A Guild Hall of Hoes


(Note: This story is part of an short series of Fairy Tail stories)
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Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
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“Natsu!” Lucy called, knocking on the door of his cabin. “Natsu, it’s me, Lucy.”

 

A few long seconds passed before Happy opened the door, frowning at her. “Natsu says you stood him up again, so he’s not talking to you.”

 

“I’m really really reeeeeeeeeeally sorry!” Lucy told him, making sure to talk loud enough that Natsu would be able to hear her as well. “Tell Natsu that I promise I’ll make it up to him today.”

 

Happy shrugged and flew back into the house, returning quickly. “Natsu said that’s what you said yesterday, and look how that turned out.”

 

Gritting her teeth, Lucy took some deep breaths to keep from yelling. “All right, true, but I’ll make it up today with the best present ever! It will be amazing! I promise!!!” As Happy once again zipped back inside, Lucy waited with anxious impatience, tapping her feet.

 

And here came Happy again. “Natsu says he doesn’t believe you.”

 

All right, this is ridiculous. “NATSU!” Lucy yelled, as Happy flinched and covered his ears. “I know you can hear me, so come out here and talk to me face to face!”

 

Loud stomps echoed through the cottage and Natsu appeared in the doorway, a sour look on his face and steam literally wafting from his body. He stared at Lucy, clearly sore about what she did, but it came off more as pouting than true anger.

 

“Look Natsu, I know you’re mad, and I don’t blame you.”

 

“…” Lucy paused to gauge his reaction but his expression didn’t change.

 

“But, I swear I won’t stand you up this time! Even if the city is attacked by a dark guild or some meteor or spaceship crashes next to me, I will ignore EVERYTHING! I’ll have something really amazing for you! I promise!”

 

Natsu looked away from her, and Lucy fell to her knees. “Please please please believe me? Pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssseeee!” She gave him her best puppy dog eyes, looking as sad and adorable as possible.

 

Natsu flinched when he looked back at her. Shaking his head with a sigh, he finally said, “All right. I’ll give you one more chance.”

 

“Thanks Natsu!” Lucy replied cheerily, bouncing back to her feet; her breasts took a couple of seconds to stop their bouncing. “I’ll go make the plans right now; I’ll meet you at the guild hall this afternoon!”

 

And then she was off, short skirt almost giving everyone a panty flash with each step she took. Watching her go, Natsu sighed again, smiling slightly and hoping he had made the right choice.

 

Running through the streets, Lucy couldn’t help but smile as she dodged the pedestrians and traffic. She couldn’t wait to set up Natsu’s surprise, so she made a beeline for the guild hall. Mirajane would need persuading to let her have the building all to herself, and she would also need her help to get in touch with a special person…

 

(A few hours later…)

 

Gray grumbled to himself as he walked towards Fairy Hills. That stupid police officer had made him late; he didn’t even realized he had stripped out of his clothes until he got stopped! At least the officer let him off with just a warning about public exposure.

 

Arriving out front, he expected Juvia to be waiting outside the building for him like she normally does, but wasn’t there today. Walking into the large building, Gray looked around curiously, but she still wasn’t anywhere in sight. Shrugging, he walked to her room and knocked on the door. Idly, he noted that the whole building seemed a bit rundown and small.

 

They really should renovate this old place… maybe even expand it to make it bigger.‘ The ice mage thought to himself.

 

However, there was no answer from her room.

 

With a frown and a bit of concern, Gray next knocked on Evergreen’s door nearby, only to blink when a shirtless Elfman answered instead. The taller man blinked down at him. “Hi Gray; what are you doing here?”

 

Gray smirked slightly and answered, “I was looking for Juvia. She’s not in her room, and I wanted to see if Evergreen knew where she was.”

 

Suddenly the woman in question popped up, leaning around Elfman; from what Gray could see, she was only wearing a sheet, which only just covered her body. Gray blushed and look away.

 

“Juvia’s not here,” Evergreen told him bluntly, eyes narrowed in mild annoyance behind her glasses. “She had to leave on some kind of mission, said it was urgent.”

 

Frowning harder, Gray nodded. “Another mission? All right, thanks for letting me know.” Turning to leave, he added over his shoulder, “And put some clothes on when you answer the door!”

 

Evergreen snorted. “That’s rich, coming from you; follow your own advice, exhibitionist!”

