Shadow Clone Gangbang


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Boruto stepped off the elevator of the hotel where Sakura was staying on Ranko Island. The hall was like any other hotel here, a simple carpet with offwhite walls and pornographic artwork hanging off them. After he and Sarada had found her mother out on the beach, the pink haired woman took both of them back to the hotel where she had been staying.

 

“So where’s dad?” Sarada asked as she looked around.

 

“Don’t know, don’t care. Last time I saw him I just sent Hinata to give him a pity fuck.” Sakura said as she stretched, “Are either of you hungry?” she asked both of them.

 

“Mom!” Sarada yelled.

 

“What?” Sakura asked, “He probably found some slut who doesn’t mind a tiny dick. If so then that’s fine. Anyway, him not being here means we can just use this room.” Sakura said with a smile.

 

“Um, Sasuke Sensei aside,” Boruto said, “Can you please take this off of me!?” he shouted as his fully erect cock twitched against the belt Sarada had tied around it. Sarada and her mother both looked at each other and giggled.

 

“What, I thought you liked looking at naked girls?” Sakura asked, moving her arms up over her head and shaking her heavy tits from side to side, making them sway erotically.

 

“I never said I didn’t, but this is starting to hurt dattebasa!” Boruto said as his cock began throbbing against the belt again, the thick leather digging into the skin of his cock.

 

“That’s the point you dummy!” Sarada said, tugging on the leash attached to the belt, “This is what you get for playing around with that ivory floozy!

 

“Ghack!” Boruto winced.

 

And your mom.” Sakura added with a smirk. “Though I’m wondering, how are you still this big after the walk here?” she asked as she moved over and traced her fingers along the edge of his cock. Boruto shivered at her delicate touch, his cock jouncing lightly. Sakura licked her lips and rubbed her hand over the massive tip before circling one finger around the hole at the end.

 

“Oh that, I used a pressure point I learned about here.” Sarada said, “Finding it was easy with these.” she said, blinking her eyes and triggering her Sharingan.

 

“Huh, figures there’d be something like that on this island,” Sakura said with a smile, licking her lips again, “How long does it last?”

 

“That’s what I wanna know!” Boruto said.

 

Sarada gave them both a wicked grin, “Until I hit the counterpoint.” she answered.

 

WHAT!?” Boruto yelped.

 

“Relax, you’ll be fine!” Sarada told him.

 

“Reeeeaally?” Sakura asked with a grin as Sarada took the belt off of Boruto’s cock. He sighed in relief as the belt came off; the feel of the leather digging into his dick was annoying. The pink haired woman then got down on her knees with a smile as she pressed his wide cock between her fat tits. Boruto groaned softly at the warm soft feel of them as he looked at her stiff pink nipples.

 

“Ahhhh, I’ve put this off too long!” Sakura moaned as she leaned her head forward and pressed her face against his dick. “Mmmmmmmh, yes, it’s so hard and warm…!” she said in a throaty voice while slowly dragging her tongue along the side of his cock.

 

“Ha… Ahhh…” Boruto groaned, Sakura’s tongue felt good against his cock as she rubbed her breasts up and down gently. Her face had such a lewd expression of raw lust that it would have made him rock hard without the little move Sarada had pulled. He felt his cock tensing reflexively as Sakura began kissing her way up his length, moaning lewdly.

 

“Mmmmmn, don’t hog it all mom!” Sarada whined, stripping off the pasted on bikini she had been wearing. The thing was little more than three red stickers. Two heart shaped ones that covered the tips of her nipples while leaving the rest completely exposed. And one strip of adhesive fabric that covered her pussy. Boruto had long since stopped questioning the sense of fashion on this island.

 

Though he was still a bit concerned about the odd marking that Sarada had over her womb. It was similar to one he’d seen on his mother. One that he had to remove with help from Kaguya lest it drive her insane. Though the pattern was slightly different, and it wasn’t really glowing.

 

Tossing the ‘bikini’ aside, Sarada got down on her knees as well, moaning deep in her throat as she went for his balls! Taking both of them in her hands, Sarada began licking and kissing them softly. Boruto closed his eyes at the feeling as he stood in the middle of the hotel room.

