Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Fucking the Debt Away


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of One Piece stories)
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OH!! What’s that?” Carrot asked, pointing at the strangely flat object displayed in one of the many store windows with her purple painted finger. The white rabbit Mink wore a simple orange miniskirt that was way too short, effectively revealing to anyone that she didn’t even bother wearing any panties. A form fitting lime green top with straps so thin they seemed invisible hugged her melon-sized tits, which caused many men on the streets to stare at her with lecherous intent in their eyes.

 

“Hmmm… I don’t know.” answered Nami honestly as she leaned forward to inspect it a bit more.

 

It didn’t look like anything she ever saw before. Roughly the size of her hand, maybe a bit bigger, with rounded edges, and thinner than her pinky finger, its form alone gave no indication about what it could be used for. There were two small lenses at the upper left side of the thing that flashed and blinked in the sunlight. Next to it were several other ones on display, with all of them costing the same amount, which was a whopping 5,600 Belly!

 

Carrot linked arms with the orangette, “Come on, let’s check it out!” she proclaimed before dragging her into the store with a wide smile on her face.

 

“Ugh!!! Where are those two going now?” asked Usopp, having just put down the many shopping bags he was forced to carry in the hopes that he was allowed to rest for at least a moment. “Don’t they have enough stuff already!?” He followed them into the store after picking up the five shopping bags again, much to the chagrin of his arms and shoulders! Luckily, the store was air-conditioned, which made things at least a bit more bearable than just standing outside in the blistering heat of this Summer Island. “Ahh… that’s a little better!”

 

“…Smartbox, one of Dr. Vegapunk’s newest inventions!” Usopp heard one of the shop’s cashier’s explaining. “Inside of it are two Tanishi, one Smart Tanishi to communicate with closeby friends or allies, and one Picture Tanishi, with which you can make videos or photos of your surroundings. The buttons to do either of those things are here on the other side.”

 

“Wow! That does sound pretty handy.” agreed Nami. She picked up one of the Smartboxes on display. “The size alone makes it quite a lot easier to carry than any regular Transponder Snail.”

 

Giddily jumping up and down next to her, Carrot watched as Nami tested out the features that the cashier just talked about, “I know, right?!” she pressed her tits against Nami’s back as she reached around her to take the Smartbox out of her hands. “It looks as if it can fit right in my pockets.”

 

The cashier’s eyes went wide as dinner plates as Carrot actually tried to prove what she just said, only forgetting in the process that her skirt didn’t have any pockets, “NOOOOO!!!!” he screamed out as he jumped forward, just in time to catch the Smartbox before it hit the ground!

 

“Carrot!” gasped Nami as the man landed on the ground, holding the Smartbox in his now shaking hands. “You’ve got to be more careful! Those things are expensive!”

 

A sheepish smile spread across the blonde’s fur-covered face as she rubbed the back of her head. “Sorry!”

 

“A- And also quite easy to break!” added the cashier with a cracking voice. He pushed himself off the floor but not before catching a glimpse of Carrot’s naked pussy. “That’s probably one of its biggest flaws! Well, that, and that it is unable to send the recorded video or image to just any Proko or other Tanishi and Smartbox. You see… to communicate with your friends, you would need to be pretty close to them, or near to a so-called Boss Tanishi which can amplify the range of their signals.”

 

Interested in the strange apparatus, Usopp stepped closer and took the Smartbox out of the cashier’s hands, “So it’s a tad different from traditional Transponder Snails, I guess!” He lifted the Smartbox into the air and examined it with his honed sniper eyes. “But I got to ask though. What happens with the image or video if they’re not directly sent to a Proko? I assume they’re stored somewhere in there, but if the size is anything to go by, then it can’t store as much as regular Visual Transponder Snails.”

 

“Oh, you’re a sharp one!” The cashier rubbed his hands as he walked next to Usopp, “See, when you click on this button, you can check exactly how much storage there is left.” he said as he demonstrated what he was talking about. “And here on the display, you can also look at each video and image that you took again while also being able to delete the ones you don’t like anymore.”

