Jungles of Carnal Desires
(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of One Piece stories)
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It was a morning like every other on board the Thousand Sunny. One after the other, the different members of the crew rose up from their slumber and did their different morning activities. Sanji was, of course, the first to wake up, more than eager to whip up an extra strong coffee for Robin after her and Yamato’s long night of keeping sure that the Thousand Sunny would stay on the course that Nami laid out for them four days ago. Following right after Sanji, who headed into the kitchen to prepare breakfast for them all, were Zoro and Brook. While the green haired swordsman immediately headed up to his newly improved gym/training room in the crow’s nest, Brook started playing a lovely tune on his violin to wake up the other members of the newly classified Emperor Crew.
Within a half hour later, the smell of bacon, fried eggs, and even more coffee filled the air, causing Luffy to perk up, as his stomach began rumbling louder than any storm ever could, “Food!” He then pulled a limp Rebecca off of his cock, resulting in a loud and lewd PLOP that caused the other girls to wince in pain, whereas Rebecca simply moaned and gasped in orgasmic pleasure!
“MHMMMHHMMMMMM!!!!!” Cum gushed out of the pink haired princess’ now gaping wide pussy in a seemingly never-ending stream. BLORGH, GULURRRPH! As the jizz kept soaking the mattress on which Rebecca had fallen with rude belching noises, Luffy already ran towards the door, only to halt right in front of it.
He turned around and bowed in front of the group of girls, “Thanks for the fun night! It was way better than I thought it’d be at first!” he said before stretching his arm to get his clothes, which were scattered all across the floor.
And just like that, Luffy was gone, leaving the four women behind as he rushed towards the kitchen, “That guy…” Nami rubbed her forehead in annoyance as she shut off the Smartbox that had recorded the events of the last night. “The least he could have done was to ask if you’re okay! He didn’t exactly hold back on you!”
“Don’t… UGH… worry!” Vivi pushed herself off from the chair she sat on the last forty minutes or so. Her legs still trembled after the rapid pounding she received from Luffy. “That’s… what makes him so lovable!”
“Mhm!” Carrot nodded in agreement from her bed, “Also, I think he knows that we can take it, otherwise he would definitely have said something!” she then added, while staring up at the ceiling with a blissful expression on her face.
“You’re right!” said Nami, ‘He might be dense as a brick, but he’s not stupid! Most of the time anyways!” she thought, while putting her Smartbox in her pocket. She would have to go over the material later, when she had the time.
“Hnnnnnnnnghm~!!” Rebecca moaned as she pushed herself up. Before she even got remotely upright, her trembling legs and shaking arms gave in beneath her and she fell back into the pool of cum, making it splash in every direction, “Ahhhhh… what’s… more to worry about… would be how we’re gonna explain to the others about what happened tonight and… why Luffy now has a harem!”
Vivi waved the other princess’ concerns off, “That’s what you’re worried about?!” she asked with a soft smile on herself as she helped Rebecca to her feet. “Knowing Luffy, he’s probably already talking about the night to Usopp or Chopper an-!”
“WHAT DID YOU SAY YOU DID TO VIVI-CHAN, REBECCA-CHAN, AND CARROT-CHAN???????” Sanji’s voice echoed over the ocean, waking up everything within a 4-mile radius that hasn’t already been awake. “TELL ME THAT’S SOME KIND OF DUMB JOKE AND I MIGHT FORGIVE YOU FOR PUTTING THE GIRLS’ NAMES FOR SOMETHING LIKE THIS IN YOUR MOUTH!!!” the cook shouted at his captain, all while the entire ship swayed from side to side as the footsteps on the other side of the Thousand Sunny indicated that he was currently chasing after Luffy.
The four girls couldn’t help but snicker as they listened to the turmoil and Luffy’s pleas of mercy. Supporting Rebecca with an arm behind her back, Vivi joked. “Told you!”
(A couple hours later…)
“Ehhhhhhh… why do we have to be the ones to check out this island?” Usopp whined, his eyes wandering all over the place to make sure that nothing would sneak up on him. Dressed in a camouflage patterned shirt that left his toned and tanned arms exposed, he held on to his Kuro Kabuto for dear life as he followed Carrot through the thick jungles of the island they had landed on.
Swiping away at the thick vines that blocked their path, Carrot smiled, “Because Luffy’s not exactly in a position to do any exploration at the moment after Sanji beat him up like that?” she asked rhetorically. In stark contrast to Usopp, she was dressed in rather striking clothes. Clothes that potential enemies would have an easy time to spot from a large distance! A yellow top hung loosely off of her ample breasts, leaving her midriff exposed and revealing to him that she wore some kind of pink slingkini underneath. Short jeans didn’t even cover half of her buttocks, which was made even more prominent by her fluffy tail. “And because Nami and the other girls are busy explaining the situation to Zoro and the others!”