 

“Sarada, move aside for now, I’ll handle this part for a bit.” Sakura said to her daughter.

 

“No way! We’re both supposed to take care of punishing him, remember?” Sarada said.

 

Sakura smirked at her, “This is too much man meat for you little girl.” she said as she looked at her daughter while slowly brushing her tongue along the side of his cock, “Ahhhmmmmmph…!” she moaned as she opened her little mouth wide and engulfed the top of his cock between her lips!

 

MMMMMMMPH…!” she moaned loudly, her body shaking as she came just from taking his cock into her mouth! “CAAAWK, SHO BHIIIG!!! AYE WUV ID!!!” she moaned around his length.

 

“Hmmmn, says you!” Sarada said, licking his balls more, “Aye’ve been phucking dish dhick shinshe Aye vot here!” she slurred as she managed to fit one of his balls into her mouth and began rolling it around with her tongue.

 

Boruto groaned as the mother and daughter began bickering at one another. He watched as Sakura gagged around his length as she pushed it farther down her throat. Her neck swelled insanely thick as her peridot eyes rolled back in her head. Next to her, Sarada moaned as well, slobbering all over his cock like a dog as she licked and sucked the soft skin of his nutsack.

 

The young blonde didn’t know what to do as he looked down at them, his cock was still throbbing almost painfully in Sakura’s mouth as she began slowly moving her head up and down, slurping loudly at his length. He could feel her wet little tongue darting out every so often to lick at the last few millimeters she couldn’t get between her lips.

 

Beneath her, Sarada moaned even more, struggling to get both his coconut sized balls into her mouth. “Ahhhh, Aye wuv dese vallsh… Dey shmell sho guud!” he heard her say.

 

“Cawk ish vetter…!” Sakura said, “HMMMMPH, GUH, MMMMPH GUH, MMMMMMPH GUUUH, AHHHH, AYE’M CUMMING JUST FROM SHUCKING ID!!! YESH, AHHH, CAWKS, BHIG PHICK DELISHIOUSH CAAAAWKS!!!” she moaned lewdly, “AGUH GUG GUH GUG GUH GUH GUH!!!” she gagged loudly, moving her head up and down faster now.

 

“You shlut!!!” Sarada said to her mother.

 

YESH, AYE’M A CAWK SHLUUUT, CAWKSH ARE DA BEEESSHT, AAGHHHUG… MMMPH, MMMMPH, MMMMMPH!!!!” Sakura admitted shamelessly.

 

VALLSH ARE VETTER!!!” said Sarada as she began slurping his balls even more, her warm drool beginning to drip off his nuts. “AHHHH, WHEN AYE PHINK UV ALL DA CUM INSHIDE… HAAAA…

 

“Aguuueh…” Sakura gasped as she pulled her head free, “That just shows how inexperienced you are.” she said clearly, rubbing her face against his dick and making Boruto groan again, “A real woman worships a cock like this!” she said before licking his length from the base to the tip. “Isn’t that right?” she asked him. “Kaguya understands, haaah, just thinking of how this beast will stretch out my pussy is making me crazy!”

 

“Mwaah,” Sarada gasped, “Yeah right, I bet Boruto will barely even feel it now, you’ve been fucking so many dicks your pussy is probably all loose and flabby! No wonder dad must feel small!”

 

“He doesn’t feel small, he IS small!” Sakura yelled back, “I still remember when I first saw a REAL man’s cock! After feeling something like that, nothing less will ever do again!” she told Sarada before opening her mouth wide again and swallowing down his cock. “AHHHHHGH, SHO GUUUD, CAAAAWK!!! MUH MOUPH ISH CUMMING!!!! AGUH GUH MMMPH, GUH, MMMMPH!!!

 

“Hmmmph, I still say balls are better!” Sarada said, brushing her tongue between his nuts in a long slow motion.

 

“Ahhaa, you two shouldn’t fight, dattebasa…” Boruto said.

 

SHADDUP!” mother and daughter said in perfect harmony, making Boruto flinch lightly.

 

HMMMMPH!!!” Sakura moaned, swallowing his cock down again. Boruto watched as her pink lips glided up and down his length.