 

“Mhm, mhm!” Usopp nodded, closely following the other man’s every movement as he deleted the images that Carrot and Nami took just a few moments ago. “Quite the nifty little thing, right Nami?”

 

“Sure seems like that. But the price…! Say, good man…” She stepped in front of the cashier and caressed his chin with her finger while giving him the best lustful stare that she could, “Isn’t there a way that we can… negotiate it a bit? 5,600 Belly is a bit much for an innocent little girl like me!” she purred.

 

Five minutes later, Usopp left the store behind the two girls, “You’re the devil, Nami!” he said, all while shaking his head from side to side while balancing the newly added packet with the Smartbox in it on top of the other shopping bags.

 

“What!?” Nami snapped at him, readjusting the basic blue overall that she wore, “I only managed to talk him down to 2,800 Belly! That’s insulting!” She looked at her reflection in the shop window of yet another store that they passed by and hugged her own breasts. “Am I not beautiful enough to lower the price even more?”

 

“Oh, don’t say it like that! I think you look more than sexy in that outfit!” stated Carrot as she hugged the navigator from behind, sliding her dainty and soft underneath the jeans fabric of the overall to squeeze and fondle her bouncy boobs.

 

Blood shot out of the nostrils of the men on the street who were lucky enough to witness the event with their own eyes, “Mmmmnhh… Carrot~!” Nami mewled as she pushed her boobs a bit more into her friend’s hands, enjoying the way her nipples quickly perked up against the Mink’s soft palms. “Not here!”

 

Usopp simply rolled his eyes, “Girls!” he murmured to himself as he struggled to keep up with the two women as they walked along the streets. ‘Dammit! Curse you, Nami!!

 

“What was that? Did I just hear a complaint, Usopp?” asked Nami with a glance over her shoulder and with no signs of remorse in her dark brown eyes, “May I remind you that you still owe me one million Belly after what you did the other day! You should consider yourself fortunate that I let you pay off this debt by carrying these bags!”

 

“Oh, yeah… I’m sooooo grateful for your kindness!” replied Usopp, with his voice dripping with sarcasm, “Why didn’t I go back to the hotel with the others when I had the time?!” he asked himself silently. “Why did I have to be so stupid and go looking for them!?

 

Now basically riding piggyback on her orangette friend, Carrot began nibbling on her ear, “Come on… don’t be like that, Usopp!” she said in her usual upbeat tone as she continued fondling Nami’s tits. “I’d imagine that it was quite fun getting to fuck Vivi, right?”

 

“… It was!” Usopp answered under his breath, trying to ignore his slowly growing erection as he watched Nami struggling to hold Carrot like that, even with her fingers sinking deep into the Mink’s soft and furry ass.

 

“See!?” Nami asked, drenched in sweat and red as a cherry as she tried her best to not fall over due to Carrot’s weight and her constantly grabbing and playing with her tits. “Isn’t a million Belly a small price to pay for something so nice?”

 

Not when I already got to fuck her for free before!” Usopp snapped at her a bit louder than anticipated. Several people on the streets now perked up even more as they watched the odd couple continue with their way back towards the harbor. “Curse that Brook and his wicked music!

 

If she could, Nami would have undoubtedly waved his remark off. Instead however, she readjusted her grip on Carrot’s bubbly butt and tried to ignore her screaming biceps and triceps, “That orgy doesn’t count!” she argued, breathing heavily and moaning softly as Carrot’s fingers clenched around her nipples. “NNNNNNGHM!!!

 

Smiling at the Cat Burglar’s reaction, Carrot looked back towards Usopp, “Yeah! Everyone was fucking with everyone after that battle!” she nibbled on Nami’s earlobes for a while, causing her purple lipstick to leave a perfect mark behind, before something crossed her mind. “Speaking of which, do you think we will meet them again soon? They were all so nice and thick and tasty and…”

 

“Carrot!” Both seasoned Straw Hat pirates interrupted her before she could trail off even more.

