Rtenzo & Ero-Enzo – Fanart and Hentai

Embracing the Black Beast


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Naruto stories)
Previous Story (Chapter 101): [LINK]
Beginning (Chapter 01): [LINK]
Next Story (Chapter 103): To Be Continued…


Hinata Uzumaki felt weak as she walked out of the hotel and into the open air. Her knees felt more than a little shaky right now, but the fresh, open air felt reinvigorating. She breathed it in deeply, trying to quiet her thoughts. She had allowed Boruto to take Kaguya out for a bit while she recovered from their last training session. Things had gotten overly heated between them during their “sparring”, and Hinata still felt light headed.

 

She already began feeling better as she felt the warm humid night air on her skin. She didn’t even realize how much time had passed since Boruto left. It was odd, as she didn’t remember falling asleep, but she must have, it was the only explanation for the missing time. Hinata decided to add some stamina building to her daily training routine. She had thought herself well built already while keeping a nice figure, but dealing with two men capable of that Uzumaki technique…

 

I’ve committed to training Boruto,’ thought Hinata, “I’ll need to be on my A-game.” she muttered aloud. Boruto had one advantage on her aside from his natural talent with the Kami Chinpo, and that was his youth, and the high sex drive that came with that!

 

“My ears are burning, Uzumaki Bitch.” said a gruff and deep voice to her right. Hinata didn’t even try to hide how she rolled her eyes.

 

Haven’t I humiliated you enough, Raikage-sama?” Hinata asked, in no mood to deal with him right now.

 

“Hmmmph, tough talk for someone who fainted last time.” A shot back.

 

Hinata clicked her tongue, she was hoping he’d have been too out of it to realize that their last round had been basically a draw.

 

“Well, I’m a bit busy right now. Somehow, my daughter has found her way here.” Hinata said, “She’s in the hotel right now, and I wanna minimize her exposure to the depravity on this island.”

 

“It’s a bit too late for that.” A replied, telling Hinata about how she’d come across himself and her husband a short while ago. “And who knows what else she saw before that. Hard to walk half a block without seeing some pair fucking like rabbits in heat.”

 

Hinata let out a sigh, there was no arguing THAT fact. Even now, she could see a trio of people near one wall of the hotel exterior. A young man and two girls. The young man had messy dark green hair and wide green eyes. His body was slender, but he had a ton of muscle definition all over. Hinata wasn’t sure what kind of training discipline he followed, but could guess he was geared more for quick movement and flexibility rather than sheer brute force.

 

Kneeling in front of the young man were two women, both of them also had dark green hair, one with straight hair that came down to just above her shoulders. While the other had wavy hair that reached just past her shoulders. Both women were well endowed in the chest area and looked completely consumed with lust and desire as they took turns sucking the young man’s impressive erection. Hinata noticed the one with the straight hair was definitely older than the young man, possibly one of those cougar types. Every time she took the man’s cock into her mouth, the other girl seemed to egg her on excitedly.

 

Hinata looked away, “Still,” she said, “I don’t…”

 

“The girl survived several days on her own here. She’s the Hokage’s and your daughter. She doesn’t need a babysitter anymore.” A said gruffly.

 

Hinata sighed again and looked up at the sky, “Fine, let’s get it over with.” she told him, “But, let’s do this at your hotel. I think this one is fully booked now.”

 


 

The Raikage’s hotel room was rather opulent, which didn’t really surprise Hinata in the least. But then, if it were spartan as well, she would have been equally unsurprised. “Where’s Samui?” she asked, “Isn’t she supposed to be your cumdumpster while you’re here?”

 

“Hmmph, she’s free to do as she wants.” A told her, and Hinata fought hard to suppress a grin. She knew full well where the blonde woman was. Right about now she should be resting in Naruto’s and her hotel room. Her husband had completely broken her with his godly dick. She was even going to move to Konoha for a while as part of an exchange program, where she’d be a kind of training dummy for Boruto’s sexcraft. Kaguya could serve the same purpose, but she would be more of a pet than anything else. Her son had fully broken her with his technique, and now the fallen goddess couldn’t live without his dick!

 

She walked farther into the room, noting that the place smelled strongly of incense and spices. The spicy smell didn’t surprise Hinata, Kumogakure cooking relied heavily on them. She’d had enough of Karui’s home cooking to know that much. A was likely ordering food from a similar menu. And sure enough, there was an empty plate with the remains of some kind of sauce smeared on the surface. Going off the smell alone, he’d likely only just finished his meal when he went looking for her.