 

“Ooooohh…” Boruto groaned, looking down at Sakura. She looked back up at him with her peridot colored eyes full of raw open lust. He’d seen that look in Kaguya’s eyes since he’d first fucked her

 

MMMPH, GUH, MMMPH, GUH, MMMPH…!” Sakura moaned, slurping at his dick as she moved her head up and down. He then reached his hand down to run his fingers through her soft pink hair. Before he could try and push his cock into her mouth though Sarada slapped his hand away and fixed him with a glare.

 

“Hey!” he said as the dark haired girl hefted both his balls and began licking them again. She made a show of dragging her tongue over them slowly, letting out a deep throaty moan as she peppered them with kisses and licked them again.

 

Boruto wondered again what her problem was? She’d been like that every time when he looked at other girls. He blinked his bright blue eyes, ‘Is she jealous?’ he thought. It didn’t seem right, Sarada was always calling him an idiot and punching him whenever he did anything stupid.

 

On impulse, he reached his hand down to grab her chin, gently pulling her up slowly. Sarada let out a low moan, dragging her tongue along his cock as he pulled her back up. Then, just as her mother pulled away for a second, she swallowed the head of his cock!

 

HMMMMMMMPH!” she moaned, moving to deepthroat his dick as much as she could! Her throat swelled from the sheer girth of his cock as her dark eyes rolled back slowly.

 

HEY!” Sakura protested, “I WAS SUCKING THAT!

 

Sarada turned to her mother and pulled down her left eyelid slightly as she continued bobbing her head up and down, “Naow Aye ahm…” she slurred wetly around his dick.

 

Her mother pouted angrily, moving to hug her naked body against his, “You wouldn’t even know what to do with it little girl!” she taunted, “I’m sure Boruto prefers his women all submissive and slutty, not a bitchy little tsundere!” she purred, rubbing her breasts against his hip as she slowly licked his chest. “Isn’t that right Boruto? I bet this big, beautiful cock is just aching to fuck my naughty little pussy! Mmmmmmh, my cunt is aching to be stuffed again, ahh!! I want it so bhaaad…!” she whimpered.

 

SHADDUP MHOM!!!” Sarada slurred around his cock, “HOU’VE BHEEN PHUCKING EVRY BHIG CAWK UN DISH ISLAND, UR PUSSHY ISH BROBABLY ALL LOOSHE AND VAGGY NOW!

 

Boruto winced as he felt Sakura hugging herself against him tighter, making his bone creak. She then reached over and grabbed a fistful of her daughter’s dark hair, yanking her mouth off his cock. Long ropes of drool flung away from his dick before Sakura swallowed more than half of it back down her throat!

 

Groaning Boruto said, “Hey…” but that was as far as he got before both women glared at him again! Sarada began licking and kissing the length of his cock, waiting for the moment Sakura pulled away to breathe before taking it back into her mouth! He could feel her tongue slurping and sucking against the underside of his cock as the dark haired girl struggled to get him all the way into her mouth again.

 

HMMMPH, MMMPH, MMMMPH…!” Sarada moaned, her lips dragging away from her face every time she pulled her head up, “MYNE!!!” she slurred.

 

Sakura grabbed her hair again, pulling her free once more. But Sarada fought back, and soon both girls had their mouths wrapped around the tip of his cock. Boruto groaned in pleasure as he felt both their tongues sliding and slipping against his dick. After a few moments, their struggles against each other slowly faded as their lips met over the top of his cock, completely obscuring it from view.

 

MMMMMMMH, MHOM…” Sarada moaned.

 

SHARADAH…” Sakura moaned back as the two of them began licking his cock together like some kind of giant popsicle. As they licked their way up his length, their mouths came together over his cock. Boruto gulped as he watched mother and daughter exchanging spit over his dick before they moved to sandwich it between their sexy bodies! Sarada’s tits were far bigger than her mothers, but Sakura’s ass was wider. The feel of his cock sliding between their pressed bodies was incredible as he began sliding his cock up and down between them.

 

“Mmmmmh, we shouldn’t phight…” Sakura slurred, her tongue sliding against Sarada’s as they continued to kiss.

 

“Uh huh… Sho mush cawk fo boph uv ush…” Sarada agreed as she hugged her mother, pressing their bodies tighter around his cock as she moved themselves up and down.