 

The three of them made their way closer towards the harbor, the ocean already seemed to greet them with its glistening and gentle waves. It was truly a perfect day to set sail after the Thousand Sunny got some much needed upgrades here on Supaima Island. It took some time (and more money than Nami would have liked) but in the end they managed to make their ship truly worthy of that of an Emperor! All that was left to do now was to leave the Island before the Marines could receive any more backup in the form of a Vice Admiral or, even worse, an actual Admiral.

 

Robin and Franky already dealt with a good chunk of them back during their nightshift at the docks, which should make their departure just a bit easier if they did it quick enough. And while the rest of the crew finished working on the Sunny, Nami decided to go shopping. The two princesses that were now traveling with them couldn’t exactly let themselves be seen in broad daylight by the general public, so Carrot decided to tag along as well, to buy them the things that they wanted.

 

It wasn’t a perfect solution since nothing beat the actual experience of hopping from shop to shop to try out dozens of different clothes, but it had to do. Luckily enough, Rebecca and Vivi just happened to have almost the same size as Nami in almost every area, which meant that the clothes that fit her would also fit them for the most part.

 

“Ugh…!” Nami moaned as she let go of Carrot’s butt as her strength faded away, unable to support the Mink’s weight any longer, “Anyways, there still aren’t any Marines nearby, right?” she asked Usopp while shaking her hands a bit.

 

“Can’t see or sense any at the moment.” answered the dark skinned sniper after turning his head in every direction once. “Though, I can’t exactly see all that much with all those stupid bags in front of me, now can I?!”

 

“Oh, stop your bitching and whining for once and man up already! What are you, six? I thought you wanted to become a brave warrior of the seas. Just see this as some free strength training to achieve that dream!” Nami replied.

 

Usopp tried his absolute hardest not to roll his eyes at that comment, ‘If I could punch you at the moment, and if Sanji wouldn’t kick me afterwards, I would do so, Nami!’ he thought at her, desperately wishing for something that would allow him to put the bags down for even a moment.

 

“Nami, Nami!” Carrot suddenly called out as she jumped over towards a little store at the side. “I think we haven’t checked this one out yet!”

 

“Hm?” After reading the name of the shop and checking the current position of the sun to see how much more time they have before Luffy wanted to leave the island, Nami nodded. “Sure, let’s head in.”

 

Tears of relief and joy streamed down Usopp’s face as he followed the two girls into the store, ‘Thank you, gods!’ he said in his mind, grateful to whichever celestial being just heard his pleas for a break of any sort!

 

Holding up a white shirt with pink flowers in her right hand, and a blouse that would leave most of her breasts exposed due to a way too deep v-neck in her left hand, Nami pondered loudly. “Wow! They’re all so cute!”

 

As she pulled the curtains of one of the changing booths at the side, Carrot already stepped out of the other, wearing a frilly black shirt, jeans so short that most of her buttocks were visible for everyone to see, and sandals with little pink bows on them, “Hey, Usopp! What do you think of this one?” she asked, whilst striking a sexy pose for him by putting one hand behind her head and pushing her chest forward. “Do you think this fits my style?”

 

“O- oh. It… looks pretty good!” Usopp gave her a thumbs-up as he felt his face heat up. “Don’t know if it… fits your style though. The black kinda clashes with the otherwise bright colors you usually wear.”

 

“Hmmm… You’re right!” Dropping the pose, Carrot looked down on her body and agreed. “Thanks!”

 

Usopp’s breathing noticeably calmed down as Carrot rushed back into the changing booth to switch outfits again, “Phew! Good thing that I went with them and not Sanji!” he said, more to himself than to anyone else, given that the shop was pretty much empty aside from a bored looking employee sitting at the cashout, reading today’s newspaper. “God knows what would happen if he was here now!”

 

He still could hear the blonde chef’s whining complaints as Nami left him behind with the others as they headed out for their shopping tour. “Why didn’t I cum!? I should be the one to go shopping with them!!!!”

 

“Mmmnh… No, they won’t do!” Nami stepped out of the booth with the two tops in her hands and put them back where she found them. “Oh! Those boots look like Robin would like them!”

