Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Palace of Perverted Pleasure


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Bleach stories)
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Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
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Music pounded loud enough to be heard by even those who simply wanted to walk past the comparatively unimpressive looking building at the edge of Karakura Town’s red-light district. While other brothels or clubs in the neighborhood competed with one another by constantly blinking lights and neon signs that were meant to capture the interest of their potential visitors, the owner of this club opted to go with something different! The owner wasn’t interested in passerbyes or people who wanted to have a quick fuck and be done about it! No! She wanted her customers to have the experience of their lifetimes! Competing with any of the small brothels around her wouldn’t do her big ambitions justice!

 

Those daring enough to enter β€œUnohana’s Palace of Harlots and Gigolos” would then go on to be completely caught by surprise with how elaborate and exquisite everything looked in stark contrast to the unassuming exterior! Though it didn’t feature much besides an elevator and a set of stairs to the right, and a desk for a concierge, whose only job it was to greet the patrons and to keep their belongings safe while they enjoyed their stay here, everything else about the room helped to sooth the patrons in. To make them feel relaxed and in the best hands possible! The purple carpet, the black mahogany wood of the table and the doors, and the silver tiles on the walls, which perfectly matched the black ones on the ground and ceiling, all managed to give the patrons a clear visible indication of what kind of treatment would wait for them behind the two double doors that led further into the building!

 

There, people could truly let loose and watch the greatest carnal pleasures known to mankind unfold on stage! At the center stage of the dance floor, a busty black haired girl skillfully grinded her slender body against a slick silvery pole that reached all the way up into the second floor. Moving like this was almost natural to Lisa Yadomaru, as it wasn’t all that much different from when she fought with her spear, Haguro Tonbo. Only that this spear was stationary and that she didn’t fight to spill the blood of her enemies, but to make them lose a different kind of fluid! Money rained down all around her as the many men in the audience went wild whenever they got a glimpse of her barely covered pussy, the two dental floss strings of thong digging deep into the pink folds.

 

Walking through the crowd of horny people, another black haired girl, dressed in an inverted bunny suit (without bunny ears) and with a stoic expression on her beautiful face, offered them drinks and handjobs alike as they watched Lisa make a perfect split between two poles.

 

β€œAAWWWWWW YEEAAAAAAH!!!!!” one man shouted as Lisa let herself hang upside down, causing her massive tits to cover almost her entire face, whereas her pussy was wide open for the many thirsty visitors to leer at, β€œSHOW US DEM TITTIES!!!!!” He demanded while giving the black haired waitress a quick grab on her shapely butt to get her attention.

 

β€œMmmmmh~ How can I be of service to you?” She asked with only the slightest blush on her face as she pressed her ass some more against the palm of his hand. β€œCan I offer you some champagne? Or would whiskey be m-” Nemu Kurotsuchi offered while lifting a plate full with different kinds of alcohol, but was quickly shot down as the man raised his other meaty hand.

 

The man was far from handsome. His oily gray hair was combed back to hide several bald spots. He reeked of way too much cologne and had several wounds on his neck and face from cutting himself with a razor, almost as if he hadn’t taken care of himself in several years but tried to make up for it in less than five minutes. He had the skin of rotten cheese and made no attempts to hide it as he wore an open hawaii shirt with several colorful naked girls printed on instead of the usual flowers.

 

β€œNah! None of that stuff!” He said before unzipping his pants. β€œI’ve heard and saw that you’re up to some kinky stuff here! So why dontcha give my anaconda down there a nice rubbing while I enjoy the show, hm?!”

 

Nemu nodded, β€œGladly!” She answered with the same unmoving expression that she is known for throughout the Soul Society.

 

Still holding the plate in her right hand, Nemu unbuckled his pants with the other and freed his impressively sized cock from its confinement, β€œAaaaaahhh… That’s better!” the man sighed in relief as a foul stench washed through the room. It seemed his skin and body care had stopped with his upper body as his nethers were damp and sweaty!

 

β€œHmm~! So big…!” Nemu mused to herself as she began to stroke his length. In stark contrast to the other people nearby, she neither gagged nor stepped away from the Ugly Bastard. Her expression didn’t change one bit!

 

β€œYeah! That’s the stuff!” the man groaned in satisfaction. β€œPretty big, huh?!” He asked with a satisfied grin on his face as the black haired waitress continued running her hands up and down his cock.

