Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Interactive Intercourse


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Bleach stories)
Previous Story (Chapter 53): [LINK]
Beginning (Chapter 01): [LINK]
Next Story (Chapter 55): To Be Continued…


♪♪ SHAKE DAT ASS,
SHAKE DAT ASS,
SHAKE, SHAKE, SHAKE DAT ASS!!!
MAKE DAT DICK…
MAKE DAT DICK…
MAKE IT HARD, HARD, HARD ♪♪

 

An energetic and loud beat blasted out of strategically placed loudspeakers through the entire room. Purple, green, yellow, white, red, and blue lights danced over the heads of the many, mostly male, visitors of Retsu Unohana’s Palace as they continued throwing money into the air and on the stage. The bank notes didn’t lay on stage for long though as they quickly got sucked up by silent vacuums that were installed at the very edge of the stage to ensure that the dancers wouldn’t end up slipping on them during their practiced routines.

 

♪♪ TOUCH IT, JERK IT,
LICK IT, SUCK IT,
FUCK IT, LOVE IT,
TAKE IT…
TAKE IT…
TAKE IT…
TAKE IT GOOD!!
TAKE IT REAL GOOD ♪♪

 

The music kept on pounding, its shockwaves vibrating through everyone’s body, as the trio of women on stage kept on gyrating their barely covered ass for the entertainment of the crowd. The three performing women, from left to right, were Momo Hinamori (Stage Name: Princess Plum), Tier Harribel (Stage Name: Tiburón), and Nelliel Tu Odelschwank (Stage Name: Gamuza). Between the three women, the crowd had a hard time focusing on just a single one. Though she was vastly outclassed by Nel and Harribel in the tits and ass department, Momo herself managed to catch the attention of several men herself whose catcalls and wolf whistles were only barely audible through all the other noise as the music only got louder!

 

♪♪ DAT ASS…
SHAKE IT, SHAKE IT ROUND AND ROUND!
TWERK IT, TWERK IT FOR THE CROWD!
DAT ASS…
SLAP IT, BEAT IT, SPANK IT, MAKE IT GO…
PLAP, PLAP
PLAP, PLAP, PLAP ♪♪

 

Just as the rapper instructed, the female trio gyrated their assets mere inches above the hungry eyes of the crowd. People in the front row were able to hear the lewd sounds of wet flesh smacking against wet flesh, their oiled up buttocks shining and smelling invitingly. Momo lacked the size and skill needed to captivate the crowd as much as the other two more well endowed women, but that didn’t make the men go any less wild at the sight. Hundreds, if not thousands, of green bank notes rained down on the women as they kept dancing for the entertainment of everyone!

 

While the risque dancing was one of the main attractions of the Palace, other floors offered a much more hands-on experience for those with a Platinum VIP Card. Behind one of the many closed doors on the second floor, inside a room modeled after a traditional pirate ship from the 17th century, Captain Toshiro Hitsugaya found his face between the legs of one of the cougars who took a liking to him back during the opening. A couple of doors further, Lisa Yadomaru performed a private lap dance for a lucky Ugly Bastard who couldn’t help but drool all over his own hairy chest at the sight of her clapping ass cheeks directly in front of his face.

 

And, in yet another room…

 


 

[DISCLAIMER: From here on out, certain parts of the story will be written in cursive for a potentially better reading experience. They are in order to make things easier to understand and to keep track of what’s going on.]

 

“Hehehehehehe! Seems like someone’s enjoying all that attention. And from the Palace’s two hottest girls no less…” Rukia giggled against your crotch as she inhaled the manly smell of your balls. There was a playful gleam in her dark eyes as she winked at you before licking lasciviously at your family jewels. “Aren’t you a lucky guy?!”

 

“…” You groaned as your dick twitched in response to the short girl’s skilled tongue lashing.

 

Though she wasn’t the only reason you felt so good at the moment. “I think we can take this as ‘yes’.” the other girl next to Rukia moaned while casually stroking your entire length with her delicate hands. She felt so soft and applied just the right amount of pressure as she quickly rubbed your dick to its full size. Precum ran down between her fingers as she leaned forward to lap it up straight from the source. “Mmmmh… and such a rich taste!”

 

HEY! No fair, I wanted to go first!” Rukia complained, though it was clear she was only playing the part. “You always end up hogging the big dicks for yourself, Isane!”

