Kumo Taking on Konoha


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Naruto stories)
Previous Story (Part VII): [LINK]
Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
Next Story (Part IX): [LINK]


(04:15 PM)

 

“Good evening, ladies and gentlemen, and welcome to another episode of our famous ‘Ranko Reviews,’ where we will talk about everything that has happened on our beautiful island paradise lately!” A man in a black tuxedo greeted the audience. “I’m Diethard Morgans, your host of the evening, and with me today is a man you have probably heard about by now! The man who only recently set foot on this very island, but already caused big waves! He single-handedly defeated the prior champion of the Carnal Arena in one round and had her begging in under a minute! If you haven’t heard his name yet, you must live under a rock! So please, give a warm welcome to our guest of the hour…”

 

AAAAA!!!

 

The camera went over the audience as the dark skinned man from Kumogakure entered the stage. Young girls and older women alike threw their panties towards him and begged him to fuck them, while the men in the audience complimented him for his flawless victory over Tsunade. A raised his one hand triumphantly into the air, the outline of his cock clearly seen through the black, skin tight shorts that he wore. He caught one of the panties in the air and looked at it for a moment before shoving it down his shorts. He then threw the frilly pink fabric back to the woman whom it belonged to. Before the woman even got her fingers on it, the other female audience members already started to gang up on her. Each and every last one of them wanted to smell the former Raikage’s dick!

 

BACK OFF, YOU BITCHES!!! THAT’S MINE!!!!

 

NO WAY IN HELL, YOU SLUT!!! I WANNA HAVE IT!!!!

 

DO EITHER OF YOU DUMB COWS EVEN REALIZE HOW LONG IT’S BEEN SINCE I HAD A REAL COCK TO FUCK?!?! GIVE IT TO ME!!!!

 

A sat down on a large and comfortable red couch next to the host’s desk while security tried their best to calm down the audience. After several long minutes where the camera focused on the cat-fight between the female audience members, Morgans spoke again. “Well, talk about an entrance! Though that’s probably something that you’ve grown used to ever since your grand debut here on Ranko, right?”

 

“Ugh… tell me about it! It’s as if they didn’t hear my declaration…” grumbled the dark skinned man as he leaned back against the couch, his muscular arms laying on the backrest and his legs wide apart, as if to tease his fans.

 

“Right, your declaration…” began the host and picked up a sheet of paper from the stack next to him, “Let’s begin with that, shall we?” He looked towards A, who simply nodded, gesturing to him to continue. “Right, before you sent the former champion, Tsunade, flying off the stage with your cum, you said that she was, and I quote, ‘Just another bitch who didn’t know her place.’ Is that truly your opinion about her, or was that just some dirty talk to get her and the crowd heated up?”

 

“Hm…” A stroked his blonde goatee as he pondered the question. After about 30 seconds, he finally responds with, “A little bit of both, I suppose. I value her as someone I once worked together with. She’s fierce, determined, and strong, that’s for sure.” A’s smile curled around his lips as he thought about all the stuff they went through, “But during sex, she’s just like almost every other woman I’ve ever met! One decent dicking is enough; then they’re on the ground, begging for more!” He said while leaning back against the couch, giving off a relaxed impression like he knows what he’s talking about.

 

“Interesting, interesting… Now that’s what I call big news!” Morgans nodded before smiling down at the audience, “Can you believe that, ladies!? ‘One decent dicking,’ he says…” He shook his head while the audience giggled and laughed at both the Raikage’s words and Morgans’ impression.

 

HARHARHARHAR!!!!!” The former Raikage’s own laughter echoed like thunder throughout the giant studio. He grabbed his cock and squeezed his member through the shorts that he wore. “Having the right tools for the job is quite helpful as well of course!”

 

Another wave of laughter went through the audience and even the host couldn’t help but chuckle because of the comment. Everyone’s eyes naturally wandered towards the visibly large cock that was tucked behind the black shorts. When everyone was silent again, Morgans continued with his program. “Yes, that might very well be true! But say, you mentioned how Tsunade is like almost every other woman during sex… Are there really women out there who are capable of handling that black beast?”

 

“Yes. Though I can probably count them on one hand.” He looked up at the white light above him. “To be honest though, I can only think of two at the moment; Samui and Karui. Two very passionate women from the same village as me who know how to treat and take a dick right. Just goes to show that not only are Kumo-cocks superior, but also Kumo-cunts!”

 

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!” the audience exploded into laughter, giving both Morgans and A time to take a sip of water.

 

“Did you ever encounter a girl or woman which you couldn’t conquer with your raw energy alone?” Morgans asked as he leaned forward on the table.

 

“No! Never!” replied the blonde simply. “All that is needed to make a girl cum is some rough and raw fucking! If you start strong and continue strong, you basically can’t lose anymore. Even the most faithful wife will succumb to her carnal urges and desires sooner than later if her partner is just minimally better than her husband!”

