Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Carnal Arena Carnage


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Naruto stories)
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Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
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After saying farewell to his former students, Kakashi Hatake began marveling at the sights around him as he continued looking for his women. Sandy white beaches, gorgeous palm trees and beautiful, buxom women. He wasn’t usually someone to boast but he had to admit – the Ranko Island resort had been a pretty big success!.

 

The island had consistently received rave reviews from all the attractions, food and drinks available that could cater to all palates. And not to mention, all the sex! You couldn’t go a whole minute before seeing people go at it, be it in a hotel, on a beach, in an alley or just flat out in the center of a crowd!

 

Certainly not the most conventional of retirements…’ the white haired man thought before smiling ‘but one that would make Jiraya-sensei proud’. The fond memories he held of his old teacher and friend put a spring in his step as he approached his destination – the island port.

 

At the port, there were many large cruise ships stationed – each able to carry about 200 people each in luxury and class. Within the mass of people from those departing a ship that just docked, he was easily able to make out the person he came to meet.

 

“A! Glad you could finally make it!” Kakashi exclaimed in greeting as he held up his fist.

 

“Glad to be here myself!” A replied, fist bumping Kakashi before making a handshake.

 

A had maintained his tall physique and intimidating demeanor with his muscular abs protruding out of the gap between his white robes. He looked at his friend with a smile before turning around himself to take in the surroundings.

 

“The view IS impressive, I’ll give you that much!” he boomed with a hearty laugh, startling a few other arrivals around him. “So this is an island paradise of sex” he exclaimed after noting the various couples fucking in the open area. One girl was bent over against a gate getting pounded by a thick cock whilst another girl watched. “Kind of refreshing after seeing the same old scenery back in the Hidden Cloud everyday. Speaking of which…” his face contorted into a grin, “I hope that you weren’t exaggerating about your island, Kakashi.”

 

“Why don’t you come along and see for yourself?” Kakashi replied confidently as he began walking. A then began following him with an amused look.

 

A had grown bored in his own retirement. Now that his right-hand man, Darui had become Raikage, he spent his days with little or nothing to do – a terrible combination with his inherent anger and lack of patience. After hearing about how well off Kakashi was from his good friend and rival Naruto, he wanted to get a slice of the fun.

 

It had been many years since he had been with a woman who could handle his dick’s incredible size and girth. With all of his partners in the Hidden Cloud breaking too easily he was forced to learn a jutsu to supress his dick size considerably so he could at least have a decent time fucking – though most women still gave up exhausted after one round. Not to mention they could never handle A going up their butts, so it was always vaginal sex. The prospect of an island of sex where he could finally unleash the beast was far too tempting to pass up! Surely at least ONE woman should be able to take him on!

 

The former Kage’s caught up on current events from both villages and exchanged stories along the way. A was curious about rumors he heard about two former Kage’s staying here. Kakashi then explained the situation to him about how the two were working off debts and his search for them.

 

“So, the hero’s son is shaping up to be as talented as him? These young’uns are starting to put us to shame!” A laughed, making those nearby mistake his laughter for thunder and scaring them.

 

“Possibly. He’s definitely more of a brat from what I’ve heard though. Him and his squad are staying back at the village to help keep the peace.”

 

“After this trip, I’d like to go and meet him and gauge his prowess for myself. Maybe get a chance to spar with Naruto when the man gets a break.” A remarked with a nod. He held Naruto in the highest regard after his efforts in the war, just like his father before him. The former Raikage did enjoy a good fight!

 

“You might get your chance sooner than you think. Naruto and his wife, Hinata, plan to come to the island soon.” He then sighed “He plans to leave a shadow clone back at the village to cover for him though. It’s not easy being a leader.”

 

The pair then walked past a couple of men laying on the side of the road. They looked completely exhausted and didn’t have much energy to move.

 

“You guys alright?” Kakashi inquired. “There’s a bar close by that sells good energy cocktails. Assuming you had too much fun?”

 

“More like completely drained!” one of the men replied, barely able to bring his upper body up off the ground so he could face Kakashi. “That woman’s a damn succubus! Shouldn’t expect less from a former Kage though.”

 

“Kage you say?” said A intrigued. “What was this woman like?”