 

“Hmm~! Can you blame me?!” the silver haired maiden asked. She parted her lips and took the first two inches of your cock into her mouth. “Cawksh like dish… dey’re da BEEESHD!!!!

 

“…!”

 

“Oh? Did you like that? You know, I could feel her voice vibrate all the way down to your balls!” Rukia purred wetly as she kissed your nutsacks, leaving a trail of silver lipstick marks behind while she did it. “It’s not often that you get to spend time with two nymphos who do whatever you want!”

 

MHMMMPH!!!” Isane nodded approvingly, with her face flushing in a deep red as her colleague began to grab and squeeze her fat ass!

 

And what a fat ass it was! Each cheek was easily six times bigger than her own head and only outclassed by the two cow udders she carried in front of her. Physically, it should be completely impossible for either of them to be as big as they are now, much less for Isane to be able to walk around with them! But you didn’t care! As long as you got to see those assets put to good use, it didn’t matter!

 

Rukia giggled playfully again. “But don’t you think this dick is a bit too small for us two sluts at once?!” As Isane kept bobbing her head up and down the upper half of your length, the black haired shortstack easily took the lower half in her hand and held it tight. “What would you say to a little magic trick to spice things up a bit?”

 

You replied;
“No!”
“A magic trick? What’s it about?”

 


 

 

“Come on, big guy!” Rukia purred, burying her nose deep at the underside of your dick and inhaling your stench again. “Trust me, you’re gonna love it!”

 

YEPH!!! PLEASHE DO IDD!!!” Isane slurred around your cock, her saliva running down and mixing with your precum between Rukia’s fingers. Her tongue left not a single spot untouched as she eagerly swallowed more and more of your length. “AYE NHEED MOAW!!! MOAW CAWK IN MUH MOUPH!!! MOAR CAWK TO SHUCK AND PHUCK MEH WIPH!! PLEEEEASHE!!!!” She begged you.

 

You asked;
B) “A magic trick? What’s it about?”

 


 

 

Rukia grinned victoriously. “A little something that our boss taught each one of us here.” She explained vaguely while letting go of your dick to instead wave her hand through the air. “Usually we’re only allowed to use it on ourselves, but I think we can make a special exception in your case!”

 

Your cock, still halfway into Isane’s mouth, suddenly began to glow in a lavender light. The silver haired slut’s eyes widened as your cock began to swell drastically. “NOT SHO SHUDDENLY!!! AYE’M NOT WEADY YEEEEEEEGH!!! URG, GUUUK!!!” Isane’s complaints turned into nothing but incomprehensible gagging and choking sounds as her jaw was stretched wide open by your ever growing cock. “ARK, GUULG, HUUUG!!! BHIGG… IT’SH TOO BHIIIIIIIIIIIG!!!!” She patted against your thigh and tried to pull back

 

“What’s the matter, can’t handle a little extra meat?!” Rukia teased as she put her hand against the back of Isane’s head and pushed her further down on your cock. “Well, you’re not going to stop now! Gag on it, you slut!”

 

NHO, WHUKIAAAAAAH!!!!” Tears streamed down Isane’s cheeks. Between her lewd slurping and gagging sounds, you could hear the gushing of her pussy as she climaxed then and there. “UGH, UGH, RUUUGH!! MUH MOUPH… IT’SH GONNA SHPLIT OPEN! HE’SH PHUGGING MUH PHWOAT, AYE CAN PHEEL IDDDD!!!!!

 

“Don’t mind her, she really loves this!” Rukia told over Isane’s gagging. She rose to her feet and stood behind Isane, shoving the other girl’s face back and forth in order to drive even more of your enhanced cock down her now bulging throat. “Just sit back and focus on fucking her brains out!”

 

“…!”

 

Rukia laughed over Isane’s increased wailing and moaning. “AWWW GAAWD!!!! IT’SH TOO MUSH!!!!” her colleague cried ecstatically around your cock, unable to get down to the halfway mark now. “IT’SH PHILLING MUH PHWOAT, AYE CAN’T BREAPH!!!!

 

“Don’t be such a baby! I know you can’t get enough of it!” Rukia hissed into Isane’s ear, with her much smaller tits pressing against the other Captain’s back. She then kissed her bulging neck and inhaled deeply. “I can smell it, you know?! Your arousal, your juices, your thirst… you wanna taste it, don’t you? His cum!”