“I guess…” was the black haired sniper’s only reply as he edged closer to the white bunny due to a loud rumbling further ahead of them. He gulped, “I still can’t believe that Nami took my words so literally…!” he croaked, with his voice breaking in fear of what might await them further down the road. ‘A harem… what is that woman thinking?’
If the jungle around him just wasn’t as thick and dark, he probably would have enjoyed the place a lot more! It’s been a long while since they’d been on a Spring Island, and with the myriad of blooming flowers all around them, the place was actually quite idyllic. Their sweet scents filled his nostrils, wanting to make him drop his guard and to lure him deeper in the green world away from the trail that Carrot blazed with her surprisingly sharp claws! Next to them, a relatively large river kept rippling in the dim light of the sun as they followed it to its source. If there was a village or town here, then it would most likely be at the source of the water, after all. Where there’s water, there’s life! A rule that applies to every place in this world!
“Don’t worry, Usopp!” she calmed him down, then patted him briefly on the shoulder before continuing with her task, “I’ll be here if something happens! Even if there’s nothing here that would pose a threat to us! I smell that.” Carrot claimed, while tapping on her pink rabbit-nose for evidence.
Still worried, Usopp couldn’t help but agree. At least for now! He didn’t pick up anything dangerous with his Observation Haki either. Just a couple of big animals to the east who were too busy with something else to pay them any attention, “If you say so…” he replied, thankful to get further away from the animals while the rushing water became even louder with each step. “Let’s just hope that Nami finishes her explanation quickly! I don’t wanna be alone here for much longer!”
“HEY!” the blonde playfully boxed him, and smiling brightly as the searing sun above them. “You’re not alone here! I’m with you. And besides, aren’t you so strong now that there’s nothing that should stand a chance against you? I mean… you did take on one of Kaido’s officers, didn’t you?”
“Just because he didn’t manage to kill me, doesn’t mean that I’m completely invulnerable against everything! If anything, it just showed me how weak I actually am since I couldn’t even finish him off for good!” he reasoned, as his head and shoulders hanging lower and lower with every word he said, “If Tama hadn’t appeared at the right time to get me and Nami out of harm’s way… or Big Mom hadn’t shown up to punch him out… and if Nami hadn’t taken out this other girl…” a shudder ran down his spine. “I don’t wanna think about what would have happened to me!”
“Are you sure you’re not being a bit too harsh on yourself?” asked Carrot, who became concerned for her friend after hearing about his personal feelings in that regard. “You have this awesome arsenal of stuff and plants and all… And you standing up against one of the highest ranking members of an Emperor is still impressive! Regardless of whether or not you managed to beat him or not!”
Usopp avoided looking at her, “For you maybe!” he muttered silently so that she couldn’t hear, “But I wanna be a brave warrior of the sea! How can I be that if I couldn’t help in any meaningful way during battle while all the others busted out these sick new moves?” he then asked, having to talk much louder now as the sound of falling water now became almost deafening!
Slicing through the last vines and lianas, the two pirates stepped out of the darkness of the jungle, and into a place so bright and illuminated by the sun above it almost hurt their eyes as they got used to it, “WOAH!!!” All worries were washed away as the two of them wowed at the same time, taken aback by the marvelous sight of water falling from several hundred meters above them down into a crystalline blue lake. Steep cliffs formed a natural border around the lake, stretching from east to west with no end in sight.
“How… how couldn’t we see those earlier?” Usopp gasped in shock. Back when they first set foot on the beach, all they saw was jungle as far the eye could see. The river they had followed also originated from here. Along with a few others, it provided the many plants on the island with all the water and nutrients they needed to become as big as they are.
“It looks beautiful!” remarked Carrot, who was already beginning to strip out of her top.
“Wha-? You wanna swim here?” Usopp stepped closer to the shore of the lake. There was just something odd about it that he couldn’t quite pin down, “We don’t even know if this place is safe!” he argued, while kicking a little pebble into the lake but with no reaction.
The blonde Mink folded her shorts and top and put them as a neat pile on a rock, suspended in the sunlight, “Relax!” She stretched her arms and legs, causing the joints there to pop in a melodic way. She put her hands on her hips and smiled. “What’s wrong with a little swim to wash away the grime, dirt, and sweat? Do you have any idea how long we’ve been walking to get here?”
As Usopp raised one hand to smell his own armpit, Carrot already jumped into the lake, “Urgh!” Usopp had to gag at his own bodily odor for a second, ‘Damn… didn’t know we were wandering for that long…!’ he thought to himself. “Yeah, a little bath probably doesn’t hurt!”
“Told you so!” Carrot agreed from the water. How she managed to swim on her back with those huge tits pressing down on her was something that Usopp didn’t understand. Though, at the same time, he also didn’t really care about it as he pulled his shirt over his head. “Now get in here already! The water’s so nice and waAAAH!!”