 

It was at this moment that Hinata stopped paying attention to the broadcast. The dark haired MILF stood in the center of a town further inland and had noticed the broadcast on her way towards her meeting with A. Several other people on the market place also watched the recording of yesterday’s “Ranko Reviews” on one of the large monitors that adorned the site of a large and towering office building.

 

“How can he say that stuff with such confidence?” asked Hinata rhetorically as she jogged out of the town center. Everything the man had just said was complete nonsense to her and she was certain that it was mere macho-talk to entertain the audience. “I’ll definitely have to talk with him about that!” Hinata said with determination in her eyes.

 

She reached her destination: a bar at the corner of the two busiest streets of the town. One street connected this town with the capital and the next town on the other side of the island, and the other led to the harbor or the jungle further inland. She pushed the door open and immediately spotted A. He sat with his back to her at the counter; two naked women were to his left and right and begged for his attention by shamelessly pressing their breasts against his body, whispering things into his ear that Hinata couldn’t hear.

 

“Back off already! I told you that I’m expecting someone!” grumbled the former Raikage and emptied a glass with a yellow liquid inside. “And sluts like you can’t even keep up anyways!”

 

“Oh, come on A-sama~!” purred the blonde on his right into his ear. “I’m sure that my tight little cunt can prove you otherwise!” she said as she grabbed his arm to rub against her pussy for emphasis.

 

“Don’t ya listen to dat broad!” said the dark skinned woman with an afro on his left as she tried to sit down on his lap. “Us people from the Land of Lightning have to stick together! After all…” she caressed his chin lovingly with one hand while tracing the outline of his cock with the other. “It takes a Kumo-cunt to know what a Kumo-cock needs, right?”

 

“Ehm, ladies?” began Hinata as she got closer towards them. “I think that’s my date you’re currently flirting with!”

 

“What?!”

 

“Get lost, you old hag. I saw him first! You can have him when he’s fucked me senseless!”

 

A looked over his shoulder and raised an eyebrow when he saw her, but simply shrugged, “You heard her! Get going already!” He ordered. The authority in his words gave no room for arguments. Both women hurried away with disheartened looks on their faces and Hinata sat down next to the muscular shinobi. “Why are you here? Where’s Naruto?”

 

“My apologies, Raikage-sama,” Hinata said as she bowed down slightly in her chair. It was hard for her to talk politely with the man, given the feelings she had after watching the broadcast, “He’s busy picking up my sister at the harbor and asked me to meet with you in his stead.” She tried her best to sound casual and to think about anything besides his false perceptions of how sex worked.

 

“Tsk. Who does that guy think he is?! First, promising to have some drinks with me, only to not even show up!” He looked pissed for a moment before his expression became a bit softer again. “Though, if it’s for a family member, then it’s something I can understand. What can I get you?”

 

She took a glance at the menu and the many colorful flasks along the wall, “I don’t know,” she pondered before answering honestly. “I never really was a fan of alcohol.”

 

“Hrm, I guessed as much!” grumbled A, slightly disappointed, “The whiskey here isn’t bad, but I’ve had better. I assume that the scotch would be a bit too much for you and the rest here doesn’t seem to be anything noteworthy either…” He paused for a moment when he found something on the menu that he didn’t recognize. “Hey, barkeeper! What’s the ‘Ranko Special’?”

 

A tall man in a black suit walked over to them. He had a black mustache and gelled back hair of the same color, with some strands of silver hair in them. “Ahhh, very good taste, Master A! The ‘Ranko Special’ isn’t particularly alcoholic and has a rather sweet aftertaste. What differentiates it the most from the other drinks on the menu however, is that it heightens the consumer’s arousal. If you’re particularly susceptible, it has you cumming in an instant. At worst, it highly stimulates you and has you ready for sex in under a minute,” he explained with a smile on his face. “What makes it similar to the other alcohols though, is that you’ll wake up with a serious hangover afterwards.”

 

“Really?!” A looked at the menu, not really believing the effects to be true. After a few seconds, he makes his decision. “I’ll try one.”

 

“A very fine choice, Master A! And you, Lady…?”

 

“Hinata.” Said the dark haired Kunoichi as she made her decision. “Sake’s just fine for me.”

 

“Sake! Very well!” The barkeeper turned around and reached for the different bottles.

 

“Not interested in trying out that ‘Ranko Special?’” A asked, shifting his chair so that he could look at her more easily without twisting his neck too much.

 

“I’m not too keen on experiencing whatever effects it has out in public,” She explained simply, crossing her legs and turning around on her chair as well, “We may have arrived on this island a few weeks ago, but I’m not too keen on trying out anything without Naruto-kun around.” Declared Hinata as an idea crossed her mind. “You know, an island like this is the perfect spot for us and other couples to strengthen their relationships!”

 

“Hmph… If you say so… And yeah, Kakashi mentioned how he asked Naruto for help because of some strange stuff happening here, so I doubt that he got the chance to test out any of this island’s… customs himself.” When the barkeeper offered him the drink, A took it wordlessly and took a careful sip from the pink beverage. His face contorted into a grimace. “Bah! Too sweet!”