 

With a pair of brown leather boots and several other clothes in her hands, the orange haired beauty headed back to try them all out. Usopp didn’t pay all that much attention as he also wandered through the store in search of some new clothes, putting the many bags with the things that they already bought down close to the changing booths. Maybe Nami would be kind enough to let him buy some of them even. He heard the two girls whispering to one another for a bit as he lifted up a sleeveless white top.

 

“Usopp? Could you come over for a second?” Carrot asked. For whatever reason, she tried her best to sound as innocent as possible.

 

“Sure.” he answered. Leaving the top behind, he walked over to the blonde rabbit. “What is it?”

 

“Oh, not much really! Nami just wanted to hear your opinion about her outfit.”

 

“My opinion?” he raised an eyebrow at her, growing ever so slightly worried due to how harmless that sounded.

 

The blonde nodded, “Mhm! If you could just-!”

 

“Hey, Usopp~! Over here~!” Nami interrupted Carrot.

 

Her sweet tone didn’t mean anything good, and yet the sniper couldn’t help but turn her way as she pushed the curtain of the changing booth to the side. “N- NAMI!!???

 

SNAP

 

The sound of the Picture Tanishi inside the Smartbox going off echoed through the shop, “AHAHAHAHAHA!!! You should see that look on your face!” Nami laughed, standing there in nothing more than the boots she picked up earlier. Her tits and ass looked almost exactly as big as a couple days ago when she used her Clima-Tact to enlarge them for the first time.

 

WHAAAA- What do you think you’re doing?” Usopp gasped, hiding his face behind his hands.

 

“What does it look like?!” asked Carrot from behind. The white rabbit pushed him forwards and into the surprisingly spacious booth, even though Nami’s assets seemed to take up half of it. “I thought you did such a good job carrying out stuff and asked Nami if we could repay you in any way. So, here it is!”

 

Putting the Smartbox onto the pile of her clothes, Nami pressed her tits against Usopp’s chest, “Yeah, I wasn’t the biggest fan of that idea, but I guess you earned yourself a reward. The picture I just took is just another way to keep you in line. Do a good job now and I’ll delete it, and, depending on how long you can keep up, I might</strong/> even shorten the debt you still have to pay.”

 

“Ha… HAHAHA!! Now that’s a challenge the great Captain Usopp can get behind!” he boasted with a mix of false bravado and actual excitement in his voice, “I just hope that you can keep up, Nami! Last time I checked, you were the one passing out first!”

 

As she unbuckled his pants, she shot him a dangerous glare, “I wouldn’t act so high and mighty if I were you! I’ll make you eat those words in no time!” stated the orange haired girl whilst pulling his pants down to free his quickly growing erection!

 

“Get him, tigress!” Carrot encouraged her friend. The white bunny girl has stripped out of her clothes entirely and now watched Nami putting her enlarged tits around Usopp’s shaft with a burning passion in her eyes.

 

MMMMHH!!! Just as long as I remember!” whispered Nami as she rubbed her cheek against the pole like a cat in heat. Even with her tits as big as they are now, roughly a third of his length still poked out of the pillowy softness, begging for her attention. “Haa… HAAAMPH!!!

 

“Oh, YESSSSSSSS!!!” hissed the sniper while simultaneously rocking his hips forward, driving still more of his cock into his shipmate’s tight little mouth!

 

Nami’s eyes went wide for a second as the tip of the length poked against her throat, “AGUUUUGH!!” her vision became blurry as her tears of joy started rolling down her face, “GUESSH DAT MEANSH ‘OU WIKE DISH, HMMMMMPH???!” she then asked teasingly after a while, stroking his dick with her tits.

 

“Isn’t that obvious!? If I were to guess, I think he’s having a pretty good time now!” Carrot stated, now kneeling behind Usopp and pressing her boobs against the back of his knees. She reached around his hips and grabbed his wildly swaying apple-sized balls. “Hmmmm… so nice and full!”

 

GWWW!!!” Usopp groaned, throwing his hips back and forth into Nami’s breasts and mouth. “Two against one… that’s unf-! I mean, that’s nothing that the great Captain Usopp can’t handle!”