 

“She took two of us up her pussy and deepthroated the other like it was nothing! Her blonde hair and huge titties are something else man!” said the man, looking eerily blissful as he recalled the event. “You’ll find her in the arena if you’re interested. Good luck though, you’ll need it!”

 

“Arena?” A asked, turning towards Kakashi.

 

“The Carnal Arena” Kakashi began. “It’s a sex arena where guys can take on a girl with people watching. Easy way for girls to make money too, provided they have the skill. So that’s where Tsunade went.”

 

“A battle eh? If the Slug Princess can drain these 3 then she might prove amusing. Can you sign me up?” A asked.

 

“Sure thing!” the white haired man replied as he reached into his pocket and started dialing his phone. After a very short conversation, he returned it to his pocket and faced A.

 

“You’re in luck, turns out she just beat her last opponent and they’re still looking for a guy who can beat her.” He then started walking, urging A to once again follow. “Only a short walk from here”.

 


 

(6 minutes later)

 

“Here we are! The Carnal Arena!” Kakashi declared and the two came to a stop. They were before a large stadium with a white entrance gate, emboldened with ‘XXX’ written above it in large, golden letters.

 

“This is your first stop. In here we have a sex arena that can house around 17k seats.” Kakashi explained as they walked through a long corridor. “Men try to take on the current female champion in a sex match. The Champion can take on as many men at once as she wishes. Victory is yours if you get your opponent to tap out or unable to move. No injuring your opponent, though you can be rough of course. You’ll be going up next. Our current champion is the Leaf’s very own Slug Princess herself, Tsunade!”

 

“Oh? Not bad.” A remarked with a grin as they walked past Tsunade’s promotional poster. Her boobs were massive and at least five times bigger than her head and she was pulling a peace sign. “She’s grown since we last met. Let’s hope she has improved.”

 

“You’ve fucked before?” Kakashi asked the dark skinned man. “How did it go?”

 

“Heh!” A replied with a smirk. “You’ll just have to wait and see. I’d advise you get a stretcher ready though.” he began taking his robes off as they approached the gate leading into the center of the arena, leaving his long black shorts on. Loud music was seeping through the doors, “I want to see if I can finally have some fun with this bitch!”

 

CRASH!

 

He pushed open the doors with enough force to break them off. The arena became silent as the heads of everyone in the audience turned towards him. The spotlights shone down and illuminated A in the otherwise dark arena. He felt the gazes of thousands of people, some recognizing him and others confused. He sprinted down the walkway and vaulted over the ropes and into the ring, causing a dent in the floor where he landed. The audience reacted with a mixture of applause and awe.

 

“Who the heck is this guy? He broke the doors off!”

 

“The Princess might finally meet her match!”

 

In the square ring also stood the MC and the referee. His opponent however, was currently straddling the last challenger. Her massive boobs were covering his face and covered in sweat. Upon viewing A’s entrance into the ring however, she stood up facepalmed.

 

“I swear some things never change. Even if you are the former Raikage, must you be so flashy?”

 

Tsunade now stood in the ring with only a small sized pair of shorts covering her lower half. The former Hokage had maintained her good looks over the years with her blonde hair gleaming in the light. She had wiped the sweat and cum from her massive melons which swayed as she approached the center of the ring to meet her opponent, “Kakashi told me my opponent would be someone special, but I never expected you. Just as well, I was getting bored with these 11-inch challengers thinking they can take me on!” she boasted before eyeing A up and down. “You look well, glad to see you’ve stayed in shape.”

 

“You too Princess. Those tits seem to be bigger than the last time.” A replied, his focus on the bountiful white breasts pressed up against him, “Let’s see if you can handle what I’ve got in store for you.”

 

Oh?!? It appears our next challenger is none other than former Raikage, A the Unruly! Looks like this show is about to have an explosive climax!” the MC roared into the microphone in his hands, hyping up the audience for the upcoming match.

 

That’s one way to put it.’ A sneered.

 

The referee then walked up and had both participants stand to either side of him.

 

“Now…” the referee began, “you both know the rules. I want no foul play. The use of Jutsu’s are permitted as you are both shinobi but any injury incurred from intent will lead to an instant disqualification. You both have 5 rounds with each round lasting 10 minutes. Being unable to continue, tapping out or exiting the ring will be seen as a loss meaning the last one standing is the winner. If you both last until the end of the final round, then whoever came the least is declared the winner. Is that clear?”

