon of Death meant everything he just said.
โAnywaysโฆโ Giving up on getting his hand out between his newest crew memberโs tits, Law turned his attention back to the two mermaids, โAs it stands, Iโll take you with us until we meet Straw Hat-ya again! See it as a sign of good will for the pleasant time I had on Fish-Man Island two years ago!โ he said to Camie, who visibly lit up hearing that. โAs for you though, if you really want to stay on my crew, then you have to give me a better reason than just wanting to hang out with me! Thatโs my last say on that matter!โ
Shyarly nodded, with a barely visible drop of sweat running down the side of her face, โUnderstood! Iโll just have to make sure to show you my worth to this crew soon enough!โ she said, as she finished the rest of her goulash and pushed herself away from the table. โCome on, Camie. We have a few things to discuss!โ
The three members of the Heart Pirates watched as both Shyarly and Camie floated out of the canteen, carried by the bubble from the Yarukiman Mangroves. For a moment, everything was silent as Monet happily nestled her face against Lawโs neck, as the heavy metal door to the canteen fell shut after Camie had closed it. Only the faint sound of water boiling inside a pot further into the canteen, the steady rhythm of the waves lapping against the submarine, and the distant moans and groans from the worn-out pirates who were lucky enough to go for a second round with Shyarly echoed through the hallways.
โCaptainโฆ Was it really that necessary to go that hard on her?โ Penguin asked after a while. โI mean, she only wants to spend some time with youโฆ And for you to fuck her. Isnโt all that talk about you needing a reason for you to keep her on board a little bit too much?โ
โWeโre pirates!โ said Law, in plain and simple manner. He would have left it at that, but when he saw that his friend was about to talk again, he rolled his eyes and continued, โThis wonโt be a one time only thing if she stays on board of this ship! We fight, lay our lives on the line for our dreams, and risk everything by opposing the World Government and other pirates on a daily basis! If she were to stay on this ship as simple eye-candy for me, then sheโd only make herself a target and weigh us down since we need to protect her! Guys who have these massive groups of women swooning over and wanting to have sex with them for the hell of it only exist in picture books! This is the real world! As much as Iโd want to enjoy her company just like that, Iโd only put her life on the line unnecessarily!โ he sighed as he looked at the door. โAs it stands, itโs better if we return her back to Fish-Man Island! Iโll simply visit her a few times and she wonโt become a target for anybody to take advantage of me!โ
โMmmh~! Youโre so reasonable, darling!โ mused Monet, now gently nibbling on Lawโs earlobe. โI can see why the young master had more trouble with the Straw Hat than with you! Reasonable people are the easiest to read and manipulate, whereas people like the Straw Hat, who act out of instinct and without using their brain in combat, make for much more dangerous and unpredictable opponents!โ
A vein popped on Lawโs forehead, โWhatโs that supposed to mean!!? You think the Straw Hat makes for a more threatening adversary than I?!โ the black haired man asked over Penguinโs giggling and laughing.
On the other side of the metal door, Shyarly let the news she just heard sink in, โSo thatโs how it is!โ she thought, now gaining an even deeper understanding and even more admiration for the captain, โHe thinks I canโt handle myself on a ship and wants to protect meโฆโ She floated further down the hallway where Camie was already waiting for her. โGuess Iโll just have to show him!โ
โBut how will you do this, Madam?โ asked Camie. โYouโre not a fighter, are you? And with your crystal ball completely broken now, Iโm afraid that looking into the future will be impossible, even for someone as skilled as you!โ
โYes! Youโre right!โ agreed the older mermaid as she pulled out her pipe out of the pockets of her blue jacket, โHowever, that doesnโt mean Iโm completely powerless!โ she went on to say while blowing out a large number of bubbles from her pipe. โWhile being a mermaid in a crew that works as good as the Sun Pirates on the ocean can only help go so far, there are still more than enough ways for me to impress him! And I just might know how to do exactly that!โ she added with a hopeful smirk, while swirling around the pipe between her elegant fingers.
Due to Shyarlyโs size, the hallway seemed even more narrow than it already was and forced Camie to follow behind the former fortune teller as she went towards the medical room of the submarine, โAnd how will you do that? Iโd imagine that Law wants to see something from you soon.โ she assumed, while being forced to talk louder now as they got closer towards the knocked out members of the Heart Pirates.
“I already guessed that something like this would happen.” said Shyarly as she went in through the door. Only four of the more than fifteen people inside were currently in working condition as the others were still in a state of delirium after having been sucked off by Shyarly earlier.
“Oaaaarghโฆ!” Clione groaned as he noticed Shyarly, “Not againโฆ!” he whined, with his bandaged cock twitching helplessly at the sight of the woman that had wrecked it.