“Carrot? What’s wrong?” Usopp asked, able to see again after having gotten his head out of the shirt, “Carrot?” much to his shock, Carrot wasn’t to be seen anywhere! Only a couple of bubbles plopped on the water where he had seen her last. “FUCK!”
Triggering his Observation Haki, he sensed her in the lake, struggling and wailing her arms around while getting pulled under by something! Without any hesitation, he shrank the Kuro Kabuto to a size where he could hold it easily in one hand and instead pulled out a knife from a pocket in his pants. Underwater, his projectiles wouldn’t work as well, but he felt much safer with his trusted weapon in his hand than without! Before he could think about any plan of action or what he’d do once he came face to face with whatever was dragging Carrot down, he already put the handle of the knife in his mouth and jumped in the water! Just as she wanted to say, the water was pleasantly warm, so he could descend deeper without any hesitation or waiting until he got used to the temperature.
‘There!’ Thanks to his Observation Haki, he was able to accurately point out Carrot’s location, even in the deeper and darker parts of the lake. Something moved towards him from the right, but since he sensed it coming, he could evade it with relative ease, ‘A tentacle!’ he realized.
“ARUMPH!!!” he heard Carrot groan and fight. She was still a couple meters beneath him, but he could clearly see another tentacle winding up on one leg and rubbing against her thicc thighs as it coiled around her waist and right arm, with the very tip of it resting on top of her shoulder. “MMMMMPH!!!”
‘Don’t worry, I got you now!’ Usopp wordlessly called at her. A couple more tentacles all appeared around him, ready to pull him in as well. He fished out two golf ball sized bombs out of his bag and threw them at the closest tentacle. Upon impact, the bombs burst open and a green substance turned the water all muddy, leaving the octopus or squid or whatever was done there disorientated for a second!
Since it lived in such a clear lake, the creature would still use its eyes to make out its prey after all!
“HMMM??” Carrot looked up at him when the tentacle around her stopped pulling, “USSHOP!” Her eyes beamed with joy as she saw him grab the knife from his mouth to start cutting on the tentacle.
Blood came out of the wound as the beast throwed all its limbs around wildly. Screams of its agony echoed dully in the lake as Usopp held on to Carrot for dear life, not wanting to let go of her, ‘Just a bit more!’ he thought, already sensing the creature drawing closer as it pulled him and Carrot towards its nest at the foot of the cliff again. ‘Come on! Come on, come on, come on!!’
Out of the dark side of the water, a large black beak suddenly appeared, opening wider and wider as the octopus wanted to eat them. It had given up on trying to throw Usopp off and instead now wanted to finish this another way! He’d still need to cut through a little bit less than half of the monster’s tentacle to cut Carrot free for real! And even then, he would still need to find a way to deal with the other tentacles and get out of the water before he ran out of air or before the beast could eat him!
‘Damnit!’ he cursed in his mind as the knife was knocked out of his hands due to the monster’s continuous thrashing and wailing, ‘Where’s Zoro or Brook when you need them to cut something? Or Sanji or Jinbe… those two would have made mincemeat out of that thing in seconds!’ he complained, as he was unable to come up with a way to deal with the situation. ‘None of my plants work here! What should I do…?’
“USSSSHOOOOPH!!!!” Carrot’s gargling voice rang through to him through the madness around them. She tapped weakly against his thigh to get his attention, before pointing up at the far away seeming surface of the water. “USHD ‘EAVE MEH!!”
He shook his head, ‘I won’t leave you here!’ he said wordlessly, ‘There’s gotta be a way to… I got it!’ With the monster now threatening to eat them any second now, Usopp searched his pockets for the thing he needed so desperately. He hadn’t used it for two years, but it should still be in his pocket somewhere!
“ARRRRGHEEE!!!!” the octopus screeched as it opened its beak even wider!
‘My Deluxe Pepper Sauce Star?’ he thought, while examining the red object he found in his pocket before tossing it into the sea monster’s beak. ‘Not what I wanted, but it should give me some time!’
“EIIIIIIIIIAHYYYYIE!!!!” The tentacles around Usopp and Carrot thrashed around wildly as the octopus spit out a pillar of flames.
Tears rolled down its face as it turned several shades more red as Usopp finally found what he was looking for, “YESH!!!” he exclaimed triumphantly, holding up the Dial he searched for. Right as the beast was about to eat them, he pressed the weird looking remains of a shellfish against the beak. “Impact!”
Several things happened at once! The beast howled a deafening roar as it was thrown back against the cliff by an invisible force! The rocks above and around it crumbled under the impact and buried it while the already halfway severed tentacle around Carrot tore as Usopp and Carrot were flung backwards by the recoil of the exotic weapon!
SPLAAAASH!!!!!