 

Looking down at himself, Gray’s eyes bugged out. “OH DAMN IT! When the hell did I strip naked again?!” The spiky haired man said while trying to cover his flaccid penis.

 

Quickly getting dressed, he showed himself out, Evergreen’s mocking laughter trailing behind him. Well, that was a bust, he thought to himself. Might as well stop by the guild, maybe grab a late lunch and see if there are any jobs or quests available.

 

(30 minutes later)

 

Casually looking around the guild hall, Gray raised an eyebrow at a sign of an impending announcement from Mavis, Fairy Tail’s first guild master. There was also a sign up sheet for a camping trip tonight; thus far, only Erza’s name and pawprint he suspected was Happy’s was on it.

 

The main room itself looked weird too; it was empty and the lighting was dim, with red and pink tones. There were also buffet tables, packed with meat, fancy food, and lit by what looked like incense candles. A standing sign directed him to a seat in front of the small stage they used for activities and performances. Bemused and curious, Gray sat down, wondering what was going on?

 

“I told you didn’t I?,” a sultry voice from behind the curtain drifted out to him, “that I would give you a super special amazing present. What’s better than one Lucy?”

 

Suddenly the curtains drew back, revealing Lucy…and Lucy Ashley, both naked and pressed together in an intimate embrace.

 

“Two Lucy’s!” the Edolas version finished with a grin, licking her lips.

 

Jaw dropping and eyes bugging out, Gray gaped. “WAAAH?!”

 

“Do you like it?” Lucy asked shyly, blushing. “It took me a ton of favors, but I got you a present that no else has ever had!”

 

“Mmhmm; she owes me in particular big time, but this sounded way too fun to pass up,” Lucy Ashley agreed with a smirk.

 

“Uhhhh…” Gray tried desperately to say something, anything, but he was at a complete loss for words. His face was a red as a cherry. Lucy clearly couldn’t tell who he was; the lights were too dim, and the stage lights were shining into her face.

 

“…that doesn’t sound like Natsu.” Hurrying over to the light switches, Lucy flipped them on to normal, revealing Gray. Lucy stared, her brown eyes getting bigger and bigger. “KYAH!~” she shrieked, doing her best to cover her tits and crotch with her hands, face turning crimson.

 

“Huh.” Lucy Ashley put her hands on her hips, studying him. “You definitely ain’t Natsu. Damn good looking though; I wonder if my Gray has a body like that under all those damn clothes he wears.”

 

“I’ll, uh…I’ll be going now,” Gray stammered, too flustered to care that he was only wearing his pants.

 

And that they suddenly seemed much tighter.

 

“Yes! Please!” Lucy begged, eyes squeezed shut in mortification.

 

“HOLD IT!”

 

Gray froze and Lucy stared as Lucy Ashley took a deep breath after bellowing her order. “I was promised a good fucking time today, emphasis on the fucking, and that’s what I’m going to get.” She pointed at Gray, who flinched slightly. “Are you seriously going to just walk out of here after seeing two smoking hot babes like us naked in front of you?!”

 

Locking eyes with her, Gray stared back for a long moment before nodding, feeling his resolve and lust meld together. Why shouldn’t he have some fun? How often was a situation like this going to come around.

 

“H-hold on-MPH!?” Lucy started to protest, before Gray ran up and caught her by surprise with a long, passionate kiss. Eyes still wide, Lucy flailed her arms for a moment before melting into his arms and kissing him back. Lucy closed her eyes and pulled Gray tighter and deeper into the kiss.

 

Lucy Ashley watched approvingly, her nipples hardening at the hot sight.

 

Moving his mouth down Lucy’s body, Gray licked and sucked on her neck, chest, and breasts, leaving small hickies behind. He fingered her at the same time, making her writhe and mewl with pleasure as he sucked on her nipple. She was taken aback by how much foreplay and focus he was giving her compared to her previous partners like Natsu, Gajeel, and Taurus.

 

“Oh, that feels amazing,” Lucy panted, reaching down to fumble with Gray’s pants. Glancing down, she sighed with relief. “Thank goodness. Not another monster sized dick; this looks like the perfect size.” Lucy’s body had been very sore from her recent encounters.

 

Gray blushed in response, and it got worse when Lucy Ashley wolf whistled. “Not bad, pretty boy. I think we both want a taste, so just sit your ass down and let us go to work.”