 

“Thank you!” Hinata took her drink from the barkeeper and looked at A again. “What do you think? Isn’t this place perfect for people who love each other?” She asked, not going deeper into the stuff that forced Naruto to stay away from her.

 

“People don’t need to love each other to experience mind blowing orgasms.” He explained, taking another sip from his drink, “On the contrary, I believe that being here with someone you truly love makes it even harder with that many other beautiful people running around!”

 

“Why?” Hinata asked. She put the cup of sake to her lips and gulped it down in one go. “What does it matter if there are other people running around, when you are here with your fianc-”

 

“Ah, please!” A cut her short and waved her response off with his one arm, “If a girl here sees a man with a bigger dick than her husband, then she asks him to fuck her! Or vice versa. It’s that simple!” He then looked at the ceiling above as he thought about it. “Give it two weeks at best and any girl or boy will go for a partner with more experience or a better body than their current partner!”

 

“Seriously?! That’s what you think?!” asked Hinata in disbelief. “And I thought all that talk during that late night show was just there to entertain the crowd!”

 

HA! Harharharhar!!!” A erupted into laughter. Hinata blinked, both shocked and puzzled at what she just heard. Nevertheless, A continued, “I thought that something was off by the way you stormed into the bar… I assume that you don’t share my opinion of how sex works?”

 

Hinata shook her head. “No! Not at all! Sex between two people who love and care for one another is something that no other dick, regardless of seize or girth, can get close to! In fact, just today I saw a young couple that couldn’t get enough from each other, despite them both being rather unremarkable in terms of size!

 

“Mhm…” A nodded slowly, clearly not believing a single thing the MILF just said. “Obviously size isn’t the only thing, but come on… Don’t tell me that you were on this island for two weeks or so without getting plowed by Naruto, and not once did you think that getting fucked by another guy wouldn’t be nice!”

 

A vein popped on Hinata’s forehead, “That doesn’t mean that any cock would feel as good as Naruto-kun’s or even close to that!” She hissed back, her face was glowing red as a cherry.

 

“So you did think about it?!” He asked rhetorically, a triumphant glow in his eyes. “But tell me, is Naruto’s cock really so big that nobody else can compete, or is it really just love?”

 

“I told you! Size has nothing to do with it! I love Naruto and Naruto alone, and no dick will ever change that!”

 

HA! Care to prove that statement?” A asked her, the glow in his eye becoming more intense with each second.

 

WHAT!?” Hinata rose from her chair and slammed her hands down on the counter. Several other people in the bar turned around to see what caused the ruckus. “I’m not not going to get fucked by you to prove I’m right!!”

 

“Even more of a reason to put your statement to the test!” A rose up from his seat as well and looked down on the buxom Shinobi, “If love is truly so important for sex, then it wouldn’t matter how hard or rough I fuck you! Or how big my cock is! Right?” One could practically see the sparks of electricity that shot between their eyes.

 

Hinata didn’t reply immediately, but he could see how she was seriously thinking about it. “I…”

 

“Heck! We can go to a nice and secluded spot away from anyone and you can show me how unshakable your heart truly is! Nobody has to know, but you are free to brag about your victory afterwards if you want!”

 

She made her decision, “Gah! Okay!” Stepping in closer, she threateningly pressed a finger against the dark skinned man’s muscular chest. “But if you say one thing about this to Naruto-kun, you’re going to regret it!”

 


 

(05:30 PM)

 

The sound of water falling down a mountain and into a large lake echoed through the jungle, drowning out each and every other nearby sound. Smaller and bigger animals wandered through the maze of trees in their search for food here and there, but ignored them for the most part. The few panthers that threw glances in their direction were easily scared off by a simple glare from the former Raikage.

 

“And you’re really sure that nobody will see us?” Asked Hinata again as she looked in every direction to make sure that nobody else was around.

 

A had already begun stripping out of the black pants that he wore, revealing a speedo that clung neatly to his ass, “If you don’t wanna do this, you’re free to leave. However, that would mean that you’re scared to put your theory to the test… And I’m certain that you would be able to withstand my cock! After all, you don’t love me, right?!” He said in a mocking tone as he looked over his shoulder to see what she was doing.

 

Hinata still wore the sports shorts and the top that she had since morning. By now it was thoroughly soaked with her sweat and clung tightly to her slender, feminine body. “Tsk. As if I would ever love an arrogant muscle-man like you!”

 

“Harharharharhar!! That’s the spirit!” He watched as Hinata pulled the top above her head, letting her head sized tits spring free and jiggle enticingly in the moist jungle air. He whistled approvingly. “Now that’s what I’m talking about!”

 

“J- Jerk!” Muttered Hinata with a blushing red face as she tried to hide at least her nipples from the older man’s eyes. With her right hand she tried to pull down her shorts, but was stopped by A, who gestured for her to stop by simply raising his hand.

 

“No need to go that far! I mean, you’re totally not gonna succumb to your carnal urges either way, right? So just letting me blow my load over your tits should be enough to prove your superior ideals!” He said in a mocking tone as he lowered his speedo down to his ankles.