 

“Ahhhnn, sho weeeet… Aye want dish inshide meh sho bhaaaad…” Sakura whined.

 

“Meh too…” Sarada moaned back into Sakura’s mouth.

 

“Um…” Boruto began to say and both women glared at him again, “HEY!” he berated them, “Fine I’ll just show you dattebasa!” he said as he brought his hands together in a very specific sign.

 

KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU!!” he shouted as two clouds of smoke billowed on either side of him. When they cleared, two more naked Boruto’s stood on either side of him, their cocks already fully erect and throbbing. Hearts sparkled in both their eyes as the two shadow clones each claimed the one directly in front of them.

 

HAAAAAAH!!!” Sakura howled, “YESSS, SO BHIIIIIIG!!!” she screamed as the clone unceremoniously shoved his cock inside her pussy with a loud wet SQUISH! That Boruto grabbed the pink haired mother’s wide hips and began slamming his cock in and out of her hard! Both Boruto’s could see the way Sakura’s tight pussy clung desperately to his cock as he swung his hips back and forth. Her belly visibly distended from his sheer length, stretching forward every time he buried his dick inside her. The wet SPLAT SPLAT SPLAT of his balls slapping against her thighs echoed in the hotel room.

 

AHHH FUUUUUCK, I FORGOT YOU COULD DO THIIIIIS!!!” Sarada moaned as his other clone claimed her, but instead pushed his cock up her ass! “SHANARRROOOOO!!!! MY ASS!!! MY ASS FEELS SO GOOOOOD!!!” Sarada moaned as her belly tented as well.

 

AHH AHHH AHHHH AHHHHH!!!” Sakura panted, rocking herself back against the first clone. “YESSSS, BHIG, SO BHIIIIG!!! AHHH, I LOVE THIS HUGE DIIIIIICK!!! IT FEELS SO MUCH BETTER THAN YOUR FATHERS SARADAAAAAAH!!!

 

MMMMN, MMMMMN, MMMMMMMMN…!!! YOUR SO BHAD MOOOOM!!! AGUUUMMMPH!” Sarada moaned before opening her mouth wide and swallowing his cock all the way down her throat and into her stomach.

 

AHHH, AHHH, AHHH, YES, I’M A LEWD SLUTTY WHORE OF A MOTHERRRR, AND I LOOOVE IT!!! AHHH FUCK MEEEE, FUCK ME BORUTOOOO, AHH, YOU CAN HAVE MY PUSSY WHENEVER YOU WAAAANT, USE ME AS A CUM DUMPSTERRRRR, AHH FUUUUCK THIS FEELS SO AMAZINGLY GOOD, IT’S THE BIGGEST COCK YEEEET!!!” Sakura howled, not even caring that Sarada had taken two of his cocks. The younger girl’s body spitroasted between the two of him.

 

HMMMMPH GUG MMMMPH, GUG, MMMMMPH, GUGH, MMMMMMMMPH GUUUUH…!” Sarada gagged and moaned as she was rocked back and forth between Boruto and his clone. Her giant tits swaying back and forth underneath her like a big pair of udders. His clone knelt down over her, grabbing those swinging flesh sacks and squeezed them roughly as he rammed his cock into her asshole.

 

MMMMMMMMMMMPH!” Sarada squealed around his cock.

 

“Hah, ahh, haaah… Fuck, your mouth feels so great, dattebasa!” Boruto groaned, his hands grabbing the sides of Sarada’s head as he began slamming his cock in and out of her mouth. Long lines of drool dripped off her chin as her dark eyes rolled back.

 

HMMMMMPH, MMMMMMPH, MOAR, PHUCK MY PHASHE MOOOAR!! AGUUG GUG GUG GUAH MMMBFFN BLEBU…” Sarada moaned loudly. “CUMMING, AYE’M CUMMING WIPH MUH MOUPH AN’ ASSSSH SHANHROOOOOH…!”

