Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Streaming Cum Everywhere


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of My Hero Academia stories)
Previous Story (Part XXV): [LINK]
Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
Next Story (Part XXVII): [LINK]


Stretching his arms, Izuku Midoriya tried to suppress the urge to yawn but ultimately failed as he walked out of homeroom class. ā€œYou alright, Deku?ā€ Ochaco asked while walking next to him. Their morning classes were done and it was time for lunch, something Izuku was looking forward to since he could use an energy boost.

 

ā€œYeah, just a little tired.ā€ he answered honestly, ā€œIā€™m just glad itā€™s Friday and Endeavor is letting me, Kacchan and Todoroki have the weekend off.ā€

 

ā€œEven heroes need a break every now and then,ā€ said Tenya Iida, being the last one to exit the classroom. ā€œTaking time to enjoy oneself is important to a heroā€™s morale.ā€ he explained.

 

ā€œYeah yeah, save it for your memoirs,ā€ said Kacchan as he pushed past them, ā€œLater losers!ā€ he said shortly before disappearing down the hallway.

 

ā€œSo Deku, what are your plans this weekend?ā€ Ochaco asked, ā€œAre you going on another date with Momo?ā€

 

Izuku felt his face heat up somewhat until he remembered the dark haired girl wasnā€™t in class today but was doing some Hero Work with her own work-study. The two of them hadnā€™t actually had an official second date yet, and just as Izuku began to wonder if that was good or bad he felt an arm drop around his shoulders. A sudden weight pulled him to his left, he turned to see Setsuna Tokage there, grinning widely.

 

ā€œActually, Midoriya here is helping me out!ā€ she said, still grinning like the Cheshire cat.

 


 

Izuku never ceased to be amazed by Camieā€™s quirk as he walked into the large conference room on Busteezā€™s fifth floor. Though if he didnā€™t know any better, Izuku would have sworn heā€™d just walked into a fantasy world, complete with a willow tree and glowing leaves. There were even some randomly placed crystals all around the area that reflected a soft rainbow colored light. In the distance, Izuku could see the ocean under the vast night sky, there were even waves lapping against the shore, you could even hear the ambiance effects!

 

Izuku distantly remembered Camie could add sounds to her illusion, though it was difficult for her, and they drastically shortened the time it lasted. Standing under the illusion of the tree was Tokage herself, completely naked and looking totally at ease.

 

ā€œOh good, youā€™re here. Iā€™m almost done, so go ahead and strip, ā€˜kay? I’ll be with you in a second.ā€ She then turned and her hands reached INTO the tree, pulling out a small sphere that was set inside a disk shaped platform. It was a web camera. Izuku could see some small cords attached to the base that vanished inside the illusory tree which he walked towards. The naked green haired girl simply hummed softly as she fiddled with the camera. Curiosity taking over him, Izuku cautiously leaned his head INTO the tree and found that inside was a small stand similar to the kind people set a bust statue or a vase on top of. But more fascinating was that while the inside of the tree was hollow he could clearly see the outside world! It was like some kind of one way mirror, where you could easily see through one end, but not the other.

 

ā€œAh, there we go!ā€ Tokage said, suddenly startling Izuku.

 

ā€œHuh!?ā€ he said as he bolted upright.

 

ā€œFINALLY got this camera working, the image has been freezing out every so often, one of the cord plugs was loose.ā€ Tokage explained as she set the camera back into the tree and began moving it around a bit.

 

ā€œHold on, how can you tell? Whereā€™s the display?ā€ Izuku asked her as he looked around, but everything just looked like an idyllic fantasy setting, he couldnā€™t tell where any monitors or even a computer was.

 

Tokage reached inside one of the glowing crystals and pulled out a smartphone with several cords running into the charging port. Izuku could see four screens on the display, each showing the room from a different angle.

 

ā€œIā€™m streaming through my phone, itā€™s one of those new Tenzo 8ā€™s, the kind with the battery that can go a couple days without recharging.ā€ she explained. Izuku had heard about the Tenzo series, they were phones mainly for heroes who worked in rural areas. In fact, the Pussycats even did a commercial for them recently. And when he thought about that commercial, his eyes widened.

 

ā€œYep, that was me!ā€ Tokage said, ā€œI played the victim with the missing arm and leg in the commercial. They offered me either this for free, or about the same amount of money as one of these costs. So I skipped the middle man.ā€ she explained simply. ā€œWasnā€™t that hard of a role really.ā€ she added, grabbing her left wrist with her right hand and snapping her left hand off with the lightest of pulling motions. The stump where her hand had once been was completely black, with no blood or even bone showing. Her left hand, now floating in the air, did a little wave before simply reattaching itself without so much as even a line to show where it had been severed.