 

“No problem!” A replied.

 

“Crystal!” replied the former Hokage, “Though 5 rounds is way more than I need to finish this.”She then grabbed the microphone and roared into it, ”THIS MATCH WILL END IN TWO ROUNDS! I WILL MILK THIS MAN AND MAKE HIM TAP OUT HERE AND NOW!

 

The audience then erupted into shouting and applause and the hype instantly spread across the arena. The flashing lights in the stadium seemed to mirror the crowd’s excitement.

 

A was a man known to let his temper get the better of him, so Tsunade intended to rile him up and make him easier to take on. What she miscalculated however is how over these peaceful years, A had managed to channel his raging anger into a fiery competitive spirit. A was still maintaining his calm and simply responded with a confident sneer towards Tsunade’s claims, walking to his corner of the ring and waiting for the match to start. He had hopes that she could live up to her bravado after all!

 

The MC then started the countdown.

 

3!

 

Tsunade took off her skirt, exposing her ass for the audience to see and started forming a hand seal with one hand.

 

2!

 

A also took off his shorts, allowing his dick to finally be set free. The 24 inch long, thick as an arm black member began dangling like a pendulum from his body. Something which his opponent noticed immediately…

 

1!

 

“W-w-what the fuck!?! Since when was he that big?!?!?” exclaimed a now panicked Tsunade, unconsciously taking a step back, ‘He’s even bigger than Kakashi! By A lot!

 

GO!

 

“Wai-” began Tsunade but it was too late. Although A’s speed might pale in comparison to the Leaf’s Yellow Flash, he is still considered to be one of the fastest shinobi to ever exist. He bolted to the other side of the ring before Tsunade could blink. Before she realized it, she had been swept onto her knees and against the ropes. Upon seeing her opponent’s massive member in her face, she instinctively opened her mouth in a mixture of anticipation and fear. A saw his chance and shoved his dick in as far as it would go down her throat. Saliva and pre-cum began raining on the floor around them as the face-pumping began.

 

GLUHG! GLUHG! GLUHG!

 

For Tsunade, the sound of the dark pole going down her throat was more deafening than the music or shouts of the crowd in the arena. This was not a fight. She was just being used to get her opponent off.

 

But she loved it!

 

Her thighs couldn’t help but wiggle from her pussy becoming a loose faucet and lubricating itself in anticipation.

 

How can any woman hope to resist this!’ she thought. ‘I’m about to cum and he hasn’t even fucked me yet!

 

Tsunade looked up and shuddered. She could see her opponent wearing a smug grin and looking down on her. It was obvious why though. A could see Tsundade squirming and rubbing her thighs together.

 

“Maybe you would prefer, THIS!”, A shouted as he picked up Tsunade with ease and spun her upside down, her pussy now right in front of his face whilst she still had her mouth stuck on his dick.

 

He then got to work on fingering her soaked pussy and playing with her clitoris, sending clear liquid flying. This sent the blonde woman over the edge as she was completely at the mercy of her opponent!

 

CUMMMINNGGGHHHHH! DOHNT SCHTOPPPPP!!” she cried, though some of her words got caught on the massive black pole still in her throat.

 

There it is!!! The first one to cum this time is the champ herself! The challenger reaalllly knows his stuff! Is this the end of the line for the Slug Princess or will she be able to crawl back from this!??” boomed the MC’s voice across the arena’s speakers.

 

“Hurry up and lube me up faster bitch!” A shouted with a raised hand before bringing it down with fierce speed on her defenseless ass cheek…

 

CRACK!

 

The sound of his hand connecting with her flesh sounded much more like a lightning strike than a spank! Tsunade was not expecting such force and neither was her pussy.

 

OOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!” she howled once more as she came uncontrollably, twitching whilst upside down and in her opponent’s grip.

 

“Hmph! Cumming just from one spank. How unsightly!” A roared before dropping his opponent. As she suddenly fell back down to the floor, Tsunade reached back and clung onto A’s massive dick, helping her break her fall. She then instinctively resumed sucking, trying to at least get A to cum on her face from foreplay. However, her opponent had other plans.