 

β€œMmmmh!! I’ve been fucked by bigger before!” She told him nonchalantly, while she skillfully worked her hand over his throbbing cock. Despite her not even being able to grab half his dick with one hand alone, the Ugly Bastard soon began to pant and tremble. β€œBut my Mistress here told me not to talk about that with customers because some might feel insecure about it!”

 

β€œTSK! Little bitch!” was the man’s only reply after listening to her not falling immediately for his enormous dick. β€œEh! Doesn’t matter! You do a pretty good job at handling my anaconda! That’s more than I can say about most random bitches I’ve been fucking around with β€˜til now!”

 

β€œThank you!” Nemu said silently.

 

Her words were drowned out by the constant cheering of the people around them, who watched with a burning intention as Lisa climbed one of the two poles on stage upwards, all the way into the second floor. Once there, she reached for one of the many chains that hung from the ceiling, before, in beat with the music, swinging with them through the room like a female Spider-Man. The audience went wild as she swung over their heads, with her perfectly shaven pussy flying right over their heads!

 

β€œYeah! That definitely feels good!” He groaned. β€œYou know what you’re doing, that’s for sure!” For the first time in a long while, the Ugly Bastard felt himself getting brought to the verge of orgasm with just a handjob, β€œHIINGH!!!” A mischievous grin that showed his crooked teeth spread across his face as he put a hand on her shoulder and attempted to push her down on her knees. β€œBut what do you say about giving me some head?! I promise, sucking my dick alone will be enough to make you cum your silly little brain out!”

 

Nemu simply leaned her head to the right with a deadpan expression on her face, completely unmoved by his attempts to make him suck his cock, β€œI’m sorry! But my duty for today is only to serve drinks and get people in the mood for sex upstairs!” She informed him casually. β€œIf you want some more sexual services, I’d suggest acquiring a Platinum VIP Card!”

 

β€œCheeky little slut! But you know…” The man pushed himself away from Nemu, realizing that he wouldn’t get much else besides blue balls from her, β€œI just might get such a stupid card and then…” He licked his lips as he looked her up and down one last time. β€œI’m gonna make you have the time of your slutty life, choking on my fat dick all night long!”

 

β€œI’m looking forward to it!” Nemu replied politely, but without any actual emotions behind her words.

 

Men weren’t the only ones who had the time of their lives in Unohana’s Palace of Gigolos and Harlots though!

 

Not so far away from where Nemu brought the many patrons refreshments, Toshiro Hitsugaya found himself surrounded by a sea of women who basically ate him up with just their eyes alone! For whatever reason that he himself didn’t really understand, he also found himself in an inverted bunny suit (also minus the bunny ears) just like Nemu. It was embarrassing! And yet, the women in the club couldn’t get enough of him! They ran their hands through his white hair, stroked his chin, pressed their tits against his back and around his arms, pinched his cheeks, pressed his face between their tits, and admired his toned build and clear defined muscles.

 

β€œAWW!!! He’s so CUTE!!!” one of the women said as she hugged him deep into her boobs!

 

β€œI know, right!?” another one, who stood behind Toshiro, agreed. She nuzzled her face against his neck and kissed his collarbone. β€œHe’s the cutest little guy I’ve ever seen! I just want to eat him up and have him all for myself!”

 

β€œHey! Don’t be so selfish!” the woman next to her complained, running her fingers over the visible bulge in his speedo. β€œYou can all have your chance with him, but only once I’ve been fucked nice and deep by him!”

 

The other women all voiced their opinions about Toshiro as he tried his best to push himself out of the first woman’s cleavage, β€œI… I appreciate all your kind words…” the young prodigy Captain replied. β€œBut if you want my services, you need to become Platinum members! I’m only here for catering today!”

 

β€œHe’s SO sweet and kind!” one of the women remarked, while pulling him towards her and picking him up like a little child, β€œMWAH~❀!!” She kissed him on his shoulder, leaving a silvery-white imprint of her lipstick behind. She then smiled at him kindly. β€œYou don’t happen to need a sugar mommy to pamper and take care of you?!”

 

β€œAra ara~!! Saruko, don’t steal him from us!” one of her friends chided her, before kissing Toshiro on his chest. β€œYou’re not the only one who wants a piece of this handsome lil fella!”

 

β€œYeah! Me too!”

 

β€œME TOO!!!”

 

β€œWhere can I get a Platinum membership?”

