Fanfic Editors Needed! + Vados (Dragon Ball)

Hello! I’m looking for some volunteers to help edit fanfics written by the various writers on my site such as SailorIo and Mr. Akrononym. Editing includes mainly grammar stuff and finding parts of the story that make sense or not and rephrasing sentences to sound better to read. Communication will be done thru Discord and I’d prefer if the individual is a regular fanfic reader and can edit the story when they are given it. Theres about 2-3 stories posted a week. If you’re interested, please comment below or contact me on Twitter 👍


Chapter 13: Roshi’s Hole in the Wall

Written by SailorIo

What are your thoughts???

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Fei
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Fei
4 months ago

Are you still looking for editors by chance?
I’ve written a bunch of fics myself and wouldn’t mind lending a hand if need be.

Fei
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Fei
4 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Fei#0361

NamelessR04
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NamelessR04
5 months ago

Dayum this new artwork of Vados is amazing just like the similar one with Melissa. The position she’s doing is attractive with her hanging huge blue breasts and huge round blue ass in the air as she taking massive cock from behind in said ass. Also, her facial expression is adorably sexy with those eyes and lips. Fantastic job as always Rtenzo! 😁 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
5 months ago

What a magnificent new artwork of the blue angel herself. The pose is really something else and makes a really dynamic impression. I like how she’s not facing the “camera/reader” directly like most women seem to be drawn from you (at least that’s my impression, I could be wrong about that). The background is beautiful as always and Vados’ expression really sweetens the whole deal even more. Those huge tits and bubbly butt make her waist seem super narrow; I love it! Black makeup is nothing more for Vados but it looks absolutely gorgeous, especially on her partner’s massive dick (lucky bastard). But the added attention to detail with her black toenails shouldn’t be ignored either, especially when they stick out in such a nice way by contrasting with her blue skin and the tiles of the floor. Is that a new texture for the cum? If not, then I sadly failed to notice it in any of the other artworks it appeared in, which I am sorry for. It looks really good how it runs down her entire body and already forms puddles on the ground. Damn, it looks simply magnificent!

A fantastic artwork from start to finish. I actually had a One Piece artwork in mind that I wanted to request (once I get the opportunity again) with a very similar, if not identical, position. So seeing how you nailed it in this one makes me even more happy. A definite contender for best artwork!
9,5/10

Zer0
Zer0
5 months ago

OH MY GOD YES THANKS

Omega
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Omega
5 months ago

YES YES more DBZ art PLS when possible 10/10 10/10 the universe 6 girls need more love nice job great

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
5 months ago

Gloryhole settings with lewd and derogatory writings on the wall is one my personal favorites. Sorta wished it looked a bit more “dirty” aesthetic wise but still very good

Sorakey
Sorakey
5 months ago

I would be interested in becoming a writer for you! soraskey42#4477

HentaiNeko
HentaiNeko
5 months ago

1.-Hola bueno primero, yo era escritor de wattpad por lo que si, creo poder ayudarte con eso de ser editor aunque tendríamos que hablarlo ya sea en Twitter o discord dónde prefieras.

solo necesitaría link del díscord o de donde pueda comunicarme :3

2.-(Con la Imagen): !!!OTRO HERMOSO TRABAJO¡¡¡ 😻👌🏻🔥
Vados sin duda es una de mis chicas favoritas de DBZ, y verla así me exita bastante una obra ahora sí 10/10
Los puntos buenos son

1.-La posición: como se pone poniendo el culo hacia atrás
2.-El sonrojó en su cara: Me encanta ver la cara de vergüenza y sonrojó de este tipo de chicas , ya que las chivas más fuertes terminan siendo las más putas 🤭
3.-El enorme Culo y tetas: Amo mucho tu contenido por los dibujos de tetas y culo gigante, jamás me cansaré de verlo 😍
4.-El Entorno: Me gusta mucho el entorno del bañó le da cierto toque 👌🏻

5.-Los Grafitis: Algo que siempre amo de tu trabajo son los grafitis o maquillaje, y este tipo de Grafitis son los que más me encanta

Sin duda alguna una de tus mejores obras de 2022 😁

HentaiNeko
HentaiNeko
5 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Jeje bueno siempre puedo usar el traductor xd, ok no pero si estoy aprendiendo inglés así que podría intentar y al final salir bien ¿No?

pero descuida al Menos deja intento si puedo si no pues al menos hice el intento

Estoy como Neko-G#7145
Igual ya te mandé mensaje a Twitter

Alex
Alex
5 months ago

It’s perfect it would be nice to see Vados with someone else I have another story about bulma c18 or chichi videl

Chirka
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Chirka
5 months ago

We need more art with Vados, she is the best girl from DB. Especially in your works, she looks very sexy. It would be nice to see Vados and Android 18 together

Ultra
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Ultra
5 months ago

More art of Vados showing off that thicc ass of hers and those monster melons, the onahole art is getting better and better each time, this is a solid 10/10. Will fairy tail make a return in July? Didn’t mind seeing all the Bleach and other series, it’d be nice to see some of the babes from FT again

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
5 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Any updates for the One Piece chapters?

Shadow
Shadow
5 months ago

Nice, we needed more Vados artwork. Well done and Master Roshi would be proud of this.

Question about fairy tail-will Seilah and kyoka have their debut and will there be future Irene artwork?