The Universe 7 Carnal Coitus Saga


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Dragon Ball stories)
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“Someone wanna tell me why we’re on the planet of the God of Destruction?” asked Cheelai as she looked around the surreal environment. It was by far the strangest place she’d ever been. The ‘planet’ was shaped like an upside down pyramid, with the flat end dominated by a massive tree with several buildings in the leafless branches. The green skinned girl was nervous just being here, this was the one guy even Frieza didn’t want to mess with!

 

“I don’t know,” Broly said quietly, “That Kakarot guy just showed up outta nowhere and said we needed to come here for some kind of announcement.”

 

“That figures, he could have at least given me time to wake up, does he have any idea how hard it is to get a decent night’s sleep on Vampa?” Cheelai complained. She then looked around at the gathered group, there were a lot of people she’d never seen before, but if she were to guess, most of them were Saiyans! ‘Where did they all come from though? Last I heard all the surviving Saiyans were male, but those two girls are most definitely females.’ The others that were gathered were amongst the strangest lot she’d ever seen. A tiny bald man stood next to a taller blonde woman who would have been beautiful if her skin wasn’t so pale. A fairly handsome Namekian, but for some reason he looked pissed about something. His face seemed to be set in a permanent scowl. She also saw the Saiyan prince here talking with a young man with odd lavender colored hair.

 

There were others as well, a child who seemed to be a tiny clone of Goku or Kakarot, whatever his name was. A few other very pale women, two with dark black hair, and one with icy blue hair. There was even a really old man who gave Cheelai the creeps. Though his eyes were hidden behind a pair of sunglasses, she could feel them crawling over her like a swarm of Vampaian needle ants! Disgusting creatures, but not all that bad when you cooked them right. She also saw a number of others she assumed were from that backwater planet, aside from maybe the really fat pink guy with the narrow eyes. Cheelai wasn’t really interested in getting to know any of them. If they were friends of Goku, she had to assume they were enemies of hers.

 

She spotted Lord Beerus sitting on one of the branches looking bored as usual, the discarded wrapper of something called a hamburger lay next to him as he picked bits of whatever it was out of his teeth. “An interesting snack Goku, and you say that it can be made hundreds of different ways?” he said to the spikey haired saiyan.

 

“Yep, depending on what you like being added, they can even use different meats.” Goku told him.

 

Cheelai shook her head, she’d seen that Goku guy talking to Beerus like it was nothing. It made her wonder just how strong he was, or maybe he was just plain dumb?

 

“Really?” said Beerus, his interest clearly peaked, “Maybe next time I’ll have one with some of that cheese stuff that was on the pizza I had before.”

 

“Oh, that’s one of the better toppings!” Goku told him, “Say Lord Beerus, do you have any Idea why Whis wanted everyone here?”

 

“How am I supposed to know you dumb ape!? I may be a god, but that doesn’t make me all knowing!” Beerus said in an annoyed tone, “Besides, being all knowing would be terrible, everything would be so boring, nothing would be new.”

 

“Huh, I guess I never thought about it that way.” said Goku as he blinked his eyes with a look of understanding on his face.

 

Cheelai had to stop her own eyes from rolling, and was about to go over to Goku to demand he take her, Broly, and Lemo back to Vampa. When a blue skinned man with weird hair appeared alongside a woman who looked like she could have been his sister. With them was another being who looked like Beerus, only fatter. The blue skinned man spoke first, “Thank you for coming everyone, I know it must be so terribly inconvenient to be called here out of the blue like this, but rest assured we have a very good reason.”

 

“Is Lord Zeno having another tournament?!” Goku asked excitedly.

 

THAT comment brought a look of utter fear to Beerus’ face, something Cheelai never thought she’d see. “ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND!? WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO PUT ALL OF US THROUGH THAT AGAIN!?” he shouted.

 

“What’s a tournament?” Broly asked.

 

“A dumb contest, usually with some kind of game or something, with a big prize for the winners.” Cheelai explained to him.

 

“Oh.” Broly said quietly.

