Kendo’s Cock Competition


(Note: This story is a new series of My Hero Academia stories)
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Returning to Heights Alliance after his…session with Himiko Toga and La Brava at the Hero Complex, Izuku casually greeted his classmates as he passed them, heading for the common area. “Hey Sato-kun…Tokoyami-kun…Koda-kun.”

 

Hopefully, his face wasn’t still too red…

 

[PIKACHU! I CHOOSE Y-] BZZT!

 

Sitting at the couch, Mineta flipped the channel, idly looking for something to watch. He wasn’t interested in any animes without big titties.

 

[KAMEHAME HAAAAA!!] yelled the shounen protagonist, making Mineta cringe. He was practically surrounded by overpowered, muscular guys all day long; no way was he going to watch an entire show about them!

 

BZZT!

 

[All Might: The Movie, now available on Blu-Ray, DVD, and-] BZZT!

 

“Damn commercials,” Mineta grumbled.

 

[Those who have recovered from the virus have reported unusual side effects, such as-] BZZT!

 

“School is boring enough, I’m not going to listen to the even more boring news! Isn’t there anything good on?!?!”

 

“Hey Mineta-kun,”

 

“Hey Izuku,” Mineta said absently…before doing a double-take. Throwing down the remote, he sped around the couch and zipped up to Izuku, glaring up at him. “YOU!

 

Blinking in confusion, Izuku slowly pointed at himself. “Me…?”

 

“You’ve got some nerve!” Mineta fumed, stomping his foot. “Spreading rumors around, telling people you have a gigantic dick!”

 

Blushing, Izuku hurried on his way to his second floor room, not wanting to have this kind of discussion in public. Naturally, Mineta was hot on his heels. “I-It wasn’t me! I swear!”

 

“The chicks in our class gossip! How are women going to trust us if we lie to them?!” Mineta continued to rant, really building up a head of steam. “Have you thought about that?! Completely selfish! this affects all of us and our ability to get laid!”

 

“I never lied!” Izuku protested, before giving Mineta a mild glare of his own. “Besides, didn’t YOU lie about what you did with Camie?

 

WHAT?! NO! Whoever told you my story was made up was a liar!” Mineta hotly retorted, causing Izuku to mentally facepalm. “Anyways, word is spreading around that you have a tree trunk in your pants! How does that even make sense or work?!”

 

Izuku would have replied, but they had arrived at his door, and the whiteboard outside of it. Blank when he had left, it was now full of phone numbers, none that he recognized; Some of them didn’t even bother to leave a name.

 

I really don’t want to deal with this level of attention…‘ Izuku thought to himself with a groan, taking the eraser and wiping the board clean.

 

“See!?” Mineta proclaimed, pointing dramatically. “Look how many people are already falling for your sham! How will they feel when they see your dick is just as small as the rest of ours?!”

 

Stopping with his hand on the doorknob, Izuku mentally banged his head against the door. Sometimes, Mineta got under even his skin with his antics. “I’m sorry, Mineta-kun; I need to shower and clean up. I just came back from the Hero Complex and I’m covered in sweat.”

 

Calming down, Mineta sighed. “Listen Midoriya: because you’re my friend, I’ll let you in on a secret.” He leaned forward, expression deadly serious. “The next time you lie, make it BELIEVABLE! That way, people won’t be able to tell for sure. You,” he shook his head sadly. “You over-exaggerated your lie way past the point of believability… rookie mistake!”

 

Exceeding his patience in dealing with Mineta, Izuku just shook his head with an awkward chuckle. “Aha…right. I’ll see you later, Mineta-kun.” The verdette hero opened his door, got into his room, and quickly closed it behind him.

 

“Lying to get laid…how unheroic,” Mineta lamented with a shake of his head. Footsteps to his side had him look up; he automatically checked out the hottie with short, dark blue hair and light blue skin. However, seeing that she was approaching Izuku’s whiteboard, he scowled. “Don’t bother, the rumor was a FAKE!”

 

“Reeeeeally???” Kaoruko Awata, also known as the heroine Bubble Girl asked, looking disappointed. She drooped even more when Mineta nodded firmly. “Aww… what a let down…I should have known…”

 

Checking out her ass as she trudged away, Mineta was about to offer to ‘console‘ her when his phone alert went off. Pulling it from his pocket, he read the text sent from his instructor.