 

EEEEEPH!!!!” Isane admitted. “IT HURTSH, BUT IT ALSHO PHEELSH SHO GHUUD!!! AYE NEVAH WAND DISH PHEELING TO PASSH!!!! AYE WANNA DRINK ALL DISH DELISHIOUSH MANMILK!!!!” She slurred wetly, her words a barely audible mess that echoed in your ears, even as Rukia already pushed her further down your cock.

 

“What a nasty skank you turned out to be!” Rukia shook her head before continuing to nibble on Isane’s neck. “I don’t know what Captain Unohana and Grimmjow did with you that other night, but it sure seemed to have awakened something inside of you!

 

MHMMMM… SHO GHUUD!!! GHETTING PHUGGED LIKE DISH NEVAH PHELD BEDDAH!!!!” Isane moaned from deep in her throat. When she opened her eyes, there was nothing there to be seen but the pure, unbridled lust that currently took control of her body! It spurred her on to take more and more of your thick throbbing cock down her throat, to a point where it simply should be impossible. And yet, she gobbled up more! “HUUUURGH, GLOOOMPH, HRRRRRM, AAAACK, GUUURK!!!

 

Her sexy choking sounds filled the entire room as your cock stretched out her neck to the point of absurdity! Yet, at long last, she couldn’t take any more! After a half hour with your cock down her throat, she finally had to spit it out again in order to breathe clearly again. As she took some much needed moments to relax her unhinged looking jaw, Rukia used the opportunity and began kissing your cock all over. Her silver lipstick left a trail from the tip of your cock, all the way to its base and then back again. Your cock wasn’t left painted only in silver for too long though. The second she finished her little break, Isane went on to kiss your balls as well. A number of black lipstick marks appeared right next to the silver ones as Isane dutifully kissed her way up and down your dick. One girl left, the other girl right. Their tits pressed against one another as they seemed to compete about who could leave the most marks on your still throbbing cock and balls.

 

Now that it wasn’t getting sucked anymore you began to realize just how big you’ve grown because of Rukia’s trick. While previously only slightly above average, now your cock was easily as long as Rukia was tall, and five times thicker than Isane’s legs! Even your balls had grown to a point where they almost made Rukia’s tits look like toys by comparison! Yet you still somehow found the strength to stand upright, even as Isane began to climb up and lay down on top of your cock!

 

“Aaaaaaah… I can’t believe this thing was inside of me…!” Isane mused out loudly, with her massive cow udder tits dangling down the left and right of your cock as she panted hoarsely against its topside. Her breath steamed out of her mouth as she rubbed her face against the side of your length like a cat in heat. “It’s throbbing so much! You must be dying to empty your balls someplace hot and wet.”

 

“…”

 

“That’s what I thought.” Rukia mewled, gently licking up each drop of precum from the humongous mushroom shaped red tip of your dick. “So, would you rather dump your load…” She rose to her feet and parted her clit with her index and middle finger. “…In my soaked pussy, or…” the black haired girl turned around and presented you with a clear view of her asshole. “…in my oh so tight and hot burning butt? The choice is yours, big guy.”

 

Your answer came immediately;
PUSSY!
ASS!

 


 


 

 

A big silly grin spread across Rukia’s face. “That’s what I thought! Mind helping me out with this, Isane? This could be a bit hard to pull off otherwise.”

 

You watched in astonishment as Rukia somehow climbed on your dick, facing you and with her dripping twat pressing against its precum spewing head. Before you could question what her intent behind it all was, Isane reached for Rukia’s ankles and pulled her towards her!

 

“…!!”

 

YEEEEEEEESSS!!!!! FUCK!!! YOU’RE IN, YOU’RE SO FUCKING DEEEEEEEPPP!!!!!!” Rukia screamed from the top of her lungs, her shortstacked body being stretched out well beyond human limits by your dick forcefully invading her deepest pits. “MY PUSSY!!! I’M BEING SPLIT IN HALF BY YOUR COOOOOOOOCK!!!!! I’VE NEVER FELT SUCH A FAT COCK INSIDE OF ME BEFORE!!!!! IT FEELS TOO GOOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!!

 

“Hnnnnngh… It’s so sexy when she sounds like that.” Isane bit on her lip as she helped you fuck her friend. You didn’t even need to do so much as move your hips. With her hands on Rukia’s ankles alone, Isane was able to freely move your dick in and out of her tight twat. “So lewd… aaaahh!!” You feel her grinding her entire body against the lower half of your cock, with her pussy’s juices running down your shaft and dropping to the ground below. “I want, NEED it too!”