 

The blue skinned man with the strange hair cleared his throat, “Ahem, no, Lord Zeno is otherwise occupied for the time being.” he explained. “Though, the reason for this gathering is directly related to the Tournament of Power.”

 

“Alright!” Goku said excitedly.

 

“Shut up and pay attention Kakarot!” shouted the Saiyan Prince.

 

“As I was saying, as many of you here know, the Tournament was only the latest in a very long string of threats to this very universe within the past few decades. Most of which one or more of you here were responsible for either instigating or resolving, or both.” said the blue man with a laugh, though Cheelai didn’t find it all very funny.

 

“What of it?” asked the Saiyan Prince.

 

“Well, and this is not meant to be insulting, but, all of you are Mortal, and even though a few of you have attained power levels reaching the levels of divinity, the fact remains that you are not getting any younger.” explained the blue man. “So what will happen when the next Universal threat occurs, and none of you are young enough to handle it?” he questioned. “Lord Beerus can’t be called upon to deal with every single one of them. Gods of Destruction are meant to deal with Divine matters of the universe, not Mortal ones.”

 

“Haaaaah, such things are beneath me.” said Beerus.

 

“Indeed my lord.” said the man, “And it seems that each time one of these threats gets dealt with, it’s only a matter of time before a newer, more powerful one emerges. And while it would be a simple matter to send one of the highly skilled fighters in Other World to deal with such a problem, there have been far too many violations of the border between life and death in recent years. Use of the Dragon Balls not included in that. SO, it has been decided by the Kai’s and other Divine Beings that the NEXT generation of fighters needs to be cultivated at once!”

 

“Huh, what are you talking about Whis?” asked the blue haired woman.

 

The blue skinned woman spoke up now, “What my brother means is that we need everyone here for a special mission.” she explained. “We call it ‘The Universe 7 Carnal Coitus Saga’.”

 

Cheelai felt her cheeks turning red, her translator HAD to have gotten that wrong! All around her, the gathered people looked at one another in confusion.

 

“What’s coy-tis?” asked Goku.

 

Beerus shook his head and slapped one hand over his eyes, “Whis, Vados, use smaller words please. Remember these are mortals, and not the brightest lot at that.”

 

HEY! See if I treat you to anymore special desserts again, jerk!” said the blue haired woman.

 

“I meant in regards to the fighters here, Bulma.” Beerus told her, his voice sounding apologetic.

 

“Oh, well, okay then.” said Bulma, sounding satisfied with that.

 

The woman named Vados continued, “Well, the primary purpose of this mission is to restore the Saiyan race. Without use of the Dragon Balls.”

 

A murmur ran through the crowd, the Saiyan Prince seemed especially shocked. The one called Whis spoke again, “We want you warriors to spread your seed across the universe and create powerful warrior descendants to help take up your mantle once your mortality has finally run its course.”

 

WHAAAAT!!!!” shouted the younger looking of the two dark haired women, “Are you saying what I think you’re saying!?” she asked as she grabbed the arm of a man about the same age as her standing nearby, hugging him closer.

 

“Now now, I understand your hesitation ladies, but this is not about love, it is merely about making sure that there is another generation to deal with future problems. You and Young Gohan have already taken steps towards this goal. Your daughter has great potential already, and she is only One Quarter Saiyan. Also, Prince Vegeta has two children already, and both of them are already powerful. We’re simply asking the prince to work to make a full Dynasty of Warriors for the future.” said Whis.

 

“Hey what’s the deal Vados?! The Saiyan race of our universe isn’t extinct, why do we care?” asked the fatter looking Beerus.

 

“Very simple Lord Champa, we owe a debt to Goku and his friends for restoring our universe’s existence when they were victorious in the Tournament of Power. So I am volunteering our universe’s finest warriors to assist them.” Vados told him, looking at the group of younger Saiyans in the crowd. The two girls among them were both blushing furiously and taking great interest in examining the ground.

 

“So we’ve been reduced from warriors to breeding stock, is that what you’re saying Whis?” Vegeta asked, he was trying to sound angry, but Cheelai could see he was just as embarrassed as the rest of the group.