 

BHIGGG WOWDSH PHO SHOMEONE SHAGINNNNNGH WIKE ‘OU!!” Nami slurred, her words hard to understand as she focused more on bathing her friend’s cock with her tongue. “MMMMH, MMMMH, MMMMH, HMMMMMMPH!!!

 

“Just look at her throat stretching out like that!” commented the blonde bunny from behind, “It’s barely noticeable but… NNNNGH… Namiiiiiiii~~!! Hurry up! I wanna suck it too!” she whined, while still kneading Usopp’s nuts like they were dough!

 

With his cock still in her mouth, Nami shook her head, causing the rest of his shaft to rub all over her tits, “NHOO!” she replied, bobbing her head in slow, circular motions to get the sensation of his cock filling her entire mouth. “HE’SH MHINE NOW!!! ‘OU WAID UNDIL AYE’M PHINISHED!!!!!!

 

He might have the longest dick in the entire crew, considering what little she had seen during the orgy with the Heart Pirates, but his overall girth left a lot to be desired!

 

“No fair!” the young Mink kissed Usopp’s butt and fondled his testicles even more, tracing every pulsating veins with her purple painted fingernails, “Hurry up and fill her mouth with your cum! I wanna go next! Like, right now!” she said, her stiff nipples poking against his legs!

 

It felt like when he had pebbles or other stuff in his shoes after a long day in a forest or so, but in a good way, “Calm downnn!” grunted Usopp, thrusting his hips forward with an ever so slight increase in speed. “You’ll get your chance soon enough! Haa… haaa… haaaa…! I have more than enough energy for the both of you!”

 

GLUUUHG, UURRRRGH, HMMMOOOOO!!! SHOW OPPH!” gagged Nami around his cock. The navigator’s eyes began to cross as she switched from the blowjob/paizuri combo to a more traditional deepthroat. Her tits swayed back and forth like a pair of cow udders as she struggled to get more and more of his cock behind her lips. “SHOOO GHUUUD!! ‘OUW CAWK PHEELSH SHO GHUUD IN MUH MOUPH!!!

 

“Look, LOOK!” Carrot suddenly gasped as she pointed at the floor between Nami’s legs, “She’s cumming just from sucking! Isn’t that hot?!”

 

Usopp nodded, despite not really seeing it due to Nami’s face and tits blocking the spot where the bunny had pointed at, “Yes… very!” he groaned, trying his utmost not to cum too soon!

 

AGUGH, GUUULGH, GUUGWEH, UUUUMPH!!!” Nami moaned and choked, desperately attempting to get closer towards Usopp’s curly bush of black pubic hair right in front of her eyes. “GAWWWWD… AYE’M CUMMINGH PHOM HAVINNNGH MUH PHWOAT PHUGGED!!!!!!

 

If the one employee of the shop registered all the strange noises coming from the changing booth, then he did a good job ignoring them as he instead continued reading the newspaper like nothing happened! Still, at the edge of his mind Usopp could sense the presence of a couple new people entering the store. He didn’t sense any hostile intent however, and since he was too busy holding back from cumming to get rid of as much of his debt as possible, he promptly ignored it. Neither of the two girls really cared either, as they were much more focused on getting the most out of this insane pleasure as possible!

 

PLOP!

 

The cock flung out of Nami’s mouth as she fell back against the changing booth’s mirror, “Haaa… haaa… haaa…!” her chest heaved with every rigid breath she took. “Dammit! Can’t… deepthroat it… entirely!”

 

HA! My turn!” Before any of them had even the chance to blink, Carrot let go of Usopp’s balls and jumped in front of him. Instead of kneeling down though, like Nami did, she bent over and pressed her ass against the still rock hard pole. “Give it to me! ALL of iIIIIIIIIIIIEHT!!!!!

 

“With pleasure!” Usopp said without waiting for Carrot to finish her sentence. The sniper put his hands on her soft and fluffy hips before jamming more than half of his length inside her butt. “OAAAAAARGH!!!!