 

Bossy Sensei Sexy Slut: Summer Mission Assignment! Report to Forest Training Ground #4 at 2PM today and have a sexual rendezvous with Itsuka Kendo! Failure to do so will result in an F!

 

Eyes bugging out with shock, Mineta started drooling. “A booty call with none of the effort!? Hell yeah! THANK YOU Midnight-sensei! Okay, that’s still several hours from now; plenty of time to get ready. I’m gonna need a big lunch, to keep up my energy, and…”

 

He trotted off to his room, muttering to himself and occasionally giggling pervertedly, disturbing his classmates even more than usual.

 


 

(Later, 2PM, Forest Training Ground #4…)

 

“Heh heh heh…Kendo, here I come!” Mineta cackled as he sped towards the meet up location. But as he got closer, he started to hear some familiar voices.

 

WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU HERE?!?!

 

Not that he had to listen very hard to hear Katsuki Bakugo’s enraged shouting.

 

“Because I was told to be here at this specific time.”

 

Mineta didn’t have any trouble recognizing the calm and cool voice Shoto Todoroki either. “Why are they here?” The short man wondered out loud.

 

GET LOST, ICY HOT! I HAVE AN ASSIGNMENT TO DO HERE!

 

“As do I.”

 

As Bakugo snorted like an enraged bull, driven up the wall by Todoroki’s calm response, they both caught sight of Mineta, now very hesitant, stepping into the clearing.

 

“Wait, you two have an assignment here as well?” A tiny frown appeared on Mineta’s face. “I was told to come here too…”

 

GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE. YOU LOUSY FUCKING BACKGROUND CHARACTER!” Bakugo bellowed. “NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU HAVE TO SAY!

 

HEY! I’M A SUPPORT CHARACTER, YOU DICK!

 

Red eyes flaring, Bakugo began stomping towards Mineta, who squealed and cowered behind Todoroki. “WHAT WAS THAT, YOU LITTLE SHIT?!?!” he snarled, small explosions popping off his palms.

 

“Bakugo, calm down and listen,” Todoroki told him, not exactly happy about being used as a human shield. “I’m sure this is all a misunderstanding.”

 

“Yep, Todoroki is right!” said a feminine voice nearby.

 

The three men snapped their heads around towards the individual; dressed in her hero outfit, Itsuka Kendo pushed her way through a pair of bushes, a smile on her face. “All three of you are going to be partners today!”

 

Bakugo stared at her for a moment, before letting out a bark of uncharacteristic laughter, which scared Mineta even more. “Is this a fucking joke?!”

 

“Nope!” Not intimidated in the least by the explosive teen, Kendo grinned back at him.

 

“…fine. WHATEVER! I’ll go first and dumb and dumbass over there can have my sloppy seconds!” Bakugo declared, tilting his head from side to side with a satisfying cracking of joints. Shaking out his arms, he got his body loose and ready for a solid workout.

 

“Hold on, Bakugo,” Todoroki said, holding up a hand.

 

THAT’S NOT FAIR! I WANTED TO GO FIRST!” Mineta demanded, still safely behind Todoroki.

 

SHUT THE FUCK UP, BOTH OF YOU!” Bakugo roared, rounding on them. “HOW THE FUCK ELSE ARE WE SUPOSSED TO DO THIS?! HUH?!

 

Pulling out his phone, Todoroki began texting as he spoke. “I’ll text Midnight-sensei; she should be able to clear this up.”

 

Shoto Todoroki: Sensei, we are having some issues. What is the order of Kendo’s rendezvous?

 

It only took a couple of seconds for the reply to come back.

 

Midnight: All three of you at the same time! Have fun, boys.

 

“The message ends with a semicolon and a parentheses.” Todoroki read the message out loud, causing the other three to sweat drop at Todoroki not knowing what a winking emoji was.

 

Then Kendo abruptly clapped her hands with a loud ‘CRACK!‘ “Well, there you have it!” she declared cheerfully. “The teacher has spoken; now let’s get started!” She started stripping without hesitation.

 

HELL YEAH!!” Mineta shouted at the top of his lungs, removing his clothes with blurring speed.

 

Todoroki also began removing his clothing slowly and methodically, taking his time.

