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(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of My Hero Academia stories)
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Izuku Midoriya had always been thought of as shy and more nervous than normal in some situations. Over the years at UA, he thought he’d grown out of that; fighting an incarnation of evil to the death tended to do that. Some things that seemed so important tended to become trivial afterward. Though as he stepped into the Busteez Hero Agency for the first time, Izuku couldn’t remember feeling so out of place in his entire life! The building was once a big hotel, that much he could tell from the outside. But the inside…

 

Thrumming music pulsed from massive speakers that were set in every corner of the large room. The music was so powerful and loud that the green haired youth could actually feel it in his bones! All around him he saw girls from his school, as well as professional Heroines, all in various states of undress. On the main stage now was Ochaco Uraraka, one of his first and closest female friends. She wore only a thong bikini bottom that looked to be made from shoestrings. The bottoms didn’t really leave anything to the imagination as Izuku could see them digging neatly into the folds of her pussy, as well as how her pussy was completely bald! She jerked and swayed her body to the music, making her now huge breasts bounce and jiggle erotically. It took a concentrated effort on his part not to pop a boner as he moved through the ballroom. Not an easy task because while he hadn’t admitted it out loud to anyone yet, he was crazy about the brown haired girl!

 

He watched as Uraraka moved her hips in a suggestive fashion, rolling them back and forth as though she were riding on top of something. He could also see some of Mina’s dance moves in her routine as the tempo of the music picked up and she began moving her body even faster. Large denomination yen bills fluttered about the stage, landing at her feet as Uraraka dropped to her knees and began squeezing her own breasts, which were now bigger than her entire head. Both massive mammary mounds were capped with a perfectly pink nipple that was nearly as big as his palm. He watched as the girl gripped them both in her hands, pinching and twisting them with an erotic expression on her face.

 

Izuku felt his pants getting tighter and was glad he’d come here wearing his school gym uniform, as it was made to handle all kinds of strain! He’d flown here after some afterschool training with Kacchan, having been invited by another of his classmates, who was now working here as part of her Work Studies.

 

“It’s actually pretty fun Midoriya,” Tsuyu Asui had said. “And Midnight-sensei really wants all of her students to visit at least once. Or you can book a date to come see her. She’s already got some girls doing that instead.”

 

At the door, he’d been greeted by a young rookie heroine he didn’t know. She had introduced herself as Tetas, the Oppai Heroine. She recognized him instantly since he was something of a world wide celebrity now. It was all still new to him, being asked for an autograph, especially after being shunned like he had been the year before. Heroes were rapidly rising back to prominence; with All For One dead and the Paranormal Liberation Front also deceased or in jail, peace had returned quickly.

 

He watched as Uraraka stripped off her bikini bottom and a jet of blood shot out his nose at the sight of the girl’s exposed pussy as Uraraka began masturbating there on stage! Moving her fingers in time to the music, he just barely heard her moaning in an erotic tone as her pussy squirted hard.

 

Not bad…’ a soft voice spoke in his head. It was the voice of the seventh holder of One for All, Nana Shimura. In the time since his first fight with Shigaraki, Izuku had been able to talk with the previous holders whenever he wanted. For the most part, they just left him be, with Nana and Daigoro being the only two who would converse with him regularly. He’d been nervous about coming here and Nana agreed to “go” with him. Though having a woman talking in his head as he watched the girl he liked play with herself only made him even more nervous.

 

I wish there’d been a place like this in my time,’ Nana said. ‘Would have helped a lot of heroes mellow out.’

 

Izuku didn’t know how to reply to that, though he wouldn’t even if he did; it was hard enough having the world know about One for All. It was another thing entirely to explain he had the full memories and personalities of the previous holders living inside him as well. And seeing him talk to himself would have only made things worse.

 

Kiddo, you really need to relax. You’re not doing anything wrong by being here. Everyone is a consenting adult, so the only hang-ups will be whatever you bring with you.’ Nana said before her voice went silent and her presence faded as she left him on his own.