 

He turned around to face his partner for the day directly. His cock, while flaccid, reached well past his knees and swung in a hypnotic way from left to right with each step he took. Hinata’s jaw dropped open as she became aware just what a task it would be to take on this thick, dense cock! A musky smell spread through the area, clogging her nose as she gulped hard. A grinned at her and sat down on the mossy ground beneath, leaning against a giant boulder behind him.

 

“What are you waiting for!?” He asked her after a solid minute during which she simply stared at the massive piece of dark meat. “If you wanna make a point, then gawking at my cock all day won’t help you!”

 

“Ugh. Fine…” She said reluctantly and dropped down to her knees. The ginormous cock started to grow as she put her tits around its base. Taking a deep breath, she then slowly licked the underside of the hot meat, unsure how to handle such a beast. ‘I’ve sucked Naruto-kun before, but this…?!

 

Saliva began running down the veiny length of A’s cock as she got closer towards the tip. But the closer she got, the more he seemed to grow. After just under a minute, his cock was easily twice as long as her entire arm and four times as thick! The mushroom shaped head rose above her eyes as it continued to grow.

 

“Mmh, hm, slll, mwah, hrm, slk!!” Seeing that she was unable to reach the tip, Hinata settled for kissing and licking the part of his length directly in front of her face. He tasted just as musky as he smelled; a taste that quickly made her forget about all inhibitions she had prior as she pressed her tits tighter around the rock-hard shaft!

 

“Aaahhh!!! That’s the stuff!” A sighed as he leaned back even more against the boulder behind him. He looked up at the crystal clear sky and enjoyed the sensation of her tits around his dick. “But you know…?!” A mean grin spread across his face as he looked at Hinata’s flushed face. “I have my own point to prove, so forgive me if I get a bit rough!”

 

“Hm? Wha-!?!?!” Hinata couldn’t even finish her sentence as he grabbed her by her dark hair. He then somehow managed to shift their positions to such an extent that the tip of his cock now pressed against her lips. Her eyes looked like they could pop out any second now. “Wait! You can’t juUUUUUUUGH!!!!!

 

Using that brief moment where she had her mouth open, A pushed his cock past her lips and down her throat! A visible lump formed in her throat as the massive meat was forced further and further in!

 

HUUUUUGPH, GLRKKKKK, MWOOOOOPH, TOO MUSH!!!!!!” Tears formed in her eyes as she struggled for breath, “YOUW CAWK ISH TOO… ISH… I… AYE’M… AYE’M CUMMING!!!!!!!!” She howled in utter bliss, with herself starting to go cross-eyed. A continuous spray of pussy juice kept gushing out of her.

 

“Already?!” Asked A, seriously surprised with how quick it went. He kept fucking her face, using his hand around her head to shove more of his length past her lips. “Are you that new to oral sex, or is Naruto that much smaller than me?”

 

UUUUUUPPH, GLUKKKKKK, GUGGGGGHHHH!!!!! AYE’M CUMMING!!!! CUMMMMMMINGGGGGG!!!!! AYE’M CUMMING PHROM MUH MOUPHHHHHHH!!!!!!

 

“I’ll take that as a yes…” A said. Her throat distended even more as half of his cock disappeared behind her lips!

 

How?’ The world around Hinata turned hazy and blurry as she lost herself in the pleasure, ‘How can this feel so much better than sex with Naruto-kun???’ Finally, her eyes crossed and rolled back into her head as she came yet again. “AYE’M LOOOSHING MUH MIIIIIIIINDDDDD!!!

 

HARHARHARHARHAR!!!!! This could be almost funny if that wasn’t such a pathetic sight!” A’s balls slapped against her chin every time he threw his hips forwards. “The wife of the Hokage, losing to a cock from Kumogakure… Just imagine what your friends would say about you if they could see you like this!”

 

No! It’s not like that!’ She tried to vehemently argue in her mind, “HUGGGGG, PHUUUUGH, MUGUUUUUH!!!!

 

“What would your son say if he saw you like this… His own mother in the dirt in front of another man! Cumming each time he pushes his cock down her throat… Don’t you feel ashamed?” Letting go of her head, A spanked one of her tits. Both mounds of flesh jiggled like jello from the impact, making her cum even harder. He grabbed one of her painfully stiff nipples and twisted it between his fingers. “Say it!”

 

AHHHHHHHHH!!!!” Tears of pleasure and pain streamed down her face as she came harder than she had ever come before. Her pussy clenched like a vice around a dick that wasn’t there as spray after spray of her juices soaked her pants. “AYE’M SHOWWY BOWUTO!!! IT JUSHT PHEELSH SHOOO GUUUUHUUUDDDD!!!! MOMMY NEEDSH TO SHUCK THISH CAWK!!!!!

 

A gently patted her head and let a few inches of his dick slip out of her mouth, “You said that very well, slut! You’ve earned yourself a reward!”