 

She tried to guess what the meal might have been by the smell of the spices, as some of Karui’s meals were quite delectable. Hinata was so distracted by her musings that she didn’t notice A coming up behind her until his meaty hands grabbed her tits in a vice-like grip.

 

“Hey, a little more warning!” she chided.

 

“Would your opponent warn you when he was about to throw a punch at you?” A asked as Hinata felt something thick and hard force itself between her thighs. She looked down at the mahogany log that was A’s dick jutting out from between her legs as he sawed it back and forth slowly. A soft moan escaped her lips as her pussy began drooling slightly.

 

Damn,’ she thought, ‘My training with Boruto has left my pussy overly sensitive!’ A had a point however as he began squeezing her tits roughly, rubbing them together as he pinched and tugged on her nipples until they turned stiff. Hinata’s breathing turned slightly ragged as she clenched her thighs together, bucking her hips to stroke his dick harder.

 

“Don’t think this will even come close to doing me in!” she said, though her voice didn’t sound as confident as she wanted it to.

 

“We’ll see how confident you are after I’m through with you, this won’t be like the last few times!” A said before doing a quick series of hand seals while still groping her tits.

 

WAAH!?” Hinata yelped as her tits swelled like balloons! The sudden added weight would have made her fall forward if not for A holding her up. Her tits were now each as big as her entire torso, they felt hot and tingly, like having a fever and pins and needles at the same time. This was like when Kaguya had altered them while Boruto was poorly posing as his father. Hinata didn’t bother asking where he learned to do this as she decided to go on the offensive now. Lifting her right leg high, she turned in his arms, spinning around to face the big black man. She grabbed his face in her hands and kissed him, hard!

 

“Muguuph…!” A muttered in surprise as she forced her tongue into his mouth.

 

Whilst he was distracted, Hinata straddled his cock again, grinding her pussy against it this time, her juices producing a squishy wet sound as their flesh rubbed together. The heat coming off his dick was feverishly hot, almost as if there were a furnace inside the massive meat rod.

 

“Nmmmmph…” Hinata moaned into his mouth, moving her tongue all around inside. A’s shock wore off quickly however, and he put his hands around her slim waist. His big hands could easily encircle her entire waist, making her feel almost like a doll in comparison. A doll with gigantic tits now, but a doll nonetheless.

 

Moving quickly, Hinata shoved A back, knocking him onto his back on the floor! His huge log of a dick jutted straight up as Hinata got down on her knees and pressed her now massive tits around it. Even with their size however, they couldn’t fully envelope A’s beefy meat stick. The top half jutted out from the top of her cleavage and pressed against her cheek. The smell coming off it was nearly as strong as the heat!

 

Hinata immediately began moving her newly enhanced tits up and down, she suppressed a light moan at the pleasurable sensation of the ultra soft flesh sliding against the rigid shaft. Something about the jutsu’s size enhancement also enhanced the sensitivity of the area. She idly wondered if this jutsu could be applied to a man’s penis in the same way? But then she remembered something Karui said over a little too much sake when she, Sakura, and Hinata were out drinking.

 

“Yeah, TECHNICALLY that family technique could be applied there. Choji does it all the time. But if you don’t know what you’re doing, you can cause damage to the nerves. There’s a lot of complicated nerves there, expanding it without an exact understanding of what you’re doing could be bad. Loss of sensitivity at best, complete impotence at worst, and with only one attempt.” she had told them.

 

Hinata couldn’t think of any man who’d want to risk it as she listened to A groan slightly. She smirked, last time had to be a fluke if all it took was THIS much to get a groan out of him. ‘Let’s finish this quickly,’ she thought, wanting to get back to Himawari at the hotel.

 

She opened her mouth wide, jaw aching from the strain as she engulfed A’s thick meat and took it down her throat. “MMUUGUH, NHAAH, MMHN NHNN, GUH GUG AGUH GUHPHMMMH, NGHMMMMN…” she gagged and choked as she slowly moved her head up and down, actively drooling to coat A’s length with her saliva. After only a few strokes, she was moving smoothly, years of training since she was a child making the effort an easy task. Her head slid up and down, her lips making wet slurping noises as they glided over his length.