 

“Alright, so I understand why Goku and the others are here, but why me, Krillin, and the others?” asked the old man with the pervy eyes.

 

“While our main goal is to bring back the Saiyans, we encourage you to create offspring as well, the more powerful warrior lineages, the better for humanity.” Whis said simply, and Cheelai flinched as the old man’s nose suddenly shot out twin streams of blood.

 

Gross…’ she thought.

 

“An excuse to have sex with all the ladies here?! I must be dreaming!” The old man said with the most perverted grin Cheelai had ever seen. It was even more off putting considering he was doing groping motions with his hands.

 

Goku sighed, “Do we have to?” he asked in a whining tone, “This sounds a lot like a chore. I’d rather just train and fight!”

 

“You fool!” shouted Vegeta, “This is a chance to restore our race! To be the fathers of a new greater Saiyan Race to be feared and respected throughout the universe!”

 

“I don’t know, I don’t like the idea of people being afraid of us.” said Goku.

 

“He means feared by your enemies and respected by your allies you fool.” said Beerus.

 

“Oh, well, I guess that’s not so bad, but still…” Goku said.

 

“Just think of it as another form of training to build stamina and endurance.” Whis said.

 

OH! Well then that’s different, count me in!!” Goku said excitedly.

 

“Excellent, now, in preparation for this, I have secured a safe planet in the Southern Quadrant of the universe, a fine little planet with a great many varied environments much like the Earth. There you will be able to carry out the plan in peace. Vados and I will be available to assist in birthings much like I did for you before Bulma.” Whis explained.

 

“Wait, I haven’t agreed to this yet!” said Bulma, “If you think I’m gonna let MY husband get busy with some Saiyan floozies…!”

 

HEY!” said one of the Saiyan girls, “I don’t know what a floozy is, but I don’t like the sound of it! You think this was something easy to agree to!?”

 

Cheelai turned away as the women began bickering back and forth. Their voices much like chirping birds. She walked over to Whis and lightly tapped his shoulder. He turned and looked down at her.

 

“Ah, you’re Broly’s friend, Cheelai, correct?” he asked her.

 

“Yeah, about this planet, is it inhabited?” she asked.

 

“Only with some base life forms, plenty of plants and animals, but nothing dangerous. South Quadrant isn’t known for any forms of hardships.” he told her, “I’m assuming you’re thinking it might be a better place for Broly to learn control over his power without risking innocent lives?”

 

“Something like that. Vampa may be where he grew up, but life there is hard, and that’s fine, but I want him to know what real foods taste like, to drink water and not blood, to learn how to really relax.” Cheelai told him.

 

“Ah, yes, well, Planet Busteez will be perfect for all of that and more.” Whis told her.

 

“Planet what…?” Cheelai said.

 


 

Planet Busteez reminded Cheelai of some of the recreational worlds she’d seen in Frieza’s empire. Places where distinguished soldiers got sent as a reward for exemplary services. If Frieza knew about this place, then there would be an invasion force sent in immediately. And from what she’d been hearing about the southern quadrant of the universe, it would take less than a WEEK to fully conquer this entire area.

 

She’d dressed in a simple one piece swimsuit she’d brought with her after learning she, Broly, and the Saiyan women from Universe 6 were being relocated to a coastal setting. Cheelai always loved the beach, it was so rare to find a nice one with fine white sand like this. The sands were so fine they were practically powder, and felt like silk beneath her feet.

 

Even though that Whis guy assured them that the planet was completely safe, Cheelai had brought along a laser pistol, just in case. Broly was bathing in a freshwater lagoon a few dozen meters from the shoreline. Cheelai still couldn’t believe he didn’t know what a proper bath was, but then, Vampa didn’t have any actual water. And the oceans here on Planet Busteez were all mostly freshwater, a rarity, and probably why there wasn’t much in the way of complex animal life here.

 

“So, what exactly are we supposed to do here anyway?” Broly asked as he sat in the large pool of water up to his chest.

 

A drop of sweat hung from Cheelai’s forehead, “Um, your dad didn’t teach you anything about girls and sex, did he?” she asked quietly.