 

UGH???” Hinata blinked in surprise while the first few drops of his precum kept flooding directly into her stomach. He pulled the rest of his cock out, resulting in a wet POP! that echoed through the jungle. “Whua-! Pleash… Lhet meh…”

 

“Silence!” A cut her short and spun her around. Her pants were thoroughly soaked by her pussy juices. He could clearly see the strings of her black thong digging deep into the folds of her neatly shaven pussy. In one swift motion, he tore both pieces of clothing to shreds and threw the remains over his shoulder. “Time to test if that fat ass of yours feels just as good as your mouth…!”

 

Just by him announcing his intentions, he managed to bring her back to reality, “Wait!” She felt the hot tip of his cock press against her tight asshole. “You can’t ju-”

 

“Going in!”

 

PLOP!

 

The world turned black…

 


 

(08:45 PM)

 

“Are all you Konoha whores that easily broken?!” asked the former Raikage as he walked through the jungle. Hinata hung over his shoulder like a potato sack; gallons of cum kept pouring out of her now gaping asshole. “At this rate, I wouldn’t be surprised if that Uchiha-boy’s wife is also waiting for a real cock to change her life!

 

“Kumo… Cock is…” Hinata muttered. A weak smile curled around her lips as slowly regained feeling in the rest of her body again. “… AMAZING!

 


(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

Subscribe
Notify of
guest
71 Comments
Inline Feedbacks
View all comments
Chuckubetcha
Chuckubetcha
3 months ago

I hate to be drag but have guys stopped this series entirley the bleach an MHA series are getting daily updates bit its been almost a month now. is it going on hiatus or something and with the whole poll thing you’re running I was led to belive it was going to mean more regular stories, an explanation would be nice

Rtenzo
Admin
3 months ago
Reply to  Chuckubetcha

I appreciate you being invested in this series and wanting more. More stories will be coming in July, maybe 1 before June ends. However, the poll is just a way for me to gauge what the audience wants in terms of story NOT posting schedule. This is because what I post is always changing, and I’ve been neglecting Bleach for a good while when it comes to new artwork.

anonymous
anonymous
3 months ago

if this was going to to be like, then whats the point of the poll? i feel very misleading

anonymous
anonymous
3 months ago
Reply to  anonymous

don’t get me wrong, its fine work, just don’t make a poll if your not going to follow it at all.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
3 months ago
Reply to  anonymous

Well, I’m the wrong person to ask this. I simply write the stories and have little to no influence over the artworks that I get from Rtenzo. In the end it all depends what people request from him on Patreon I assume. If people wanna see lots of artworks with Sakura, despite there being many people who voted for Hinata on a poll or something then that’s obviously a bit tricky. It all depends on him in this case.

anonymous
anonymous
2 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

That’s fine, i’m just don’t want to felt that i’m being mislead that’s all

Coro
Coro
4 months ago

Don’t take this as any insult towards your writing abilities they are very good, but this whole new timeline is just boring and plain nothing exciting just the same old stuff once again Sakura is a cock addict and Hinata occasionally cheats Sasuke isn’t big and Naruto is still and idiot with a large cock since Boruto and Sarada can’t star like they did in the last series this ‘new’ continuity just feels like a weak rehashing of the last continuity just without two of it’s leading members (I know they can’t appear in any meaningful lewd way due to rules) so that’s my gripe it’s just a new story with the same old stereotypes and it just feels a lot more slow paced. Again no disrespect toward you I think you did the best with what you had.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
3 months ago
Reply to  Coro

Yeah, I can understand where that mentality comes from. Though, I wasn’t the guy who wrote the previous Naruto stories. I actually would have liked to make the whole NTR thing way more perverted than it already is but I can see why for you readers it all feels a bit too similar to the old story.

Anonymous
Anonymous
4 months ago

I really like the artwork though I personally don’t enjoy the HinataxRaikage pairing at all. I thought it would’ve been really interesting to see Hinata stand triumphant over A given how her and husband are known for overcoming the odds. The story was very well written, but I simply wish to see Naruto shine in one of these fanfics for once. I would truly love to see a timeline where Naruto is the star and he isn’t betrayed by the person who loves him most throughout the entire franchise. Hinata’s character isn’t suited for this type of willful disrespect of her marriage in my opinion but she’s very well written in this story all the same. Overall this is incredible just not my cup of tea.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
3 months ago
Reply to  Anonymous

Glad to read your input. I appreciate it. And I can definitely see what you mean with the character of Hinata in this story. I’m personally pretty indifferent towards any of the Naruto main cast (Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata) and are a much bigger fan of the side characters like A, Shikamaru, Shino,… which is why I would like to include them some more. And since A is in this artwork already, I simply had to include him and his big-dick-energy somehow. As you said, it’s not everybody’s cup of tea but it’s what I have to work with.

Whitis
Whitis
4 months ago

So after all this Hinata wants to make herself and Naruto into sex perverts/super freaks? Because they have the bodies befitting Kumos all they need is the Kumo mindset.

Last edited 4 months ago by Whitis
Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Whitis

Nah. The last few times she had sex with Naruto were just really… middle of the line and she wants to improve that/revive it.