Ikkaku rolled her eyes and flicked his dick with her index finger as she went past him on her way towards Uni, “Stop being so over-dramatic, you diva! Not everything revolves around you!” she said over his sounds of agony.
Chuckling into the back of her hand, Shyarly caressed his naked chest, drawing her finger all the way towards his chin, “Don’t you worry, little man! You’re safe, for now. I do have some things I wanna know about however!” she said ominously, with her eyes lingering for only a moment on a large pair of bird wings and talons, floating in a yellow substance in a glass tube.
“And what would that be?” Shachi raised an eyebrow at her, wiping away the sweat from Seiuchi’s forehead with a white towel.
“You all fought against the Beast Pirates a while back, right?” Shyarly answered his question with a question of her own, something that piqued the interest of the only other two remotely conscious men, Bepo and Jean Bart. “I’ll take it that you’ve fought against, or at least heard, about a woman called Black Maria-chan?”
(The next dayโฆ)
“So, youโve come up with a way to show your usefulness on the ship?โ asked Law, who was leaning against Bepoโs soft and fluffy stomach as he looked down on Shyarly.
โMore or less.โ answered Shyarly, who was just a little bit sleepy after working and experimenting the entire night on something that might convince her lover, โIt took me a while, but I think I managed to come up with something that should satisfy you!โ she said, while blowing out a couple of bubbles from the end of her pipe.
โOkay! Care to show us what it is?โ Law took a sip of the coffee in his hand. โShachi only told me that you asked him some things about that one of Kaidoโs Tobiroppo, and that you spent the entire night in the medical room. My best guess would be that you mixed something togetherโฆ!โ
โPerceptive as alwaysโฆ Thatโs why I like you so much, sweetie!โ she cooed, much to Monetโs dismay, who looked as if she wanted to go at her right away, โAnd youโre right! While most likely not as good as Black Mariaโs own recipe, given that I only had a few hours to come up with it, what I have right now should be more than enough!โ Shyarly explained while inhaling from the remedy in her pipe. โIโd need a few volunteers though to give it a try, if you donโt mind!โ
With eyes as dead and calculative as most of the time, Law simply nodded, โJakouushi, Okojo, Hakugan! I take it youโre better now?โ he then asked three of his crew mates without even looking in their direction. โIf so, go and assist the Madam here!โ
โAye, aye, captain!โ shouted the three men, who already began jumping over the railing and onto the wet grass of the island they were docking in front of. โSo, what do you want us to do?โ
โMmmh~ youโre already doing pretty perfect like this!โ she told them, while turning around to face them, โJust stand there andโฆโ Blowing into her pipe, a strange, translucent smoke came out of the other end, effectively enveloping the three pirates. โLet me test this out!โ
โHm? What is this?โ Hakugan, the masked helmsman of the crew, waved his hand through the smoke, โThatโs some kind of gasโฆ A bit heavier than normal air.โ he thought out loud in an attempt to narrow down the possibilities of what this smoke could be.
Shyarly licked her lips, already spotting a reaction from the man called Okojo, โPretty observant! Black Maria-chan called this โIllusion Mistโ if I remember correctly. While I donโt know the exact dosage she used, I still remembered most of the ingredients in her recipe. Or at least those that she told me about.โ she told them. โAnd luckily for me, the greenhouse and the medical room on the submarine actually had most of those things!โ
โAhaaah!!?โ groaned Okojo, as his face already turned significantly redder than just a few seconds ago as he dropped to his knees in front of Shyarly, โDoesnโtโฆ doesnโt seem like much ofโฆ haa, haa, haaโฆ an illusion to me though!โ he pointed out. โIf anythingโฆ it feels more like Iโm having a fever!โ
The guy next to him agreed as he unbuttoned his boiler suit, revealing to everyone just how much he was sweating underneath it. Hakuganโs mask did a good job at protecting him from suffering the exact same fate as his two friends. From the deck of the Polar Tang, the other Heart Pirate members watched as they waited for what was to happen next. Monet had nestled up to Law and rested her face on his lap, following the demonstration with a mix of worry and open interest in her yellow eyes.
โSo she knows Black Mariaโฆ interesting!โ Law muttered silently, observing as Shyarly swam in front of the three pirates. โAnd howโs that gonna work? Giving your enemies a fever wonโt help much in combat, unless itโs meant as a distraction from your real objective!โ
โItโs way more than a simple fever!โ said Shyarly, with her voice full of delight of her successful experiment as she watched Okojo and Raicho strip down to their underpants, โIโd compare it more to one of the aphrodisiacs you can buy on certain pleasure districts all around the world!โ she said as the two menโs underpants bulged outwards due to their rapidly hardening erection!