 

“No, does it have anything to do with why we’re here?” he asked calmly.

 

Cheelai slapped her face with the palm of her hand, “Okay listen closely, because I’m only gonna explain this once, and if you tell anyone I explained all this I’ll deny it!” she told him, and then began the long and rather embarrassing explanation of the birds and the bees to the gentle giant of a saiyan. ‘Honestly, Broly’s dad couldn’t have told him all this!?’ she thought bitterly. Though he did listen well, and only asked for clarification on a couple of things before she was finally done. Naive as he seemed, Broly certainly wasn’t dumb, so he had that going for him at least.

 

“So, we’re supposed to do this here?” Broly asked quietly.

 

Cheelai laughed, “SEX WITH YOU?!” she asked incredulously, “Just because you’re a saiyan doesn’t mean I’ll do something like that!” she told him. “I came because I was worried about what that Goku guy might try. I still don’t trust him, he tried to kill you, and even Lord Frieza is afraid of him.” she explained. Cheelai half expected him to look horribly dejected and hurt, but Broly’s expression was the same neutral look he always had.

 

“Oh, alright.” he said simply as he stood up in the lagoon and Cheelai’s soft pink eyes went wide at the sight of the saiyan man’s massive dong that hung down between his legs, reaching down past his knees, and he wasn’t even the slightest bit hard! ‘WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK HELL IS THAT!?’ she screamed in her mind. She figured the saiyan’s were likely smaller than her little finger given all their bluster and that she had heard they used Birthing Chambers to foster their young.

 

“What, what’s wrong?” Broly asked.

 

Cheelai gave him a sly smile, “Then again… We WERE encouraged to help create extra offspring, and, as your friend, I should at least lead you through the basics…” Cheelai said, licking her lips slowly. She then holstered her pistol and took the gunbelt off, letting it fall onto the powdery sands. Next she stripped off her gloves and tossed them by her gun before she walked over to Broly, swinging her shapely hips as she moved.

 

“Cheelai, what…?” Broly asked as she began wading into the lagoon with him. The emerald skinned girl reached a hand up to touch his lips and smiled.

 

“Shhhhhh, just let me take care of everything.” she told him in a sultry tone.

 

“Uh, um, why are you talking like that…?” he asked before she jumped up to him, wrapping her arms around his shoulders and pressing her lips to his. Broly went stiff as a board with shock and she felt his lips parting as he gasped. She took that opening to push her tongue into his mouth.

 

“Mmmhmmmph…?” Broly murmured as Cheelai explored the inside of his mouth with her tongue.

 

“Mmmmmmmmmh…” she purred softly, hugging her body against his and pressing her soft tits against his firm chest.

 

“Hmmmph, eyue shmell nishe…” he said against her lips.

 

Cheelai giggled, slowly breaking the kiss and letting herself slide down. She tilted her head up to smile at him as she traced her fingers over the scars on his chest. Broly had had such a hard life, she was hoping to get him some peace here on Busteez. Maybe this weird Coitus Saga thing was fates way of making up for the rough life he’d had.

 

The emerald skinned girl then knelt down and used both her hands to take hold of Broly’s limp, but incredibly long dick! He grunted at her touch and Cheelai grinned as she watched it begin to throb in her hands. Licking her lips again she said, “Just try and relax, okay?” before opening her mouth wide and swallowing his cock down her throat!

 

“Cheelai, I… Uh… Uhhhh…” Broly groaned as his cock suddenly got thicker in her mouth. Cheelai’s jaw began to ache instantly as she gagged around him softly, feeling her throat bulging from his girth as his cock suddenly shot to fully erect in her mouth!

 

“Gaaah, woooow…” she gasped as she pulled away, “I’ve never seen one this big…” she moaned, hearts dancing in her eyes as she gently held his balls in one hand while stroking his length with the other. She could barely believe her eyes, Broly was easily longer than her arm, and twice as thick! Her pussy was quivering just at the thought of something this huge pushing into her!