 

Izuku continued to walk through the huge ballroom space as the music faded from a loud blaring to a dull roar then finally the static hum of the powered up speakers. Uraraka got up and walked naked off the stage and behind a large curtain. There was a sound like a vacuum cleaner as the money on the stage was sucked away in a blink, along with the bits of clothing his classmate had discarded. Some quieter soft rock music began playing and Izuku looked to his left and saw someone he hadn’t expected to see.

 

Walking towards the bar, Izuku blinked in mild disbelief as he saw his mother, Inko Midoriya, standing behind the counter. She was dressed in a rather skimpy get-up of a too small t-shirt and tight booty shorts. In the last few months, his mother had drastically lost weight, having met the rabbit hero Mirko while staying at UA during the worst of AFO’s anarchy. The platinum haired woman and his mother had struck up an unexpected friendship and Mirko had been helping her work out since.

 

“Mom?” he asked as he reached earshot.

 

Inko blinked in surprise. “Oh, Izuku!” she said, “I didn’t expect to see you tonight.”

 

“Me? What about you? You didn’t say anything about working here,” Izuku replied.

 

“Nemu-cha… I mean, Miss Kayama-san offered me a job here a little while before opening,” she explained. She then smiled warmly at him. “Anyway, Kayama-san put me in charge of the menu, so ask for anything you’d like, the kitchen here is amazing! There’s almost nothing I can’t cook.”

 

“Oh, uh, thanks, but I didn’t come here to eat tonight, but I’ll keep that in mind,” he told her.

 

Inko brightened. “So if you’re here, does that mean you’re looking for a girlfriend!?” she asked with stars sparkling in her eyes. “Maybe I’ll see my grandchildren after all!” she said excitedly.

 

Izuku blinked twice. ‘What gave her that impression!?’ he thought as he just smiled awkwardly. He then took a step back and grunted as he bumped into something soft.

 

“Oh!” a girl’s voice said, and Izuku realized he’d bumped into someone. He quickly whirled around to apologize and his eyes went wide at the sight of a huge pair of naked breasts right in his face!

 

“Wah!” he yelped as he fell back, landing on his butt with a dull thud.

 

“Oh, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you!” said Momo Yaoyorozu as she bent over to offer him a hand. The dark haired young woman was all but completely naked, wearing only a golden thong bikini bottom that dug into the folds of her hairless pussy. She stumbled slightly, the weight of her now gigantic breasts throwing her balance off a bit. The jerking motion made them jiggle and Izuku found his eyes following the motion unconsciously. Closing his eyes tight, Izuku shook his head vigorously and reached his hand up to take Yaoyorozu’s. She pulled him up easily and Izuku found himself face to tits with her. Odd, had she always been this tall?

 

“Thanks for coming,” she said with a warm smile.

 

“Ah yeah um, uh…” Izuku stammered, trying to think of what to say to his topless classmate. “Did you get taller?” he asked lamely.

 

“Oh that, it’s these heels!” Yaoyorozu answered, gesturing down at her feet.

 

Izuku looked down to see the dark haired girl was wearing a pair of gold colored platform high heeled shoes that matched her underwear. The soles of the heels were several inches thick, making Izuku wonder just how she stood in them.

 

“Well, um, uh, they look nice!” Izuku said.

 

“Oh you think so!?” Yaoyorozu asked, placing her hands on her breasts and hefting them up slightly. “I was worried I asked Rie-chan to make them too big. But I’m glad you like them!” she said cheerfully.

 

Izuku had meant her shoes, but decided not to correct her. “So uh…” he began. “What are you doing here?” he asked, again kicking himself for asking such a lame question.

 

She still only smiled at him. “I’m waitressing tonight mainly, though I’m free to do a VIP slot if someone asks,” she explained. “Though that’s pretty expensive. Have you tried the lottery yet?” she asked.

 

“The what?” Izuku asked back, looking up at her and trying everything in his power NOT to look at her breasts.

 

“Oh, I almost forgot!” his mother spoke up from behind the bar. “It’s over here.” she said, gesturing to a wheel-like object at the end of the bar. Izuku had seen them many times at the shopping markets. It was one of those ball lotteries, where you turned the wheel several times until a ball fell out. Most of them would be white participation prizes. There were so many that the odds of winning anything worthwhile were next to nothing.