The two pirates broke through the water’s surface, landing safe and sound on a bush in full bloom! For a solid minute or so, the lake was filled by the sounds of them coughing and gasping for air! He hadn’t noticed it earlier, but one of the pink strings that covered Carrot’s tits had slipped off, granting him a perfect look at her stiff pink nipple as she sat on top of his chest.
“Haaa… haaa… haaa…!” the blonde panted, with her tits heaving as she struggled with every breath, “Well… at least we now know that you were right with saying that this place wasn’t safe!” she joked with a giggle, while throwing the torn off tentacle off of her naked body.
“Hrrr, hrrr… Why… huff…! Why didn’t you use your Electro against that thing?” Usopp asked, with his cock growing longer and harder as he looked up at her partially naked body. Then it dawned on him. “Nevermind. Underwater and all that!”
“Right!” Carrot smiled, already beginning to throw her hips against Usopp’s crotch. She bit her lower lips at the feel of the stretched fabric of his wet pants rubbing against her butt. “And I knew that you would come to save me and I think I owe you a little ‘Thank you’ for that!”
“A- are you sure about that?” gulping, Usopp’s cock grew only longer as Carrot slipped her thumb under her bikini to free her other tit as well. “Aren’t you part of Luffy’s harem now? I seriously don’t wanna mess or steal any of his girls!”
The Mink waved his concerns off, “Don’t worry! I’m sure he won’t mind! Not after what just happened!” she said, while gyrating her hips some more against the tent he was pitching.
“I mean, if you insist!” Usopp couldn’t help but grin and go with the situation. Adrenalin still pumped through his body as he unbuttoned his pants, “I’ll warn you though, after a ride on the Usopp-train, all other dicks will be inferior by comparison!” he boasted as his cock finally sprung out of its containment!
“Yessss!!! That’s what I want to hear!” Carrot moaned as the heat coming off of Usopp’s length spread across her ass, sending waves of pleasure all throughout her body, “Now take that big schlong…” she purred, moving forward on Usopp so that he could insert his cock in any of her holes he wanted. “And fuck me like you mean it!”
“Hahahahahahaha!!!” With his dick as hard as it could be, Usopp laughed and put one hand on the white bunny’s hip, while grabbing the base of his shaft with the other. “As you wish! Just don’t come complaining to me when you can’t walk straight afterwards!”
“AAAAAHH!!!!!” The moment he shoved his dick into her pussy, something snapped in her!
“GWWWRR!!!! So tight…!” groaned Usopp, as he began thrusting his hips up and down to bury more and more of his cock in her pussy!
No matter how often she took a cock like this, Carrot would never not enjoy and relish in this sensation! While definitely not the girthiest dick she ever took, Usopp’s length still trumped others in terms of overall size, something that was made even more prominent by the outline of his reaction in the Mink’s flat and furry stomach. More than half of it was still out in the open and yet he seemed to reach all the way into her womb!
“MMMMMHH!!! YEAH!!! SPEAR MY PUSSY WITH THAT FUCKING MEAT STICK!!!!” she moaned out loud. She put her hands behind her head and looked down at Usopp, with her face a mask of pure pleasure. “FEELS SO GOOD!! HAVING A DICK IN MY CUNT MAKES ME SOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!!”
Stroking the part of his dick that was still out in the open, Usopp glowed with pride as he picked up speed, “Grrrr… you’re a horny little bunny slut, aren’t you!” he teased her, as the dripping juices of her pussy made for an excellent lube as they streamed down his length. “You’re practically born to take cock!”
“YES!! COCK!!!! GIMME MORE COCK!!!!” she agreed with every word he just said. Her brown eyes crossed in their sockets as she took his cock even deeper in her soaked twat, “I WANNA BE A STUFFED LITTLE BUNNY!! FILLED WITH NOTHING BUT DICK AND COCK MILK!!!!!” Carrot shouted pleasure surging through her body as if she put her finger into an outlet.
“Aaaah, aaaah, aaaah…!!” Usopp grunted, as the branches of the bush beneath him dug into his back with each thrust of his hips, “I can see why Nami came up with that harem idea…” he realized in a moment of clarity. “Keeping up with your urges seems impossible for any girl!”
“MHMMMM!!!!” the blonde nodded, “Having sex with Nami and the other girls is nice and all, but…” she arched her back, forcing the dick inside her pussy to stir around in all the best ways, almost making it feel as if he filled her pussy out completely. “NOTHING BEATS THE FEELING OF A HOT, GIRTHY, HARD, RAW COCK RAVAGING MY INSIDES LIKE THISSSS!!!!”
Sweat pearled down the tanned sniper’s neck, “I see…!” he groaned, trying to ignore the pain from the bush poking against his back with even the slightest of movements, “THEN TAKE IT!!” the sniper roared, letting go of his shaft to instead spank one of Carrot’s bouncing tits.