 

YES! YESYESYESYESSSS!!!!” Her breath basically steamed out of her open mouth as Usopp began fucking her from behind. In the mirror’s reflection Usopp saw how her tongue lolled out of her mouth with each thrust. “COCK!! I WANT IT ALL!!! FILL ME UP!! BREED ME!!! GIVE ME YOUR CUM!!!! AAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!

 

Still battered after her attempted deepthroat, Nami seized the opportunity and snatched the Mink’s two nipples, “That’s what you get for being such an impatient little slut!” she purred sardonically before twisting the two pink nubs of flesh in opposing directions!

 

AYEEEEEEEHH!!! HURTS… IT HURTS SO GOOOOOOOODD!!!” the blonde pushed her tits even more into Nami’s hands while simultaneously gyrating her hips against Usopp’s powerful thrusts. “MORE!!!! DO IT HARDEEEERRR!!!!

 

“You hear her, Usopp!” Nami smiled smugly as she edged ever so much closer towards Carrot’s lustful and completely contorted face. “She wants it rough!”

 

Sweating, Usopp’s fingers sunk into the soft fur of her hips as he picked up speed, “Not… nothing easier… than that!” he reassured, though his faltering voice made it clear that it wouldn’t be long until he would cum. ‘How can she be this tight?!

 

CUMMMMINGH!!!” Carrot bellowed out, her eyes rolling so far back into her head until only the white was left visible. “I’MMMMMMMMMHHH…!

 

HMMMMMM!!!” covering Carrot’s mouth with her own, Nami quickly silenced the young Mink by pushing her tongue past the purple lips.

 

Almost on reflex, Carrot quickly began sucking on her friend’s tongue like it was a dick while also sliding her own tongue into Nami’s mouth. She could still taste Usopp’s cock on her friend’s lips as they began with their lewd tongue duel. “NAMMMMMMHI… HMM… HMM, HMMM!!

 

Sweet, heady smelling scents filled the booth as Carrot’s juices gushed out of her pussy like water from a broken faucet. The wet PLAP SHLAP PLAP SHMACK sounds of Usopp’s balls slapping against Carrot, as he drove his cock deeper and deeper inside with each second, echoed through the entire store!

 

“Ahhhh… I’M CUMMING!!!!” roared the black haired man as he thrusted as much of his cock into her as possible.

 

Carrot’s eyes nearly popped out of their sockets as a gallon worth of cum flooded her ass, “AAAAAHOOOOOOOOAAA!!!!” she screamed from the top of her lungs, while cumming at the same time as Usopp’s jizz squirted out around his cock.

 

MMMPH… NHO BHIDING!!!” Nami complained after Carrot bit down on her tongue.

 

SHOOWWWWWWYYY!!!! ID JUSHD PHEEEEELSH SHO… MMMMMMOOOOAWH!!!” Unable to finish the sentence due to her entire body spasming in pleasure, Carrot arched her back as even more cum poured into her stomach!

 

“Say my name!” Usopp demanded as he, despite his cock already growing softer, still threw his body back and forth against hers. “Say the name of the man who makes you feel so good!”

 

IT’SH YOUUUUU! USHOPPPPP!!!” howled Carrot, wincing ever so slightly when he finally pulled his cock out of her ass.

 

“That’s right!” spanking her ass, causing it to jiggle and bounce like jelly, he took a step back to admire all his cum now oozing out of her ass. The gooey white fluid stuck to her equally white fur as it ran down her thighs in a really mesmerizing fashion. “Only the great Captain Usopp can make girls feel so good! That’s why I have a harem of four girls at my back and call!”

 

“What?”

 

“Really?”

 

“You?”

 

“He?”

 

Different voices broke the silence that followed Usopp’s overly exaggerated lie, “Hm?” Nami turned around to see the curtain of the booth being pushed to the side and five people standing in front of it, all with their eyes and mouths wide open after they listened to Usopp’s tale as they began to applaud the performance they just witnessed. “WHAT THE HELL?!! What do you think you’re doing here, you pervs!?”

