So… yeah. I’m gonna be honest, just like with the last artwork that featured Videl, I’m not the biggest fan of it. In the non-cum version the two texts don’t really make any sense to me and doesn’t really match Bulma’s hand gesture… it’s more confusing than anything else. Pudgy Bulma is rather nice but overall I think this artwork has a lot of missed potential. Something that we see rather nicely in the makeup version. It’s REALLY basic and the lipstick on Bulma is barely noticeable. Videl’s tattoo on her tits is just plain and kinda unremarkable when compared to the usual tatto designs that you come up with. The cum version fixes quite a few issues however and safes this artwork from being underwhelming. The texture of it is really nice and the changed dialogue makes much more sense although it still doesn’t really fit Videl’s hand gesture.
Maybe I just interpret it wrong but Videl in this artwork seems to playfully challenge the reader/her partner to fuck her, which doesn’t really fit any of her text boxes. Combine that with the lack of any real background to speak of and we end up with this year’s firs (and hopefully last) underperforming artwork.
5/10
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sexy mmm
So… yeah. I’m gonna be honest, just like with the last artwork that featured Videl, I’m not the biggest fan of it. In the non-cum version the two texts don’t really make any sense to me and doesn’t really match Bulma’s hand gesture… it’s more confusing than anything else. Pudgy Bulma is rather nice but overall I think this artwork has a lot of missed potential. Something that we see rather nicely in the makeup version. It’s REALLY basic and the lipstick on Bulma is barely noticeable. Videl’s tattoo on her tits is just plain and kinda unremarkable when compared to the usual tatto designs that you come up with. The cum version fixes quite a few issues however and safes this artwork from being underwhelming. The texture of it is really nice and the changed dialogue makes much more sense although it still doesn’t really fit Videl’s hand gesture.
Maybe I just interpret it wrong but Videl in this artwork seems to playfully challenge the reader/her partner to fuck her, which doesn’t really fit any of her text boxes. Combine that with the lack of any real background to speak of and we end up with this year’s firs (and hopefully last) underperforming artwork.
5/10
Ahh considering that’s happening to him atm, give em some credit cause it’s been pretty rough
Given that I already went over the chapter around christmas, it’s safe to assume that the artwork was already finished at least a week before that.
I just don’t see the point in giving over the top 10/10 rankings for every artwork or story because that wouldn’t help in any meaningful way.