 

There was a sign next to it, explaining the rules and listing the prizes. Izuku’s green eyes skimmed the paper quickly.

 

Busteez Grand Lottery
5000 yen per roll – First Roll Free
White: Consolation Condom
Bronze: Free Private Dance (12)
Silver: Free Lap Dance (2)
Gold: VIP Lifetime Gold Card! (1)

 

“The Gold Card gives you full vip services free for life,” Yaoyorozu explained. “But there’s about three thousand balls in there, and the white balls are reloaded after every game.”

 

Izuku understood, such a prize would be highly sought after, but the odds of winning were next to nothing. Especially if the dud balls got reloaded after every game.

 

“Wanna give it a shot?” Yaoyorozu asked. “Everyone gets one free play.”

 

“Uh, okay…” Izuku said as he walked over to the device as his mother unlocked the wheel and placed a silver tray underneath it to catch the ball when it fell out. She then picked up an electronic tablet and held it up. He heard a soft click as she took his picture.

 

“Too keep track of free plays,” Yaoyorozu said.

 

“Oh, right!” Izuku said, reaching a hand up to grab the crank handle at the center. “Is it alright to just roll it?” he asked. His mother and Yaoyorozu both nodded and Izuku rotated the wheel several times before letting it stop.

 

TINK!

 

The ball fell out of the tiny hole on the side of the wheel and rolled to the end of the tray. Yaoyorozu and his mother were both completely silent. Izuku could understand why, as a tiny golden ball sat on the tray glinting in the light of the ballroom.

 

Inko then reached under the counter, pulling out a large brass bell and ringing it loudly several times.

 


 

“Yao… Yaoyorozu-san, you really don’t need to do this…!” Izuku said as the dark haired young woman escorted him into the room. Or was it outside? The instant he went through the door, Izuku found himself standing by a large pool with a full bar to one side, and a beach off in the distance. After winning the grand prize in the Busteez Lottery, Midnight-sensei came out to see him. He found himself willing his dick to stay down at her outfit, or lack of one. She was wearing a skimpier version of her costume, without the ultrathin fabric she normally tore open when she used her quirk. And the body-suit section was now a corset that left her lower body completely exposed, leaving her tits and pussy out on full display! She was genuinely surprised at his luck; that lottery wheel was designed to make it so that the odds of winning the main prize were minimal.

 

She gave him a slender golden card with the Busteez Logo on it. It looked the same as other VIP cards that were sold for the full services, but the exception being that this was made of an actual gold-titanium alloy instead of disposable cardboard.

 

“This is good for any VIP services at any time,” Midnight told him. “Dances, food, sex, you name it. Of course, that is also limited to if the girls are willing or not. No one is forced into anything here,” she added. “I trust you’ll at least try and show some restraint,” she said jokingly. “Poor Mineta is going to be devastated. He’s already spent a considerable sum trying to win this.”

 

After that, Midnight took a few pictures with him for ‘posterity’ before heading off to see to her other duties. After she’d gone, Momo grabbed his wrist and all but dragged him upstairs to the hotel portion of the building.

 

“I know I don’t HAVE to,” Yaoyorozu said with a sweet smile. “I want to,” she told him, then giggled when she noticed him looking around in confusion. “And if you’re wondering about the room, thank Camie; she sets up illusions in some rooms every night. They last about twenty hours or so, as long as she’s in the building.”

 

Izuku blinked as he looked around more closely; the surfaces were just slightly ghost-like, but only when one looked hard enough. Yaoyorozu smiled at him as she laid him back on a lounge chair next to the pool. She then leaned forward, pressing her heavy tits together and smiling at him.

 

“I honestly don’t think you’ve realized how many of the girls in our class like you,” she told him with a smile.

 

“Huh!?” Izuku gasped, then gulped at the sight of Yaoyorozu’s naked breasts hanging from her body.

 

“You did beat All for One and all but single handedly saved Hero Society, silly,” she told him.

 

“Well I didn’t…” Izuku began to say as Yaoyorozu leaned in closer and he felt the weight of her massive tits resting against his legs. The tightness in his pants was rapidly becoming unbearable as his cock strained the material to its limits!