 

Above them all on the second floor, Retsu Unohana smiled to herself as Toshiro practically drowned in a sea of MILF- and cougar-tits. While technically a violation of the club’s rules, Unohana was pretty sure that each woman that now plastered her kisses on him would also end up becoming a Platinum member afterwards. She watched for a little while longer until her attention was brought towards Lisa, who had finished her tour through the entire room above the heads of the many patrons, and currently rubbed her boobs against Tier Harribel’s.

 

The two women stood almost naked in front of each other on another stage and twerked for the enjoyment of their audience while pressing their tits around the pole at the center of the stage, giving off the impression as if they performed a paizuri! The mocha skinned woman cooed alongside her former enemy as their rock hard nipples rubbed against one another.

 

β€œMy, my… You certainly got yourself quite the lively bunch since the last time I was here!” commented Shunsui Kyoraku. The current Captain-Commander of the Soul Society was one of the few honorary guests that had already been granted a Platinum membership. He wore the same flowery kimono as always and leisurely drank his sake as he watched his former Vice-Captain start to make out with the Arrancar Queen.

 

β€œOnly because you managed to convince the Central 46 of my plans!” Unohana sucked up to him, refilling his cup already with some more sake, β€œI can’t thank you enough for your help!” she purred, while resting her own tits against his chest.

 

β€œYeah, yeah! Very nice and all!” Kisuke Urahara groaned in annoyance.

 

As Unohana’s old colleague and current business rival, she also invited him as a special guest to the grand opening of her club. Though, if his expression was anything to go by, he wasn’t as happy about the situation or as entranced by the performance of the girls as the man to his right. Sitting next to the former Captain, Karakura Town’s mayor sweated profusely as a barely noticeable bulge in his crotch rose and fell with every breath he took. He continuously wiped sweat away from his bald forehead as he practically drooled at the sight of the two women on stage now kissing one another around the pole between them.

 

β€œOh, come on, Captain Urahara-san!” Unohana mused playfully while offering him a new glass of alcohol. β€œJust enjoy the show! Maybe you can learn a trick or two for your own club as well!”

 

β€œYou…!” He stopped himself before he could say something that he would regret later on. While he never had many interactions with the first Kenpachi before this point, she really managed to get under his skin and rile him up!

 

The three Shinigami and one normal human continued watching the perverted display on the floor beneath them. It became increasingly harder for them to actually see what was going on, though, due to the patrons throwing more and more money onto the stage. It didn’t lay there for long however, as state of the art vacuums sucked each and every note up and kept the entire stage clean and safe for the girls to dance on.

 

If the first and second floor were prime examples on how you get your visitors in the mood for hot and raunchy sex, the floors above it were there to freely live out those fantasies! The rooms on the upper floors all were themed after different landscapes and with different perverted fantasies in mind.

 

For instance, one room might feature a beautiful beach setting, while another one might feature the insides of an actual pirate ship for those interested in some kinky roleplay. And those rooms were currently put to use for the first time by the general public!

 

β€œHRRRRRM… Such a fine and big CAWWWK!!!!” slurred Rukia Kuchiki. The petite Captain rubbed her face against the side of a massive dick like a cat in heat, dragging her tongue over every single vein on her way up. β€œMMMMMMMHHH!!!! AND IT’SH AWW PHOW MEEEHH!!!!”

 

β€œOh… GODDDD!!!! This feels fucking AWESOME!!!!!” the client, a man by the name of Hitane Iryu, grunted. He currently laid on his back in the ankles deep water of the β€˜Aqua Lounge’, enjoying the treatment he received from the black haired beauty. β€œAhhh… Where do they teach you stuff like that??!”

 

β€œHrr, hrr, hrr, hrr…!” Rukia snickered, β€œCompany secrets!” She said ominously before kissing her way up and down his enormous cock, β€œIf you want me to tell you, you have to make me, big boy!” She teased him, while running her teal colored fingers over his cantaloupe sized balls.

 

β€œHahahahaha!! I’ll try my best!” Hitane let himself fall back even more against the wet sandy ground beneath. One after the other, more and more teal colored lipstick marks appeared on his throbbing manhood as his partner of the day kissed every nook and cranny of it. β€œBut I seriously doubt that I can keep up with any of you girls! You seem to be doing this for quite a while now!”

 

Once again, Rukia giggled, β€œFar from it! I’ve only been doing this for a couple days! Training to get to work in this club and all.” She told him honestly. She then began to stroke the lower half of his cock. Even with both hands it was nearly impossible to make her fingers meet around the thick meatstick. β€œUntil then, I only had sex with my boyfriend. But enough of that!”