 

Slowly, Cheelai moaned as she licked his length from the base to the tip, savoring the flavor and smell, a musky, animal scent that made her a little dizzy. Cheelai didn’t know if it was Broly or the animal pelt he refused to ever take off, but she didn’t care right now as she took his cock back down her throat and moaned loudly.

 

MMMMMMMMPH!!!” she said as she began slowly moving her head back and forth, making sure to keep a tight seal around his cock as she pulled her head back. Broly groaned, clenching and unclenching his fists as he looked down at her. She smiled at him with her eyes, moving her head back and forth faster now, “AGUGH, MMMMMPH, GUG, MMMMPH, GUG, MMMPH…” she gagged and slurped at his cock.

 

“Oooooh… That…. This feels incredible…” he groaned.

 

Cheelai grinned, it had been a while, but she was pretty good at this sort of thing if she said so herself, which she did! Still fondling his balls gently, Cheelai bobbed her head back and forth, loving the feel of his massive dick sliding in and out of her throat. She then reached one hand down and pulled the crotch of her swimsuit aside, exposing her burning pussy to the water of the lagoon. She used one hand to stroke the hot folds, moaning louder around his cock as she took his length all the way down into her very stomach!

 

MMMMMMMMPH, YESH, SHO PHIIIICK…!” she slurred, her eyes rolling back and she moved her head even faster. She felt her own drool dripping off her chin as she slurped and sucked as loudly as she could. The sound of his cock moving in and out of her mouth only turned Cheelai on even more as she took him all the way into her mouth every time.

 

“Haaaah… Cheelai… I… I feel something…” Broly groaned.

 

MMMMMMMPPH DHON’T… DHON’T PHIGHT ID…!!!! CUM IN MUH MOUPH!!!! AYE WHANT EYUE TUU BRULYYYY…!” she moaned around his cock, her eyes turning almost completely white as they rolled back in their sockets. She then felt hot, thick, liquid bursting into her stomach! A sensation of fullness, like she’d just eaten a massive meal came over her as she moaned, her pussy spasming in the water as she came with him!

 

GUAHH…” she gasped as she pulled her head free, smiling up at how his cock was still raging and ready to go. ‘Virgins.’ she thought with a smirk as she led Broly back out of the water. Stripping out of the top half of her swimsuit, Cheelai placed Broly’s hands on her breasts and smiled as he squeezed them softly.

 

“Soft.” he said.

 

“I should hope so!” Cheelai teased as she reached up and pulled him down to kiss her again. He then leaned her back on the sand, his throbbing cock pressing against her stomach as he kissed her back.

 

“Mmmmmh…!” Cheelai moaned as he became more forceful, his hands squeezing her tits more roughly as he pushed his tongue back against her own. ‘Wow, he learns fast!’ she thought as she wrapped her arms around his body, gripping him tightly. She then moaned again as he broke the kiss then time, moving to gently bite her neck as he growled like a beast.

 

“Ooooooh!!!” Cheelai moaned as he found the weak point where her neck met her shoulder. ‘Ahhhhn, how did he know…!?’ she thought as she moaned again as he bit down harder, sending a shiver of raw desire through her. Cheelai felt her pussy beginning to ACHE with want as she rubbed her crotch against him.

 

“Cheelai…?” Broly asked, pulling back slightly.

 

“Don’t stop!” she breathed, reaching a hand down between their bodies, grabbing his massive hard-on and guiding it to her pussy. “Hurry…. Ahhh! Hurry and put it inside like I said!” she moaned.

 

“Arrrraah!!” Broly growled, biting her neck again, not hard enough to draw blood, but enough to send a powerful orgasm through her body! An orgasm made all the more powerful by the sensation of his huge cock slamming deep into her pussy!

 

I CAN FEEL YOU HITTING THE BACK OF MY PUSSY!!!” Cheelai screamed in pleasure as she wrapped her legs around Broly’s waist. “OH MY GOD!!! YOU’RE SO FUCKING BIG!!!” she screamed in ecstasy.

 

“Cheelai… Your pussy, it feels so tight and warm…” groaned Broly.