Like jell-o, the two furry orbs of flesh jiggled as Usopp shoved the entire rest of his cock all the way into her pussy, “AYEEEEEEEHH!!!! YESSSS!!!!!!” Carrot hissed in ecstasy, with her pussy letting out a spray of hot juices straight on his chest as she came hard. “DESTROY MY PUSSY AND PUNISH MY TITS!!!!! MAKE ME CUM HAAAARRRD!!!!!”
“YEAH!! Take my cock like the good little bunny slut that you are!” he ordered, while spanking her other tit this time with a loud SMACK! The force of the impact caused them to slap together wetly and made her moan even louder!
“AAAAAAAHH!!!! SO GOO~D!!!” Saliva dropped out of her open mouth as she kept bouncing up and down in an unpredictable rhythm. “BREED ME!!!! FILL MY SLUTTY PUSSY WITH YOUR CREAMY LOAD!!!!”
“So insatiable…” flipping them both to the side on the ever shifting and moving bush, Usopp took one of her legs and grabbed it tight for leverage as he kept slamming his hips against her as ferociously and wildly as he could!
PLAP! SLAP! PLAP! PLAP!
The sound of flesh hitting flesh echoed throughout the jungle as he fucked her to her second orgasm, “CUMMING!!! YOUR LONG SNAKE-DICK MAKES ME CUM SO FUCKING MUCH!!!!” the blonde screamed, her eyes rolling back in their sockets whenever Usopp’s balls slapped against her thigh.
“Hurr, hurr, hurr!! Horny slut…” Usopp panted, “How did the other girls keep up with you?” he asked in between thrusts, with his fingers sinking deep in the soft fur of her other leg as he hugged himself tight against it. “Luffy I understand… he’s a monster!”
“YES! I WANNA GET FUCKED BY MONSTER COCKS ALL DAY LONG!!!” Carrot shouted into the silence of the jungle. The heady scents of her pussy were more potent than anything Usopp had ever smelled before, “THIS FEELS SO GOOD!! IT’S SO DEEP AND HARD INSIDE ME!!!! I’M LOSING MY MIND TO THIS LONG SCHLONG!!!!!” the young Mink screamed as the hair around her pussy lumped together due to her juices running out of her hole uncontrollably. “JUST… PUMP YOUR STICKY LOAD IN MY WOMB ALREADY!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!! I’M GETTING CRAZYYYYYY!!!!!!!”
“THEN TAKE IT ALREADY!!!!” Usopp roared with her. Holding on to her leg for dear life, he slammed his hips forward one last time before keeping it there as he shot his cum. “Take my jizz like the thirsty slut you really are!”
“SO… MUCH… CUUUUUMMM!!!!!” her body went limp, spasming in the orgasm that surged through her and rocked her entire being. “CUMCUMCUMCUMCUMCUM!!!!!! I’M CUMMMMMMMIINGH!!!!!”
Flexing her inner muscles around Usopp’s dick like a vice, Carrot kept him locked inside of her as he painted her insides white with his seed. Due to his lack of girth however, his cum almost immediately kept gushing out of her pussy again. In thick globs, the reward of both their effort dropped onto the push and mixed with the pussy juices on her legs!
“Haaaaaah, haaa…!” letting go of Carrot’s trembling leg, Usopp let himself fall on his back, “That… was intense!” he had to admit, wiping away the sweat from his forehead with the back of his hand. “Hope you’re satisfied now!”
“Mhmmmm!” Carrot moaned happily, drawing circles on her stomach as Usopp’s cum continued oozing out of her pussy in long rivers, “As far as warm-ups go, that was pretty nice!” she said nonchalantly and completely indifferent to Usopp’s shocked expression as she stood up, “Though next time, we’re gonna invite somebody else as well for a nice DP!” she said, looking down on all the cum that now drenched the bush beneath her. “Anyways…!”
“EEP!!” Usopp had no other option but to gulp as Carrot pulled him by his ankles, “You… you can’t be serious!” he tried to reason as he looked up at the way she lined his cock up with her butt.
“Hrrmmm… don’t worry!” she said, though the tone in her voice made it quite clear that she had no regards for his well-being at the moment. Only interested in her own pleasure, the young blonde impaled herself on his dick. “FFFFFFFFFUCK!!!!”
“Oh god… OH GOD!!!!!” he groaned in raw lust as Carrot fucked herself with his dick, using him like some kind of glorified and human dildo! The way her hands clenched around his legs left him with no way to escape his predicament, even if he wanted to. He could only watch with a look of horror and mad lust on his face as Carrot threw her entire body against his!
“OH… MY ASS!!” she mewled erotically, “COCK IS THE BEST!!!!” Carrot proclaimed loudly, with her pussy already burning with need again as she rode Usopp’s cock as if she never did anything else in her life before!