 

HAHG, HNG MMMHN, NNGH MMMNM, HMMMMMMPH…!” she moaned, stepping up her speed, paying special attention to the glans, the mushroom-like tip of his cock, where most of the nerves were located. She heard him groaning again, his cock tensing in her throat. She suppressed the urge to smirk. In the end, A really was just another blowhard. That idea made her giggle at the irony in this situation!

 

Thankfully, the sound came out as just another gagging noise. “MMMMMMMH, MMMMMPH, OGHPB, NGHMMM, NGHOH, UPOWOO, HOGOOOH NBOHJUBOBOH…!” Hinata gagged suddenly as A grabbed her head with his big hands. His grip was like an iron vice, and Hinata’s opal colored eyes crossed as he began fucking her face roughly, “OGOOOH, GWEEH, GWUUH, GWUGH!!!

 

“Ahhh yeah! Time to teach you a lesson, Uzumaki bitch!” he told her.

 

AGUH, GUG, GUH, SHLUUUP,” gagged Hinata as she worked to compensate, but it was hard. Her head felt like it was tingling, the hairs at the back of her head standing on end.

 

“I’ll turn you into a loyal cumdumpster!!!” he yelled, standing up and forcing his cock down her throat in a Sword Swallowing position. Tears from the strain flowed down her cheeks as she gagged hard. She could barely breathe now as A piston fucked her mouth and throat.

 

GUHBHOOU, NUUURGH, GWAH GWAH GWAH!!!” Hinata continued to choke as the strange buzzing sensation continued, like feeling a static charge actually building.

 

This is bad,’ thought Hinata, the edges of her vision turning dark, ‘I’m… Fading out…’ Oddly enough, she felt, good…? Her head felt dizzy as a tingling sensation built in her groin, “GHMMMMMPH!!!” she moaned as her body climaxed lightly, her pussy gushing as she felt A’s cock spasm in her throat, depositing a glob of thick precum directly into her stomach.

 

GWAAAH, HAAH, AAHH, HAH, AH, HAAH…!!!” Hinata then gasped, sweet air flooding her lungs, bringing her vision back into sharp focus. A had yanked his cock back out of her mouth, the thick rod glistened in the light, long strings of saliva flinging off it from the sudden motion.

 

“It’s time!” said A.

 

“Time…?” Hinata echoed, her voice odd and far away, almost like how it sounded when she heard a recording of her own voice. She didn’t have the time to ponder the meaning as she felt an intense pressure in her groin, her clit felt so stiff and swollen, like it might burst! Hot, steamy juices leaked from her pussy suddenly as she felt a wave of desire that was almost alien.

 

“What…?” she said, again, hearing a voice that was and wasn’t her own.

 

I’M GONNA FUCK YOU STUPID!!!” A bellowed, his voice also sounding different now, it was deeper, richer, as if it were playing directly in her brain. Her confusion left her wide open as A grabbed her and whirled her around so her back was to him. The sensation of his touch was literally electric, like a steady stream of current was running through her.

 

“Huh, what…?” she said, dazed by all of this as the throbbing between her legs grew even more intense as A positioned the wide tip of his cock against her drooling cunt!

 

SHLIIIICK!!

 

AHHHAAAAAHHHHH!!!” Hinata wailed in pleasure, her tongue hanging out her mouth as her entire brain suddenly felt numb! Her flat stomach tented dramatically from the size of A’s cock as her pussy suddenly felt completely stuffed! She could feel her vaginal opening being spread so wide it felt like it might tear, but it also felt amazingly good!

 

But, there was something else! A new sensation, as if something hot and wet were enveloping her clitoris, only her clit wasn’t nearly big enough for this level of sensation. A immediately began thrusting his hips, drilling his cock in and out of her pussy with a wet SHLICK SQUISH SHLICK sound. As he moved, the strange feeling on her clit moved up and down, she could only describe it like someone was sucking on her clit, but it wasn’t right.

 

AHHH, WHAT…!? WHAT’S HAPPENINNNGH!!!” Hinata moaned, gasping deeply as A gripped her by her upper arms, driving his cock in and out faster and faster. “AHHHHN, MY PUSSY, NHOOO, MY CLIT, IT FEELS GOOOOOD!!!

 

“Hmmhmmhmmm, like it?” A asked, “I just developed this trick while here on the island!” he told her, “Using Lightning Chakra, I’ve made a link between your brain and mine! Relax, I can’t read thoughts or anything, but I can let your brain feel everything mine does!”

 

OUR BRAAAAINSSS…!?” Hinata moaned, gasping as A began moving faster, his pelvis slapping against her ass with a loud PLAP PLAP PLAP!