 

HAAAH FUUUUUCK, OH FUCK FUCK FUCK!!! FUCK MEEEEE!!! POUND THAT GIANT DICK INTO MY SLUTTY HOOOOLE!!! FUCKING DESTROY MY PUSSYYYYY!!! AHHH, YESSS!! YES YES YES!!! CUMMING, I’M CUMMING SO MUUUUCH!!” Sakura howled alongside her daughter.

 

“Horny, fucking, sluuut!” the Boruto clone grunted, swinging his hips even harder, making her fat ass ripple from every impact. He brought both hands down on her wide butt, spanking her roughly and making her squeal even louder.

 

YEESSSS, I’M A SLUUUT, A DIRTY SIZE QUEEN WHOOOOORE, PUNISH MY WHORE PUSSY WITH THAT GIANT DIIIIICK!!!” Sakura moaned.

 

Boruto groaned again, slamming his cock in and out of the wailing pink haired woman. The main Boruto groaned as well, watching as Sakura’s belly moved with the thickness of his clone. He then turned his attention back to Sarada. The dark haired girl stared up blankly, her eyes glossed over with pleasure as he forced his cock in and out of her sloppy mouth.

 

OHGH… NHAA… NHMMMMM…” she gagged and moaned around his cock while the clone behind her furiously drove his thick cock up her asshole!

 

HAHHHN, MORE, PLEASE, GIVE ME MORE… MORE DICK, BHIG HARD THROBBING DHIIICK…!” Sakura pleaded as she rocked herself back and forth against the clone in her pussy. Boruto grinned at his two clones as they each formed the Kage Bushin seal with their hands. Two more plums of smoke filled the room as a third and fourth shadow close were created! The two clones wasted no words as they jumped on the moaning women kneeling in front of him. The one with Sarada sat behind her, easily sliding his cock into her now constantly gushing pussy! Sarada’s nearly vacant eyes snapped into focus again, her Sharingan fully triggered as she let out a long low moan deep in her throat! Boruto groaned at the feeling of her throat vibrating around his dick while he looked back at Sakura as the final clone jumped onto her back, slamming his huge cock up her asshole next!

 

WAAAHAAAAAAH!!!” Sakura screamed, “DHICK, DHIIICK, DHICK DHICK DHIIIICK!!!! SO MANY BHIG DHIIICKS INSIDE MEEEE!!! YESSS… DON’T STOP BORUTOOOO, FUCK MY HOLES, STRETCH THEM WIDE WITH YOUR GIGANTIC COOOCK! AHHH FUCK, MY HOLES FEEL SO GOOD, I CAN NEVER GO BACK TO ANYTHING NORMAL AGAAAIN…

 

All five Boruto’s laughed and groaned together, making an odd echoing sound as they all pounded into the wailing mother and daughter. “I wonder who’s really getting punished and rewarded here, dattebasa!!” they said together as they slammed their combined five dicks into the women.

 

MMMMMHHHMMMMMMMPH!!!” Sarada gagged around his cock and Boruto slowly pulled is dick back. “AHH, AHH, AHH… NHOOOO, MOAR, PLEASE, I WANT MORE IN MY MOOOUTH…” Sarada moaned, “AHHH, I FEEL SO FULL… IT’S SO GOOD… CAN’T THIIINK…

 

AHH, HAAH, AHHNN… THAT’S RIGHT SARADAAAAH… WE DON’T NEED TO THIIIINK, WE JUST NEED THESE BIG DHIIIIICKS!!! AHH FUCK, I’M CUMMING SO MUUCH, IT FEELS LIKE YOUR HOLLOWING ME OUT INSIIIDE… DON’T STOP, PLEASE, YOU CAN CUM INSIDE AS MUCH AS YOU WAAAAANT!!!” Sakura screamed as she pulled Boruto’s cock closer to her face. She moaned wordlessly as she began licking and kissing his length once again! Sarada whined plaintively, but didn’t say anything as she focused her attention back on his balls.

 

The five Boruto’s all groaned as they found a natural rhythm together, slamming their cocks into the two women like a set of pistons driving in and out of a set of engines. Sarada rocked herself between the two inside her, making her ass jiggle and ripple as she let out a long moan while slobbering all over his balls.

 

“Haahh, sho full, cahn’t shtop cumminggg…” Sarada moaned weakly, “Pleashe, gimme cuum, whant lotsh uv cuuuum…!” she moaned.