“OAAARGH!!!!” grunted Usopp, the entire world around him crumbling away as he got lost in the tight sensation of her butt, “It… It feels so weird… getting used like this!’ he thought to himself. ‘But why does it feel so good then??!’
“I’M CUMMING!!! I’M CUMMING FROM HAVING MY ASS FUCKED LIKE THIS!!!!!!” Carrot screamed and pulled him out of his daydreams. She licked her lips at the sight of Usopp’s cock moving back and forth with every little move she did. “Let’s do this all day!! I wanna get bred so fucking baa~ad!” she whined as her primal urges kicked into overdrive!
“A- all day?” Usopp gulped, who was already catching glimpses of himself in the future as a mummy in the Thousand Sunny’s infirmary, drained out of every last drop of liquid, ‘Fuck! It wasn’t this bad a couple days ago!’ he realized. “FUCK!!!!!”
“OH, YESSSS!!!!!” Carrot moaned as yet another powerful orgasm swept over her. “LET’S BREED THIS BUNNY UNTIL SHE BREAKS!!!!”
Sweating, Usopp could only watch as a fleeting hope crossed his mind, ‘Luffy! Where are you when I need you the most???’ he asked his captain in his mind while enduring Carrot’s surprisingly strong, but careful treatment of his body as she used him for her own pleasure, “SHE’S GONNA MILK ME DRYYYYYY!!!!!!” he shouted right as he came hard inside her ass!
(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)
@Mr. Akrononym
Loved Usopp revealing his insecurities, really true to his canon character! Also, it must’ve been a full moon with how horny Carrot was!
Just curious, how long and wide is Usopp’s cock? Would you say 2 feet long (since less than half of it could reach Carrot’s womb fully, and we know from the Nami + Vivi chapter’s image that it’s bigger than Sanji’s already sizable cock), and like 6 inches wide (so wider than a forearm)?
I’m so sorry for this odd question, I’m just a sucker for specific sizes.
Keep up the good work!
Haven’t thought much about the size of any of the guys in these series yet. It all varies from artwork to artwork and story to story.
One thing’s sure though, Usopp has the longest natural dick in the crew (in relation to his overall body size). He does lose some points when it comes to girth, though.
Sanji’s cock is ALWAYS one cm smaller and less girthy than Zoro’s. They’re both packing one hell of a trunk, though.
Luffy’s is smaller and less girthy than that of Zoro, Usopp, and Sanji, but he makes up for it with a better stamina/endurance, and the ability to make his cock grow at will. Lots of fun stuff in mind with him, especially when it comes to Gear 5.
Chopper… we don’t talk about Chopper.
Franky’s is all-natural and probably the thickest overall, if it weren’t for Jinbe.
Jinbe, due to him being the tallest member of the crew in general, has the biggest cockS of all of them, at least in relation to his body size.
Brook has a boner 24/7.
I hope that helps.
It actually does help somewhat.
LOL on the Zoro vs Sanji thing. And the stuff on Chopper & Brook.
Luffy’s normal cock is I believe the size of his full arm or leg, one of those 2, and is repeatedly shown to be like 2 feet long, so Usopp Zoro and Sanji should exceed this, as should Jinbe and Franky.
HOT DAMN, the male SHP are monsters!
Even Usopp has like a 30-inch beast, going by the chapter where he mouth-fucks Nami (in the changing room) then fucks Carrot! (As even when Nami’s tits were made to be 5x the size of her head and like 1/3 the height of her body, Usopp’s cock is still long enough for 1/3 of it to poke through.
And while Usopp is the thinnest, I assume it’s still impressive by normal standards, right? It’d still be around 4-5 thick-ish, would that be correct?
But anyways, thanks for the answer, and keep up the good work!
Action was good, as was Usopp’s chat about his insecurities, and this is one of your best OP chapters yet!
Great chapter as always! Could that “breed the bunny” be a reference to Sailoro’s Mirko?
Happy to see One Piece again after so long!
Both yes and no. It’s just an incredilby catchy and fun phrase that fits the situation quite well.
I was actually hoping that this chapter would be brought out, and sure enough, it’s actually here. So let’s talk about it. 😁
Overall, this was a really good chapter to edit and read through. Including how it began after the foursome Luffy had with Carrot, Vivi and Rebecca. Though it kinda implies that Nami had some action herself, especially since the harem plan was her idea in the first place. Unfortunately, he’s now on Sanji’s shit list for it after blabbering about it. 🤣That aside, I liked the start, as well as the chat the ladies had. Pretty good highlight.