 

Collapsing back into a chair, Gray watched in awe as both blondes knelt in front of him and began worshipping his dick. Lucy Ashley sucked on his pole, while Lucy had both of his balls in his mouth, gargling them. “Fuck, that feels so damn good!” he gasped.

 

Lucy Ashley preened as she tried to deepthroat him, but she only got about halfway down before choking and sputtering, pulling her head back. “Shit, almost had it. You’re much bigger than my Natsu…”

 

“You have to relax your throat. Here, let me show you.” Lucy nudged her to the side. Taking a deep breath, she wrapped her lips around Gray’s dickhead and slowly pushed her mouth down the entire length of his cock, deepthroating him with ease as her head bobbed back and forth.

 

“God damn,” Lucy Ashley proclaimed, impressed. “You’re an even bigger slut than I thought!”

 

After a few minutes of expert oral from Earthland Lucy, she moved aside to let her Edolas counterpart service Gray. Hoping for better success, Lucy Ashley used her tits to jerk off Gray.

 

Gray thought she did a good job, considering her obvious lack of experience. Occasionally, his dick slipped out from between her melons, making her growl in frustration. “Damn it! That always happens!”

 

Lucy giggled and nodded, taking her place again. “The trick is to have a really firm grip on your boobs; both of ours are so big, we have to really focus on keeping them in place.”

 

She demonstrated, her massive mounds bouncing as she pushed them against Gray’s dick. Lucy Ashley watched with surprise as Lucy Heartfilia easily kept all of Gray’s dick contained during her paizuri. Then she added a blowjob to the action, her lips stretching incredibly far as she sucked as hard as she could. Gray’s fingers dug into the seat as he panted, fighting to control himself.

 

“Holy fuck…that’s so damn lewd.” Lucy Ashley looked almost awestruck. “You sure have changed a lot since the last we met.” Edolas Lucy said, noting the slutty look on Lucy’s face as she sucked on the tip of Gray’s dick with incredibly stretched out lips.

 

Lucy grinned back at her before squealing as Gray abruptly swept her up in his arms and laid her across one of the wooden tables, knocking some of the stuff to the floor. He rubbed his dick across her pussy, making Lucy moan with desire. “Ohhh, don’t tease me Gray! Just stick it in me, please!”

 

Smirking, Gray slowly pushed his dick into her pussy, causing Lucy to arch her back, a louder, deeper moan escaping from her. “Yessss…”

 

Lucy Ashley watched, fascinated, as Gray slowly picked up the pace until he was ramming Lucy like a piston. His hands roamed all over the blonde’s body, paying special attention to her breasts and vagina. Her counterpart was soon moaning continuously, sweat dripping off of her body as she writhed and wiggled with pleasure.

 

Lucy could feel she was on the verge of cumming; ‘just a little more…! Almost THERE! a little bit more!!‘ Then suddenly, there was a cooling sensation, easing her back down. Confused, Lucy lifted her head, staring at Gray’s hands, which were coated in a thin layer of ice! “What? No, I can’t cum if you do that!” she whined and whimpered.

 

“That’s the idea,” Gray replied with a chuckle. He continued to tease Lucy like that, bringing her right to the edge of climax with his pounding cock, before his icy hands brought her back from her desired release.

 

“Stop! Let me cum! Please, I need it! I’ll do anything!” Lucy begged in a moaning voice, while Lucy Ashley furiously masturbated, so incredibly turned on.

 

“Not yet; just a little while longer,” Gray promised her, managing to pick up the pace a little more, pounding furiously into her sexhole.

 

After ten minutes of teasing, Lucy was sure she was going to lose her mind. Her body felt like it was about to explode! “LET ME CUM! YOU SADISTIC ICE JERK, LET ME CUM NOW!”

 

“If thats what you really want…” At long last, Gray slammed his dick on her g-spot and allowed her to orgasm.

 

It was like a bomb going off.

 

“AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

 

“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

 

“AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

 

Lucy’s banshee-like scream temporarily deafened both Gray and Lucy Ashley, who stared in shock and intrigue as her counterpart’s eyes crossed. The most blissed out expression either of them had ever seen filled Lucy’s face as she came. Her pussy squirted like a broken fire hydrant, soaking the floor with her love juices. It was a good ten minutes before it was finally over, leaving Lucy panting heavily and barely conscious.

 

“…that was… the most intense experience… of my life,” she said with deep breaths, voice barely audible. “What in the world… was that?!”