 

“That seems to be a good enough warm up,” said the deep voice looming over Tsunade. “Glad to see the Legendary Sucker at least has her throat going for her!” A laughed before wrenching his dick out of her mouth with lightning speed, causing her to cough successively. After a few moments, she looked up at A.

 

“H-heh. I sure hope you don’t think that’s enough to beat me you thick dicked bastard!

 

Her defiant spirit caused the crowd to yell in approval. They were certainly getting fired up at the prospect of seeing a new champion being crowned.

 

“That’s more like it!” A replied. “Now it’s time to test that pussy bitch!” A grabbed her by the legs and flung her on her back with the same speed demonstrated earlier before getting her into a mating press.

 

As he lined up his dick with both hands, he could sense Tsunade’s worrisome gaze upon it. He looked her straight in the eyes with a sneer, causing his mustache to also curl up.

 

“D-do your worst!” Tsunade declared, knowing A could see through the bravado she was putting on. She came here to earn money for Kakashi quickly after hearing the job details. She was able to take on many opponents before and conquered many dicks. None however, had caused her to feel such pleasure just from a deepthroat!

 

Eventually, A could not wait any longer and thrust himself into her hole, a warm pleasure surrounding the head of his long cock. His pleasure however, would soon be short lived.

 

He hadn’t even started thrusting his entire length or fully enjoyed the pillowy white breasts in his face before his opponent started screaming, “UOOOOOGHHH I CAHHHNNNTTT! ISSSSSSS TOOOO MUGGGGGGH! IMM SORRRRIIIIIGGH!!” howled the blonde woman, furiously hammering the ring floor for dear life and her body convulsing from consecutively cumming in the span of a mere minute.

 

WE HAVE A WINNER!!!” shouted the MC as the referee ran over and lifted up A’s arm. “Challenger A has triumphed over Tsunade, the champion in just one round!!!

 

Her pussy had been forced wide open to accommodate the length leaving it gaping open after A had pulled out, a flood of pussy juice erupting out and some hanging on to his cock, making a sticky trail.

 

“Hmph!” A grunted in disappointment. He then grabbed the mic from the MC and made his own announcement, “Once again, another bitch who didn’t know her place, thinking that she could take me on and lost pitifully!” he glanced down towards the still twitching Tsunade.

 

I couldn’t even enjoy myself or go all out against such a pitiful woman!” he then picked up his huge dick with one hand and walked towards his opponent, “Let this be a lesson to everyone! This is how a real man fucks! I’m ready to take on any challenger! But know this!” He steadied himself and aimed his beast at Tsunade’s face on the ground, “Do NOT disappoint me like this slut did! This is what happens to pathetic whores who can’t even last one round!!!” he roared as he blasted Tsunade with a raging torrent of viscous, white cum. The force was so much it pushed her out of the ring and onto the floor, covering her from head to toe and making her already white body take on a paler shade.

 

“Ughhh… Akghhk…” bubbled the woman through the cum covering her mouth and entering her throat. She had been truly and utterly defeated! Reduced to a pathetic, limp state and drenched in cum in front of thousands. A team of medical ninjas did their best to wipe away the cum from her body and carried her away on a stretcher.

 

Up until that point, the crowd had been dead silent but after A’s victory speech and final act of putting his opponent in her place, they erupted into cheers, whistles and shouts of encouragement from men and women alike.

 

“Great show, Champ!”

 

“Show them what a real man looks like!”

 

“Kumo cock rules!”

 

After his declaration, he picked up his clothes and dressed himself before walking back towards the entrance gate. A mildly annoyed Kakashi was there to greet him.

 

“You do realize I need Tsunade to keep making money for all the bills she owes me, right?” he sighed, “By the looks of her after that cum cannon of yours, looks like she’ll take a week to recover.”

 

“Worry not!” A responded, “I’ll send someone around later with some funds. That being said…” he continued, turning back towards the arena “I expected more of a challenge. I thought I could finally let loose in this place, but the slug bitch is even worse of a fuck than I remember.” the annoyance in his voice became visible on his face in a scowl.

 

“That’s probably my fault for going too hard with her.” Kakashi shrugged. “I’m telling you though. Ranko Island is the place you’ll find women that can keep up with you. And after your little declaration there, I know you’ll soon be swimming with partners.”