Which brings us right into the meat of the story of this chapter. Carrot and Usopp during their trip to the forest. Naturally this took up much of the chapter, so rather than saying everything that happened, I’ll bring up something highlights I liked instead. 🤓
For one thing, nice work highlighting the differences between the two as well as Carrot calming Usopp down during his bad thought period and encouraging him along the way. Secondly, good job with the fight too. Not all that often when we get actual battles on any of the stories here, especially those that aren’t just used as a means to get to the sex as quickly as possible like some have been. Thankfully, this one served a purpose and it fit the overall story. 👍
Which at last leads me to the sex itself. Overall, I liked and appreciated how it was done, including how it was paced and written. It was a nice display of positions and tones. In addition to not being needlessly dragged out like some stories had been, but I’m not one to name names. Still, you did great with it. 😊
Overall, this was a really good way to return to the OP storyline. Hope to see more of your work later. 👏
Keep up the good work. 😎😃
Incredibly happy to read from you again! Just to clear things up, Nami wasn’t involved in the sex. At least not directly. She did however film the whole thing for later.
As for the action/fight scene in the middle, I want to write a series that feels like One Piece, so having some island exploration and encounters with the wildlife there felt like a pretty good idea. Also, Usopp has one of those arsenals that keep him surprisingly limited in certain situations, which made him the perfect guy to keep a battle against a kraken interesting. You don’t believe how glad I am that you guys actually like these parts of the story and don’t see them just as padding to drag out the run time.
Gotta give props to how you wrote Usopp this chapter you really did his character justice! Though im not sure if he’ll be able to keep up with Carrot’s sexual libido like Luffy can, but still absolutely no slouch either
Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate your support! And, yeah, while he may not have as much stamina as his captain, Usopp is able to keep up with Carrot (at least to a certain extend).
I think short of mistreating them I don’t think luffy would care of the state of his harem. They are free to do what they want especially since he has no direct desire for sex and they more so gravitated toward him then the other way around. If they want to fuck others I don’t think luffy would mind especially with others in the crew and friend group.
Also neat getting more one piece content I have been starved.
Believe it or not, but I already have an idea in mind with which Luffy could be a bit more “caring” about his harem. As of right now however, yeah, he probably wouldn’t care if either of his girls sleeps with anyone else.
Also this has nothing to do with this piece but after all of the naruto chapters we had here and the recent marine focused one piece manga chapters we have had I came to the idea of Garp being the Anti-A. Instead of being someone who fucks just to break women out of conquest Garp either fucks or teaches men to fuck to ensure the maximum satisfaction of their partners not at the expense either.
In fact if we ever get a marine focus chapter here (likely with hina tashigi or some other marine like kujaku) the hook of the story could be perhaps Garp taking coby and helmeppo out for “training” in fucking so they won’t repeat the robin coby incident. Heck Garp may not even be disappointed in coby for being taken advantage of by robin but due to him having robin due all the work being a passenger instead of a participant.
Nice idea, certainly. As it stands right now however, the Marines/WG will follow a different agenda. The type of “sex belongs in the bedroom and only between ONE man and ONE woman!” agenda. That being said, Garp and Smoker could, and definitely should, be the oddballs in that case who don’t care about where they fuck or with how many.
That certainly seems like the hypocritical double standard the WG would sprout to the public and personally royally ignore. As for the marines they perhaps would fanatically uphold especially the strait-laced and old generations. But I can see for the new generations likely starting with garps generation you can begin having marines who still uphold that kind of purity externally but behind close doors not exactly indulge in carnal desires but “vent” if you will like having sex equivalent of speakeasies for the marines. At the very least fucking their way not like a pirate would.
And with the trio of Garp sengoku and tsuru you can see the three kinds of marines regarding this topic. Sengoku is the straightlaced marine who upholds the standard. Garp is the rebel who perhaps influenced by pirates he fights everyday is willing to fuck but not fuck like I brutish pirate but a “brutish” sophisticated marine prioritizing maximum pleasure instead of personal pleasure because if you aren’t pleasing your partners brains out but instead ruining their brains then you are doing it wrong. And tsuru is in the middle having a pure exterior but Garp and sengoku both know the crazy kinks she keeps in dark corner of her closet. Consider the fact that her granddaughter is a man training dominatrix.
Luffy getting jealous would be funny actually since he wants all the meat in the world
And who’s got more meat then Carrot?
Sorry to burst your bubble, but writing Luffy as someone who gets jealous is as likely as making him a vegetarian XD.
Yeah first you need to give luffy an actual desire for sex in order for him to get offended in the first place let alone jealous.
Wow, that was great! Where to even start?