 

“You did…” said Yaoyorozu as she leaned in closer, her heavy breasts dragging over his body. They felt so very soft and smelled just as nice. He looked up at her again just as she pressed her mouth against his! Izuku gasped softly and the dark haired girl used that moment to slide her tongue into his mouth!

 

HMMMM MMMMPH!!!” Izuku gasped softly as he tasted Yaoyorozu’s soft and warm tongue. It was sweeter than he imagined, with a hint of strawberry. The sensation made Izuku’s head feel light and tingly as he found himself pushing his tongue back against hers. He then felt her hands on his chest as she pressed her mouth against his a little harder.

 

“Mmmmmph…” Yaoyorozu moaned into his mouth softly as she lightly sucked on his tongue.

 

SHRIIIIIIP!

 

The sound of tearing fabric was loud in the quiet room as Izuku couldn’t hold his erection back a moment longer. Yaoyorozu gasped and pulled back slightly as Izuku’s cock reduced his gym pants to shreds as it shot up to full erection in a few beats of his heart. Lines of red energy cracked across his skin as One for All triggered on its own, making his dick all the more sensitive!

 

“Oooh, woooow…” Yaoyorozu said as she stared up at the nearly two meter long rod of rigid flesh as it stuck up between her heavy tits.

 

“Aheheh, s…sorry..!” said Izuku; he’d been trying to keep it down, but the feel of Yaoyorozu being so close, the smell of her body, the softness of her skin, it was too much. Since inheriting One for All, his dick had become gigantic. All Might said it was a common occurrence for male holders. Since Nana was the only female holder in the line of successors, he didn’t know how it affected her. Izuku had asked her once, but the ghost of the seventh holder just evaded the question.

 

“For what?” Yaoyorozu asked as she leaned in close again, taking his cock fully between her breasts. “This is incredible!” she told him. “I’ve never seen anything like it.”

 

“I’d be surprised if you had…” Izuku said under his breath.

 

“Is this why you’ve been so nervous?” she asked him with a gentle smile. He nodded and the dark haired girl pressed her breasts around his immense girth gently. Her breasts were so warm and soft, the feel of them pressing against his dick was incredible.

 

“You didn’t need to be!” she said, beginning to move her breasts up and down slowly. “I can’t think of any girl who wouldn’t go nuts for something like this. Especially Mina, she’s a complete size queen,” she said with a giggle. Izuku only barely heard her as he groaned softly at the feel of those oh so soft tits pressing against his cock.

 

“As for me…” she said, her voice a purr as she rubbed the side of her face against the upper portion of his cock. “Haaah, I can’t wait to see how this feels!” she told him as she brushed her tongue against the underside of his cock. “This taste, this smell, ahhh, it’s making me so wet already!” she moaned as she began rubbing her breasts up and down faster. “A dick like this is why I got breasts like these!”

 

“Yao… Yaoyo…” Izuku stammered as his cock began throbbing as she moved her breasts up and down more. It felt SO good, her soft, warm, and very smooth breasts sliding up and down his enormous cock, the look of her perfectly pink nipples. Izuku couldn’t help himself as he began thrusting his hips slightly.

 

“You can call me Momo,” she told him. “My last name is a little bit of a mouthful,” she said with a smile. “So, how am I doing?” she asked him.

 

“Ahhhnn, M… Momo-san… You’re doing… F… Fine…!” he groaned as he felt a pressure building in his balls already.

 

Momo smiled and laughed. “That’s great! To be honest, I’ve never done anything like this before, but I gotta say,” she confessed as she leaned in closer. “Now that I am, I really like it, especially this scent, ahhn, it’s so naughty and strong, it makes me dizzy. But I can’t get enough of it!” she moaned, rubbing her entire body against him now, peppering his dick with kisses.

 

A thick glob of precum began oozing out from the huge tip of his cock and Momo leaned her head up to lick at it. She made a sound like she’d just tasted something delicious as she swallowed the thick white glob down with an audible ‘gulp’.

 

“Haaaahhnn… Momo-san, Momo-san!!” Izuku groaned as the tip of his cock erupted with thick hot white cum with so much force it hit the ceiling. It penetrated the illusion before raining back down over the two of them, soaking Momo’s dark colored hair and getting all over her face.