 

“That’s right! Even you should know that our brains determine sensations from the information fed into it by our nerves. And, that information is basically just a bunch of electrical signals. I’m letting your brain feel everything mine does!” explained A.

 

WHAAAAAT…!?” Hinata asked, letting out a loud moan as she felt herself cumming hard suddenly. “THIS, THIS FEELING IS…!?” she asked, her mind putting it together and a look of horror passing over her face.

 

“Yeah, so, how does it feel to fuck your own pussy!?” A asked, laughing as he began power fucking Hinata. The dark haired woman let out a loud scream of equal parts terror and ecstasy, her pussy gushing hard as she came again! She couldn’t fight it! She knew how to control her own sensations, but she had no defense against someone else’s pleasure!

 

AHHHHN, I GET IT, I UNDERSTAAAAAND…!!!” Hinata moaned, feeling her pussy clamping down tight as she came again. “I FEEL YOUR SENSATIONS!” she called out. ‘Ahhh, no! It feels like I’m fucking myself! I can feel his, no, I can feel my dick inside my pussy!!!

 

AHH, HAAH, AHHHHHAAAH… AMAZING!!! MY PUSSY! AHHAAAN, MY PUSSSYYYYY!!” Hinata screamed as she felt herself cumming again, her cunt clenching tight around A’s, no, around her own dick! “OHO! OHOOOOOO!!! SO THIS IS WHAT A PUSSY FEELS LIKE!! PUSSY!! AMAZING!” screamed Hinata, unable to do anything as her mind felt like it was being hammered as hard as her cunt.

 

I’VE NEVER FELT ANYTHING LIKE THIIIISSSS…!! MY PUSSY! IT’S WRAPPING AROUND MY COCK AND SUCKING ME INNNN!!! IT FEELS SO GOOD, SO TIGHT, SO HOOOOOOT!!!” howled Hinata. “OH FUUUUUCK! PUSSY IS AMAZING! I UNDERSTAND WHY MEN LOVE IT SO MUUUUCH!!” Hinata moaned.

 

It’s so good!’ thought Hinata as she began moving her body with A, craving more of this feeling, ‘I feel my dick inside me! My cock in my pussy! I feel them both! I feel my pussy around my penis!

 

HUURRGH HURR, HURGH HURH…!” A grunted, pounding the thick huge length into Hinata’s cunt even harder. Her body bucked back and forth as two different pleasures assaulted her mind as she felt her defenses crumble completely.

 

OOOOOHAAAAAAAHHHH, I’M CUMMINGH!! I CAN FEEL MY PUSSY CUMMING AROUND MY DIIIIIICK!!! MY PUSSY FEELS SO FUCKING GOOOOOOD!!! IT’S SQUEEZING MY DICK SO HAAAARD!!!” she screamed, feeling her pussy gushing almost non-stop now. “GO DEEPER, SHOVE MY DICK INTO MY PUSSY DEEPER!!! AHHHHN, SO GOOOOOOD!!!

 

A laughed, moving his body in rougher, more powerful thrusts. Hinata couldn’t hold back her howl of ecstasy as all of the pleasure bombarded her. “AHHHH…! AMAZING, AMAZING, HAVING A COCK IS AMAAAAZING!!! I CAN FEEL IT IN MY UTERUS, I CAN FEEL MY UTERUS GRIPPING MY DIIIIICK!!! AHHHN, MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! I WANT TO FUCK MY PUSSY EVEN MORE!!!

 

It’s too good! Having a cock feels too good, I’m gonna lose my mind! I can’t fight it! My body doesn’t wanna fight it!!! Naruto, I’m sorrrryyyyy!!!’ Hinata managed to think before a new sensation began mounting inside her dick. A deep kind of pressure that just seemed to grow, and grow, and grow, until finally…

 

I’M CUUUUUMMMMMING!!!!” Hinata screamed as she felt that pressure finally burst and something hot and thick shot through her cock and into her womb. It was almost painful, but also brought a sense of relief that was beyond words as she continued to scream in raw ecstasy. Was this what men felt when they ejaculated? No wonder it was how one lost in an injutsu battle. Hinata felt both drained and strangely energized at the same time. Her entire body felt like overcooked noodles, her knees were too weak to support her, and she buckled, driving her dick further into her pussy until it was all that held her up!