 

The young looking woman stayed true to her words and didn’t give Hitane much time to continue thinking about the fact that she apparently had a boyfriend. Instead, he soon found himself unable to do anything else but groan and pant as she wrapped her teal colored lips tightly around the tip of his cock!

 

β€œHRRRRMM!!! MMMMPH, UUUGH, UGUUURMH, HUUULGH!!!!” She choked around his member, her throat distended visibly by his girth, β€œSHO GHUUUD!!!! BHIG CAWK TASHTE DA BESSSSSHDDD!!!!” Rukia slurred wetly.

 

Unable to suck his entire dick right away, she continued stroking the lower half of it with her skilled hands, β€œFUCK!!!! You’re driving me nuts!!!” Hitane moaned with her. Her fingers felt so incredibly soft against his skin, he couldn’t help but ooze precum into the warm waters below. β€œAaaaaaah… Slow down! I’m gonna cum…!!”

 

β€œALWEADY??” Rukia’s eyes went wide in shock, but she continued sucking his dick, β€œDISH SHIMPWY WON’T DOOH!!!” She slurred so badly around his cock, Hitane could barely understand what she was saying. Then it was Hitane’s time to watch with wide open eyes as she let go of one of his ballsacks and reached for a sword that he could have sworn hadn’t been there a second ago. β€œBANKWAI: HAGGA NO TOGAME!!!”

 

β€œWHAT THE…?!!” Hitane gasped as her hands suddenly became so cold, all thoughts of cumming practically vanished from his mind as his dick shrank down considerably! It felt as if he jumped into a lake in the middle of winter!

 

No! Even colder!

 

And it wasn’t just the temperature that had changed! Rukia’s black hair had vanished and made way for so bright white hair, it almost hurt his eyes just looking at it directly!

 

β€œNMMMMH!!! Betcha you weren’t expecting that, did you?!” She asked him playfully after spitting out his nigh flaccid dick again. She then flicked her cold finger against his member. The cold made it so sensitive, the mere touch actually hurt him, β€œBut now you’re so soft and tiny…” Rukia moaned wistfully as she turned around to present him her ass, β€œIf only there was some nice and hot little cave for you to warm up in!” She suggested, while already prying her buttocks aside for him.

 

Hitane gulped at the sight of the tight folds that spread an intoxicating odor in the aquatic themed room. It was so invitingly hot, the air around it actually steamed! The tattoo on her left butt cheek, slightly behind her pussy, seemed all the more inviting as she gyrated her hips in slow circles from side to side. And while he could barely read what was written there when she moved like that, he did have a good idea of what the implication was! Like in a trance, Hitane found himself standing up and staggering closer towards the young looking girl. He put his hands on her cold hips and…

 

SHLIIIIP!!!

 

β€œNNNNNGH… YEAH!!!!! THAT’S THE STUFF!!!!!!!!” Rukia moaned in ecstasy as she found Hitane’s half-hard dick shoved into her butt. β€œAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!” She glanced over her shoulder and smiled at him, pressing her two cheeks even tighter around his shaft. β€œI hope it’s warm enough for you! Cause your little friend’s gonna spend a little while in there!”

 

β€œHuff, huff, huff, huff…!! I… I think I can live with that!” grunted her client. His fingers sunk into the firm skin of her hips as he began thrusting his own hips against her. Little by little, his cock grew to its former glory again. Thrust by thrust! Inch by inch!

 

β€œYEEEEESS!!! SO GOOD!!!! STRETCH MY SLUTTY ASS TO THE MAXIMUM!!!!!!” the now white haired beauty shouted at him, β€œFUCK!!!! YOU’RE ALMOST AS BIG AS ICHIGO!!!! IT FEELS SOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!!!!!” the woman roared from the depths of her stomach as she threw her entire body against his. β€œHOW CAN THIS BE FOR A MERE MORTAAAAAAAALL!!????”

 

β€œEh? EEEH, EEEH, EEEEH!!!! Glad… glad you like it!” He responded after a while, not knowing who this Ichigo-guy was, nor what she meant when she called him a mere mortal. Hitane decided that it didn’t matter. β€œAs long as it makes you feel good…”

 

Over the loud clapping sounds of flesh against flesh, Hitane almost didn’t hear Rukia giggling, β€œHRRRRMM!!!!! IF… IF THIS WERE ALL ABOUT MY PLEASURE, THEN I’D BE A PRETTY BAD COURTESAN, DON’T YOU THINK?!” She asked him, while rolling her hips against his wild and uncoordinated swings. β€œSO WHY DON’T WE MAKE THIS A LITTLE BIT MORE ENJOYABLE FOR YOU…”

 

β€œHm? HMMMMM????? OOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAARGH!!!!!!!” Hitane roared so loud, Rukia thought even the people in the other rooms definitely heard him! His eyes nearly popped out of their sockets as Rukia jumped slightly into the air, before then spinning around on his cock!