 

The two clones behind the dark haired girl nodded to one another and both grunted. There was a wet noise that came from deep within Sarada.

 

OOOOOH…!” Sarada moaned loudly again.

 

Next to the dark haired girl, her mother let out a long low moan like an animal braying in heat! The two Boruto’s inside her both grunted together as they came. The same wet sound coming from inside Sakura as well!

 

OOOOOOOOOOOOAH…” Sakura moaned deep in her throat as she continued humping herself against the two clones. “SHO MUSH CUUUM… FILLING UUUUP… AHHHN, MOAR, GIMME MOAR, I DON’T CARE IF I GET KNOCKED UUUP…” she confessed.

 

POP, POP, POP, POP!!!

 

The room was briefly filled with smoke as the four clones all vanished in rapid succession. The sound was then quickly followed by a rude noise as all the cum pumped into the two women was no longer being held inside by insanely wide cocks! Boruto could have sworn he heard the two women say something, but he couldn’t make it out as everything his clones experienced all flooded back to him in an instant. His cock began surging like a fire hose, shooting cum out with so much force that the stream actually reached the ceiling!

 

AAAAAAGHUUUUGH…!” he groaned wordlessly as his eyes began spinning in their sockets while the world around him began to grow hazy and distorted. A massive headache then came on so intensely that for a moment he saw his life flashing before his eyes.

 

“Worth it…” Boruto said weakly before his consciousness finally caved in and he fell to the floor unconscious, his cock still shooting out a steady stream of cum that rained back down on the naked girls.


(Story by User: SailorIo)

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souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
15 days ago

Seeing Sakura cucking Sasuke like this is very interesting considering how hard she dick rode this man during the entire actual series. Plus I find her being a slutty size queen way to satisfying. Though there is a small part of me that kinda feel bad for him hopefully we see more of his plan with Kushina.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
15 days ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

Some Kushina chapters will be forthcoming soon.

Whitis
Whitis
15 days ago

Are Sakura and Sasuke going to get a divorce?

Whitis
Whitis
15 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

If they do get divorced who would Sakura try and marry afterwards, A or become Naruto’s second wife(Boruto is out because despite her size queen nature she still loves her daughter and wouldn’t want to hurt her). With A she has an oversized cock and a dominating partner but with naruto she has a partner with an equally enermous cock who can temporarily increase his dick size during sex and not just that she would easier access to both Uzumaki men. Question is how Hinata react and how would both Samui and Konan react as well since they seem to be developing a crush on Naruto. A happy ending would be if Hinata wanting to make everyone happy decides to stop being so possessive/protective of her husband and son and decides to let all three maybe four women(Sarada not wanting to lose Boruto and deciding to follow her mothers lead) joining the Uzumaki Family with Kaguya as the family fuck pet. Well you can’t blame a guy for imaging, wishing, and hoping. Can you imagine what a potential timeskip might look like, like if you had to say off the top of your head what would be everyone’s role/place in the newly expanded Uzumaki family.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
15 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

Things aren’t planned THAT far ahead right now.

Whitis
Whitis
15 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

But if you had to say what the females roles/places would be in Uzumaki family off the top of your head what would they be(minus Kaguya because we already know that she is the family fuck pet).

Kino
Kino
16 days ago

Just to be clear, this is still the NTR timeline right? The intention is still is for Naruto (and every other male except those from Cloud) to get cucked regardless of that new technique of his? Boruto be getting everyone on his dick eventually?

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
15 days ago
Reply to  Kino

Something like that.

Matthew
Matthew
16 days ago

Or at least both to x samurai, I’m still finding swell.

Matthew
Matthew
16 days ago
Reply to  Matthew

Samurai, I meant sakurai, hope I’m not bothering you with that.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Matthew

I THINK you mean Samui. Bloody autocorrect can be a pain. The little spat between her and Konan was, interesting.

Matthew
Matthew
16 days ago

Sweet, always a thrill to see them 3 in action

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Matthew

Indeed! It’s fun to write them too.