NatsuUzumaki
NatsuUzumaki
4 months ago

Well the wait certainly payed off, I thought that after those 3 hours whatever the Raikage and Hinata did she’d forget Naruto but reading the comments it looks like it won’t be that way which doesn’t bother me I don’t hate or like the pairing.

Although it’d be interesting that if you get some artwork of Hinata with a BBC or it’s noticeable that it’s the Raikage that she keeps going back to him either for things the Raikage does to her and tries them out with Naruto to spice up their love life or she just simply starts desiring the Raikages cock and he makes her his woman.

Either way this is my favorite chapter since I’m a sucker for Hinata getting a good fucking, hopefully we get more of her since I’m not a big fan of Sakura.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  NatsuUzumaki

I’m usually no fan of Sakura either but writing her as this cheating whore with nothing but big dicks on her mind makes her a lot better than she was in the real series. And it might be entirely possible that Hinata will see out the Raikage every now and then.

NatsuUzumaki
NatsuUzumaki
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

I agree, I’ll take a Sakura who wants nothing more than big dicks over what we got in the series.

I mean the Raikage x Hinata ship is getting bigger by the day and it just seems like a good excuse to have her seek him out for practice or release sexual frustration from while to while if more pictures are made of her with BBC, either way I’m interested in how she’ll go about reviving her sex life with Naruto and maybe helping Sakura handle bigger dicks like Narutos.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago

I wonder will Naruto ever know what Hinata and raikaige did together? And when will Hinata bring that passion from A fucking her and watching the couple back in her relationship with naruto? And will Hinata still love naruto? I am going to guess that A and Hinata will continue to fuck each other or am I wrong? And I hope that Sakura is going to finally fuck a big dick in the next chapter

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

To be honest, I have no idea if Naruto will find out about the cheating or not. Hinata will definitely bring that passion into her love life with Naruto as well, that’s for sure. As for Sakura, nothing is planned with her so far but I kinda doubt that she’s ready to take on a big dick that quickly.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Will hinata still love Naruto? Or will she leave him for A?

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

She still loves Naruto.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Okay but will hinata seek out A to fuck occasionally? Because you said that hinata and A will sometimes fuck each other right?

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Sigh…

When I get an artwork that has Hinata with a BBC, then I might go with that, yes. Otherwise I’m probably teaming her up with Naruto or simply any other guy that is seen in the artwork.

Si-Chan
Member
Si-Chan
4 months ago

Oh great story i loved it. I wish there would be more sex scenes but that’s fine. Also it would be hot for someone see them fucking. Maybe sakura 😉
Keep up the great work.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Si-Chan

Thanks for the praise, I appreciate it.

Eye of Glass
Eye of Glass
4 months ago

Looking forward to more Hinata and A.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Eye of Glass

Glad to hear that you like them.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago

Will Hinata be like Sakura? Or is she going to occasionally give in to BBC from time to time? And will Naruto know about what Hinata and raikaige did together? When will you know when Naruto is going to fuck Hinata?

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

No, Hinata’s not going to be like Sakura. She won’t seek out bigger cocks in the same way that Sakura does, instead she might try to bring the passion back into her love life with Naruto and those two events (getting fucked by A in this chapter and watching the couple in the last) are the perfect motivation in that regard.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Okay I get it and will she occasionally give in to BBC from time to time? When is the next chapter? When do you know that naruto and Hinata are going to fuck? Also Sakura?

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Sorry, I have no idea when the next Naruto chapter will come. Much less if it features Sakura, Hinata, or any of the other girls. And if the artwork has Hinata with a BBC, then she surely has sex with them.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Okay thank you and Hinata will occasionally from time to time give in to BBC like you said if there’s a artwork of Hinata with BBC

Kielian
Kielian
4 months ago

I feel like if someone can beat the kumo sex streak it would need to be someone with a “go with the flow attitude”. Because how I see it with most of these stories is that the more arrogant and prideful someone is male or female the easier they are to break like punching through a surface appearing tough but with the durability of styrofoam. Even the legendary kumo man can fall into this trap if their pride and arrogance turn to frustration if what they do doesn’t meet their expectations. Instead of holding strong like a stone one must bend and adapt like rubber.

The question is who can have that mindset.

Last edited 4 months ago by Kielian
Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Kielian

Very good question. I already mentioned two girls who are able to handle the Raikage’s dick but didn’t come up with others so far.

Kielian
Kielian
4 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

That’s the problem with most females in a shonen series. They need to appear tough and/stubborn otherwise they are criticized as being annoying or weak. If I had to look outside the box I would think of tsubaki from soul eater. She has an accepting nature and as seen in the manga she is actually fairly perverted on the inside as seen in the book of ebon arc.

ag
Member
ag
4 months ago

I hate this pairing… But the story is so good despite it.

Hate to give you a “low” score but 5/5 for technical, so a 6/10 overall for me.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  ag

Like I said to the other guys: if the artwork depicts Hinata with a Kumo guy, then that’s what I have to write! I can’t have the story be magically be about Naruto when he’s not even in the pic.