 

ā€œThatā€™s really amazing,ā€ said Izuku, ā€œCan you still feel everything when you detach like that?ā€

 

ā€œWell yeah! It would suck if I couldnā€™t, and would also make it pretty difficult to move the pieces around.ā€ said Tokage, ā€œActually, they donā€™t think my quirk is actually severing pieces of my body, but more like creating portals of some kind where the pieces separate. My body is actually still ā€˜wholeā€™ but in multiple places at once. And before you ask, no one can explain the regeneration bit clearly, since there are multiple schools of thought on that one!ā€ she told him while detaching her entire left forearm, ā€œHere, see for yourself, you can still take my pulse, even though itā€™s seemingly not connected to my heart.ā€

 

Tokage handed her arm to him and Izuku felt for her pulse. Learning to read vitals was one of the first things they learned in the hero course. Izuku found her pulse on his second try, it was a little fast, but steady. He didnā€™t know if that was from using her quirk, or from the fact that she was standing completely naked in front of him. When Izuku handed Tokageā€™s arm back to her, she reattached it by cramming the two ends together, making her naked breasts jiggle lightly.

 

She noticed his eyes and gave him a sharp toothed grin, ā€œYeah, theyā€™re great, arenā€™t they?ā€ she asked, raising her arms up and putting her hands behind her head before swaying her chest from side to side. ā€œI had Rie give them a liiiittle boost, but not too much. I tried the whole bigger than my entire body once, I could barely move them after separating them because they were so heavy.ā€

 

Izuku gulped, ā€œYeā€¦ Yeah, I could see how that might be a problem!ā€ he said nervously.

 

Tokage giggled, ā€œYaomomo was right, you are still a little uptight at first!ā€ she told him before moving her hands to grab his and place them directly over her breasts, ā€œGo on, give ā€˜em big olā€™ squeeze!ā€ she told him playfully.

 

Izukuā€™s fingers clenched before he could think about it, forcing a pained scream out of Setsuna as her breasts snapped off! ā€œWAH!!! Tokage-san!!!ā€ Izuku yelped, accidentally tossing her breasts into the air and hurriedly thinking of the steps to stop bleeding andā€¦ He stopped, there wasnā€™t any blood. Where Tokageā€™s breasts had snapped off were simply two black spaces on her now flat chest.

 

The green haired girl snickered, then clutched at her sides from laughing too hard, ā€œOh god, the look on your face!!! WAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! Priceless, Iā€™m so glad Iā€™m recording this!!!ā€ She continued to laugh for a few more seconds before wiping tears away from her eyes, ā€œOhhh, too funny!ā€ she told him as her breasts, which were still floating in the air, moved to reattach themselves to her body as though theyā€™d never been apart.

 

She then moved to grab his left arm, pulling up his wrist, ā€œNow, which one of these buttons strips you naked?ā€ she asked as she randomly tapped a button. Turned out she hit the correct one as the quickband wrapped his body up in glowing ribbons that quickly faded away, leaving him stark naked.

 

ā€œWah, To-Tokage-san!ā€ Izuku yelped.

 

ā€œThatā€™s really convenient!ā€ she said, ā€œIā€™m still on the waitlist to get one. My costume is made from my own cells so the quickband needs to be as well, which causes plenty of complications. And also, you can stop calling me by my last name now. Setsuna is fine, and no honorifics.ā€

 

Izuku took off the quickband and set it inside the illusory tree, ā€œAh, um, okay, Setsunaā€¦ā€ he said quietly. The green haired girl grinned sweetly at him then moved in closer, Izuku could smell her body wash, it was the same kind that all the girls used at school. While all the students could buy their own hygiene products, the school did provide them some as well. Among them was a flowery scented body soap for the girls. Momo used it regularly because she said she liked the smell. The scent relaxed Izuku a bit, though his heart was still racing, he didnā€™t feel quite as tense now.

 

At least until Setsuna unceremoniously grabbed his dick and gingerly held it in both hands. The green haired girl let out a low whistle, ā€œDaaaaamn boy! Well, no wonder Mina keeps going on about you. You’re not the least bit hard yet I need both hands just to hold this!ā€ she said as she dropped down onto her knees to take a closer look.