 

The green skinned girl moaned happily, rocking her hips back against his cock, “MMMMMMH, THRUST IT IN MOOORE!!! THIS IS THE BIGGEST DICK I’VE EVER HAAAAD!!!” she screamed. Broly groaned wordlessly, pumping his hips faster now, his balls slapping wetly against her ass as she clung to him like a monkey.

 

MMMMMMMMH, YESSSSS, HARDER, PUMP IT INTO ME HARDER!!!” Cheelai moaned, holding onto him as tightly as she could as the SLAP SLAP SLAP of their bodies echoed in her ears! His cock felt so fucking GOOD inside, Cheelai had never taken anything so BIG! She could barely think as she felt Broly’s massive dick stuffing her cunt to the limit!

 

HURR, HURR, HURR, HURRAAAAAGH!!!!” Broly roared, slamming his cock into her harder and harder, his entire body heating up against her. Cheelai swore she could actually feel him getting BIGGER inside, her pussy was being stretched to the limit as she screamed in pleasure.

 

YES, YES YES YES, MORE, FUCK MEEEE!!! SLAM THAT MASSIVE COCK INTO MEEE!!! OHHH FUUUUCK, SO BIG!! CUMMING, I’M CUMMING BROOLY!!!! YESSSSSS, GOOD, GOOD, FEELS SO GOOOOOD!!!” Cheelai moaned.

 

HEEER, HURRRR RRRROAAAGH!!!” Broly roared again, his hair beginning to stick up straight before flashing a golden color. Cheelai screamed as she began cumming over and over, her entire body shaking in pleasure as she held on for dear life! She then felt that same feeling of fullness suddenly in her womb as Broly roared again. Liquid warmth flooded her pussy as she let out a long howling moan!

 

YESSSSSS!!!” Cheelai moaned as she felt herself cumming again just from the feel of Broly’s cum shooting deep inside her. Above her, Broly panted and groaned, moving his body faster now, Cheelai could feel more cum flooding into her as she curled her toes and grit her teeth as her womb felt so completely full!

 

KEEP CUMMING INSIDE ME!!! I WANT MORE!” she screamed as she kept her legs wrapped tightly around his waist, “YOU SAIYANS ARE FUCKING INCREDIBLE!!!

 

HUURRRRAAAAAAAGH!!!” Broly roared again, more cum pouring into Cheelai’s pussy as she felt everything getting hazy. She was cumming so much, she felt as though she might pass out!!! ‘Maybe this will be more fun than I thought…’ she thought to herself before everything went black and she passed out.


(Story by User: SailorIo)

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A humab
A humab
7 days ago

Hi

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Whitis
Whitis
8 days ago

Do saiyans transformation affect their dick size? Like they already have naturally enormous dicks but they get bigger with all the different transformations that saiyans have.

Rtenzo
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8 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

That’s up to Sailor if he wants to do it. I don’t mind if that’s the direction he wants to go.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
8 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

I already showed they did, if only briefly. When Broly went SS while fucking Cheelai, she felt him getting even bigger.

Whitis
Whitis
8 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Cool

Whitis
Whitis
9 days ago

It’s a shame namekians don’t have reproductive organs, oh well what are your gonna do.

Rtenzo
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9 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

Dragon Balls can fix that

Whitis
Whitis
9 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Yeah but don’t because this series is more about the saiyans than the namekians.

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Rtenzo
Admin
9 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

It’s really about producing future warriors, so all of the Z warriors are eligible to procreate. Except Yamcha.

Whitis
Whitis
8 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Yeah I don’t think Yamcha can be a considered a Z warrior anymore. It would be hilarious if yamcha found out about planet busteez and arrogantly thought he eventually would be asked to join only to realize he wasn’t even considered and would try begging and pleading to go only to be completely ignored.

Whitis
Whitis
9 days ago

I hope you post the next dragon ball chapter as soon as possible because I have a good feeling about this new series!

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Rtenzo
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9 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

SailorIo plans to work on the next DBZ chapter this weekend so hopefully it comes out next week 👍

Whitis
Whitis
9 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

I hope it’s like your other series’s where it comes out every week or every other week.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
9 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

I’m not a machine! 😜 but I’ll try!