And they didnโt just get hard! Within seconds their underpants were completely torn to shreds as their cocks grew massive! Even Shyarly, who dwarfed both of them by a long shot, had to gulp as their dicks became fatter than her own arms, โWOAH!!โ the other members of the northern pirate crew gasped in awe at the sight!
Instead of being as impressed as his subordinates, Law crossed his hands in front of his chest, โSeems good at a first glance, but Hakugan seems largely unaffected. What will you do against that? An enemy wonโt just give you the time and stand idly by while you intoxicate his comrades!โ he argued with a nod towards the masked man who seemed relatively unfaced by the aphrodisiac mist.
โUnder normal circumstances, that would be true. For guys like him, however, I have thisโฆโ replied Shyarly, and she once again blew into her pipe. This time, something was different, as instead of the mist, one large bubble came out of it instead. Once as big as the Madam desired, the bubble flew towards Hakugan, quickly encasing his entire head in it until it looked as if he wore the same kind of protective bubble the Celestial Dragons wore. โThis oneโs a mix of the Illusion Mist and my own, admittedly, relatively basic knowledge about Merman Combat. With no other air around him like that, Hakugan-chanโs mask is unable to filter anythi-!โ
โAAAAH!!!! I CANโT WAIT MUCH LONGER!!โ shouted Jakouushi. The dark skinned, brim hat wearing man grabbed Shyarlyโs jacket and tore it open, exposing her pale breasts to the public. โIT FEELS LIKE MY BALLS ARE GONNA EXPLODE ANY SECOND NOW!!!!โ
Before anyone could attempt to stop anything, he shoved his cock deep into Shyarlyโs cleavage, โHm?โ Shyarly had only a second to realize what was happening as she felt the burning hot tip of his meatstick invade her mouth. โMMMPH!!!!โ
โHahahahaha!! Well, your tricks seem to work alright!โ commented Monet from her place next to Law, โAnd since theyโre not your enemies, itโs only fair if you make sure theyโre feeling well afterwards! Ainโt that right, darling?โ she caressed Lawโs cheek, while looking up into his unmoving face.
โME TOO!! GOD, ITโS SO HOOOOTT!!!!!โ groaned Okojo, helplessly thrusting his hips against the empty air until Shyarly took hold of his cock. Though he was the thinnest of the two at the moment, she was still unable to fully grasp the whole thing, as her fingers were still several inches away from one another, โThatโs betterโฆ!โ he grunted as she began moving her hand up and down on his length.
โMMMMMHH!!!โ Shyarly moaned, bobbing her head in slow strokes against Jakouushiโs rapid thrusts, โDOESH DISH MEAN AYEโM AWWOWED โO SHAIW WIPH โOU THEN?โ she asked, with her words badly slurred as she glanced over her shoulder towards Law.
What could be seen as a distant sign of compassion crossed the black haired manโs face, โWhen you can handle this situationโฆ sure!โ he told her in his usual deadpan voice, although she could clearly hear hints of hope in it. That or she was just getting delusional with hopes of her own as the musky scent of Jakouushiโs manhood clogged her nose. โOnly a fool gets themselves in such a situation but is unable to handle it!โ
โGhmmm, mmmughโฆ shoโฆโ Saliva trailed down her chin as she began moving her head much faster, โโouโll take me on โouw ship iph aye manashe โo make โem cum?โ her eyes lit up in a way that made her look even more than a shark. โConshidew it done!โ
โOAAAARGH!!!! ITโS WORKING ON MEEEEEH!!!!โ Hakugan roared as his cock tore through his clothes. His length rubbed tightly against both Shyarlyโs tits and his partnerโs dick as it shot to a disproportionate size in the span of two heartbeats. โSO SOFT!!โ
โMMMHMMMMMPHโฆ GO ON, BOYSH!!!!โ slurred Shyarly as she switched from the dark haired manโs dick to Hakuganโs, โPHUGG MUH TITSH, HAND, AND PHASHE TO โOUW HEAWTSH CONTENT!!!!!โ she demanded while dragging her tongue lasciviously over the underside of the helmsmanโs shaft!
โAAAAAHH!!! Thatโs much better!โ Jakouushi leaned back on his elbows as he watched Shyarly coat all of Hakuganโs dick with her saliva, with her throat showing clearly just how thick and girthy he has become thanks to the aphrodisiac.