 

Izuku fell back against the lounge chair, panting softly as his cock still stood completely rigid. The red lines of One For All faded slowly and the pressure in his balls let up with a massive feeling of relief.

 

Still standing over him, Momo licked her lips, scooping some of his thick cum into her mouth and swallowing it again. “Mmmmh, a girl could get used to this!” she told him as she stepped back and slowly took off the thong bikini bottoms she had on. Now standing naked in front of him, she made a show of tossing the garment away before climbing onto the chair with him. Izuku opened his mouth to tell her she didn’t need to keep going, but she pressed a finger to his lips, silencing him.

 

“Did you stop to think that I might want to do this?” she asked him quietly as she began rubbing her now cum soaked body against his cock. The thick white fluid made everything all slippery, and Izuku let out a low groan at the feeling. The wet squishing sounds of their bodies rubbing together echoed in his ears as Momo stripped him out of what was left of his gym uniform. She then pressed her naked body to his, letting him feel the warmth of her skin as her mouth connected to his again. There was a slightly salty taste to her sweetness now, but he returned the kiss anyway as she took his hands and moved them to her ass.

 

“You can touch me, I’m not gonna bite,” she told him, then smirked. “Unless you want me to,” she said, then laughed. “Sorry, that sounded so corny even to me!”

 

“It’s really alright?” he asked.

 

In response, Momo took his hand in hers and moved it to her breast. “Squeeze and play with them as much as you’d like!” she told him.

 

Izuku did, his fingers almost vanishing into the ultra soft mound as Momo let out a soft moan that sent another jolt through his cock. He then moved both hands to her breasts as more of his cum dripped off of them.

 

“Hmmmm, yeah, like that…” Momo moaned. “Squeeze them harder…” she said to him as she pressed her tits against his hands while moving to place his giant cock between her creamy thighs. He could feel the heat coming off of her pussy, feel the wetness of it as she began humping her crotch against his shaft.

 

They kissed again, and Izuku began moving his hands all over her massive tits, enjoying the feel of them. At some point, he wasn’t sure when, he just suddenly found her pert nipple in his mouth! Momo rubbed a hand against the back of his head, sending tingles down the back of his neck. He swirled his tongue around her nipple, loving the feel of it in his mouth as he sucked on it roughly.

 

“Ahhhn, yeah, harder, suck it harderrr… Oh god, I’m so wet right now…” Momo moaned, her voice getting higher as she began rolling her hips, grinding her pussy against his cock. She then suddenly pulled his head away from her breasts, looking him in the eye as she slid her pussy along the length of his cock until she had the tip aimed at her opening.

 

With a soft squishing noise and a loud moan, Momo took Izuku’s cock inside herself. Her pussy was spread so incredibly wide, Izuku was worried he might hurt her, but she only moaned in ecstasy as she took him inside. Her once flat stomach stretched up and out, his cock easily reaching into her very womb and pushing her abdomen up. A perfect outline of his cock reached up between her breasts, then blocked his view of her face as he felt her ass against his balls.

 

“Ahhhhnn, it… It’s in… It’s iiiinnn…” Momo moaned, “So thick, ahhh, I feel like I’m giving birth, but it feels so good, I think I might go crazy!” she told him as she rubbed her hands along the distention in her belly. “It’s crushing my womb, stretching it out, but… Ahhh, this feels so amazingly goood… I… I’m cumming… I’m cumming… I’M CUMMINGGGG AHHHHHAAA… I’M CUMMING FROM JUST HAVING YOU INSIDE ME IZUKUUUUU…!” Momo screamed as her pussy began gushing like a faucet suddenly put on full blast.

 

“Momo-san, Momo-san…” Izuku groaned as he felt One For All triggering again, her pussy suddenly feeling worlds tighter around him.

 

AAHHHN… D… DON’T HOLD BHAAACK, GIVE… GIVE IT TO MEEEE…!” Momo moaned as she began rolling her hips in slow, rhythmic motions.