 

FUCK THIS! NO WAY AM I DOING THIS AT THE SAME TIME AS YOU DAMN EXTRAS!” Bakugo declared, turning on his heel and stomping away. “I’ll take that fucking F grade!”

 

“Bakugo, don’t you have one of the lowest scores in the course?” Todoroki’s calm question froze Bakugo in mid-step; even from here, they could all hear his teeth grinding. “You can’t afford another failing grade,” Todoroki reminded him.

 

Bakugo stayed frozen, and Mineta, emboldened by the prospect of imminent sex, decided to throw fuel onto the fire. “Yeah! Besides, you’re just worried that you won’t be able to last as long as I will, or fuck Kendo as good as I will!” he boasted with a perverted grin.

 

Said grin died with a squeak when Bakugo whipped around lightning fast, sparks practically shooting from his eyes. “WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY?!” he growled as he began stalking back towards the group, pulling off his clothes as he did.

 

HEY!!!

 

Kendo’s authoritative shout froze everyone, even Bakugo, in their tracks. Hands on her hips, Kendo gave them all a glare, a stern frown on her pretty face. “Gentlemen,” she said sarcastically, “let’s all just calm down. For starters, I’m not just a piece of meat for you three to argue over; this is my assignment too, so I’ll have my say in how it goes. Understood?”

 

The three men all nodded; Todoroki stoically, Bakugo with grudging respect, and Mineta mindlessly, totally distracted by Kendo’s nude body.

 

And just like that, Kendo was all smiles again. “Great! Now, Todoroki, you get in front of me,” she instructed as she knelt on the ground. “Bakugo and Mineta, you stand on either side of me.”

 

With some grumbling from Bakugo and Mineta, the three of them got into their positions. The grumbling got louder when Kendo began giving the two at her sides handjobs, while Todoroki experienced her blowjob.

 

“You’re only sucking Todoroki’s dick because he’s the best looking one, aren’t you?” Mineta accused, even as his hips began rocking back and forth, his cock stiffening.

 

Far from denying, Kendo promptly and shamelessly responded, “Mmmhmmm!” The vibrations made Todoroki groan softly as he clenched his hands into fists at his side.

 

“Fucking pretty boy,” Bakugo muttered darkly, a reluctant smile on his face as Kendo’s hand really went to work. “Bah, whatever; I’ll still show all of you that I’m the best fucking fucker in this school!”

 

“You might have serious competition with Midoryia, if the rumors are accurate,” Todoroki told him, a slow flush building on his face as Kendo swirled her tongue around his meat pole.

 

Bakugo began fuming, an imminent explosion was averted by Mineta scoffing. “Pft, no need to worry about him; those rumors are completely made up! The poor guy couldn’t get laid so he resorted to lying.”

 

The explosive blonde slowly settled into a simmer, deciding he was still going to look into those rumors. The fucking grape head wasn’t exactly the most reliable extra in the class or school, and Bakugo was done underestimating Deku.

 

Pulling her head back with a loud ‘POP,’ Kendo ordered Todoroki, “Lay back on the ground, hurry please!” She was panting lightly and rubbing her thighs together; her strong hands tightened on the cocks they were rubbing, drawing twin groans of pleasure from Bakugo and Mineta.

 

“That feels amazing…” the grape boy whimpered, drool slipping out of his mouth.

 

“Not bad,” Bakugo said nonchalantly, doing his best to hide how fucking turned on he was right now.

 

Obediently getting on his back, Todoroki watched, eyes wider than usual, as Kendo first straddled him and then slowly lowered herself onto his dick, sighing with pleasure and never missing a beat with her hands.

 

In fact, she made her hands bigger; not so that she could more easily grip Bakugo and Mineta’s cocks, but so that her fingers could reach their balls, which she began to massage as well.

 

OOOOOOOHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!” Mineta moaned, his eyes rolling up into his head. It was a miracle that he didn’t cum right then.

 

Bakugo bit the inside of his mouth to keep control. No way in hell was he going to be the first one to lose it, not against fucking Icy Hot and Grape Ballsack Head.

 

“Now we’re really going!” Kendo proclaimed happily. To the best of her knowledge, this assignment will put her even further ahead of her friendly rival Momo. As a result, she was determined to do the best job she could and leave all three men happy and satisfied.