Whitis
Whitis
9 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Sorry if you misunderstood me, I’m just trying to say that it gets updated and continued like the other series’s and not in between giant periods like the OC series busteez university.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
8 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

I’m working on it now. The chapters will be a bit shorter with the premise details out of the way, unless world building is needed for a particular chapter. Depends on the backgrounds.

Recreational Porpoises
Recreational Porpoises
12 days ago

Funniest thing to me is that I could read these in the characters’ voices. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Also, the ear-blanket stays on during sex.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
11 days ago

Of course it does! He NEVER takes that thing off!

Jojoleo
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Jojoleo
13 days ago

Alright first off Rtenzo you gotten better with DBZ girls design over the year os so you started to draw them still keeping to your style but your able to make it look close to how the girls nice evolution show in your art. Now story this is funny and great already like the first chapter and can’t wait to see what other girls are draw and have a go in the story since there are no shortage of females and hopes it does well. Nice job Sailorlo. Question is this a new weekly story or is going to be a while in while type?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Jojoleo

I won’t be the only one writing it I think… I don’t know when the next one will be since I don’t have a new pic yet. But I am glad you liked it. I already have an idea on how Vados might get involved if she appears in one.

Dan
Dan
13 days ago

Loved this. Can Roshi and/or Vados be in one in the near future? Perhaps with each other? Pretty please? It’s an odd pairing but i kinda want to see it in picture and story form of that’s possible!

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Dan

Depending on the pics done, not a problem.

Sailor_Io
Sailor_Io
7 days ago
Reply to  Dan

https://www.patreon.com/sailoriofiction

Your wish, has been granted, fare thee well.

Head over to my Patreon if you wanna read it right away.

Dan
Dan
7 hours ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Sorry but I’m broke, so I can’t read your story since I can’t get an account.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
6 hours ago
Reply to  Dan

Well, it just got released, hope you enjoy! 🙂

BroKey69
BroKey69
13 days ago

A new Dragon Ball series eh? First MHA, Naruto, Fairy Tail and now this?

I can only imagine how crazy this’ll turn out to be… aside from the Saiyans (and Goku being stupid), I personally would like to see more Krillin at some point or at least maybe Gohan.

Hopefully no NTR nonsense will be truly involved.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  BroKey69

Not planning on any NTR mess personally. Goku being dumb about sex IS cannon though. Remember, he didn’t even know what kissing was even though he was married with two kids. One still wonders how Chichi got pregnant to begin with?

Anonymous
Anonymous
11 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Could be a sort of “split personality” issue, (thanks to the head-trauma he received as an infant), where Goku’s primitive instincts take over as “Kakarot” whenever he feels aroused, engages in wild, passionate coitus, but forgets EVERYTHING that happened during mating activities, hence his bizzare conscious ignorance of things like kissing.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
11 days ago
Reply to  Anonymous

I like to think of it more as Chichi rufied and viagra’ed him to get her kids. Lol

Anonymous
Anonymous
13 days ago

Broly’s going to be VERY popular with the ladies, isn’t he?

Whereas Goku sees “spreading the saiyan seed plan” as a chore, and Vegeta and Gohan are likely unnerved/embarrassed by it to some varying degree, Broly definitely strikes me as the type who’s now immediately all for it because it feels good, and he REALLY likes feeling good.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Anonymous

Well, going off the movie, Broly struck me as unbelieveably naieve. Or maybe just ignorant because his father raised him to be a weapon. Hence why he needed sex explained to him by an embarrassed Cheelai. And Cheelai herself gave me a caring Big Sister vibe. At least when it comes to Broly. I bought the Dragon Ball Super Broly movie just so I could write this series.

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
13 days ago

So, impregnation has been included in themes?… *Vegeta from DBZA clip* “INTERESTING!!!*

This is definitely an awesome start for the new Dragon Ball series… (Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of Fairy Tail stories)? Either this is a typo or… crossover?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

I’m not saying this to be mean, just to clarify; THERE ARE NO CROSSOVERS PLANNED NOW OR IN THE FUTURE, SO PLEASE STOP ASKING EVERYONE.