How about the character development? Carrot helping Usopp through his depression is eerily similar to my original proposal for Usopp x Ulti. Good to see you’re taking my suggestions to heart! And the best part? IT ACTUALLY WORKED! We got to see a different side to Usopp from what we’ve previously seen in the series AND we get to see how Carrot shines around the other Straw Hats that aren’t Luffy, Chopper or Nami. Both characters get developed while we also see them interacting when realistically we haven’t seen a lot of Usopp + Carrot content, not to be confused with Usopp x Carrot content, moreso that these two just haven’t interacted together a lot which is a shame since Usopp and Carrot, as you’ve shown us, can bounce off of each other really well. As a whole, Carrot is a mix of pre-timeskip Chopper and surprisingly, Vivi. She’s got this little sister energy going on but she’s also capable of handling herself, she just gets in over her head way too often and has to be bailed out. I kinda wish you touched on this aspect of her character more with when she and Usopp were talking, but it’s clear you were making Usopp the star of the show and I completely respect that. Actually, this could end up being an advantage for you. Not the Usopp part, but Carrot not opening up. Hear me out: she becomes so horny that she loses her own consciousness and only becomes a beast focused on one thing and one thing only: sex. Then, she goes through a huge gangbang while everyone else is either banging her or trying to get her to snap out of her state. I wonder if Usopp’s last line was foreshadowing this?
Onto the fight scene, and this is even better! Normally, you either rush the fights or skip them all together and get straight to the sex. Don’t get me wrong, I completely get where you’re coming from since at the end of the day this is a lemon series and the last thing it needs is what feels like padding, but at the same time, it felt good to write it, didn’t it? It felt good to write this underdog saving his friend from a strong foe while he has to hold his breath and you have to think of an answer to the problem, and when you finish writing the fight, it felt satisfying and Usopp’s win felt earned, right? This is partly why I like writing Usopp in the first place and have been getting any fanfic writer I can to give him another chance, it’s because his fights feel good and get you to stretch your imagination and make you feel like you’re there beside him, plotting how to attack next.
I just want to say this now: Thank you so much for taking my advice and giving Usopp some spotlight. At the same time, I also owe you an apology for how I’ve treated you in the past. Looking back, I essentially bullied you into writing Usopp into the story and whenever we weren’t seeing Usopp, I whined like a child throwing a temper tantrum. I’m so sorry for how I acted and I absolutely regret ever writing those comments, especially those last two when I called your characters bland. I was out of line, and truthfully speaking, I’m the one who’s been writing bland characters in my fics.
I hope you can forgive me, but I don’t blame you if you don’t. I’ve been a terrible viewer and a bully.
Thanks for liking this chapter, but…
Dude, could you please calm it down with the Usopp-gushing already! I have no problems with you or anyone else here, but I’m seriously starting to get annoyed by “Usopp this, Usopp that”. Your apology (while I do accept it and take your word for it) means relatively little to me/loses in impact when you basically start your entire comment with “Carrot helping Usopp through his depression is eerily similar to my original proposal for Usopp x Ulti. Glad to see you’re taking my suggestions to heart!” It seems like all you can talk/think about is Usopp and how HE could be the focus of the entire goddamn world! Sure, NOW the character development in my stories works for you, because it’s with Usopp. How can I take you’re apology seriously and know that you mean it, when you essentially disregard every other aspect of character writing I put so far in this series!?
Usopp is a perfectly okay-character, and I wrote him in this chapter because someone who actually gives his thoughts under these storiesof mine, regardless of which character is in them or what kind of sex they have, wanted me to write either Usopp or Sanji here. And I won’t let something as childish and petty as my growing annoyance at your Usopp-agenda get in the way of doing a favor for a guy who actually seems to care about these stories and helps me with them!
To answer your questions though, yes, it did felt good to write an action scene in this chapter. Maybe you haven’t noticed yet, but this is far from the first time that I wrote an action scene in these One Piece stories. Sure, some of them ended up getting cut shorter than others, but that’s due to them not being all that much important to the overall plot of the story (i.e. I needed a way to explain Sanji’s small dick in the Monet/Viola pic, so I had his and Zoro’s minds swapped by Law’s powers. After that point, the battle didn’t matter anymore). Here, the fight is what leads directly to the sex, so it’s bound to be more fleshed out.
Second question, no! It didn’t felt particularly satisfying and Usopp’s win didn’t feel earned. Or, at least not more satisfying and earned than ALL OTHER ONE PIECE CHAPTERS I WROTE SO FAR! I enjoy One Piece! I like it! I love Smoker, Kid, Big Mom, Kalgara, Belo Betty, Gaimon, the South Bird, Queen, Pandaman, Franky, Crocodile, Hawkins, (Sabo and Yamato not all that much, to be honest), Cobra, Buggy, and, yes, even Usopp to a reasonable amount. Writing a chapter with any of those guys feels extremely satisfying! You probably didn’t notice, but I do put in a lot of effort in every chapter I write, whether they feature the Strawhats now or any other faction, because I like this entire series, and not just one random character in general.
In the end though, I guess I should feel kinda happy, knowing that, finally, after two years of writing stories, I actually managed to do a good job at writing a character, at least in your opinion. That’s something…