 

Todoroki frowned to himself as Kendo began bouncing up and down his dick; she was doing the majority of the work while he laid there, which wasn’t fair. They all needed to contribute, so he decided to use THAT.

 

EEP!” Kendo suddenly squealed, making both Bakugo and Mineta look at her in confusion and concern. “What…”

 

“Is something wrong?!” Mineta asked with slight panic.

 

Bakugo narrowed his eyes, scanning the forest for villains. No fucking way was he going to be kidnapped in the woods again.

 

“What…did you do?” Kendo asked Todoroki, who appeared to be concentrating. “It felt likeAHHH!

 

Almost jumping out of his skin at her sudden shout, Bakugo glared at both Kendo and Todoroki. “What the fuck are you two doing?!”

 

“H-His cock!” Kendo stammered, her face getting red and sweat starting to bead on her brow.

 

“Ah.” Mineta nodded wisely, folding his arms across his chest. “Not as good as you were expecting. Well, that just goes to show you-”

 

IT’S WONDERFUL!” Kendo screamed, shutting Mineta up mid-sentence. “He cooled his cock down at first, which cooled my pussy down, but now it’s getting even hotter, and oh God, my pussy feels….so hot!!! AHHHHHH!~

 

She half screamed, half moaned with pleasure. And then, for an instant, there was silence.

 

FUCKING ICY HOT!!! IS THAT WHY YOU’RE SO POPULAR?!

 

But only for an instant.

 

USING YOUR FUCKING SHITTY QUIRK TO MAKE YOURSELF FUCKING BETTER AT FUCKING?!?! I’M GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU!!! RAAARRGH!!!!

 

Bakugo, naturally, was almost frothing with rage; only Kendo’s grip on his dick kept him from trying to fight right then and there.

 

WHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY?????!

 

But the real surprise was that Mineta wasn’t far behind him, though he was more despairing than angry.

 

WHY IS HE SO BLESSED?! NOT ONLY IS HIS QUIRK POWERFUL AND COOL, BUT HE CAN EVEN USE IT TO MAKE HIMSELF BETTER AT SEX?!?! IT’S NOT FAAAAAAAIIIIIIRRRRR!!! CURSE YOU, GOD! CURSE YOU, TODOROKI!!!!

 

WHO CARES WHY, THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!” Kendo declared, pumping her hips jackhammer fast, the pleasure swelling up inside of her.

 

“I don’t understand why two are upset,” Todoroki told them plainly, grabbing hold of Kendo’s hips and thrusting with her. “Wouldn’t you both do the same if you could?”

 

NOT THE POINT!!!!” Mineta and Bakugo roared at him simultaneously, a rare instance of them both being on the same page. They were also panting, Kendo’s hands moving so fast, they were blurs.

 

With an ear piercing squeal, Kendo came, grinding her hips down onto Todoroki’s; the fire and ice user gritted his teeth as he shot his load as well. Mineta and Bakugo weren’t too far behind, spraying Kendo with their semen with twin shouts.

 

“…best assignment yet,” Kendo whispered, getting to her feet on slightly shaky legs. She shot grins at Bakugo and Mineta. “Gotta say, you both have a high bar to clear if you want to make me feel better than Todoroki just did.”

 

OH, NOW IT’S FUCKING ON! SUCK MY FUCKING DICK AND GET ME HARD AGAIN, AND I’LL SHOW YOU WHAT I CAN FUCKING DO!” Bakugo demanded, his red eyes practically feral.

 

Smirking, Kendo got on her hands and knees to begin sucking him off, rolling her eyes up him challengingly.

 

FORGET HIM, I DON’T NEED TO WAIT!” Mineta, fully erect already, squirmed underneath Kendo; grabbing her tits, he thrust his dick up into her pussy, grinning when he made her gasp. “THAT’S RIGHT! DON’T COUNT ME OUT YET, YOU BASTARDS!

 

Studying the situation, and idly noting that he too was fully erect once more, Todoroki eventually circled behind Kendo. Taking hold of her butt, he carefully pushed his cock into her ass, making her moan with pleasure.

 

Then he began alternating in cooling and heating his cock, just like before.