 

NHOOOOO!!!!” wailed Rukia with her tongue hanging out of her mouth like that of a dog on a hot summer day. “YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE, NOW THAT COCK, HIS BALLS, AND ALL THE CUM STORED IN THEM ARE ALL MINE!!! MIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!!” Despite her refusal to share, Isane continued in helping you fuck the other girl, pulling her lower body closer and closer towards her own face. “OH GOD, OH FUCK!!!! I DON’T THINK I’LL BE ABLE TO WALK FOR DAYS AFTER THIS!!!! YOU’RE DESTROYING ME!! YOU TURN ME INTO NOTHING MORE THAN YOUR OWN PERSONAL ONNAHOLE!!!! AND I LOVE EVERY SECOND OF ITT!!!!!

 

“…!”

 

FUUUUUUCK!!!! YOU CAN’T!! I WON’T LET YOU STOP AND CUM JUST NOW ALREADY!!!!! YOU NEED TO KEEP FUCKING ME!!!! I WANNA LOSE MY MIND TO YOUR COCK!!! DON’T STOP!!!! DON’T STOOOOOOOOOOPPH!!!!!” Rukia shouted, with her every word laced with lust. Her arms hung down to either side of her slack body as the sizable distention in her belly moved every time Isane pulled her up and down on your cock.

 

“Hmm, what would Abarai-kun say if he could hear you like this?! Screaming like some common whore for another man’s pleasure…” Isane mused.

 

I DON’T CARE WHAT HE WOULD SAY OR THINK!!!! ALL I CARE ABOUT IS THIS COCK IN MY PUSSY KNOCKING ME UP!!!!!! CUMMING!!! I’M CUMMING JUST THINKING ABOUT IT… FUUUUUUCK!!!!” Rukia’s eyes rolled back in their sockets as she completely lost herself to the pleasure. “THINKING ABOUT GETTING MY WOMB BLASTED WITH YOUR THICK AND CREAMY LOAD IS ENOUGH TO MAKE ME CUM!!! I’M SUCH A SLUT, COME ON AND TURN ME INTO YOUR PERSONAL CUMDUMP ALREADY!!!

 

You groaned;
“You want my cum so badly?! Beg for it like the bitch you are then!”
“Apologize to Isane and Renji first for thinking only about your own pleasure!”

 


 

 

Rukia gulped. “PLEASE!!!! JUST CUM IN MY PUSSY ALREADY!!!!! I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT YOUR CUM ANYMORE!! IF I DON’T GET CUM SHOT INSIDE OF ME SOON, I’M GONNA GO INSANE!!!!! CUM, I WANT CUM, NOTHING BUT CUM, I WANT YOU TO EMPTY YOUR BALLS, ALL OF IT, INSIDE MY NAUGHTY WHORE BODY!!!!!” She then pleaded with tears rolling down her face.

 


 

 

Rukia didn’t even have to think twice. “I’M SORRY, ISANE!!! I’M SORRY, RENJI!!! BUT THIS BIG COCK IS ALL I CAN THINK OF NOW!!!! I KNOW I’M JUST A EGOISTIC SLUT, BUT I CAN’T HELP IT!! HIS COCK IS TOO GOOD AND TOO FAT!!!!” Tears rolled down her face as she came for the umpteenth time today. “OOOARGH!!! THIS COCK IS RUINING ME!!! IT’S MESSING WITH MY MIND AND TURNS ME INTO A DEPRAVED WHOOOOOOORE!!!!!

 


 

“And you LOVE IT!!!” With all her strength, Isane pulled Rukia as much down your cock as she could. Three quarters of your cock all but vanished in the smaller girl’s body, with the distinct phallus shaped distention moving all the way up to between her tits.

 

And then you climaxed…

 

CUMM!!!! I CAN FEEL IT!!!! YOU’RE FILLING ME UP WITH SO MUCH SPUNK!!!! IT’S SO HOT AND… AND… AND TOO FUCKING MUUUUUUUUUUUCH!!!!!” with a rude SPLORG sound, your jizz got squeezed out of the sides of her pussy as it became too much for her body to handle. “OH GOD!!! I’M LOSING MY MIND!!!! MY BRAIN IS NOTHING BUT CUM!!!! I’M CUMMING FROM YOU CUMMING IN MY PUSSY!!!! I LOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITT!!!!