Whitis
Whitis
16 days ago

I want to see Sakura try and bash naruto by saying he’s nothing compared to his son only for naruto to shut her up with his new bitch breaking technique. It would hilarious if she began wishing she had married naruto instead of sasuke and that Uzumaki’s are better than Uchiha’s. Maybe seeing as how her daughter is kind of sort of already boruto’s girlfriend Sakura will try and weasel her way into the Uzumaki family by either becoming Naruto’s second wife or the family cumdump. (Poor Sasuke😂)

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Whitis

Naruto cannot get bigger than Boruto. He can roughly match him for a brief period, but cannot beat him. Please deal with this fact. And if he did, then it would finalize his position as a bad father by one upping his son. I know a lot of people don’t like Boruto because of how the other guy wrote the (manga)series, but the original creator has taken over and is cleaning up the mess there. I am a firm believer in the next generation should always try to do better than the previous one.

That said, I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter. As to Sakura, yeah, I have something along those lines planned in the near future. First I gotta catch up with Sasuke and Kushina.

Moltenblackbird
16 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

it wouldnt finalize anything. naruto is an adult boruto isnt. also so what if boruto gets beat. hes a stupid brat anyways. he needs to be put in his place. and even if the original creator is trying to fix things its too late. he can just have boruto do a 180 going from annoying brat to respecting others. and its too far in the series to have any actual character growth. so im going to call bs on your reasoning for making boruto force outclass is father. maybe if he was a fully grown adult then i can agree to it but hes like 14 or something. his dick is still developing. also naruto has infinite chakra so if its a jutsu then the time limit you mentioned is dumb.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago

I stand by my comments. I will NOT MAKE NARUTO BIGGER NO MATTER HOW MUCH ANYONE BEGS! It actually offends me when people do that.

moltenblackbird
16 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

I wasnt begging. I was just pointing out why your comment is stupid. Personally I dont like this story much. Sauske is insulted too much. Tsunade flat out ignoring him sakura constantly belittling him and lying to him. Not trying to start a huge argument but the story hasnt done anything but make sauske look bad and pathetic. Its the writers fault really. 43 pages and no addressing it. It makes sense why we are tired of it. Not trying to insult you. The writing is fantastic. But at this point its just putting it off.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago

I don’t like Sasuke, so I don’t apologize for that. Guy’s a whiney prick. I honestly didn’t care for the ending in Naruto when it came to him. I would have preferred he lost all his powers as just having them are what caused him to make so many poor choices. He suffered, so he caused suffering, he became the thing he hated. Naruto was the opposite, he suffered, but took great steps to relieve suffering so others wouldn’t go through what he did. Then he fucked up when he had kids, but that’s another argument.

If you’re a Sasuke fan, fine, don’t read this series, it’s not for you. Things will not end well for him. I will not apologize for that. As for Tsunade, impatient much? I haven’t forgotten, I just haven’t had an image to build a follow up around. (Which is why Kushina came in) I’ve been asked not to make super long story chapters.

Story building isn’t easy, there are rules for making things believable. Naruto’s limits being one. He doesn’t have unlimited power, he’s not a God. One of the key rules of his universe is everything has limits, costs, and drawbacks. As you might have noticed, when Boruto’s Jutsu ended, he collapsed, and when he wakes up he’s gonna have the hangover from hell due to dehydration.

I have more I’d really like to say, but I’m keeping things civil. Though I am now very tempted to make Boruto’s dick even bigger just out of spite.

Moltenblackbird
15 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

not a sauske fan. that idiot treated naruto like crap for no reason. naruto is a god. the literal reincarnation of one. never brought up guy but i agree he should have died. naruto brining him back was dumb. naruto could have had a clone doing all the paper work yea. also never said he had unlimited power i said he has infinite chakra. if he had unlimited power then he could blow up universes. unlimited chakra means he wont ever run out but he doesnt have infinite control over it so he cant use unlimited power. i mean he can have 3 million clones all give him nurture chakra and then use that to make more. so yes he does have unlimited chakra. the last part you mentioned is petty and not at all how a writer should work. if it was 100% your choice on your own site and such then sure go ahead. but its not so you cant do that. it would be selfish petty and childish.

Aerce
Aerce
15 days ago

Hi, first time poster, long time reader.