 

Bakugo almost lost it when Kendo stiffened and screamed around his cock, her eyes going wide with delight. He knew why immediately, and his blood boiled. ‘FUCKING ICY HOT!!!

 

Meanwhile, Mineta was lost in his own world of tits and pussy, happily licking and sucking on Kendo’s boobs while fucking her with all he had.

 

It was just the start of a very long afternoon for the four heroes in training. One that was very pleasurable for two of them, and both very enjoyable but incredibly frustrating for the other two.


(Story by User: S22132)

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Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
7 months ago

So, Todoriki is a one man Natsu and Gray double team.

Diablo
Diablo
7 months ago

I honestly think what you should do to prove everyone Deku is the absolute biggest aside from probably all light is either when he’s at the pool and toga pulls his shorts down and everyone sees it or toga and la brava go around telling everyone that Deku is seriously a pussy wrecker lol also fuck mineta that shitty midget background character.

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  Diablo

lmao! For now I think Deku wants to keep the attention on him at the minimum. I can see La Brava saying that but he would need to wreck her pussy first, which hasn’t occurred yet.

Guest
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Guest
7 months ago

In any other scenario you’d never get these 4 characters nude in the same place. It could only be awkward. Honestly considering that Shoto is popular already and assuredly has more than enough credits on the course you would think he wouldn’t agree to this. Bakugo is understandable cause it seems like he tries to prove himself at every turn. And mineta goes without saying.

The fact that Dbz and Pokémon were fictional cartoons in the universe could lead to some interesting paradoxes. Kinda like how shonen jump magazine exists in bleach when it itself is a shonen jump manga. Wonder what mineta’s fave anime is.

Seems like the girls are generally more skilled at this than the boys are cause she can take on all 3 of these guys at once even with one of them using their quirk to improve performance.

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
7 months ago

Ah yes good ol scumbag mineta, being jealous of izuku’s popularity with the ladies, and just overall projecting honestly wouldn’t expect nothin less.

I really enjoyed kendo this chapter. Though she could’ve easily just settled for todoroki, was still willing to fuck bakugou and even grape boi. (Of course its still obvious who’s dick she enjoyed the most) looks like they still need to learn how to use their quirks to enhance their sex

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

lol ya Mineta is being Mineta… Happy you enjoyed the chapter souljaman

Siklysign50
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Siklysign50
7 months ago

Know that i think about it mineta told bubble girl izuku did not have a monster cock so less girls will probaby wont want izuku, also mineta could ruin izukus big dick rumor, here is a way mineta could embarress izuku, so mineta gets a nude pic if izuku, photo shops his dick on izuku and post it online

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  Siklysign50

Yep, that is what hes doing and lol I think that would be too much for him to photoshop a pic of Izuku and post it online but I will keep that in mind

FrostFire0
FrostFire0
7 months ago

Just noticed bakugo the biggest…..huh cool

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  FrostFire0

Yep, he still gotta compete with Izuku somehow

FrostFire0
FrostFire0
7 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Somehow

Diablo
Diablo
7 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Lol he’s not gonna be able to compete with Deku as that dude literally has a tree trunk for a dick unless you give him drug enchanting dick growth or give him deus ex machina and suddenly he appears to equal Deku

NamelessR04
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NamelessR04
7 months ago

Good chapter, though Mineta is such a two head lying hypocrite. Does he has some nerves to criticize Izuku “lying” about have a huge cock, when Izuku isn’t the bragging, deceiving type of person. Also the fact that he lied about his time with Camie but denied it idiotically. He lucky that Izuku doesn’t want the attention and ignores everything right now. Anyway, the rest chapter was good besides Mineta’s criticizing and jealousy. I hope the next chapter more better than this one.

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  NamelessR04

Yep, that is intentional. Mineta will criticize others for their perverted behavior even if he is a bigger pervert.

qwertydude
qwertydude
7 months ago

Heh, I’m kind of curious what kind of despair Mineta is going to fall in when he learns Deku’s packing a dick bigger than Mineta’s whole body. It was fun to read Bakugo and Mineta getting outshone, even though I’m not a huge fan of Shouto, i think his character is bland, he was used pretty well in this spot.