 

“Ahhhaahn, feels, so gooooood…” Hinata moaned weakly as she felt her cock suddenly throbbing again and she turned to look back at A, a look of utter submission on her face as she spoke. Her voice had that weird alien echo in it, and she realized she was hearing herself speak through A’s ears as she begged, “More… I… I want moore…” She hated herself, but she couldn’t fight herself now either. She wanted, no, she needed to feel her dick cumming more!

 

A smirked snidely, “You’re mine now.” he said, and Hinata’s only response was to moan as he began fucking her all over again!

 


 

(Story by User: SailorIo)

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Fluffy.1898
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Fluffy.1898
7 hours ago

I know I’m not the only one here that doesnt want that to happen I know you are saying their is an arc coming but seriously you are not making lighting chakra connect their brains together like what lets hope this doesn’t last pls

Cuchilla
Cuchilla
4 days ago

Could Tsunade be Naruto’s equivalent of Kushina(Sasuke and her are banging now, since Sakura chose the Raikage, and Hinata has been seduced by A)?

MeloMelo
MeloMelo
7 days ago

Can you create the story of the image where Naruto and Raikage fuck Hinata in the strip club while Kushina watches?

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
6 days ago
Reply to  MeloMelo

I might, later

Ballazan
Ballazan
7 days ago

Did you seriously HAVE to make something this shit AGAIN!? Honestly it was going so well with A getting a taste of defeat the last time he tried to do this and then to flip it around and completely fuck it up! WHY!?

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
6 days ago
Reply to  Ballazan

There’s a story arc here.

Fghhx
Fghhx
10 days ago

W chapter, I loved the part where A was making Hinata fade out by not letting her breath beacuse he was piston fucking her throath, so hot. Can’t wait to see where this is going, and also can’t wait for some Sakura chapter where she’s fucked by Boruto or A.

Sailor_Io
Member
10 days ago
Reply to  Fghhx

As the old saying goes, “Stay tuned”

Whitis
Whitis
11 days ago

Instead of Naruto healing Hinata he should further breaker her than A did.

And/or

If Hinata were to get payback against A it should be a joint effort involving her and her husband Naruto.

100/100! Keep up the awesome work!

Last edited 11 days ago by Whitis
Sailor_Io
Member
11 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

That seems a rather mean spirited solution.

Idkwhatnametoputhere
Idkwhatnametoputhere
11 days ago

For the part when they say

“Even now, she could see a trio of people near one wall of the hotel exterior. A young man and two girls. The young man had messy dark green hair and wide green eyes. His body was slender, but he had a ton of muscle definition all over. Hinata wasn’t sure what kind of training discipline he followed, but could guess he was geared more for quick movement and flexibility rather than sheer brute force.

Kneeling in front of the young man were two women, both of them also had dark green hair, one with straight hair that came down to just above her shoulders. While the other had wavy hair that reached just past her shoulders. Both women were well endowed in the chest area and looked completely consumed with lust and desire as they took turns sucking the young man’s impressive erection. Hinata noticed the one with the straight hair was definitely older than the young man, possibly one of those cougar types. Every time she took the man’s cock into her mouth, the other girl seemed to egg her on excitedly.”

Who are these people supposed to be?

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
11 days ago

They are whomever you want them to be

Tony2Dirty
Tony2Dirty
12 days ago

On one hand, I don’t fuck with anything that involves A winning. But on the other hand, seeing how you’ve had Boruto and Naruto portrayed, combined with the fact that Hinata was not 100% going in and A had an ace in the hole, the revenge is gonna be amazing. Cause with how you’ve written it, all A has going for him is a big dick, while Naruto, and now Boruto, has a big dick, plus actual techniques.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
11 days ago
Reply to  Tony2Dirty

😏

zemthyri
zemthyri
12 days ago

Well, I was really hoping that Hinata would be able to fully avoid the “Getting broken by A” arc from the original story in this reboot given that Sakura is already serving as an example of a “fallen” Konoha kunoichi, but at least this time around it is much more unique with the “brain link” technique. Maybe given the Hyuga proficiency at manipulating chakra networks, Hinata can eventually find some way to flip the technique back on A.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
11 days ago
Reply to  zemthyri