His friend next to him agreed, โYEAH!! That handโฆ it feels better than any pussy I ever fucked in my life!โ admitted Okojo as he pumped his dick against her soft palm. โIt makes me wanna bust the biggest nut in my entire life!โ
โWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!โ laughter erupted from the submarine. As Shyarly looked to see who it was, she saw Ikkaku rolling across the deck, while kicking her legs in the air, โYou seriously didnโt just say that! Thatโs sooo cornyโฆ I canโt evenโฆ WAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!โ the curly haired woman managed to mutter between her loud cackling.
A vein snapped on Hakuganโs mask, โFuckโฆ you!โ he groaned. โYouโre not the one who got this weird aphrodisiac-thing messing with you!โ
Nodding in agreement, Jakouushi continued pumping his dick even faster between the mermaidโs huge knockers, โAaaarghโฆ!! Iโd like to see you in our shoes!โ the bearded man grunted, sweat pearling down his body in long rivulets until they dropped onto the grass. โFeels likeโฆ feels like my dick is on fire!! It hurtsโฆ BUT SO GOOOOOOOODDD!!!!!โ
โHEGHEGHEGHEG!!!โ Shyalry half laughed, half gargled around Hakuganโs cock, bathing it with even more saliva, which quickly ran down his apple-sized balls, while the sweet taste of precum washed over her tongue, โNOWH, NOWHโฆ NOH NHEED TO BE SHO CWANKY!โ she moaned before releasing his cock with a wet POP!
โAhaaaaahโฆ!โ he whimpered only for a moment, before quickly moaning in approval as he felt the warmth of her tits all for himself. Instead of keeping Jakouushiโs dick between her mammaries as well, Shyarly pulled him out and began stroking at the same speed as she did with Okokjo!
โYouโre all so big and hardโฆ just waiting to get loved!โ she cooed, with her eyes wandering between their shafts with a hunger in her eyes that made the guys feel like her prey, โSoโฆ muchโฆ MEATโฆ for me to eat!!โ she licked the tip of Okojoโs cock, letting her tongue dance over the slit!
โDonโtโฆ DONโT JUST TEASE ME LIKE THAT!!!!!โ She felt a pair of strong hands on her head as Okojo simply SHOVED her face down on his member!
โAGHUUUUU!!!!โ For a moment, Shyarly forgot just how many cocks she had sucked before in her life as she felt herself cumming from having her nose buried deep in his pubic hairs, โHMMMPH, UUUGH, GLURRRR!!!!โ It even felt as if her gag reflex was somehow coming back as the pirate moved her face for her, driving his cock in and out of her mouth and throat with raw, primal energy. โSHOOโฆ GHUUUGH!!! USHE MUH PHASHE ASH YOUW FLESHLIGHT!!!!! FUGG MEH HAWDEW!!!!!โ
Seeing the lust shimmer in his eyes was all she needed. She smiled inwardly as Okojo closed his eyes, his balls constricting and pulsing rapidly against her chin as he kept her face nestled against his crotch. โYesโฆ yesyesyesyesYEEES!!! Drink my spunk, you pervy mermaid-SLUUUUUUUUTTT!!!!!โ he roared as the first drops of cum shot out of his cock!
โMMMHMMMMMMPH!!!!โ Shyarly moaned in approval, ready to drink all of his seed. Just as she was about to swallow his load however, she felt another hand grabbing her hair and roughly pulling her away from Okojoโs cock. โAUUUUGH??โ she had only a second to gasp in surprise before moaning at length as Hakugan impaled her mouth on his dick. โHUUUUMPH!!!โ
โYa canโt hog her for yourself like that!!โ he reasoned, while he was continuously humping his member into her tits and mouth. โNot when it feels like my dickโs gonna fall off any moment nowโฆ GAH! What is that damn aphrodisiac doing??!โ
SPLURT PLURG SPLURT
With his last bit of strength, Okojo blasted a heavy dose of cum on her right tit and hair, as his eyes spun in their sockets, โMMMMMHNโฆ!!โ Shyarly moaned in a mix of wanton lust of having her mouth thoroughly stuffed with one dudeโs cock, but also in disappointment as she was unable to taste the other guyโs load, โEh! Doesnโt matter!โ she concluded in her mind, while still stroking the unconscious Okojoโs and Jakouushiโs cocks. โItโs been a while since I last had a proper cumbath!โ
โHRRR, HRRR, HRRRRR!!!!โ Hakugan panted, as his friendโs cum was making Shyarlyโs tits feel even more slippery and wet than they already were before. โGRRRNGHโฆ so warm and softโฆ HAAAAA!!!!โ
โGLUUURGH, GUURRRRR!!!!โ The Madam kept bobbing her face in slow, rhythmic motions, stirring his cock inside her mouth to lick it from all sides as best as she could, โYEPHโฆ LED ID AWW OUD~!!โ she moaned, while giving him bedroom eyes that she spent years perfectioning. Even the most steadfast Fish-Men back on the island were unable to hold back when she looked at them with this kind of lust and desire in her clear blue eyes. โBEH A GHUUD BOY AND GIPH MEH YOUW CUMMMM!! AWW OPH ID!โ
โUnfair!โ Jakouuchi complained, โIโve been hard for the longest! Whyโs everybody else allowed to cum first?!โ he asked, as he was no longer content with the feeling of her hand rubbing all over his length!