 

Sitting back down, tired as well, Gray laughed. “Well… Whenever I ate lunch here at the guild hall, I always hear Erza and Levy argue about who was better at sex, Jellal or Gajeel. Levy always won because Gajeel could use his magic while fucking, making it even better. That got me thinking, and I started experimenting. Juvia has been on a lot of missions lately, so I practiced and refined my technique in secret, hoping to surprise her on our date today.”

 

He shrugged. “I call it the ‘Super Orgasm’; did you like it?”

 

“YES!!! That was the best I’ve ever felt during sex! No one has ever made me feel like that!!!” Lucy gushed excitedly. Hearts appearing over her pupils.

 

“And you can deliver a super orgasm every time?!”

 

Gray nodded, then jumped with surprise as Lucy Ashley suddenly plopped her huge tits on top of his head as she stood behind him. “You damn stud; how are you not drowning in pussy?!” she asked incredulously.

 

“I guess most girls care more about dick size over skill,” Gray replies with a shake of his head, Lucy Ashley’s tits rubbing his hair.

 

She let out a rude noise. “Well, I’m going to tell everyone how you delivered Lucy the best fuck she ever had.”

 

“Wait!” Both their eyes turned to Lucy, who’s face had turned red again. “You can’t do that; Natsu wouldn’t like it. Please, we gotta keep it a secret, okay?” She gave them both puppy dog eyes, making them laugh.

 

Gray nodded, thinking Juvia wouldn’t like it either, considering Lucy’s status as a ‘love rival.’

 

“And it means you can both fuck more in secret,” Lucy Ashley added slyly, making both Gray and Lucy blush and nod.

 

Then Earthland Lucy got a sly look of her own. “Speaking of fucking more…” Getting on all fours, she presented herself to Gray, adding a sexy wiggle for good measure.

 

“Oh no you don’t, bitch! I’m not getting left out this time!” Lucy Ashley growled playfully. Climbing on top of her counterpart, she threw a heated look over her shoulder. “Pick a hole, stud, because we aren’t even close to done yet!”

 

It was far from the date he had imagined, but Gray couldn’t bring himself to be even a little disappointed.


(Story by User: S22132)

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Dampil
Dampil
2 years ago

I’m not a Yuri fan, but I liked the chapter. Although I am happy with almost any chapter on the tale. In addition, I am pleased with the H-materials by Edens Zero. I will look forward to Homura. I wonder how gorgeous it will look in your drawing style. I would also like to see Homura / Wise. Or with anyone, it doesn’t matter. I also really liked the moment when Lucy thought about a dick of Gray. I liked that the key to her pussy is located in Gray’s pants: 3

Dampil
Dampil
2 years ago

I put off this review for a long time, because I did not know how to write it correctly. I want to say that I love the theme of Fairy tail, and look forward to the release of each chapter. I must say that this time, you not only surprised me, but also exceeded all my expectations. This is my favorite chapter at this time. A description of how well Gray pleases girls is simply beyond praise. The way Lucy went crazy with a hard as an ice dick is one of her favorite moments. Which I really liked. I would like to see as much of the pairing of Gray with Lucy. Although Natsu’s dick is a little bigger, only Gray’s icy dick can cool, cool Lucy’s passion. I have high hopes for the following chapters.
Maybe Lucy will fall in love with this cock and even begin to change Natsu.

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Dampil

Thank you Dampil, I am excited knowing that you enjoy these stories so much. I do hope you look forward to future chapters of the story and thank you so much for commenting. I always enjoy seeing the comments because it helps motivate the writer and I

Lizardon
Lizardon
2 years ago

Yo Enzo that was Really good, now you got me thinking. How Mira and Erza Will fit on this? I would love to see some Laxus affair with these two lol

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Lizardon

I don’t really have much plans for Mira, Erza will have to do some traveling

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

How does Mira not have plans? Miss Fiore, Fairy Tail pinup girl, and recurring Miss Fairy Tail? Can be easily paired with Lisanna for sisterly time, Sorano for Angel vs Devil action, Jenny in a model off that has already had getting nude for views as a stake for a bet, and Erza for the old rivalry?

Speaking of Erza, traveling?

NamelessR04
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NamelessR04
2 years ago

This is the finest yet, to bring Edolas Lucy in the mix was genius! I like how the image look with both of Lucys holding each other naked and story was great too. A twist of irony Natsu banging Juvia while his rival Gray not just banged Lucy, but also her Edolas counterpart, a double Lucy threesome!