 

She felt like meat on a skewer as his gargantuan dick twisted 180Β° inside of her before she let herself fall on her back in the warm water, β€œHIIIIIIIIIRRRRRMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!” She purred hoarsely. It almost felt as though her insides were being pulled out as Hitane fell forward against her, burying his dick all the way inside of her butt, before being pushed back again!

 

β€œOHHHHH, YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!” Rukia’s tongue lolled out of her mouth. Her eyes crossed. And her entire body spasmed in wild pleasure as she came right then and there! β€œCUMMMMMMING!!!!! I’M CUMMING SO FUCKING MUUUUUUUUUCH!!!!!!”

 

β€œAARRRRRRGH… You’re… you’re CRAZYYYYY!!!!!!!” her partner roared. He no longer held on to her hips, as he was now holding on to her tits and resting his entire body weight against her instead.

 

β€œAAHHHHAAA!!!! YOU DON’T LOOK AS THOUGH YOU DIDN’T LIKE IT!!!!” She pointed out before locking both her surprisingly strong legs around his waist. Pulling him even closer into herself, she smiled at him. β€œSO SHOW ME JUST HOW MUCH YOU LOVE PLOWING MY FAT ASSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!”

 

β€œOH!!! FUCKING!!! GOD!!!” Hitane was utterly helpless! He couldn’t do anything but watch as the woman moved both their bodies at once!

 

PLAP… PLAP! PLAP, PLAP, PLAP!!! PLAPPLAPPLAPPLAPPLAPPLAP!!!!!!

 

The wet sound of flesh hitting flesh grew faster and faster with every heartbeat! And he couldn’t do anything to stop it! A mix of her own orgasmic fluids and his precum flew off in every direction as she continuously buried his cock all the way in her tight ass! He felt as if he was her own personal plaything and completely at her mercy! And, strangely enough, he didn’t mind this sensation!

 

β€œAAAARGH… I’M… I’M GONNA CUM!!!!!!” He roared after half an eternity of rough sex!

 

β€œME TOO!!!!!! I’M CUMMING FROM HAVING MY ASS STUFFED SO VERY WIDE BY DICK!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!” Rukia arched her back, causing his dick to cock to stir around even more in her stuffed butt. It made the outline of his schlong in her stomach look even more pronounced. β€œCOME ON!!!! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR???!!! GIVE ME YOUR CUM ALREADY!!!!!!!! FILL ME UUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPP!!!!!!”

 

Both of them roared with one voice as they shared the same orgasm! Despite his impressive size however, the load that Hitane ultimately ended up shooting inside of her, came to an end far too quickly! A few trickles of his cum were squeezed out around his member. The two of them shook and trembled in ecstasy for a solid two minutes before Rukia finally opened her legs around his waist.

 

β€œHaaaaaa… Not bad for a guy who won his membership in the lottery!” the black haired vixen declared with a sardonic grin on her lips as she caressed her stomach. She felt all that cum sloshing around inside of her.

 

β€œAaaah, haaaa, haaaa, haaaa…!! Th- Thanks!” Hitane gave her a quick thumbs up. β€œAnd to think that I just strolled in because I needed a toilet…”

 

β€œSSSSSSHH!!!! No more talking!” Rukia decided as she then put her feet behind the back of his head. Before he could even say anything, she pulled him towards her moist and dripping pussy. β€œTime for round two and dessert, big boy!”

 


 

(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

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Ichigo Kurosaki
1 year ago

rukia so very hot

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago

Don’t you mean cool? Considering she’s in her Bankai and all XD?