 

Izuku groaned again, his own hips practically moving on their own as he began thrusting up and down. Momo screamed in pleasure, her tongue actually lolling out of her mouth as she bounced up and down on top of him. He then moved his hands to grab her tits again, gripping them tightly as he thrusted his cock in and out of her harder.

 

A lewd, wet ‘SLAP SLAP SLAP’ was the only sound he could hear over Momo’s moaning as she bucked herself up and down on him. “SO BHIG, AHHNN, SO BHIIIG, CUMMING, I’M CUMMING IZUKU, I’M CUMMING EVERY TIME YOU MOVE, IT FEELS SO GOOD!!! MORE, FUCK ME MOOORE, AHHNNN, CUMMING CUMMING CUMMINGGGG!!” Momo screamed in sheer pleasure.

 

“Momo-san, ahhh, it’s so tiiight… I… I can’t…” Izuku groaned.

 

Momo panted on top of him as she looked down at his face, “Ah, hah, ah, hah, it… It’s okay, you can cum… Inside… I… I want to feel it… Shooting in my womb….!” she managed to say before she screamed in pleasure again. “OH YESSSS, YES, YES, YESSSS!!!! I’M CUMMINGGG!!!

 

AHHAAAH!!!” Izuku cried with her as he pushed his cock all the way inside again! There was a low, wet sound from deep within Momo as she grabbed her own breasts and let out a long moan. Her already distended stomach then ballooned outward slightly, filling with his cum. Her belly jiggled and wobbled with the massive volume of cum inside her.

 

“Oooooooooh, so much, cuuuuum… So full, so very very fuuullll…” Momo moaned weakly.

 

Izuku didn’t know how long the two of them just sat there like that, his cock still throbbing inside her. Time seemed to just stop for a long while before Momo finally moved again.

 

SPLUUUUUUUT…!

 

The sound of his cum shooting out of her pussy once she pulled free was simultainiously the rudest and most erotic sound he’d ever heard.

 

“Hah, hah, hah, ahhh…” Momo panted. “Woooow, that was great.” she told him as she got up.

 

“Ye… Yeah…” he gasped with her, his cock finally going soft again.

 

“Though I think the cleaning staff is gonna be mad,” she added.

 

Izuku blinked. “Huh, why?” he asked.

 

Momo brought one leg up and stamped her foot down, making a soft splash in the massive pool of cum all around them. “This’ll probably take a while to clean up,” she told him.

 

“Oh… Uh, sorry?” he replied lamely.


Story by Sailor Io

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Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago

To those of you on my Patreon, there was a slight miscommunication on the chapter order, this was meant to be chapter 3, but I wasn’t very clear on that with Enzo. Chapter 2 will now be 3 next week. I’m sorry for any confusion. Thankfully the story is still young and this won’t affect the plot negatively. I apologize again and will endeavor to make things more clear going forward.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Almost forgot, this is the outfit Midnight was wearing.

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Soldadorayan
Soldadorayan
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Osea este capitulo seria el 3 y el de la otra semana el 2…. no? bueno no creo que cambie mucho es el inicio recien

Joshuath
Joshuath
5 months ago

I’m confused didn’t izuku had already a VIP card?

Triple Strike
Triple Strike
5 months ago

Am I the only one thinking about how dekus balls are the size of watermelons

Evildark
Evildark
6 months ago

Ojalá las chicas del harem de izuku sean las mismas y puedas agregar otras como Melissa o Pixie Bob

Whitis
Whitis
6 months ago

10/10, great stuff. Hope to see mitsuki soon and that she is a size queen as well which puts her in the direction of izuku.

N
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N
6 months ago
Reply to  Whitis

Mitsuki , Mina and Camie being size queens would be best in my opinion .

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  N

Gimme time!

Jojoleo
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Jojoleo
6 months ago

So this is a soft reboot of the story that was taken down. You guy pretty much Thanos snapped the old story kept certain parts moved the timeline up. It felt like a speedline version of the old story with who Deku going to be with and the harem vibe still there. Not bad can’t wait to see how the soft reboot goes.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Jojoleo

Yes, I had too many good things in that first series. After I get things really moving, the only thing that’ll have changed is the timeline settings and a few minor details.