โThatโฆ just shows that youโre moreโฆ aaaaahโฆ easy to manipulate by that stuff of hers!โ groaned Hakugan, while putting both of his hands on her tits to press them harder around his cock, โGAHAAAAAโฆ I canโt wait much longerโฆ my dickโs gonna explode!! GAAAAARGH!!! Howโฆ? THIS MOUTH IS SO DAMN TIIIIIIIGHT!!!!!โ he grunted through clenched teeth while moving her boobs in accordance with his thrusts one last time!
โOh, fuck off!โ While roughly pulling on her head, Jakouuchi, just like Hakugan before him, got Shyarlyโs face off of another manโs cock at the exact moment his liquid lust shot out of it, โTHIS APHRODISIAC-THING IS DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!โ he bellowed while his friendโs white load rained down on the mermaidโs body. โIT MAKES ME WANNA FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!โ
Shyarlyโs eyes began to cross as the last conscious member of the trio kept fucking her face harder and rougher than the other two, โMmmmh~ Must be due to me not really paying much attention to him so farโฆ Good to know!โ she summarized as her saliva dropped down her chin in long ropes. โGUH!! HUUUUUGHE, SHLLLLLUGH, GUUUUPH!!!!!โ
A wicked grin spread across the tanned manโs face as his own eyes spiraled in their sockets, โOOOHโฆ YESSSS!!! TASTE MY DICK!!!!โ he shouted from the top of his lungs. โIโVE WAITED FAR TOO LONG FOR THIS!!!!โ
โHMMMMMM, UUULGH, GMMMMMPH!!!โ moaned Shyarly as she let go Okojoโs dick, instead putting both her hands on Jakouuchiโs thighs to brace herself against his powerful thrusts, โHMHMHMHMHMHMHMHM!!!! KHEEP ID UP, BOYโฆ โOUโWE GONNA MAKE MEH CUM SHO BHAD!!!!!!โ she slurred, with her words vibrating around her last remaining partnerโs member.
โEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!! YES!!โ cackled Jackouuchi, who at this point was now almost laying completely on his back as Shyarly crawled some more onto the dry land. Her fishtail wagged erotically behind her, drawing circles in the air while her cum soaked body almost seemed to shine in the sunlight. โWanna cum!!! WANNA CUMCUMCUMCUM AND CUM SOME MORE!!!!!!โ
โDonโt worry, you will!โ she thought confidently, while keeping a close eye on him the whole time as he violently shoved his cock back and forth. If he had any more skill, or if she shared the same feelings she had for Law with him, he would have made her cum two times by now. As it was however, she was able to read him like a book. โWIGHTโฆ NOWWWH!!!!!โ
Diving down deep on his cock, her throat bulged out more than ever before in her life, โAAAAOOOOOOOOORGH!!!!!!!โ he roared as her nimble tongue lured out all of his cum by caressing his balls!
SPLORGH SHPLOOOOOSH SPLUUUURTT
With how much she managed to deepthroat his cock, Jakouuchiโs cum went directly down into her stomach, filling it to the very brim, โHUUUUUUUMPH!!!!โ Her eyes widened only for a moment, as she was slightly surprised by how watery it felt in her belly, โMaybe a side effect of the drug?โ she theorized while almost cumming from this feeling of fullness that spread through her entire body like a wildfire in a forest! Jakouuchiโs head hit the ground with a loud FWOMP!, signaling to everyone that he as well had passed out!
โWOOOOOOOOW!! ME NEXT!โ Applause and approving words erupted from the Polar Tang as the other members of the Heart Pirates showered her with praise.
โGuess that means only one thingโฆโ summarized Shyarly as she locked Hakuganโs dick back between her tits. POP! The tanned manโs cock flopped out of her mouth, with only a single string of saliva connecting it with her lips as she grabbed it, as well as Okojoโs member to hold them both up like trophies. She looked up at Law and smiled. โI taki it that Iโm part of your crew now, right?โ
โLETโS HAVE A TOAST FOR OUR NEW CREWMATE!!!โ shouted Bepo. Everywhere around them, the other pirates chimed in and raised their glasses in order to celebrate the black haired mermaid that currently rested her head on Lawโs shoulder. Given the occasion, Monet was okay with it however and was instead talking with Camie. Most of Shyarlyโs former employeeโs fingernails were chewed off as she had watched the entire initiation ritual with dreadful anxiety!