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  qwertydude

lol it IS indeed bigger than his whole body. The early chapters of the series established Shoto as being pretty popular with the ladies so hopefully this also helps explain one of the reasons he is

Unskilled
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Unskilled
7 months ago

Kendo will always be one of the top tier yet underappreciated girls. Girl needs more love.

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  Unskilled

Too many underappreciated girls in MHA, which is a huge shame

Unskilled
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Unskilled
7 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

That’s kind of the problem with Shonen series in general. They give you like 90 characters but only focus on 5. At least Burn the Witch, at the moment, only has like 10 characters hahaha

qwertydude
qwertydude
7 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Indeed. The class B gals need more love. Its a shame the author made Ibara as a class A girl innitially but he sidelined her to blass B because the Vines were a pain to draw.

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  qwertydude

Is that true? because thats sad, class A needs more girls… 1 less guy would be fine

Last edited 7 months ago by Rtenzo
Combodestroyer
Combodestroyer
7 months ago

My my my this was very very good! The art is fantastic with the beautiful kendo taking three cocks at once underneath the tree.
The story is amazing as mineta shows up to scold deku about lying to get sex, which he did but won’t admit with is great for a future chapter that could shut him up once and for all. As deku goes into his room mineta, bakugou and todoroki all show up to a spot and all hell breaks loose at they are already fighting with each other. Bakugou calling mineta a background character is both hilarious and kinda true. As they are fighting kendo shows up to say they all are her partners, they even call midnight to confirm as what follow is a amazing three way fuck as kendo rides todoroki and gives the other two handjobs using her quirk in such a interesting way. As they are even fighting while fucking her todoroki shows off his quirk powers which kendo loves, which honestly is very very interesting and neat as I bet he would use his quirk during sex. Anyway the story ends with them still fucking her all day.
God this was amazing! I really would like a chapter in where deku gets caught and shows everyone in class A how trully massive he is and how much bigger he is than anyone else is. Hopefully it will happen and with uraraka.
9.5/10

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  Combodestroyer

Yeah Mineta likes to overexaggerate about his sexual conquests. He thinks Deku’s dick size is fake but its actually true so he thinks he lied to get laid. Deku doesn’t want the attention tho. Happy you like the story man, thank you always for the feedback 👍👍👍

yukio
yukio
7 months ago

Okay okay, I just read the story, and I must say that I loved it, and thank you, I know that a long time ago I asked that todoroki could use his particularity as well as gray fullbuster, since well you draw the protagonist with the biggest cock, other characters must find your method, so I must say thank you for that, the story was funny and pleasant, softer than others I must say, but that’s good, that detail of mineta criticizing izuku was a great addition, and see how kendo used his quirk it was nice, although bakugou is to my liking too (obviously my mainstay is todoroki I always want to see him stand out) bakugou it occurred to me that he can use his quirk a little differently, he seems to be able to use his sweat, how about wearing small, micro explosions like vibration when he fucks someone, or an explosive cum inside or outside, it sounds far-fetched yes, but it would be interesting to give him some support now that he saw someone use his quirk well, regarding mineta … maybe use his purple spheres as something d e BDSM maybe, I’m not sure, in the aesthetic section, excellent, the truth in another comment I read some lipstick, it would be good to see it too, outside of that the detail is excellent, the perfect figure and the representation of the cock of both, it seems What a draftsman in size, midoriya, shoto and bakugo, true, mineta seems suitable to me due to its height, well that would be all, I hope I can see a Christmas special of shoto and ashido mina (because I always put them as a couple, they are perfect ) If you do, I’ll be happy it’s a Christmas present

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  yukio

Happy you enjoyed how Todoroki was used in this story. For this story I thought it would have been neat to have each character’s cum interact differently based on their quirk. Like Mineta’s cum would be super stickly like white glue. And Todoroki’s cum would immediately freeze into a frosty texture on the skin etc etc Thank you for the feedback man as always👍👍