 

Isane couldn’t hold her any longer. The force behind your cum blast was too much and Rukia was rocketed off your cock. As she landed on the ground, panting and moaning heavily, a puddle of your cum quickly formed around her as it gushed out of her wide gaping hole.

 

On top of your dick, Isane clapped excitedly. “Me next! Do me next! I need it too!”

 


 


 

 

“I hoped you would pick that!” Rukia grinned and leaned over, dropping into a perfect Jack-O crouch and wagging her ass back and forth. “Then what are you waiting for?! Go on and fuck me already like you mean it!”

 

With heavy footsteps you managed to make your way over to Rukia. The smell of her arousal hit you like a truck as she pressed her ass against your dick. A shudder went down the spine of both girls as they readied themselves for the next task. Isane held on tight to the side of your cock, while her tits engulfed you completely and felt like the best pillows in the world. And then you pressed onward and your cock slipped into Rukia’s ass with a loud and wet PLOP sound!

 

“…!!”

 

CUUMMMMMMMMIIIIIINGH!!!!” Rukia screamed in a mix of both pain and pleasure as the force of your thrust bent her knees and sent her into overdrive. “I’M CUMMING ALREADY!!!! I’VE NEVER FELT SO GOOD FROM MY ASS BEFORE!!!!! AHAHAHAAAAA!!!! YOU SHOULD FEEL THIS, ISANE!!!!!! IT’S THE BEEEEEEEEEEEESSSHDDD!!!!!

 

Isane watched from her place on your cock as saliva drooled out of Rukia’s wide open mouth as she lost all control over her body. “So unfair! Why are you always hogging them for yourself?! I’m horny too, you know?!”

 

I DON’T CARE!!!! THIS COCK IS MINE!!! AND HE’LL CONTINUE FUCKING ME UNTIL HE DUMPED EVERY LAST DROP OF CUM IN MY ASS!!!!! EVERY!!! LAST!!! DROOOOOP!!!” The black haired Shinigami’s eyes rolled so far back in their sockets that only the white was left visible. Her entire body spasmed with ecstasy as one orgasm after the next shook her to the core. “GETTING FUCKED LIKE THIS IS THE BEST!!!! I NEVER WANT IT TO STOP!!! KEEP FUCKING ME INTO A CUM ADDICTED BITCH WHO’D DO ANYTHING TO GET A FAT BITCH BREAKING COCK LIKE YOURS IN ONE OF MY HOLES!!!!! YOU HEAR ME?! FUUUUUCK!!!!

 

“…!”

 

YES!!! CUM ALREADY!!!! DUMP ALL YOUR CUM INSIDE MY BELLY!!!! DO IT!!!” Rukia demanded, gyrating her butt as best as she could against your crotch. Each minor move however only made her cum even more, due to your dick filling out her entire body. “CUMMING!!! I WANNA CUM LIKE THIS FOREVER!!!!! CUMMING ALL DAY LIKE THIS, SCREAMING LIKE SOME KIND OF COCK DRUNKEN WHORE, UNABLE TO THINK ABOUT ANYTHING BUT THE NEXT TIME SOME RANDOM GUY IS RAVAGING MY BODY AND USING ME FOR HIS OWN PERSONAL PLEASURE… IT’S MAKING ME CUM SO GOOD AND HARD!!!!!

 

You watch her shapely ass dance its perverted dance right in front of Isane’s face and think about what to do next;
Push Isane’s face between Rukia’s ass cheeks as you cum.
Spank and squeeze Rukia’s ass cheeks as you cum.

 


 

 

Putting your hand on the back of the silver haired bimbo’s head, you gave her no time to question what you were doing as you then shoved her nose first forward. “HMMMMPH??” Isane’s muffled moan echoed through Rukia’s body.

 

AAAAHH!!! WHAT???” Rukia asked, unable to turn her head around to find out what was going on. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

 


 

 

SPLAP PLAP PLAP SPLAP

 

The sharp sounds of your hand smacking against Rukia’s peachy ass felt like music. Her ass rippled oh so delightfully and felt oh so good in your hands as you grabbed them tight. Her banshee-like screeches filled the entire room and drowned out even the sounds of Isane’s fat tits swaying back and forth, either against your own balls or against Rukia’s legs, “HARDER!!!! SPANK ME HARDER!!!!! I LOVE IT ROUGH!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAARDERRRR!!!!!!