โSo, how do you know Black Maria of all people?โ Law asked, while gently stroking her silky hair as he observed the turmoil around him unfold. For his, and everyone elseโs sake, Shyarly had swam around the island a few times in rapid succession to get most, if not all, of the cum off of her.
โMmmm~!โ she cooed, while feeling all giddy and cozy due to the warmth of his body. In the brief moments where his crew wasnโt as loud, she could actually hear the beat of his heart, โWe met a couple years ago. Back when our establishments first became known and we made for ourselves, she and I were invited to this island, Rankoknam! Itโs the Land of Lust somewhere here in the New World, and Stussy, the Queen of the Pleasure District, had this huge event there where she showed us all kinds of nifty tricks and toys that were invented all over the world.โ she explained to him.
Law nodded. โI see!โ he said simply, while he was still running his tattooed fingers through her hair.
โShe wasnโt all that bad actually. Black Maria-chan, I mean.โ Shyarly went on to say, while growing tired now that the lack of sleep over the night caught up with her. โShe ended up telling me all about this ugly Devil Fruit she ate. It was so bad that she didnโt even want to show or tell me what kind of fruit it was exactly. All she said was that she tried to find a way to make it more appealing and that she experimented with a bunch of stuff to make this happen.โ
โSo thatโs when she told you about the Illusion Mist!โ concluded Law, as his yellow eyes, full with life and love for his crew, wandered over the deck of his own ship.
โMhm!โ putting her head on his chest, the soft and steady ba-da-bump, ba-da-dump, ba-da-dump quickly made her yawn, โIf you want, I can set you up with either of them, Black Maria-chan or Stussy. I should still have their numbers somewhere.โ she said whilst smiling up at the dark haired man, then already beginning to drift into a deep slumber. โJust in case you want the source of the Illusion Mist or some connections to the Underworld.โ
Finally looking her in the eyes, Law smiled. โWhy would I need either of them? I donโt care about the Underworld and I definitely donโt need whatever Black Maria uses when I have you around, who can create her own version of it just from memory alone?โ
โThatโsโฆ good toโฆ knowโฆ!โ she whispered, as she then began to fully fall asleep, more happy than ever about her decision to come here and join him!
(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)
11/10
Thanks for the high score! Anything you found particularly interesting? Also, to answer your question below, I’ll see what I can do.
If I can ask for one serious thing, that in the next chapters they have more double penetration + yuri scenes.
ps: also if you can see them in the images please
I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
You should make one where it’s shyarly and Luffy. Not saying shyarly should leave heart pirates but instead it could be like a one time thing.
Shyarly will probably get the chance to have some fun with Luffy somewhere in the future when the Straw Hats and the Heart Pirates meet again.
So Black Maria and/or stussy are on the table. On one hand Black Maria will be another large woman potentially smothering law alongside shyarly. But for whatever reason I could see her going to tangents comparing any partners she has to kaido in regards to โscaleโ. And on the other hand stussy may get the other vegaโs involved. Lilith I could see down for fucking, atlas may not be so interested preferring likely to break things with Bart, and Yorkโฆ well we all know about York by now.
Also while I do see what you are doing with the illusion mist I could see a more practical application if the mist was used to enlarge the balls/busts/butts of the men and women afflicted. You can even call it the โTanuki effectโ.
Actually, I only brought up Black Maria and Stussy for some additional backstory for Shyarly, to flesh her and the world out some more. If Rtenzo’s gonna draw either of them, then they’ll show up for sure, but if he doesn’t, I’ll simply include them like this. Also, Shyarly’s usage of the “Ilusion Mist” will definitely come to use in interesting ways in the future.
I do love Black Maria. I can only hope that we will see her in the future.
Already said it before, but I seriously doubt that I’ll get the chance to include her in the story, due to Rtenzo seemingly not interested in drawing her. Still, I hope you’re still interested in the story regardless of her showing up or not.
Oh yeah. I mean it One Piece with sex lol. I know there a lot of really good ans sexy characters, but we will probably never see them in the story or on a pic.
Great chapter! I like that we kind of follow the 3 different factions (Straw Hats/Heart/Kid) with the SH taking the more place as it should due having many fan favourites in it.
I also like the Black Maria tease, hope to see her pop up in the artworks soon! Keep up the good work!