 

“Oh, we heard some weird noises from the streets and wanted to check them out.” explained one of the spectators.

 

Another one nodded, “That was one hell of a performance, missy!” he said as he pulled a bundle of money out of his pockets and threw it on the ground in front of her.

 

A young girl, barely older than Nami herself, followed suit, “For sure! Makes me wish my boyfriend could last that long…!” she purred with a glance at Usopp’s now soft, but still incredibly long dick.

 

HEY!! I heard that, Jessica!” shouted the man to her left.

 

As the couple began to bicker, Nami quickly picked up the money that the spectator’s had thrown in front of them. She stuffed it into her cleavage as her tits began to regain their original size, “Come on!” the navigator ordered her two friends to get up, “We’re leaving soon.” She put on her own clothes again while her eyes sparkled in a mischievous light. “And I just got a brilliant idea… MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

 


 

(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

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Bingus
Bingus
1 year ago

This is EASILY the absolute worst thing he has EVER fucking drawn

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Bingus

Eh. Everyone is entitled to have his or her own opinion on his art. I for one am not the biggest fan of this type of pic as well, BUT just because you don’t like it doesn’t mean you should or can start being so rude! If you have problems with the art, tell the artist about it (in a civilized and polite manner). I’m just an author and have no influence on the kind of pics that other people request from Rtenzo.

As someone who publishes his work here, I can say that I appreciate any kind of well-phrased and constructive critique. Being rude and calling his art “That looked like an ai shat it out” or “Now it’s just lazy crappy art with even worse shallow 15 year Olds writing you some brain dead bastardization of the source materials turning every fucking character into a cheap 3 dollar slutty whore and every guy a master mc pimp the ladies love to ogle for the reader to self insert into” will help nobody and will only result in you getting thought of/branded as a hater who starts insulting at the very first opportunity!

Just because this is the internet and you are anonymous here, doesn’t mean you can be so rude!

Kielian
Kielian
1 year ago

Considering usopps reputation what if those four women he mentioned became kaya (the woman usopp actually loves), sugar (considering the fact that she is an adult and perhaps in this story has the ability to take on her adult form), perona, and ulti (the last three wanting to bone usopp out of revenge then any affectionate feelings)

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Kielian

No spoilers. But his lie won’t come into effect as you might expect.

Dan
Dan
1 year ago

Fantastic chapter! Usopp FTW, and I loved how that girl said he was better than her boyfriend! XD

Would you consider Usopp with Robin or Yamato?

They’re the only 2 Straw Hat chicks I don’t think he’s banged yet.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Dan

HA! I thought you would like the fact that Usopp is in this xD. Dunno about Robin or Yamato. I don’t ship any of these characters (aside from maybe Sanji and Pudding), so I’ll just write whichever couple makes the most sense at the moment.

Usopp was simply in this chapter because of the things set up in the prior chapters. If, let’s say, Franky would have gone on the trip to buy the Adam’s wood with Sanji, then Franky would be in this chapter. Easy as that.

souljamantwn
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1 year ago

Was sorta hoping Usopp would actually fuck Nami this time around giving the name of the chapter, but still nice hes been getting laid alot recently. Love Nami here too but sorta hoping her greed ends up getting the best of her and she ends up getting gangbanged or something similar because of it. And with Carrot of course letting all the other males of the crew having their turn with her is still ideal

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

And here I thought you would be more delighted to have Usopp in the spotlight. Oh well, happy nonetheless about the kind words! Thank you!

Hey
Hey
1 year ago

I just hope to see more luffy but good chapter not a huge fan of ussop but love nami

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Hey

He made the most sense to go shopping with them, given that he has a debt to pay off. I can see why he’s not for everyone but there are some fans of him here, so I wanted to let him in on the action. Also, Luffy will get his chance soon enough!

Xcelsior
Xcelsior
1 year ago

Pray the gay away was my very first thought seeing this chapter

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Xcelsior

Huh? Why?

Xcelsior
Xcelsior
1 year ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

the title lol

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Xcelsior

Well, rest assured that I’ll probably never write any yaoi/gay scenes in these stories here.