Hey
Hey
4 months ago

Also is there anyway of seeing the old stories again or no way at all

ag
Member
ag
4 months ago
Reply to  Hey

You can subscribe to Sailorio’s patreon and the old stories written by him. I think Akrononym said he didn’t keep back-ups of his old stuff? and S22 hasn’t posted since the purge.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Hey

Yeah, what ag said. Although S22132 posted some stories from time to time.

Hey
Hey
4 months ago

Yeah personally I really hate Hinata and raigake paring but will there be other series by other writers like the old one with different plots but I think Hinata is great but not of fan if she is going to become like Sakura cause you know naruto is a nice guy while sasuke is a guy who tries to kill Sakura multiple times and idk how I feel about it

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Hey

I know what you mean. But if the artwork depicts her in awe with a Kumo-cock in front of her, then that’s what I have to write in the story. If there’s an artwork where she fucks a guy Amazon style, then I can write her in a more dominant way. And to ease your mind, Hinata’s not going to be exactly like Sakura. She still loves Naruto and doesn’t seek out big dicks in the same way that Sakura does.

Chuckubetcha
Member
Chuckubetcha
4 months ago

So I’m just curious is this series going to focus on Naruto or what, as in he finds out about hinata fucking the rikage which gives him a sort of wake up call and he resolves to surpass A and take back hinata but in doing so sort of ends up becoming like him as in much more uninhibited and willing to submit anyone to him, something like using sage mode wich makes him have a bigger dick but also makes him more primal well something along those lines anyway. Just wondering since it seems like this series is just going in the same direction as the cancled ones where you barley see naruto have any central importance at all. Having said that however I understand the stories you write depend on the pictures you get so it may just be an arbitrary thing to ask. And lastly are the chapters going to be coming up a bit faster from on.
And as always enjoyed you’re work.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Chuckubetcha

Sorry to disappint you but so far there is nothing planned with Naruto. At least not in a “get his wife back” kinda way. He’ll obviously get his own time to shine qhen the artworks with him come. But how it will be done is up in the air. I also don’t know when the next Naruto story will come. Couple of Bleach stories to write first and perhaps some new One Piece but we’ll see about that…

Last edited 4 months ago by Mr. Akrononym
Dutchshadow
Dutchshadow
4 months ago

this is getting predictable , and as an result just boring.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Dutchshadow

Reasonable reaction.

Adrian AL
Member
Adrian AL
4 months ago

Buen capítulo de Naruto 8/10

Por fin regresó Hinata la puta tras ese comentario final de ella en el capítulo es obvio que en próximas entregas veremos más esta transformación y rendirse y terminar un poco como Sakura aunque calro Naruto esta ahí y le hace competencia un poco A solo que creo que veremos más de Hinata sola que teniendo sexo con Naruto lo más obvio para dessarrollo en solitario aún así quien escriba las historias no me preocupa ya que todas las historias de las series van por el mismo rumbo solo que con cambio pequeños que no me afecta para nada SIGAN ASI

PD: Se que no va aquí esto pero espero que liberen un poco más Shokugeki no Soma

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Adrian AL

Hey, happy out the high score! Glad to hear that you like it. And just to be clear, while Hinata will have some moments here and there where she will get fucked by some big black dicks (I mean, if the artwork has her with a BBC, then that’s what I have to write after all), the cheating stuff will still be mainly done by Sakura.

Firedragon_slayer (nalu)
Firedragon_slayer (nalu)
4 months ago

Hmmmm interesting story, I am a bit disappointed in hinata for losing so quickly but I guess always needs to remain strong. The story and build up was pretty great as hinata witness a nice live sex scene which was hot and the review of the raikage discussion over how easy tsunade is was good, I don’t think Sakura has a chance when she runs into the raikage. The sex fell a bit flat for me as hinata should have shown a bit more endurance, but still overall a good 8/10 despite my hatred for hinata/raikage

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago

Sorry to hear that you didn’t like the pairing or the sex. I guess it’s not for everyone. Still, thanks for the high score! I appreciate it!

SakuraSider
SakuraSider
4 months ago

I totally agree with you, the instant loss was really disappointing. Isn’t it weird how other MC’s like Deku and Ichigo have the biggest dicks in the storyline but the Raikage always outshines Naruto? I just feel like Naruto shouldn’t always get the short end of the stick in these stories. The poor guy is already viewed as an idiot, a bad father and a neglectful workaholic!(I clearly don’t agree with Boruto’s depiction of the Number One Knucklehead Ninja but that’s life.)

To sum up this annoying, utterly useless rant, please let Nanadaime-sama have a MASSIVE TENTH TAIL and please don’t make Hinata a cheating slut, a wifely slutty slut is fine, and please let Naruto be the Hero he worked his ass off to be, by getting all the bitches and showing A he’s been surpassed.

Flinchin
Flinchin
4 months ago

Sakura isn’t just going to be a slut for BBC but any massive dick she can get like Naruto’s right? I wouldn’t be suprised if afterwards she left Sasuke and joined Naruto as his cumdump, second wife, fuck pet, or whatever.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Flinchin

Well, if we’re going by sheer size, then her obvious place would be at the side of the Raikage (and I would be more than happy to make that happen one day).