Anon
Anon
6 months ago

This was an amazing second chapter, even if it was meant to be the third haha. I like how you’re slowly introducing the girls again, with Tsu telling Deku about this place, Ochaco stripping in the background, etc. Momo and Deku are always such a cute ship to start off the series with too! Although with this series, if Deku is allowed to fuck any girl he wants, the girls should be able to fuck whoever they want too, not just Deku. Looking forward to the next one!

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Anon

Just wait, things will be more clear as I progress. the interplay of characters is tricky work. Took me weeks to build things up the first time, since I can only do a little at a time. Unless everyone wants more 30+ page chapters full of mainly exposition and little hentai action. 😛

126jojo
126jojo
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

No no porfavor, esta bien como lo estas haciendo amigo sigue haci como vas…. poco a poco a tu ritmo mientras alla sexo romance creo que esta bien… no?

126jojo
126jojo
6 months ago

Ojala veamos a Mina como la reina de tamaño que decida cual e toas las pollas es la que puede satisfacerla completamente….. me gusto el capitulo en verdad

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  126jojo

We will, we will. Sooner than you might think too.

Adrian AL
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Adrian AL
6 months ago

Una idea que tengo para Boku no heroe desde hace mucho y aproechando que van a reinicar todo podrian esta vez poner a Jirou con Kaminari pero aun con la relacion que esta tenga con Momo valla que sean amantes pues mi justificacion es que en algun momento Momo le diga que necesita un amante varon como ella tiene a Deku asique Jirou acepta por precion de Momo y llega Kaminari y no se tal ves en algun moemnto lleguen a algo serio 

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Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Adrian AL

Sorry, I already have plans with Kyoka going forward. Never really supported that ship TBH, she fits so much better with Momo.

Smiling Fiend
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Smiling Fiend
6 months ago

The way Deku won the vip lifetime card was better in this story imo. Also, Momo dragging him immediately after him winning is both hot and cute, cuz it implies she likes him and it’s only a matter of time until she inevitably joins his harem !
And I won’t fret too much with this new start cuz it means we get to experience these characters fall in love with each other again, which is very wholesome.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Smiling Fiend

THANK YOU!!! Just gimme time, there’s a story arc coming up that I plan to use as the base for a lot of relationship building for his harem as well as other plot devices for some characters.

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
6 months ago

Izuku winning the golden vip card via lottery pull honestly feels better than them just giving him one outright. Also like how he isnt a super sex god right out at the start and needs more experience and comfort being at the Busteez place and seeing his female classmates naked. (Though I guess the previous story started off similar as well)

Also your doing a good job dude and a excellent writer, don’t let anyone think your not otherwise.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

Yeah, it’s a lot more believable than the original. That original event was SLIGHTLY rushed through no fault of Enzo’s. Sometimes I get things done all at the last minute. It’s why I like having a week buffer on chapters just in case.

98766fuu
98766fuu
6 months ago

Me gusta como esta quedando…. veamos como se va desarrolando la trama con los personajes y sus relaciones ya sea sentimentales o amistad…. ojala veamos algo mas de Momo y Kyouka 10/10

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  98766fuu

We will, I have some big plans involving Melissa, Momo, and a few other characters.

Soldadorayan
Soldadorayan
6 months ago

Parece que Momo tiene algunos sentimientos por Izuku no? Ojalá pueda ver como va esta relación me gusta este ship…. se que lo harás bien tengo fe 10/10

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Soldadorayan

Yes, they have very good chemistry together. And I liked where things were going the first time, just gotta work back up to that.

Kimchui
Kimchui
6 months ago

Genial hombre… gran capitulo… como Izuku llega a Bustezz y como gana la tarjeta dorada…. y la aparicion de Momo y la escena de sexo 10/10

Dos preguntas si pudieras responderme jeje:

-La tarjeta que tiene Izuku es única y nadie
más tendrá otra cierto?

-Podrá haber un concurso con orgia en la agencia ?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Kimchui

In order, yes, completely unique, doesn’t make good business to have more than one. The whole thing wasn’t intended to grant w winner so soon. Blind clueless luck.

And maybe, I don’t have real say in the images.