What the hell is your problem man? Do you WANT Sailor to stop writing? Because it looks to me like you do. He’s the writer, you’re the reader, YOU DO NOT TELL HIM what to write. If you don’t like it, don’t read it. So you’re a simp for Naruto, that’s your business, but you got no right to tell him how to write his story.

Sailor, I agree with you on the whole parents not one-upping their kids. Please just ignore this guy. I’ve seen way too many of my favorite writers quit because of guys like this.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
15 days ago
Reply to  Aerce

Um, thanks, but he didn’t actually tell me what to write. I appreciate the defense though, you one of my fans from my Grey Archive days or something?

Moltenblackbird
13 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

happy you at least noticed i wasnt telling you what to write. im not a writer so im not good at it. thats your profession. really just wanted to give my thoughts. never really intended it to become a rude thing but it did. im sorry. but can you at least try to have tsunade change his cock. i mean in the story she did promise him it. although now that i think about it it would fit her personality to ditch him. dont think she has ever payed off a single debt she has XD. but while i also hate sauske the rudeness and cucking is getting less enjoyable and more sad. can you at least tell me you plan on having him steal her back. at least by the end of the story. happy ending and all that.

Rtenzo
Admin
15 days ago
Reply to  Aerce

Welcome Aerce! I hope you stop by more often and leave some more comments on Sailor’s stories if you enjoy em. Always excited to read other people’s thoughts! 👍

Moltenblackbird
12 days ago
Reply to  Aerce

not sure how you got me being a simp for naruto after complaining about sauske being abused. would be like if i said i liked dogs and your conclusion was i like cats.

Buddy
Buddy
16 days ago

I personally prefer the Busteez story, but good job.

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Buddy

Thanks. The other series is coming back slowly. One more chapter is completed, with another in the work in progress pipe.

Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
16 days ago

Oooh this was amazing the art alone makes it 10/10 and I don’t even like boruto that much. The slutty fighting between Sakura and sarada as the each try to one up the other is super hot as the two slutty size queens try to please boruto more! The sex was incredible you guys really did a amazing job.

Sailor_Io
Member
Sailor_Io
16 days ago

Thank you! It is always fun writing these three. With this series I like writing them as competing size queens. In the other they’re more like a Floridian Mother/Daughter pair like you see in some porn.

Mr. Akrononym
Mr. Akrononym
16 days ago

Soooo happy to finally be back on Ranko AND that the NTR storyline with THE ultimate size queen continues. And what a crazy chapter this was! A seemingly never-ending orgy that utilized Naruto’s trademark technique (that Boruto copy-pasted) and even to a minor extend Sarada’s sharingan when it is revealed that Boruto’s cock will only get limp if she hits a counterpoint that she can see with it. The rivalry between mother and daughter at the beginning of the sex was incredibly hot and the way Sakura bashed Sasuke for being such a limp dick makes me wish that I would be at his place. God damn was that kinky! The usage of the shadow clones was great and how it soon turned into a gangbang the likes of which Sarada has never experienced before was absolutely marvelous!

It was a blast reading this chapter a few days ago and it was a blast reading it again! Continue the awesome work man!
9,5/10

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Oh, you’re on my patreon? I didn’t realize! I’m really glad you enjoyed it! It was fun getting back to this. I have some more stuff planned in the future depending on the images provided. Mainly focused on Kaguya’s new role as the family fuck doll. But a few other things.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
16 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Sorry to disappoint you but I’m not on your Patreon. I merely help Rtenzo out with editting the stories from time to time.

Sailor_Io
Member
Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

It’s ok, that means you didn’t get to read the alternate version that’s a bit more fetishy. I do that sometimes for my stories when the setting permits.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
16 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Mmmmh, sounds interesting! I definitely wouldn’t mind the more fetishy stuff if it’s NTR or tentacle stuff. Maybe I will check it out once I have a bit more savings.

Matthew
Matthew
16 days ago
Reply to  Sailor_Io

Not to mention, hopefully to catch up with both to before she could go AWOL

Matthew
Matthew
16 days ago
Reply to  Matthew

Or often hooking up with bulma if it helps with ideas

Sailor_Io
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Sailor_Io
16 days ago
Reply to  Matthew

Huh?