Flinchin
Flinchin
4 months ago

I hope you do Whitis LSP idea because I kind of find it interesting.

Last edited 4 months ago by Flinchin
Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Flinchin

I certainly like the idea as well. If I manage to pull it off is something else entirely.

souljamantwn
Member
souljamantwn
4 months ago

Absolutely fantastic! The Hinata and A pairing is a guilty pleasure of mine, and It’s fun to see someone like him who talks a big game and can actually back up his words as well.

Hopefully it won’t be to long until Sakura finally gets the dicking she’s been desperately craving for as well.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

Yeah, having Sakura answer to her “true calling in life” as a slut for BBC is something that I can’t await myself. Happy to hear that you like the story!

Narufan
Narufan
4 months ago

I wonder if we’ll see A taking Hinata somewhere to fuck her brains out in the next chapter

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Narufan

Who knows? So far I have nothing new about Naruto.

Hiryu
Member
Hiryu
4 months ago

Wow! That was quite frankly a really telling chapter!

Hinata was the latest to fall victim to A and his Kumo BBC and she already broke. And how it happened pretty much told the whole story. But overall I really liked how it went.

More so with the interview A had and the sex and love philosophy clash with him and Hinata too. That was fun to read. And then the boobjob and blowjob that quickly became one-sided. I really didn’t think she’d break this quickly. I can only imagine how Hinata’s marriage with Naruto will endure.

Overall, truly good work. 👍 Can’t wait for what’s next. 😎

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Hiryu

To be honest, EVERYONE (or at least every girl) can’t withstand the glory of A’s dick XD. It’s not that Hinata is weak-willed or anything… A is just better! And with a dick like that he can prove it quite easily!

Whitis
Whitis
4 months ago

Two questions, if you end up doing my whole permanent growth business/store would both Naruto and A have pretty massive LSP. Also would Sasuke be one of those few with minuscule LSPs because I can honestly imagine them both going and Sakura getting her hopes up only to learn how minuscule Sasuke’s LSP is and Sakura being one of those people who forced Sasuke to frequent that place despite knowing his enchantments will only be temporary. Also on note LSP affects balls to.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Whitis

Those aren’t question (at least you didn’t phrase them as such) but sure. Sasuke’s pretty disappointing in each aspect of his cock while Naruto can cheat his way to become the biggest dick. A on the other hand doesn’t need to do that, nor does he want to. He had the biggest cock naturally and doesn’t need any cheap tricks to fuck women into submission.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
4 months ago

When is Naruto going to fuck Hinata so that he can prove to hinata that he is better and put some sense of loyalty in her?

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

When the artwork allows for it. So far I have nothing with them.

Whitis
Whitis
4 months ago

10/10. I hope Naruto has his own “rude” personality. That he’s been holding back and once he hears about what happened a switch goes off and he fucks some loyalty into Hinata.

Last edited 4 months ago by Whitis
Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Whitis

I kinda doubt that Naruto has a rude side but who knows… Happy about the high score.

Last edited 4 months ago by Mr. Akrononym
attractdistract
Member
attractdistract
4 months ago

I loved this chapter! A’s rudeness and arrogance was a perfect contrast to the thin defense Hinata put up, and I’m glad to see that defense get beaten so easily. Now she understands A’s words weren’t just macho talk, since she came so hard just from having her mouth used. Even better, she admitted that she needed to suck him off, and A had the pleasure of stuffing her with every inch.

Fat Konoha asses are made for big, long Kumo cocks

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago

Hahahaha. Glad to see you so overly energetic about it. It’s a pleasure to write these girls cheating on their husbands with some really big cocks, although I probably can’t go as all-out as I want sometimes.

Han
Han
4 months ago

Hope that we get more A

Idk but i like his more “rude” personality and this chapter was just fun to read

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Han

Yeah, some really rough and tough guys are a rarity in most stories, so I’m looking forward to do more with A and maybe some characters from other series.

Buddy
Buddy
4 months ago

Love this! Although I wish we saw a full blown sex scene between them. I’m really looking forward to Hinata’s development, where does she go from here? She succumbed more than I thought she would, I’m kind of surprised how superior A/Kumo cock is to Naruto’s, since she thinks just giving a blowjob to A was way better than sex with Naruto.

I wonder how badly this will effect her relationship with Naruto, I’m a Naruhina fan but I wonder if there’s any going back for her? If sex with Kumo cocks are so superior couldn’t this wreck her marriage? Maybe she’ll compromise and she’ll stay with Naruto but only on the condition than she can take extended vacations to Kumogakure when she feels like it.

Mr. Akrononym
Member
Mr. Akrononym
4 months ago
Reply to  Buddy

Don’t worry. So far, only Sakura is set to fall heads over heels in love with big dicks. Hinata will also have to occasionally give in to the BBC desire when the artwork calls for it but it’s mostly gonna be Sakura.