 

ā€œNmmmmmmh, I love how thick you are, even like this I need both hands to encircle this big,ā€ she paused to kiss the tip of his cock, ā€œThick,ā€ she added as she began stroking his cock slowly, kissing up and down his length slowly, ā€œDick! AHHHHMMMMPH!!!!” she said, opening her mouth wide and swallowing his cock down her throat!

 

ā€œHaaaahā€¦ Setā€¦sunaaaaā€¦!ā€ Izuku groaned at the warm, wet, and very slippery feel of the inside of her mouth. His dick began getting hard almost instantly, swelling and expanding inside her mouth.

 

ā€œNMMMMMPH, DHUNā€™T WHORRY, AYE KNOW DHEY ARE SHARP, BUT AYE CAHN DHO DISH WIPHOUT HURDDING YOOOā€¦” Setsuna slurred as she began sucking and slurping at his length. Izuku could only groan in response as he looked down at her. She looked back up at him and winked her right eye playfully before she began moving her head back and forth more enthusiastically.

 

ā€œNMMMMPH, HMMMMPH, HRMMMPH, YESH, SHUCH A BHIG DHIIIICK, AAAGUH, ITā€™SH PHILLING MUH WHOLE PHROAT!!!ā€ she moaned and moved her head back and forth.

 

ā€œHahhā€¦ Setā€¦sunaaahā€¦!ā€ Izuku groaned as his cock grew even more inside her mouth, making her slender throat bulge with its sheer girth as the girlā€™s dark green eyes rolled back in her head. He could feel her nimble tongue slipping and sliding along the underside of his dick as she began struggling to move.

 

ā€œMMMMMMMPH, YEEEAAH, PHUCK MUH PHASHE, OH GAWD, DISH CAWK PHEELSH SHO GUUD IN MUH MOUPH, AGUH GUH GUMMMPH!!!ā€ she gagged while leaning forward, pushing his length farther down her throat! He groaned again, then blinked as he felt her hands on his wrists again, gripping them tightly and moving his hands to either side of her head. But when he looked down at her, her arms were still down in front of her, and her hands were floating in the air!

 

ā€œNMMMMMMPH, YEEEESSSH!!! PHUCK, PHUCK, PHUCK, PHUCK, PHUCK, PHUUUUUUUCK!!!!ā€ Setsuna gagged and howled around his cock as her hands made his hands grip the side of her head before pumping her face back and forth on his cock even faster.

 

ā€œNMMMPH GUG, MMMMMPH, GUH, MMMMPH, GWEGH, GURPH, GUH GUH GUH!!! AHHHHHGUUGH, SHO GUUD, MUH MOUPH PHEELSH GOOD, YESH, HAWDER, PHUCK MY PASHE HAAAAWDERRRR, AHHHGUUUUGH, NMMMMMPH!!!ā€ Setsuna pleaded with him, her eyes shimmering with open desire as her lips glided back and forth over the thick length of his manhood.

 

Izuku groaned louder, overwhelmed by the feeling of her overly tight mouth and throat, so much so that he could feel the tip of his cock pushing into the depths of her stomach every time! Actively gripping Setsunaā€™s head now, Izuku began pumping her head back and forth, faster and harder, making the green haired girl moan even louder now.

 

ā€œYESH, YESH YESH EYSH, PHUCK MEH, PHUCK MY MOUPH WIKE A PUSSHYYYY!!! AAAHHHH GAAAAWD, PHEELSH SHO GUUUUD!!! GOOMMING, AYEā€™M GOOMMINNNGH!!! NMMMMMMPH!!!!ā€ Setsuna howled in pleasure, her body completely relaxing in his grip.

 

ā€œHAAAAAAH!!! YOU LIKE THAT!?ā€ he asked her, gripping fistfuls of her hair tightly. He was worried about hurting her, but Setsuna only moaned even louder as her eyes turned almost completely white as they rolled back in their sockets.

 

ā€œYESH, AYE WUV ID, MOAR, MOOOOAR, PHUCK MUH FAAASHE!!! GUG GUH GUMPH GWEH GUG GUG GUG!!!ā€ she choked loudly as long ropes of drool began dripping off her chin.

 

ā€œGUUG, GUUUG, PHEELLSH SHO GUUUG, MY MOUTH ISH MY PUSSHYYYY, PHUG ID HAWDERRRRRā€¦. HUGGUH, GUG, GUH GMMMMPH!!!!ā€ she moaned in utter pleasure as he heard a squirting sound causing her entire body to seemingly tense up repeatedly.