 

“I damn well hope so!” A grunted, “I’ll be in touch. Going to go and explore for a bit.” he fist-bumped the white haired man before seeing himself out, helping himself to some of the fruit on display on the way, “Food’s tasty though!”

 

Kakashi went to the first aid office which was a few seconds away from the entrance. There he saw Tsunade lying in one of the beds looking exhausted. She had been cleaned up but barely had any energy left to move.

 

“Looks like A put you through the ringer.” laughed Kakashi. “When do you think you can move?

 

“Ughh…” groaned the blonde woman as lifted her upper body up. “Give me 5 hours of sleep and I’ll be back to normal. My body isn’t sore, mainly just exhausted. That damn A… I’ll teach him not to look down on me…”

 

“Good to hear. I’ve got some work lined up for you with D. After taking on A, this should be a walk in the part for you.”

 

“Yeah, yeah, whatever. Now let me sleep!” She turned over in the bed so her back was facing him. “Can’t believe I lost so humiliatingly in front of everyone…”

 

“Now, now. No need to sulk. Your favorite student and her husband arrived on the Island recently so i’ll let you say hi to them later before you work for D.”

 

“Sakura, eh? It’s been a while. Hope her and her bonehead husband are doing good.” said Tsunade as she finally let exhaustion take over her and fell asleep. Kakashi made sure she was comfortable before heading off.

 

Ripples make waves after all, and after all that A…’ Kakashi thought, ‘you may have started a tsunami!


(Story by: Azzlover)

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Azzlover
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2 years ago

This was a very fun scenario to write! First time writing such heavy sex and I wanted to give A a bit more personality. Only my second story so do excuse the amateur-ness but I do hope you all enjoy!

Last edited 2 years ago by Azzlover
stavo
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

honestly your a much better writer than Akronoym. more fleshed out and you seems to have more experience with writing fight scenes.

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  stavo

Oh no. I would say Akrononym is better and I’m still getting the hang of things.

I’m mainly into romance and action fiction so my tastes could translate into my writing.

Evildark
Evildark
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

Buen capitulo amigo… tu escribiras ahora esta serie?… si es haci aparecera Naruto pronto y que Boruto no lo opaque

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Evildark

Thank you for the compliment! I will be writing this together with Mr. Akrononym. I’m just here to help out how I can! Hopefully we will be seeing Naruto in the future!

Hey
Hey
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

I liked this a lot if your doing the future ones could you please try and included more naruto and hinata fucking each other rather than other people all the time there was only about 2 before the server crash but I thought you did a fantastic job

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Hey

Thanks for the compliment!

The stories depend on the art as it wouldn’t make sense to do a Naruto X Hinata story when either character aren’t in the picture.

faquis17
Member
1 year ago
I would have liked it to be with Naruto


93100
93100
2 years ago

why are there no more texts?

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  93100

What do you mean?

93100
93100
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

the old posts (example those of hinata) there are no longer the posts with the stories

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  93100

Rtenzo had to delete those. Look back to the big announcement post explaining why

Soldadorayan
Soldadorayan
2 years ago

Habra capitulo con gang bang inverso osea un hombre con varias mujeres? o simplemente una orgia?

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Soldadorayan

All depends on many factors. We will have to wait and see!

Whitis
Whitis
2 years ago

Is Naruto like A, does he have a jutsu that suppresses his true size but even with it his dick is still ridiculously big?

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Whitis

We shall both have to wait and see!

Dutchshadow
Dutchshadow
2 years ago

interesting sexfight story , and hope to see more of these or sex challenges as I do enjoy reading them. For example just contests pitting two woman against each other in an race where they have to make one of the men who volunteer to help them out cum in an blowjob/boobjob or assjob race to see who is the best could be fun.

Also more of these if it an bit more evenly as the only problem here was that it was so one sided

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Dutchshadow

That sounds very hot! And unfortunately, Tsunade didn’t stand a chance against A.

Dutchschadow
Dutchschadow
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

I saw, but do hope it won’t always be this one sided in these battles. As I do love to see more

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
2 years ago

Now that Tsunade has been dethroned, I wonder who will step into the arena to be the champ, and what Tsunade will be doing now.

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

We will both have to wait and see!

stavo
2 years ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

expecting it to be hinata or sakura.