 


 

You somehow found the strength necessary to lift Rukia off the ground. Your fingers sunk deep into her soft butt as she fell backwards against Isane. The two girls panted and stared longingly into each other’s eyes for a second before parting their lips and kissing right as you came!

 

HRRRRRRRMPH!!!!” Rukia’s eyes widened, with her voice somewhere between a purr and a squeal as you churned out each and every last ounce of cum you had stored in your balls. “IIIIIIEEEMPH!!!! ISHANE… HE’SH CUMMINGH… AYE CAN PHEEL ID ALL IN MUH BELLY!!!!

 

The tender kiss between the two prostitutes didn’t last for long though. All that cum shooting into Rukia’s butt eventually forced her away and off of your cock! Isane managed to stay on top of your length however, watching as Rukia laid on the floor with a river of cum leaking out of her ass like water from a broken faucet.

 

The silver haired Captain couldn’t help but cream herself at the sight of it. “I hope you’ve got some spunk left in you, cause my pussy’s aching for a load full next!”

 


 


 

NO!!!” Rukia managed to get back on her hands and knees. With shaking legs, she stood upright and stared at your still rock hard cock as the last ropes of cum dropped to the ground like molten cheese. “If you’re gonna fuck anyone, it’ll be me, you hear!?”

 

“…!”

 


 

(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

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Ichigo Kurosaki
1 month ago

I was imagining fucking Isane while Rukia was sucking my cock excellent

Hiryu
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1 month ago

I’ll get right into it and say that this was a very interesting chapter. Not to mention a very bold and experimental one. While this may not be everyone’s cup of tea, and believe me I can get it, I completely understand, I personally liked it for what it was. 😄

The fact that you showed off some of the others already doing the work in Unohana’s Palace is already a good way to start things off. In addition, some of the girls already have stage names during their shifts. In this case Momo, Harribel and Nel. Though I’d like to see what the stage names for the other girls there are. Plus they’ve really improved on their routines too. Nice to see there. The same thing goes for Toshiro while being with one of the cougars from before. Very good work. 👍

Though we all know why we’re actually here. The threesome with the guy, Rukia and Isane. This whole thing was the primary focus, but I personally thought it was something unique. Especially with it not only taking a visual novel direction, even down to the choices, but also with the guy that’s representing the reader. And while it’s officially a follow up to the previous chapters, it was completely different overall, which I like. 🤓

This only helps the sexual content here. So much so, it’s very flexible. That, and frankly, it does quite a lot for Rukia and Isane alike, not just with their obvious differences, but also how similar they are too, while really displaying their level and sense of agency. So that was good. 👏

Overall, it was a very different kind of chapter, but while it isn’t perfect, it’s one that surprisingly works. Hopefully there’s another one like this in the future. 🙏

Keep up the good work. ✍️ 😎

– Hiryu

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 month ago
Reply to  Hiryu

I’m more than thrilled with the overwhelmingly positive responses towards this, admittedly, pretty outlandish idea. I’d very much like to give this kind of thing another chance sometime in the future.

Whitis
Whitis
1 month ago

This was dope, I’m imagining this is Ichigo.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 month ago
Reply to  Whitis

…Seriously? It’s meant to be you, the reader.

Whitis
Whitis
1 month ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Truth be told I’ve never been one for self-insert stories. Just never much liked them.

Which is nothing against you because you did great with this chapter.

ag
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ag
1 month ago

Definitely a unique story. I enjoyed it, the paths needs to be a bit clearer though.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 month ago
Reply to  ag

I’ll try to do better IF I get the chance to try this out again some time. What would you suggest to do differently?

Blanche
Blanche
1 month ago

Love it when girls get cum inflated, and then cum drenched.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 month ago
Reply to  Blanche

It’s also pretty fun to write.

Asmodeo
Asmodeo
1 month ago

I like the idea of interactive fic, but I think it should have better indicators of choices. Like starting paragraph chosen with A, B, C, D, etc.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 month ago
Reply to  Asmodeo

YO! Incredibly happy to read that you liked it. Really wanted to try out something new for once.

As for your idea with the indicators and the paragraphs, I initially thought about coloring different paths/choices to make it more easily recognizable, but the site doesn’t support that, unfortunately. In the end, I went with both A, B, C,… and 1, 2, 3,… in the hopes to make it less confusing.

Thanks for the feedback nonetheless. IF I ever do something like this again, I’m sure to remember it.