Though “Super Orgasm” really, that was kind of basically original in my opinion, but never the less the sex scene extremely intense it ashamed Natsu miss out this opportunity.

As always great job Rtenzo and S22132 for another Fairy Tail post. 👍👍👍

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  NamelessR04

Thank you nameless, I am happy you like seeing AU lucy in the story. Natsu missed out this time! while Gray got double the fun!

Blackstriker94
Blackstriker94
2 years ago

If Juvia is out on a mission and Nastu didn’t show up means their standing each other up again. The stand ups were good but at this point it’s getting a little predictable. Just have Natsu bang them both or have Lucy decide on another guy. Please move the story along.

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Blackstriker94

Lucy decide on another guy? you mean like… Gray?

ZMaster
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ZMaster
2 years ago

Gray finally gets in on the action. Nice!

The image is great, the standing pose really highlights their curves especially Edolas Lucy’s fat ass (the only minor problem is that I can’t see their nipples but it’s still hot). Didn’t expect to see to see Edolas Lucy at all but she’s a wonderful addition.

The story was well written and awesome. I love how Lucy is such a slut when she gets into the sex😄 and Gray being a lover/friend with benefits that puts more emphasis foreplay was established in previous chapters, it’s cool to see him showing off his stuff.

A question though. Do you plan to use more Edolas characters or is it just a onetime thing?

All in all, Awesome work as usual to you both.👍

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  ZMaster

I have no plans to include more Edolas characters other than Lucy Ashley who is currently in the story

I’m happy you like it man and how you like Gray in this chapter!

Squally
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Squally
2 years ago

Oh my God that was everything I wanted and more! Double Lucys! You really delivered this time! That Super Orgasm was creative and I didn’t see it coming! I expected Gray to make up for lack of size with experienced foreplay but that went beyond my expectations. And bringing Edolas Lucy opens whole new avenues. I also like the implication that Elfman and Ever are already fucking, it also implies that many other couples are doing it too. The part of Lucy’s relief that Gray’s cock was normal sized I found to be very realistic. I’ve been doing some reading lately and size does indeed matter but bigger does not necessarily mean better, all depends on the woman’s preferences.

I have absolutely nothing negative to say about this 9/10 (minus a point because I’m not a fan of the pose in the picture..can’t see their nipples..still good though lol)

P.S
As well as this went I think I would really like to see both couples make up, preferably with Edo doubles again including Edo Juvia? A vanilla scene with other couples wouldn’t be amiss either. Also if Edo Natsu is normal as opposed to Earth Natsu, and Earth Gray is normal does that mean that Edo Gray is huge? Just wondering.

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Squally

Happy you like the chapter. I know you been wanting Gray to have his moment to shine for awhile so i’m happy it exceeded your expectations heh

lol Lucy has been dealing with so many monster dicks lately that shes glad that Gray’s dick was smaller and more managable. He’s also more gentler.

To answer your question. Edo Gray is probably packin either a huge log or a tiny twig under all his clothes.

Squally
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Squally
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

If Edo Gray does get involved I think it would be better if he was huge as it would be true to the theme of Edolas and Earthland being night and day. Edo Natsu and Earth Gray are normal and skilled, and Earth Natsu and Edo Gray are huge and (surprisingly in the case of Edo Gray) dominate. I can also imagine a funny scene of Edo Juvia taking off Gray’s many layers of clothes to find a monster. “Holy Crap!…so that’s why you wear all those clothes!” LOL

Aside from that I had one more question. Since this scene is juxtaposed with the previous chapter does this mean that Natsu and Lucy are going to miss their date again?

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Squally

lol Edo Natsu and Edo Gray probably won’t be in the story but I can see those kinds of night and day comparisons. Funny joke on the clothing too!

Yes they missed the date. The Natsu/Juvia chapter ended pretty late into the day so and I already have plans for Lucy later on

Squally
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Squally
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

lol thanks I actually thought of a few more lines..

Edo Juvia: “Holy Crap!…so that’s why you wear all those clothes!”

Edo Gray: “All the better to LOVE you with Juvia-chan!”

Edo Juvia: “Wrong Fairy Tail! Stop talking like that!”

Edo Gray: (pressing his member against her face) “Juvia-chan, I’m cold. Please warm me up.”