Mr.Mishifu
Mr.Mishifu
2 years ago

Muy buena la idea de un ring de lucha con sexo… aunque no me guste mucho el Raikage…. aparecera pronto Naruto para que se empieze a divertir tambien?

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Mr.Mishifu

I also love the arena sex idea! A isn’t popular with everyone but I wanted to give him some character. Naruto should be joining the fun in the future!

Kimchui
Kimchui
2 years ago

Ojala Naruto aparesca pronto y deje a Tsunade igual o peor… buen capitulo 9/10 (aunque no soy muy fan del Raikage)

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Kimchui

Thanks for the high score! I know that not everyone is a fan of A but he is part of the story so I wanted to give him some character. Naruto should be joining the fun in the future!

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
2 years ago

Good job with your second story so far. I like the little bit extra flavor when it comes to his personality, although I still prefer his more rough one from the prior Ranko Island series. The Carnal Arena is a pretty interesting concept and you made pretty good use of it. The “fight” between Tsunade and A was a pretty intense and fun one. I would have liked however if we saw more of Tsunade’s sex with the other guy, to at least gave us a little bit of context about how high Raikage scales. He obviously is one of, if not the biggest lay on the entire island, so his victory shouldn’t come as a surprise but in this case, Tsunade looks like nothing more than any floozy to me. You know what I mean?

Still, great chapter. Keep up the good work.
8/10

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Thank you very much for the review and I’ll definitely keep your thoughts in mind going forward!

Hiryu
Member
2 years ago

That really escalated fast! Still, this was fun to sit down and enjoy.

Good to see A have a little more personality here. Plus I like the concept of the arena. Hopefully it would be more of a thing sometime.

Which brings me to Tsunade. She really had no trouble with most men, but when she took on A, it all went downhill for her. And it was all in a single round too. Man. 😮

Let’s hope she gets better with this as we move through the story. But it seems like she’ll be in for some catching up with Sakura and Sasuke later on. As well as Naruto and Hinata paying Ranko a visit down the line. Now I’m wondering what Mei is doing. XD

Well, I really liked your second chapter. Keep it up! 😀

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Hiryu

Thank you so much for your kind words! I really enjoyed the arena aspect too and i’m glad you like my interpretation of A!

Looking forward to seeing everything come together!

Whitis
Whitis
2 years ago

If you had to make a list of all the men from biggest(that includes length and girth) to smallest, while also involving naruto who had yet to arrive(also including growth Jutsu’s and limiters suppressing their true sizes).

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Whitis

I’m not too sure honestly since the story has only just started and there’s more work that needs to be done.

In my head though from the previous stories, Naruto = A > Kakashi but we’ll have to see!

Whitis
Whitis
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

I Heard that Boruto won’t really appear in this series, please tell me that’s true?

Last edited 2 years ago by Whitis
Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Whitis

There will not be any more art of Boruto due to the recent purge. He may or may not appear in the story later.

Whitis
Whitis
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

Yea! I hope he doesn’t appear later on.

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Whitis

Do you not like him?

Whitis
Whitis
2 years ago
Reply to  Azzlover

He’s alright, I wouldn’t say I hate him. I just never really got into him. Besides their would be no boruto if naruto never got created.

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Whitis

I agree with you on that. Naruto’s a great guy with an amazing journey.

Here’s hoping we get more stories of him in the future!

Firedragon_slayer (nalu)
Firedragon_slayer (nalu)
2 years ago

This was really good! I’m not the biggest fan of A but if he was to fuck anyone I rather it be tsunade. The story is good and i enjoy the idea of the sex ring could be a good use to establish who the best is! Tsunade losing so quickly and humiliated is both good and bad hopefully our queen can redeem herself. I give this a solid 8/10

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago

Thank you very much for the review! I know that not everyone is a fan of A or interracial but some are. Trying to give him some character to make him more interesting than JUST a BBC.

Look forward to how the story unfolds!

Last edited 2 years ago by Azzlover
Han
Han
2 years ago

First thought that wasn’t A so i was a lil bit confused but i looked closer and saw it was A

Was hard to notice because of A’s lightning but nevertheless

Good chapter man

I enjoyed it

Keep it bro

Azzlover
Member
2 years ago
Reply to  Han

Thank you very much for your kind words!