Kimchui
Kimchui
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Jeje me dio un poco de risa como ganó la tarjeta… pero me siento satisfecho…. la cara de Mineta cuando se entere XD… pensé que habría otra competencia o algo similar pero esta… me gusta como esta quedando este remake… sigue haci hombre

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Kimchui

Thanks. Since I dove right in with Busteez already being a thing, a grand opening competition didn’t seem as feasible, but one of those little bead lottery’s you see in anime worked great. Especially with how those are set up to hold onto the top prize as long as possible. Deku just got REALLY lucky.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
6 months ago

Midoriya’s first impression of Busteez was certainly a lucky one. Him just winning the Gold Card feels kinda cheap but I understand that you probably don’t have the time/energy to do the whole contest all over again. I’m really impressed that this series takes kinda place after the whole series is over, which makes it kinda more understandable to me why the students are working there. The fact that now Camie is responsible for coming up with those different locations is a nice change, especially since I like her more than Melissa. What little information we got about the girls seems pretty neat (I love how Mina is a Size Queen). The sex scene between Momo and Midoriya was nice and I like how he came so relatively quick, just by her licking away his precum. It really shows that he is new to sex. I hope he gets utterly dominated/fucked out of his mind by certain girls in this new/re-mixed series (Mirko, Mina,…). Great stuff.

Great second entry to this series. I’m looking forward to see how you handle Midoriya since I wasn’t exactly the biggest fan of him in the last one.
8/10

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Well, he was a virgin until now in this. His view on sex is a little old fashioned. He might have a heart to heart with All Might later and All Might would tell him it comes with the territory. I figure that guy got more tail in his prime than he’d like to admit.

N0bod4
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N0bod4
6 months ago

Love it and will uraraka be a bitch to Izuku for having a close relationship with the other girls in this reboot?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  N0bod4

No spoilers!

Moltenblackbird
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

HOW DID YOU GET A DOWNVOTE FOR SAYING NO SPOILER???????????????

Smiling Fiend
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Smiling Fiend
6 months ago

Maybe because the downvoter wanted spoilers, lol.

Han
Han
6 months ago

Will the america trip continue here?

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
6 months ago
Reply to  Han

I answered this last week, though it was asked in Spanish. Yes, I’m still doing the trip.

Moltenblackbird
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

what is the point when you just threw out all the work on him having 3 girlfriends and a colossal time jump. tbh im kind of pissed you just flat out got rid of the relationships for really no reason. i get the whole restarting bit but the way you do it does matter. like how the naruto one was just sakura reading a book. here it is off. momo tsu and ochako being deku’s girlfriend had a lot of effort put into it. dont erase all that.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago

This isn’t a continuation of the first series, granted I’m importing a lot of what I had. But there are currently NO relationships outside of what was in the manga. I gotta rebuild all of that.

Moltenblackbird
6 months ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

should have just restarted it from scratch then or just imported the stories from patreon. or is the patreon only pictures. i do understand where your coming from but if its not a continuation dont write it with the same plot. feels more like your half assing it if you do that. idk im just mad that all of the work was erased. could have at least did something like ochako is his girlfriend as its kind of an expected thing in the manga. but then something like she cant handle his dick so tsu and momo end up joining. wouldnt feel cheep and it would be understandable.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 months ago

Dude, it’s only the SECOND chapter, I have a plan going forward. Really half-assing it would be having all relationships already in place with just brief explanations of how they came to be. I gotta rebuild some stuff, but also try and keep the chapters a reasonable length. I’m trying really hard here, but I can’t rebuild everything from the ground up in TWO chapters. It took over ten just to get to Busteez last time, and even longer to get Ochaco and Deku together. I need TIME to fix things up right.

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
6 months ago

Kinda coming off as being rude my guy the story is still in its early phase and we all know Deku is gonna end up with a big harem and multiple girlfriends later on as the story progresses. Just be paitent and let things unfold

jdj1998x
jdj1998x
6 months ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

facts honestly I agree with soul here the story is still early to tell and deku will end up with the harem being even bigger than last series XD , honestly once deku gets his confidence back it’s gonna be easier from. now on my point is love this new take on it can’t wait for next ones.