There’s an arc here, stay tuned

oceanberserker
oceanberserker
12 days ago

Hey, there. Been following your work for quite a while now, so here’s my first commentary. Not gonna lie, REALLY hoping this a ‘won the battle, lost the war’ scenario for A. Because now you KNOW Hinata and/or Naruto has to get their getback on A for this. Maybe Kushina could help with that, yeah? Otherwise, A is going to be insufferable about this. And quite frankly, some of the best works I’ve seen here is him getting humbled. Both stimulating and satisfying. Anyway, I won’t say I ENJOYED – enjoyed this, it’s a guilty pleasure for me if I’m being honest, but in general, the artwork is is as solid as always and that little twist at the end where A unintentionally cribs off ‘Stranger Days’ from 1995, I think the year was, in – universe to get the better of Hinata here, not bad on the part of A, not bad at all. Like him or hate him, and believe me, I DO hate him, that was a damn clever move. Although I can’t help but think that Hinata might turn it around by telling A that the only way he could win was to make her fuck herself ’cause he didn’t have what it took on his own, then or even now. Meh, just a thought being thrown out there. But I digress, take care, stay safe, and good luck. Hope to see more great work from you soon.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
12 days ago
Reply to  oceanberserker

Thanks for coming out of lurk mode! I hope you comment more in the future. And I might just use that idea!

Anon
Anon
12 days ago

Are you only allowed to write Naruto chapters or something? Why can’t we get stories for anything else?!

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Anon

I’ve got other stuff in the pipeline.

Anon
Anon
12 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Can’t wait. Maybe the upcoming 30 chapters of nothing but Fairy Tail will make up for getting anything from Bleach, MHA, One Piece, KLK, and DBS for a long time.

Oh wait, no it won’t.

Hiryu
Member
12 days ago

Well, it finally happened. Hinata not only lost to A, but she officially got broken by him too! And how it was done was how this story was told. 👀

So let me get to the point: I know that this chapter is certainly not everyone’s cup of tea. And believe me, I totally understand that. But I honestly enjoyed it for what it was. ✍️ Hinata was nowhere near 100% for A, due to Boruto’s punish– apologies, *ahem* training, but whether or not he actually knew it is up for debate. Because he came prepared for her this time. And it was a pretty nasty ace in the hole. But also very effective. 😳

Everything leading to it was pretty good, including A giving Hinata something to think about regarding Himawari. 🤔But after that, man, that was simply crazy. That jutsu was also somewhat similar to the body link magic used in your current FT story, but applied differently thanks to A’s lightning and other techniques. Still, pretty creative. 👍 Needless to say, the shoe is on the other foot for Hinata now. And it looks like it might take Naruto, Boruto, or Heaven forbid BOTH of them, to break her out of it! 😬

Personally, I’m looking forward to seeing how you cook this one. And I can’t wait to see what happens next. So nice work. 😏

Until next time! 😉 👋

– Hiryu

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Hiryu

Yeah, I needed something that could potentially rival the Kami Chinpo move in order to make the story work. I had fun doing this one once I figured out what I wanted to do with it!

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
12 days ago

It was a great chapter and can’t wait to see what the next chapters Will be about and there are still two rounds left before she comes back to normal by Naruto and keep up the good job

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Thank you!

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
11 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

I wonder would kushina lose to that technique A used on hinata? Are you going to let A use that technique on Sakura?

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
11 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Maybe on Sakura. I will go into further detail on it later.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
11 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

What about kushina? Would she lose to A technique?

Sailor_Io
Member
11 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Depends on if there’s more art later. The entirety of the series hinges on the artwork done, not the other way around.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
11 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

I thought you as the writer would decide instead of the art

Sailor_Io
Member
11 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

How you think that? I have said ad nauseam that I DO NOT hold any sway over the artwork. And by your logic just now, that’s like me being given a picture from MHA, and doing a Ranko Island story to it, without the depicted characters even appearing in the story.

Ouap
Ouap
12 days ago

the fact that now hinata belongs to the Raikage i’m waiting to see what happens next! Hinata becomes the Raikage’s sex slave

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Ouap

I gotta find a pic to work the next part of this arc to.

Whitis
Whitis
12 days ago

Now I want Naruto in this position, where he completely breaks someone, probably due to them asking him to do it.

10/10!

Last edited 12 days ago by Whitis
Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

He already did that ages ago with Samui.

Ouap
Ouap
12 days ago

Good history !

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Ouap

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Anonymous
Anonymous
12 days ago

well…i don’t like this at all, its not for me

Sailor_Io
Member
12 days ago
Reply to  Anonymous

I understand, I do.

Neb
Neb
12 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

I personally like it. About time A got a victory.