Thank you man. I appreciate the comment, hope to hear more from you
Dr. Pervert
2 years ago
Always love seeing 18.
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lightjoker
2 years ago
I wonder if the android 21 character will figure in the future
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Mr. Akrononym
2 years ago
Really interesting couple with an even more intriguing premise. I like the juxtaposition of 18’s gargantuan tits and Cheelai’s much smaller, but still captivating breasts. The inviting, and almost challenging look in both of their eyes is really well depicted as always and I for one wouldn’t mind joining them for some sexy fun, if the comments on their tits are anything to go by. Speaking off, I think you even overdid it slightly with the words as you brought “Bitch”, “(Cock) Whore” and “Suck me” up twice, and even something similar to “Suck me” in “Eat me”. I mean, the pic is really tit-heavy, I get it, but it seems just slightly repetitive. That aside, I really dig 18’s red lipstick marks on Cheelai’s green tits and cheek as it shows that the two girls had some erotic fun already. Big fan of this artstyle, and thereby the artstyle of the cum. It looks fresh, adds even more individuality to your drawing and is simply a delight to look at.
Solid artwork from start to finish. I hope you’re doing well.
8,5/10
Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. Always a treat to read the comments.
Michael McFadden
2 years ago
Im gonna be honest with you, i Unfortunately im not interested in anything of the Dragon stories and art for a couple reasons. First one, cant imagine the characters doing this kind of stuff anf being drawn that way. Two and most obvious is the fact that its been mostly Krillin, Roshi and broly. This is one of the stories that hasn’t even used its main and the other side character with at all which is Goku and Vegeta, simple response i know but they have only appeared in this story once then after that, poof. I dont mind if other characters are used however this has become to much and it dont make sense considering all the other art and stories have the main character and the second character as well. Im not saying i want to see those two when ever a chapter comes out but at least let them be seen in a stroy with someone or anyone just once or something. Sorry this is not the usual happy and good review you usually see from me, but im just speaking my mind.
It seems the bulk of your message is focused on the story so lets tackle that. I’d say voice your opinion on the chapter page itself, let SailorIo know how you feel. He writes the stuff.
As for the art, it’s all requested. Sorry you don’t care for the DB stuff but others do. Everyone has different tastes and some like dragon ball hentai.
And thats completely fine which is understandable. My mine reason is the fact is that well i can even imagine DBz characters being drawn that way or act like that expect Roshi.
Ya but you can make that argument for Bleach, or Naruto, or One Piece, or My Hero Academia or most other series? It’s just a weird reason to dislike the Dragon Ball pictures I draw? The reality is, most hentai art are characters acting “out of character”. 99% of the characters from these series would NOT act in any way they are depicted in Hentai. You’re gonna end up not liking a lot of hentai if your bar for acceptability is based primarily on characterization consistency.
Never said the drawing was bad at all, just grew up on much older dragon ball so graphics were not as good as they are now. I guess thats just kinda me be a odd duck i suppose.
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good comparison, I like when you do this type of drawings I hope you do more
Thank you man. I appreciate the comment, hope to hear more from you
Always love seeing 18.
I wonder if the android 21 character will figure in the future
Really interesting couple with an even more intriguing premise. I like the juxtaposition of 18’s gargantuan tits and Cheelai’s much smaller, but still captivating breasts. The inviting, and almost challenging look in both of their eyes is really well depicted as always and I for one wouldn’t mind joining them for some sexy fun, if the comments on their tits are anything to go by. Speaking off, I think you even overdid it slightly with the words as you brought “Bitch”, “(Cock) Whore” and “Suck me” up twice, and even something similar to “Suck me” in “Eat me”. I mean, the pic is really tit-heavy, I get it, but it seems just slightly repetitive. That aside, I really dig 18’s red lipstick marks on Cheelai’s green tits and cheek as it shows that the two girls had some erotic fun already. Big fan of this artstyle, and thereby the artstyle of the cum. It looks fresh, adds even more individuality to your drawing and is simply a delight to look at.
Solid artwork from start to finish. I hope you’re doing well.
8,5/10
Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. Always a treat to read the comments.
Im gonna be honest with you, i Unfortunately im not interested in anything of the Dragon stories and art for a couple reasons. First one, cant imagine the characters doing this kind of stuff anf being drawn that way. Two and most obvious is the fact that its been mostly Krillin, Roshi and broly. This is one of the stories that hasn’t even used its main and the other side character with at all which is Goku and Vegeta, simple response i know but they have only appeared in this story once then after that, poof. I dont mind if other characters are used however this has become to much and it dont make sense considering all the other art and stories have the main character and the second character as well. Im not saying i want to see those two when ever a chapter comes out but at least let them be seen in a stroy with someone or anyone just once or something. Sorry this is not the usual happy and good review you usually see from me, but im just speaking my mind.
It seems the bulk of your message is focused on the story so lets tackle that. I’d say voice your opinion on the chapter page itself, let SailorIo know how you feel. He writes the stuff.
As for the art, it’s all requested. Sorry you don’t care for the DB stuff but others do. Everyone has different tastes and some like dragon ball hentai.
And thats completely fine which is understandable. My mine reason is the fact is that well i can even imagine DBz characters being drawn that way or act like that expect Roshi.
Ya but you can make that argument for Bleach, or Naruto, or One Piece, or My Hero Academia or most other series? It’s just a weird reason to dislike the Dragon Ball pictures I draw? The reality is, most hentai art are characters acting “out of character”. 99% of the characters from these series would NOT act in any way they are depicted in Hentai. You’re gonna end up not liking a lot of hentai if your bar for acceptability is based primarily on characterization consistency.
Never said the drawing was bad at all, just grew up on much older dragon ball so graphics were not as good as they are now. I guess thats just kinda me be a odd duck i suppose.