 

ā€œGUUMMING, AYEā€™M GUUMMING!!! OOOOH GAWD, SHO GUUUUUD!!! AGUH GUG GUG GUHā€¦!!!ā€ Setsuna gagged loudly, ā€œNMMMMMMMMMPH PHUUUUUUCK!!!!ā€

 

The green haired girl then gasped as she suddenly pulled away, his cock pulling out of her mouth with a soft wet ā€˜popā€™. Setsuna panted and whipped her chin, grinning widely at him and moving up to hug Izuku tightly, mashing her heavy tits against his firm chest. She pressed her mouth to his, forcing her tongue into his mouth and thoroughly exploring with it. Her tongue was really long, not as long as Tsuyuā€™s, but she could easily reach his throat with no difficulty.

 

Izuku kissed her back, wrapping his arms around her slender waist. Hugging her naked body tightly against him, he felt her mount his cock and grind her crotch against the topside. The green haired girl wrapped her own arms around his shoulders, hugging back as if trying to fuse the two of them together.

 

ā€œNmmmmmmhā€¦ā€ she purred into his mouth, holding the kiss for a full minute while constantly rubbing her pussy back and forth over his dick. He could feel her hot juices rubbing over the sides, down to the base then dripping off his balls.

 

When Setsuna finally broke the kiss her grin resembled that of a Cheshire cat while pulling away, making sure to grind her pussy against his dick all the way. ā€œMmmmmmh, now, fuck my ass!ā€ she told him. She then instantly turned around, bending forward and spreading her asscheeks with her hands. Izuku nodded numbly, moving closer and resting the length of his cock between those creamy cheeks. Setsuna hissed in anticipation, rocking her hips back and forth, stroking his dick with her ass!

 

ā€œHMMMMMMH, FUCK THAT DICK IS SO BIG!!! I WANNA FEEL IT REARRANGE MY ORGANS!!!!ā€ she moaned.

 

Izuku spanked her ass with his left hand, making it jiggle and forcing a a happy squeal out of Setsuna, ā€œNmmmmh, again!ā€ she said.

 

Izuku spanked her again.

 

ā€œAgain!ā€ she repeated. And Izuku slapped her ass a little harder. Setsuna shuddered and began shaking her ass from side to side, ā€œYeeeeah, Iā€™m such a bad little girl!!! Punish me with that big fat dick!!ā€

 

Spanking both her asscheeks at the same time, Izuku gripped her ass hard as he pulled his hip back and RAMMED his cock all the way into her with a wet ā€˜shlipā€™ noise. Setsunaā€™s entire body stiffened, her back arching as she let out a deep, long, howling moan that sounded like a feminine version of a roar from a movie about a Dinosaur Theme park where everything went bad.

 

ā€œAHHHH FUUUUUUUCK, BHIG, SO BHIIIIG, AHHH, I CAME SO HARD JUST FROM YOU STICKING IT UP MY ASS!!! AHHH, IT FEELS LIKE I HAVE A TREE TRUNK SHOVED INSIDE ME, ITā€™S INCREDIBLE!!!!ā€ she screamed, ā€œYEAAAH, Dā€¦ DONā€™T HOLD BACK, POUND THAT KAIJU DICK INTO MY ASS SO IT NEVER CLOSES AGAAAAINNNNā€¦!!!ā€ Setsuna moaned.

 

Groaning at the feeling of Setsunaā€™s ass clamping down around his cock, Izuku pulled back with his hips, groaning again as he felt her insides clinging tightly. The green haired girl shivered in front of him, turning her head to look back at him as she winked again. It might have just been a trick of the light, but it looked like she was wearing contacts in her eyes, though Izuku didnā€™t think she wore contacts, or had bad eyes at all. One of the things Monoma liked to brag about was how no one in his class needed glasses.

 

Izuku decided it didnā€™t matter in the end as Setsuna hissed and moaned again, ā€œHMMMMMMMMMMH, FUUUUCK, IT FEELS LIKE YOU’RE TURNING MY ASS INSIDE OOOOUT, AHHH, ITā€™S SO GOOD, ITā€™S MAKING ME CUUUUM!!!! HURRY, HUUURRRYY AND SHOVE IT BACK INSIIIIDE!!!ā€ she begged, then went stiff as he slammed his length back into her with a loud smacking sound.