Hiryu
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1 year ago

For those of you here who are just joining in reading this storyline, here’s a who’s who list of people currently working in the two rival brothels, as of this very chapter:

First, we have Kisuke Urahara’s Busteez Mansion of the Carnal Arts:

Kisuke Urahara {Owner and Founder}
Yoruichi Shihoin
Sui-Feng
Orihime Inoue
Yushiro Shihoin
Franceska Mila Rose
Jackie Tristan

And now for Retsu Unohana’s Palace of Harlots and Gigolos:

Retsu Unohana {Owner and Founder}
Toshiro Hitsugaya
Nellie Tu Odelschwanck
Isane Kotetsu
Hanataro Yamada
Lisa Yadomaru
Rukia Kuchiki
Tier Harribel
Nemu Kurotsuchi
Renji Abarai
Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez

As for who presently aren’t working in either {and in no serious order}:

Ichigo Kurosaki
Rangiku Matsumoto
Tatsuki Arisawa
Chizuru Honsho
Mizuiro Kojima
Keigo Asano
Riruka Dokugamine
Ikumi Unagiya
Kirio Hikifune
Shunsui Kyoraku
Ikkaku Madarame
Yumichika Ayasegawa
The surviving Quincy/Sternritter group {which consists of Meninas McAllon, PePe Waccabrada, Candice Catnip, Bazzard Black, Liltotto Lamperd, Giselle Gewelle with Zombie Bambietta Basterbine}

I hope this helps you all out! πŸ€“

Last edited 1 year ago by Hiryu
Whitis
Whitis
1 year ago

Idea, tired of Unohana and Urahara fighting over him Ichigo decides to open his own sex brothel/club/business and to teach them all a lesson.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
Reply to  Whitis

No.

Whitis
Whitis
1 year ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Eh, worth a shot.

Last edited 1 year ago by Whitis
Hiryu
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1 year ago

Unohana’s Palace of Harlots and Gigolos has officially hit the ground running in its grand opening night! And I got to tell you, I loved what I read. Because of this, it’s time for a very detailed analysis! πŸ‘πŸ€©

This was a very excellent chapter from start to finish, and every section was epically written! Not just with the overall story, but also the characters and the setting. πŸ‘

Speaking of the setting, let’s start off from there! The completed home for Unohana’s club has quite the layout going for it. Such as the first two floors for the general patrons and guests and everything else higher up for the platinum and VIP membership, and that’s a playground in itself. Plus the front desk and all the fancier and smaller details along with it. Nice to see there. πŸ€“

Which leads me to the meat of the chapter, the characters. Here we saw a good handful of people already working their first night in, such as Lisa, Harribel, Nemu and Toshiro. The latter two in particular got a good chunk of time to shine here, such as Nemu servicing a UB and being really nonchalant about seeing bigger cocks. Damn, girl! Show a little restraint! ROFL! 🀣 On the other hand Toshiro has his hands full with a group of needy cougars and MILFs. I kinda feel sorry for him, but I’m sure he can handle it. πŸ˜…

Before I forget, I really liked how the Madam of the club, Unohana herself, was entertaining her special guests and gifted them memberships at the same time, who were Kyoraku, the mayor of Karakura Town and most surprisingly her business rival Urahara, who isn’t enjoying this show one bit. Not gonna lie, I feel bad for the man being out shined by her in every way there, even though she’s clearly being the playful hostess here until she’s requested herself. Though she did suggest he should take notes as he could learn from seeing her brothel in action and could apply for his own club. I see what you’re doing, Retsu. 😏 Apart from Mila Rose, she’s one of my favorites in the story for a reason {I’ll share where they rank later!}. XD

And last, but certainly not least, we have the main event featuring Rukia and her client Hitane. This entire part is just plain outstanding!πŸ‘ŒEven though Hitane was just a regular human being who won his membership from a lottery, the fact he hung in there with Rukia, even in her Bankai form, is something to really commend and applaud. Though it was obvious who was in control here! That said, I really love the sexual side of things, especially the rough sex! Being nearly as big as Ichigo really helped him too! But I hope he’s ready for round 2, because Rukia certainly is. πŸ˜‰

Overall, this is definitely one of my favorite chapters in the story to date! And for very good reason! Matter of fact, it’s practically nearly perfect. Well done! πŸ’―

Looking forward to your next release! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

– Hiryu

Last edited 1 year ago by Hiryu
Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
1 year ago
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Dayum! Always nice to see the chapters I write bring out so much to talk about. I certainly enjoyed writing this story, with the Nemu, Toshiro, and Rukia parts being my personal highlights. I always thought Toshiro would be a hit for more older, mature women, so I gave him some time to shine here.

Happy to read that the chapter resonated with you so much. I really hope I wrote the sex like you envisioned!

Hiryu
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1 year ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Oh, as I hinted at in my analysis, I can confirm that you did! And it didn’t disappoint! πŸ‘ πŸ˜„

It actually went better than I expected it would, as well as your writing overall, so truly well done! 😁