Yeah, the Straw Hats will most likely still end up with the most screentime, but by splitting the girls up between those different crews, I plan to focus more on Kid and Law as well. I’m under the impression that there’s some really good stuff that can be done with them. Not all that sure about Black Maria however. Rtenzo doesn’t seem to be interested in drawing her, which is why I gave Shyarly that thing with the “Ilusion Mist”. Sorta as if to say: “If I can’t have Black Maria with it in the story, I’ll just make it part of another girl’s skill set.” XD
Shyarly is an absolute throat goat lol. Ngl was sorta hoping she was gonna end up with the straw hats but im sure theyll easily let Camie join along with them. Plus the rivalry between Shyarly and Monet could be interesting to watch them fight over Law’s cock. With the Heart pirates having 2 extra women on board I wonder if Ikkaku is starting to feel a bit jealous now.
Honestly seeing the entire crew being utilized and having interactions is so good to see makes everything feel fleshed out more.
Sure, I could have easily put Shyarly with the Straw Hats, but I thought that would be just sooooo boring. Having every girl (be that Shyarly, Hancock, Ulti, Koala,…) only with the Straw Hats wouldn’t allow for nearly as interesting future interactions than splitting them up.
Really happy to read that you enjoyed the stuff with the Heart Pirates. I at least tried to make sure that their names still match the naming-scheme that Oda had given them up to this point.
I plan to do some more stuff with the Heart and Kid Pirates in the future, which is another reason why I decided to let each of these crews have some of the girls, instead of just having them hung around on their own/all tag along with the Straw Hats.
This one really took some doing, but I really enjoyed editing it as well as reading it. ๐
Shyarly really had to prove herself here in this chapter, and I like to think she did a more than serviceable job. With Law and the other Heart Pirates {with Monet in tow} and Camie looking on.
Fortunately, it all worked out for her in the end, but she had to take a more assertive position this time around, as well as use some aphrodisiac methods to help her a little more, but it really worked for her. Not to mention Shyarly’s mindset, as well as Law’s those like Camie, Monet and the others in the crew going into it. That being said, I really liked how you handled it. It wasn’t perfect, but it certainly got the job done! ๐ ๐
Because of what she did, she’s now a part of the group. Which makes me wonder what’s next for her and Camie. ๐ค Well I’m sure we’ll worry about that another time. Though this certainly opens up some intriguing possibilities interaction wise, including more of Shyarly and Monet together and even her and Law himself. ๐
Either way, well done! ๐ ๐
I hope the chapter was to your liking. I couldn’t make it exactly like requested, due to the story that needed to be told first. That being that Shyarly became a member of the Heart Pirates/Law’s “harem”.
I’m well-aware of how some people might not be the biggest fans of the sex or the fact that Shyarly did it with some seemingly random guys, but in my opinion this was something that needed to be done in order to further progress the story.
I’ll try to get some more “traditional” hentai sex in the future without any weird story elements. Still, happy to read that you enjoyed it anyways.
I donโt get those people who doesnโt love intercrew bonding.
Interesting choice to have her join the Heart Pirates!
Btw I wanted to apologize for my earlier behavior and for being such a pain in the ass.
You’re not a pain in the ass. Reading the same two sentences in slightly different variations just gets annoying with time.
Also, I felt it would make the most sense if she stays with the Heart Pirates, given their nautical theme and Law’s much more defined and well-kept manner when compared to certain other characters.
I’ll admit, I was getting tired of my Usopp advances too, kinda why I took a break from here for a while. I think it all stems from wanting to make this series better. If you give a character a character arc, you’ll add nuance to your story. Sure, this is just porn but why can’t it be porn with a plot? The reason why I keep trying to get you to use Usopp is because he’s a great character to test run for any fic because he can grow in so many different ways.
I admit, I’m really biased towards Usopp, but at the same time I legitimately think that this fic has amazing potential if you use Usopp properly. You’re right, Usopp is not this ultra-sigma-chad, but that’s who he wants to be. You have to admit, it lines up pretty well with what Usopp thinks of when he thinks about his dream.
So, why not try this out? Have him get drunk with power and the feeling of being the ultra-badass chad that he always wanted to be until he becomes someone like Doflamingo. In fact, you could actually have Usopp meet Doflamingo and he (Mingo) compares himself to Usopp, saying Usopp has the same look in his eyes that he used to only for Usopp to call him delusional, saying, “I may be weak, but I’ll only take what I’ve earned. I’m sick of taking the easy path in life!” But then as Usopp is about to leave Doffy finishes it off laughing, “You really are a good liar!” Over the course of the arc, we’ll see Usopp regress more and more into being what he thinks is a chad, but he’s slowly but surely proving Doflamingo right.
The overall themes in this arc would be what it truly means to be a chad and toxic masculinity. But this isn’t the only way you can use Usopp. He’s like a Swiss Army Knife in terms of character growth but you’re only using him to eat up dust.