 

ā€œYEEEEAH, OH FUUUCK MY STOMACH IS STRETCHING OUT SO FAAAR, AHHH, MY INSIDES ARE GETTING MOLDED AROUND YOUR BIG DICK, AHHH, Iā€™M GONNA GET ADDICTED TO THIS COCK!!!ā€ she told him as she began rocking her body into his thrusts.

 

ā€œYES! MAKE ME YOUR FUCKING COCKSLEEVE!!!! AHH FUCK, AH FUCK, AH FUCK FUCK FUCK!!! FUCK MEEEE!!!!ā€ the green haired girl moaned, her body bouncing back and forth on his cock again and again. Izuku gripped her plump ass, his fingers sinking deep into the soft cheeks as he began slamming his cock back and forth even harder and faster.

 

ā€œYES, LIKE THAT, CUMMING, Iā€™M CUMMING, YOUā€™RE MAKING ME CUM IZUKUUUUU!!! YESSSS, MORE, MORE, MOREMOREMORE!!! RUIN MY ASSHOLE, RUIN IIIIT!!!!ā€ she begged. ā€œHAAAH, AHHH, HAAAHH, IT FEELS LIKE YOUR COCK IS STIRRING UP MY INSIDES, BUT IT FEELS SO GOOD, I DONā€™T WANT IT TO STOOOOOP!!! AHH YESSS, DEEEPER, HAAARDER!!! JAM THAT BIG MONSTER COCK INSIDE ME UNTIL I FUCKING PASS OOOOOUT!!!!ā€ she moaned.

 

ā€œHurn, hurr, huurr, huh, hun, nnnnnuhā€¦!ā€ Izuku grunted and groaned as he continued gripping her ass while slamming his cock in and out. He could feel her pussy gushing against his balls every time he shoved his cock inside while Setsuna kept shouting the most obscene things. He then saw her reach both hands up to grab at her face, and with a soft ā€˜popā€™ she actually pulled her mouth away from her head and sent it floating back to him! She then kissed his mouth again, pushing her tongue back to his throat once more.

 

ā€œNMMMMH, DHONā€™T SHTOP, HAWDERR, OH GAAAAAWD, CUMMING, UR MAKING MEH CUM SHO MUUUSSH!!!ā€ she slurred against his mouth and tongue, ā€œDHONā€™T HOLD BHACK, CUM, CUM IN MEH, IN MUH ASSH, AYE WANT YOU TO EHMPTI UR BALLSH INDO MEEEHā€¦!ā€ she moaned, panting into his mouth and swirling her tongue around his, stroking it like it was his dick.

 

Izuku closed his eyes while kissing her back, pumping his hips faster and harder, the loud wet SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK of their bodies colliding was nearly as loud as her screaming! He could feel that familiar and wonderful pressure building up in his groin as his thrusts slowed down until he finally rammed his entire length into her asshole! He groaned into her mouth as he came, his cock spasming inside her with a GLORP GLORP GLORP sound.

 

Setsunaā€™s already distended stomach began to bloat and swell at the sheer volume of cum shooting out from his cock and into her belly. Setsuna moaned and rubbed her hands over her swelling belly, already easily viewable from behind as it reached down past her knees.

 

ā€œAHHHH GAAAAAWD, SHO MUSH CUUUUM, Iā€™M FILLING UUUUP, FILLING UP WITH CUUUUM,ā€ Setsuna moaned into his mouth, ā€œITā€™S SO GOOD, Iā€™M CUMMING FROM YOUR CUM PUMPING INTO MEEEEHGUUUBLEEEEEGH!!!!ā€ she screamed as Izuku suddenly tasted something thick, hot and very salty as Setsunaā€™s mouth pumped into his, a thick stream of his cum shooting out of it and splattering all over his face like a fire hose!

 

ā€œBLEEEEEEEERGUHGUHGUGLE!!!!ā€ she spewed as her belly rapidly shrank, his cum draining back out as quickly as it had been pumped inside!

 

When it finally stopped, Izuku’s eyes blinked, the only part of his face not currently drenched in cum. More cum covered Setsunaā€™s back and hair, her mouth panting softly while floating about half a meter away. Thick white cum clung to her tongue as it hung out of her mouth while they both recovered.

 

ā€œHah, heh, ahhh, soā€¦ Sorry, didnā€™t expect thatā€¦ā€ she gasped before closing her mouth and swallowing. She then opened it again and stuck her tongue out with a grin.

 

SHLOOOOOP!