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
7 months ago

The way Kendo is drawn here, surrounded by four tree trunks (well three tree trunks and one little twig to her left) is incredible sexy. A very nice and interesting scenery you draw here, one which we haven’t really seen so far. Not that spectacular but still unique enough to stand out. Kendo is a beauty, who could be drawn much more often, especially in a situation like this, where she is surrounded with cock. Bit of a missed oportunity to not give at least one of the versions (clothed or nude) her trademark “Big Fist”. Speaking of versions: I’m still in love, with how different those two are. With the cum in the clothed version cumming exclusively from Shoto’s (colored in beautifully purple lipstick marks in the makeup version) cock with none coming from Bakugo and Mineta. On the flipside however, with Shoto’s schlong deep inside her pussy and only a little bit of cum splurting out of it, it’s only natural to let the boy’s on her side a chance to cum as well. Great job done with the threads between the cock heads and Kendo’s face. Sadly no lipstick marks in the nude version. Also, quick side note: I adore the consitency, regarding the length of Mineta’s cock here in this chapter, with how it was portrayed in the second chapter. While not all of it was visible because of Camie’s giant knockers, I think it’s safe to say that the length of it stayed the same overall.

To get completely straight, right from the start: I’m not that big of a fan of how Mineta was handled in this chapter. It’s natural for him to think that Midoriya spreads lies about his cock in order to get the chicks or to feel threatened, that his fellow classmate is so well liked by the girls but his reaction and the way it was written was not really to my liking. His bickering with Bakugo and Shoto before and during sex was admittedly really funny. Speaking of sex however, I don’t quite understand, as to why characters like Shoto, Kendo (who were depicted so far with basically their very own harem) or even Bakugo who at least managed a date with Burnin (don’t know how she rated him, but still…) were told to come to the forest because of their bad grades so far, although I don’t know if the reason Kendo and Shoto are same as with Mineta and Bakugo. The sex was truly one of a kind and I’m incredibly fond of, whenever a characters in the stories here uses their powers during sex: Kendo for a better handjob experience; Shoto to cool her down and heat her up, almost the same way Gray does it during your Fairy Tail story; and even in other stories with characters like Madame Shyarly’s fortune telling ablilities and Robins devil fruit in the One Piece stories. Other noteworthy things include stuff like how the virus maybe has a more “lewd” side effect, otherwise I can’t quite understand why you included that line, or the fourth wall break with Mineta shouting that he is a supporting character and not a background character.

While I don’t really like the more serious tone with Mineta in this chapter and would have been more than happy, if he would have stayed on the more comic relief side, like he was portrayed in the second chapter, I can still see quite a bit of potential with him further down the line, once he realizes that Midoriya was indeed telling the truth.
7,5/10

Rtenzo
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7 months ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

I wanted Mineta’s jealousy to really make him nastier than his normal pervy self. He’s not above using underhanded tactics such as pity to get women to bed him and then lie about his conquests like the Camie chapter. He’s slimy and hypocritical at times and thinks hes better than he is, like how he boasts about himself in canon he assumes midoriya is being slimy using similiar dirty tactics. He’s still comic relief but he doesn’t like other people ruining his chances at getting women.

As for the group, this wasn’t meant to be a group of students that are failing the course and needed extra tutoring. This is simply a mission Midnight gave them to do and they went to do it. If this was meant to help improve the students abilities or grades, it will be made very clear. Maybe there should have been another line to make things clearer?

I like how you enjoyed the use of quirks and ya, you remembered gray, robin and shyarly! Anime lends itself to some neat sexy moments. I will tell you this, if you enjoy the usages of quirks, you may enjoy the next chapter as well. And yea, the virus line has a purpose! As for the fourth wall break, I vaguely remember Bakugo breaking the fourth wall a couple of times in the series and Mineta’s response can also be interpreted as him being more of a support hero, a character used for support rather than other type of hero roles.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
7 months ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

“I will tell you this, if you enjoy the usages of quirks, you may enjoy the next chapter as well.” Oooh. Intruiging xd. But to be honest, thats one of the main reason I would like to see One Piece characters like Smoothie, Ulti and, to a lesser extend, Jewelry Bonney appear in your artworks. I mean, Smoothie can expand her body and without doubt limit that to certain parts of her body (tits and ass); Ulti, with her being a SPOILER!!! Pachycephalosaurus (a dinosaur who literally uses mainly it’s head for attack) could be quite the skilled Paizuri/Blowjob expert; and even Jewelry Bonney uses already very skimpy outfits because of her devil fruit.
That’s not me telling you that you absolutely have to draw them, I mean this is your website and all but in my honest opinion, the current list of characters for One Piece is quite sparse, for me at least.