Keep in mind, Usopp doesn’t even have to be in the spotlight in every fic like we unfortunately led you to believe, he can be the main star in a few to really progress in his arc while he could play a minor role in all the other chapters you want him in while still keeping up with his development. We aren’t asking you to give him a Robin/Nami tier role, we just want him to have a Zoro/Sanji tier role. Again, you can give him this kind of arc while still having him in a major role in only a few chapters as long as you get the dialogue right.
At the end of the day, you can write whatever you want to, but that also gives us all the right to criticize it and give you pointers on what you can improve on, so I’ll give it to you straight: Your characters are bland. It doesn’t feel like there’s any depth to them, so you should fix that. Usopp is the easiest to write because of how flexible he can be for character growth, so as long as you build him up correctly you shouldn’t have to worry about making him OOC because of the time you spent putting into his build up. You want to be as canon compliant as possible and you also prefer to not have any ships yet you have Kid x Hancock which is literally a tsundere ship. It’s good to set rules and it’s alright when you bend those rules from time to time, but bend them all the time and they’ll break pretty fast, and some things are hard to repair.
You do realize that you don’t exactly make a good argument against any of the things I said/came to think after reading your comments? Again, I like your commitment and love for Usopp, and he’ll definitely get his chances in future sex scenes IF IT MAKES SENSE FOR HIM TO DO SO! I’ll not go out of my way to include him in any sex scene possible when the plot of the story is focused around other characters!
He had sex with Carrot and Nami in the changing booth because of the Nami he owes Nami.
Why does he owe Nami some money? -> because he wasn’t able to hold back from cumming in one of the prior chapters.
Why was he part of the sex there? -> because I just so happened to write that he and Sanji were away at that part in the story.
Sometimes… things just work out and certain characters will get more screentime while others will have to wait for the next time.
And nothing against you, or the people that you talked about this (given that you talk about “us” and “we” a lot), but to say that my characters are “bland” might just be a bit too harsh, wouldn’t you agree? Like, I’m the last person to brag about the stuff I do, but even I would say that I did a pretty passable job with the way I wrote Shyarly or, in a perhaps somewhat better example, Kid and Marguerite. Neither you, nor Dan, commented under the story, so I don’t know if you had read it or not (be that because you don’t like Marguerite or Kid or whatever), but those who did comment, and gave some actual thoughts/criticism, there seemed to have been under the impression that the writing of both the characters was quite good. And after all the effort that I put into writing Shyarly as someone who actually tries her hardest to stay on board the Polar Tang, after having awakened her lust due to watching some, as of yet, future events between Luffy and Shirahoshi, I’m actually feeling kinda insulted.
You don’t have to like it, but calling Shyarly, Marguerite, Nami, and Kid bland after all the effort I put into their stories (for crying out loud, I added this whole rant in the Nami and Vivi X Sanji and Usopp chapter where she talks about her motivations, dreams, and goals in life AFTER having her very own Luffy/Shanks moment in a bar to protect her friend) I just can’t help but rant a bit! But apparently, good character writing for you, and your friends, seem to be to focus even more on a character who a) isn’t even in the artwork, and b) makes no sense AT THAT TIME to be of importance!
Sorry for my harsh words! I really do appreciate all sorts of feedback and criticism, but reading you calling my characters bland… it just struck a nerve, y’know!?
Yeah, I was being pretty harsh about calling your characters bland. I think what I meant was that with the sole exceptions of Nami and Kid you haven’t really provided the characters with other layers. I’ll admit, I got too caught up in my work that I forgot about Shyarly too.
So yeah, that bland point is completely invalid and I’m sorry about it.
Yeah, sure. Cause Law’s reasons to not immediately let Shyarly join his crew and instead test her beforehand also isn’t some form of character trait/is bland.
Or chapter 2 with Yamato and how free and liberated she now was by sailing with the Straw Hats.
Or Marguerite and how she stayed loyal to Hancock despite the immense pleasure and potentially suffering the female equivalent of a cock-block from Kid as he tested her.
Or Pudding’s interaction with Sanji/her talk about it later with Shyarly, Praline, and Camie. How she travels the oceans just to see him again. Though, to be fair, most of her actual personality will shine through in hopefully future chapters.
I’ll admit, I’m not a very good writer, I’ll do this simply as a hobby in my spare time, so it should come as no surprise that my writing isn’t as good as that of really professional writers like Oda, or Sailor. But calling the characters and how I wrote them here “bland”, just because I didn’t do it (yet) with the ONE GUY that you and your friends fancy, feels not only unfair to me and my writing but outright insulting! You might not have wanted it to come of that way, but it definitely sounded like that to me.