 

The sound of his cock pulling out of her ass was like when you separated two long clogged pipes. Setsunaā€™s asshole remained gaping wide open, so wide Izuku thought he might be able to fit his whole fist inside without touching its walls!

 

ā€œNnnnnnngh, now I feel all emptyyyā€¦ā€ she whined, attaching her mouth where it belonged. She then winked at him again and smiled sweetly, ā€œWow, that was great, you wouldnā€™t believe the amount of views we got!ā€ she said in an excited tone.

 

ā€œViews?ā€ echoed Izuku.

 

ā€œWell yeah, we were live streaming that whole time you know, I was watching the feed through the screen in my eye!ā€ she explained while moving closer and leaning in. She used her finger to open her right eye wide for him, allowing Izuku a closer look, and when he did, he could see a flickering light in the center. ā€œThat American blonde babe who works in the glory hole room made it for me! It lets me put in commands by winking. Cool huh!?ā€ she said with a grin.

 

ā€œYeah, really cooā€¦ā€ Izuku began to agree, ā€œHang on, whaaaaat!?ā€ he shouted.

 


 

Story by Sailor Io

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Lancer
Lancer
1 year ago

Deku making his own cockslave harem.

Ichigo Kurosaki
2 years ago

more setsuna and deku

Recreational Pourpoises
Recreational Pourpoises
2 years ago

Always nice to see more Setsuna

souljamantwn
Member
2 years ago

Very nice to see more class 1B representation, hope we get to see more of them even if its in the background while at Busteez or something similar.

Sailor_Io
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

I’ll see what I can do.

N0bod4
Member
2 years ago

Love it and will there be any drama between the Harem and sex friends?

Okay then, relationship recap for those left in the dark or not up to date with this series

Harem:
1. Momo
2. Tsuyu
3. Uraraka

Sex Friends (Not In The Harem):
1. Mina
2. Kyoka
3. Itsuka
4. Mitsuki
5. Cassie
6. Mirko
7. Melissa
8. Camie

Sailor_Io
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  N0bod4

Nah, no drama there.

Hiryu
Member
2 years ago

That was wonderful! Glad to see Setsuna get some time in the spotlight. And just like in the previous rendition of the story, she’s made one hell of an impression!

But Iā€™m gonna cut to the chase here if you don’t mind. I really enjoyed how it all went. Including how it began right after class. Then it got right to business, which I really liked.

During this time, we learned more about how her Quirk works, especially when she’s really feeling creative, in addition to the interesting smartphone and the setup she did for her webcam show that she already had planned for herself and Izuku, with a little help from Melissa as we’ve learned at the end of the story. Very nicely done.

And naturally, the sex was also very well done too. I really like her style! One thing’s for sure, she isn’t afraid to talk dirty or get creative, and she really likes it rough! Definitely a favorite of mine. XD

Overall, this was a very fun experience to read. Very well done!

Can’t wait for what’s coming next. šŸ˜Ž

Last edited 2 years ago by Hiryu
Sailor_Io
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Hiryu

Yeah, I really like writing Setsuna as a bit of a playful prankster. She was really fun to write in this.

Xcelsior
Xcelsior
2 years ago

Dude. I love this art. Setsuna’s Quirk usage is always awesome in this series. The black emptiness made me think she was waring some badass mask, but it’s just to show her mouth is split off. This is just great.

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago
Reply to  Xcelsior

Thanks man and ya I liked the black mask look better than having a piece of her face missing lol

Smiling Fiend
Member
2 years ago

Yeah, there’s a point where the story just “loops”, it’s around that paragraph where Setsuna says “I love how thick you are” if you put that in the Ctrl+f search bar you’ll find it just fine. Happens to the best of us, the story is already very good. I like how you guys incorporate her quirk on the pics and the stories and I can’t wait to see her again eventually.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
2 years ago
Reply to  Smiling Fiend

Your wish, will be granted!

Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
2 years ago

It’s a great stroy my dude and cant wait for some more. There is a slight hic up of a paragraph repeating in it but I’m sure that can be fixed

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago

Where is the repeat? i’ll fix it

Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Where Izuku pulled his meat wagon out of her mouth. The next paragraph is a reapeat

Rtenzo
Admin
2 years ago

can you be more specific?

Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
2 years ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Sorry I thought I was, my bad. Glad you guys fixed it

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
2 years ago

Enzo and I went over the text, should be good now
Sorry about that, errors happen in editing sometimes.

Last edited 2 years ago by Sailor_Io
Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
2 years ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

It’s all good