Edo Juvia: (face cringing as his dick presses her cheek) “Ugh fine you clingy big dick dork..just…hold still..”

I think you know where the rest is going lol What do you think? good or cliche?

Interesting. Since they were both fucking someone else at the time that would mean they both thought they stood each other up right? If you have Natsu apologize before Lucy can then she’ll be able to play it off like she was waiting for him. Because honestly I don’t know how else you could possibly skate over getting stood up 3 times. Even I would dump a girl after that unless she was sick or a relative died.

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Squally

Thats pretty good, if they ever make an appearance I am gonna use this lol

Squally
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Squally
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Thanks! Now I hope it does happen! 🙂

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago

Yes! Edolas counterparts! Scarlet and Knightwalker, Juvia and Edo Juvia, Cana and Edo Cana… oh, wait.

I have to admit, when I first started reading this, I thought it was taking place right after the last makeup date.

Really like the the “Super Orgasm Denial” and the idea of the characters adding magic to sex, though now I think Natsu needs to use that to step his game up since he has another blonde bombshell to conquer (but I think his size and stamina might already be enough to win her over). Speaking of, how’d she get there? And more importantly, does Natsu get there?

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

This is taking place at the same time as the last picture. The opening exchange between Natsu and Lucy is the same exchange as the last chapter. While Natsu and Juvia went off to fool around, Gray went to the guild and found Lucy

I’m not sure how Natsu’s magic would be applied to sex but I’m open to ideas.

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Right, it just took me a moment to pick up on that.

Hmm… his heated touch putting them in heat? A special breath of fire in a kiss or cunning to incite them? Instead of using fire to replenish himself he sucks it from others from tit sucking?… There’s bound to be something.

Uzumaki dragonslayer
Uzumaki dragonslayer
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Finally Gray got some action and I love how after all those chapters of Juvia saying gray was smaller he was able to compensate with skills. The fairy tail and the BSU stories are my favorite so far

And for an idea with Natsu using his magic maybe he can warm up body parts such as his dick or if he starts using foreplay maybe warm up his fingers or tongue as well.(which I doubt I see Gajeel, Taurus and Natsu more likely savagely fucking the girls or who knows maybe they can always learn a thing or two to please their girls better)

Rtenzo
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2 years ago

Oh ya! Juvia missed out big time! Gray was gonna deliver the big O!

Ay I’m happy you enjoy the FT and BSU series man, more so the BSU series since I care about that series waaay more for obvious reasons lol

Hmm, I don’t see the benefit of banging someone with a hot finger or tongue or dick? a burnt vagina sounds very unpleasant unless the girl is a masochist

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Maybe not so much actual heat but metaphorical heat, like Gray stockpiling orgasms by freezing them

Uzumaki dragonslayer
Uzumaki dragonslayer
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

I love that you take your time uploading a BSU story that why I guess it’s soooooo good it’s nice to see how Xavier can’t catch a break you’d expect your typical main character to have it easy(and then with him having the biggest dick in BSU if I recall correctly) but it isn’t the case here he’s messed up BIG TIME in the latest chapter I can’t wait for the next one.

And I think I got my point across wrong I don’t mean like literal fire but control his body temperature and make the girl feel warmer relaxed less tense maybe something like what Naruto did with Hinata in the chapter after the raikage used the last ticket to fuck her. Idk it’s because I feel like after this chapter Natsu is just average now Taurus got the biggest dick gajeel got a bigger one than him and is able to expand the piercings(or whatever he did when he first fucked Lucy) and gray utilizes his magic and maybe im being biased but yeah lol sorry for the super long text I just feel like Natsu could use an epic comeback like Naruto did after the raikage has the pills and boruto has the biggest dick now.

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago

Or maybe some E.N.D. related power he gained?

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

FT is so convuluted when it comes to Natsu and him being a demon copy and also being a time traveler sent 400 years in the future in order to stop some doomsday. You’re gonna need to remind me what his END powers are?

Dr. Pervert
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Dr. Pervert
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Never really shown, so right now it’s open to whatever.

Speaking of time travel, why does Edo Lucy not seem older than the 7-year-skip Lucy (and seemingly smaller rack)? Did Edolas go through a Blip? Did that open up the Multiverse?… Is this really Edo Lucy?

Rtenzo
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2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

If by older you mean different hairstyle, then she simply kept the same hairstyle all these years.