All little cameos of other characters are not cannonically done. They are little jokes on my part done just for fun. A kind of Deadpool style fourth wall break. When Erza and Juvia were “seen” in the Ranko Island series, that was meant as a joke when Erza said they were supposed to be somewhere else. It was like her saying “We’re in the wrong series.” Just a little joke for fun. 🙂

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
13 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Damn! Then again, I did figure it was a typo.

Rtenzo
Admin
12 days ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

Yeah it was a typo, sorry!

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
12 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Well, at least the other thing stays.

Whitis
Whitis
13 days ago

I hope you use more use more dragon ball women even if they’re not fighters. I have this idea where certain women are picked through recommendations and also are just randomly chosen because they might make good breeding stock, like gohan and Videls old highschool friend Ersa is picked and decides to try and see if she can find gohan because she always thought he was kind of cute but he fell in love with videl first but she meets Goku and tries to seduce her friends father only to realize she in over her head because she immediately gets wrecked and starts following goku around because he kind of broke her pissing of chichi(if she is around at the time) and confusing goku, you know an old school hentai/porno premise. So saiyans aren’t only a warrior race but also a breeding and extremely endowed race. Also are hybrids just as big as full blooded saiyans like it doesn’t matter how much saiyan blood they have they’re dicks are as big if they were full blooded saiyans.

Last edited 13 days ago by Whitis
Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

Should be doable. I’m not sure if Ersa or whatever her name is is planned, but if she appears, I’ll try and do that.

Whitis
Whitis
13 days ago

I’m happy your making a new dragon ball series especially with the announcement of a new dragon ball movie coming out in 2022. Is chichi going to find out and come racing to take Goku back to earth only to get dragged into it this and become destroyed by colossal saiyan dick.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

Oh? There’s another movie coming? I wish there was another season of the anime as well.

Whitis
Whitis
13 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Is chichi going to find out and come racing to take Goku back to earth only to get dragged into it this and become destroyed by colossal saiyan dick?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

No idea yet. Stories are written to the pics, very rarely the other way around, VERY rarely. Like, only once or twice out of all the stories I’ve done.

ZMaster
Member
ZMaster
13 days ago

A new Dragon Ball story series? Sweet! I’m glad Dragon Ball is getting some more attention.

It’s a nice first chapter and the image of Cheelai is pretty hot. I like the premise of this story series that will have the characters sexing up a storm to make babies. I’m hoping to see some mix and matching between the characters and not just the canon pairings. Also just curious since Caulifla and Kale are involved will Vados also get in on the action (solely for the sex to be specific)? Anyway like I said it’s a great first chapter 👍 and I’m looking forward to see how this series plays out.

Also Planet Busteez. Nice👌

Last edited 13 days ago by ZMaster
Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  ZMaster

Glad you enjoyed it man

Henry.J
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Henry.J
13 days ago

Certainly excited to see some more dragon ball! Loved the picture and very intrigued by this new storyline. Excited to see how characters might interact with one another too. I think this was a great success.

Sailor_Io
Member
Sailor_Io
13 days ago
Reply to  Henry.J

Thanks, the primary plot idea was Enzo’s, but I went off the movie as much as I could for Cheelai and how she acted.

Anon
Anon
13 days ago

I never imagined this day would come…praise the lord everyone…Enzo has made a cheelai pic! GREAT JOB! And I hope we see more dragon ball around here now!

Rtenzo
Admin
13 days ago
Reply to  Anon

Do you like the story?

Anon
Anon
13 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Definitely! I’m so happy that dragon ball is getting a series on here! Also, planet busteez? It seems like busteez in it of itself is Omni-potent in some way. What’s next? Busteez galaxy?! But seriously, great job on the story! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Kai-ju
Kai-ju
13 days ago

Nice

Rtenzo
Admin
13 days ago
Reply to  Kai-ju

Thanks!

Joker
Joker
13 days ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

You should do Vados next