Rtenzo
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2 years ago

I love it when people reference my other stories! I understand it easier now that you make the Naruto reference lol but I don’t think Natsu needs a comeback as badly as Naruto did, Hinata was being mind broken for like 5-10 chapters while Naruto was aware of it lol

Also thank you for enjoying the BSU material, Xavier currently is going thru a rough spot rightnow. A lot of crap is piling up on him that he has to overcome to become stronger.

Gajeel gave his dick a bunch of bump-like ball bearings so it was all very lumpy, like a ribbed condom that was made for Lucy’s pleasure.

It don’t think Natsu needs a comeback right now considering that right now it is Gray’s time to shine. Natsu has had his high points for numerous chapters already especially with Juvia enjoying his dick more. You are right about Taurus, Gajeel and Gray with magic. If Natsu gets a comeback, It’ll have to be something interesting but right now I don’t have any good ideas for him. A lot of people are suggesting he heat up his partners but I don’t think thats interesting enough because thats just the opposite of what Gray is doing when cooling down his partner.

attractdistract
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attractdistract
2 years ago

Double Lucy! I love it! Nice work, gents.

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago

Double the fun man! and happy you like it!

Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
2 years ago

My review for this chapter!( It Is a long one)
The opening was good, Lucy apologizing over and over to Natsu was kinda what I expected from last episode so I find it also funny you played into Lucy tends to get angry with natsu like in the show. He is having none of it and she promises to make it up to him which probably won’t work.Lucy leaves and the story begins with gray looking for juvia, he finding evergreen and Elfman ( a side chapter I hope gets drawn) he asked for juvia in which she tells him she is not here. I find the bit of Evergreen laughing at Gray’s size also a bit mean but I guess size does matter to sluts like Evergreen.The next part is I believe one of the Best parts, the reveal of both Lucy’s beautiful bodies would drive anyone into sex. Gray rushes to the stage in which theirs threesome begins ( and also if natsu doesn’t get a three way I will be very dissapointed in you. There are 5 girls to choose from pick 2)The sex here is pretty good as well I like the soft sensual love making that happens it’s a nice 180 from all the hardcore sex that has been happening. Also I like the touch of Earth gray being much bigger than her edols Natsu, if she ever saw Earth Natsu I bet she cum just from sight. Next up is a great titfuck scene in which Lucy teaches Lucy how to properly give a titfuck. Major points for Lucy’s lewd face blowjob I love that.Yes now the next part is the best part, but also the part that is giving me the most hope for a certain event.As gray fucks Lucy soft and sexual her body builds up and ready to cum but gray I assuming using magic stops her. I am not the biggest fan of orgasm denial but it works here due to the pay off in which the next part I love but I also have a bit of a problem with in where gray finally let’s Lucy cum by hitting her g spot with his avarage dick which gives her qoute ” the best she ever felt during sex” which is nice and hot.Anyway the chapters ends with Lucy begging gray not to say that he gave her the best fuck in which lies my biggest nic pick of this in which now is gray going to be the 4th guy to get to fuck Lucy while natsu is still only getting juvia, I personally feel like it’s moving way to slowly.
Pros: 1: gray finally gets some
2: the two Lucy’s together was incredible
3: gray having a technique to compete with other’s
Cons:
1: not really the pairing I choose to introduce gray
2: gray now is also fucking Lucy while natsu is only fucking juvia.
Overall 8 I think this so far has been the best story in this series and I can’t wait for more.

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago

Thank you so much for your feedback as usual combo. I already sent you a message on twitter regarding your feedback. Happy you enjoy the Gray love. Lucy is pretty much the whore of the FT world, shes going to get around a lot, usually thru shenanigans lol

Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Yeah Lucy is the whore of fairy tail, and yeah everyone wants a piece of her, I’m just waiting for the time where someone gets to her.

Hiryu
Member
Hiryu
2 years ago

Wasn’t expecting this with TWO Lucys! But I did expect our Lucy hooking up with Gray, given the whole Natsu and Juvia business.

Also, a Super Orgasm, huh? That’s pretty useful. Well hopefully it’s something that comes in pretty often.

Nice work, gentlemen. As always.

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago
Reply to  Hiryu

lol I bet you can’t predict next chapter….

Happy you like it Hiryu!

Hiryu
Member
Hiryu
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Is this a challenge? Hahaha. If it is, then I accept!