Dicked to Completion


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“Shiro-chaaaaan!”

 

Hitsugaya twitched before turning around with a sigh, putting a smile on his face. “I would prefer if you referred to me as Captain Hitsugaya, Yushiro-san,” he told the excitable noble gently.

 

Normally, Hitsugaya might have gotten more irritated, but it was a beautiful day on the beach and he did not have to deal with Rangiku’s laziness at work. That put him in more mellow mood than usual; plus, it was hard to stay mad at Yushiro.

 

“Aww, but that takes too long to say and is too stuffy and formal!” Yushiro whined like a sad puppy, before perking up. “I know! What about Gaya-chan?”

 

Suppressing a sigh, Hitsugaya racked his brain for an excuse to not be called that. Fortunately, or unfortunately, he was interrupted.

 

YOU TWO!

 

Instinctively stiffening at the sound of two irate female voices, Hitsugaya and Yushiro turned in unison, only to blink and blush when they saw Harribel and Mila Rose storming towards them, completely naked. Mila Rose was openly panting, a desperate look on her face; Harribel was more composed, but the look in her eyes reminded Hitsgaya of when they had fought each other.

 

Hitsugaya opened his mouth to ask what as wrong, only for his eyes to widen comically when Harribel kissed him with full force, her bare breasts pressing against his chest, her rock hard nipples poking him. He had no control over the kiss; she was practically ravaging his mouth.

 

From the corner of his eye, he could see that Yushiro wasn’t faring any better. Mila Rose looked and sounded like she was trying to suck his lungs out through his mouth, while one of her hands had dropped down to his shorts and was rubbing his cock.

 

Then Harribel did the same to him, and Hitsugaya was abruptly much more focused on what was happening to him.

 

“What-” he started to ask when the kiss finally ended, but Harribel dropped to her knees, pulled down his short, and promptly wrapped her tits around his cock and began kissing and licking it all over. “Oh god…” he moaned instead.

 

“N-not that I mind, but AHHH! Why are you both acting like this?!” Yushiro panted, his dick quickly swelling as Mila Rose lavished attention on it, using both her hands to fondle his balls while she licked and sucked on his shaft.

 

Harribel freed her mouth long enough to reply, though she never stopped rubbing her tits along Hitsugaya’s cock. “We’ve been at the beach since this morning,” she said in a low voice, her intense green eyes locked onto his wide blue ones. “We’ve had sex with so many different men.”

 

“And do you know how many of them satisfied us?!” Mila Rose growled, terrifying and arousing Yushiro in equal measure. “NONE! Bunch of limp dicked bastards…we’re so horny, and that’s where you two come in.”

 

“We’re gonna fuck you both, and you had BETTER satisfy us,” Harribel abruptly grabbed Hitsugaya’s ankles and flipped him onto his back; from the squeal, Mila Rose had done the same to Yushiro, “or else.”

 

Neither of them were given a chance to respond. Still holding onto his legs, Harribel lowered her ass onto his big girthy cock, moaning softly as it pushed in. “Yessss…” she groaned happily, using his legs as levers to pump his cock in and out.

 

FUCK YES!” Mila Rose howled as she pulled Yushiro’s enormous dick into her waiting pussy. “Finally, a real dick to fuck me! Give it to me, you magnificent bastard!”

 

Hitsugaya could honestly say he had never experienced sex like this before. He had no control over what was happening; Harribel only wanted him for his cock, using him like a sex toy on herself. He was a tool to her rather than a person. He should probably be more embarrassed about the situation…

 

But damn, it was kind of a turn on to be dominated like this. Watching the pleasure quickly rise up in Harribel’s expression helped a lot as well, especially since he was also able to watch her incredible tits bounce and jiggle with each thrust.

 

Yushiro had a deep blush on his face, staring up in wonder as Mila Rose took his dick without any trouble. She was blushing and smiling as her pussy juices splashed onto both their thighs. It was incredibly erotic… if not for the growing pain in his lower body! She was really pounding down on him with full force, not caring how it affected him, only worried about her own pleasure!

 

“Oww…. Oww…. Owwwwwww!”

 

Hitsugaya was experiencing the same thing, groaning and grimacing in discomfort as Harribel fucked him without mercy. “Harribel, do you think you could–”

 

“No,” she replied bluntly, not slowing in the slightest; if anything, she sped up. “Now shut up and let me get what I need.”

 

…well, I tried.

 

After what seemed like hours but was almost certainly less than that, Mila Rose’s breathing starting coming heavier and faster.

 

“Almost,” she crooned, bouncing up and down while pulling and pushing on his legs. “Almost…YES!!!

 

Mila Rose threw back her head with a scream as she came; her pussy tightened deliciously on Yushiro’s cock. His eyes rolled back into his head as he cummed as well, one of the biggest and hardest he could remember having in a long while.

 

Harribel stiffened, and the guttural moan she released when she came was one of the sexiest sounds Hitsugaya had ever heard. It pushed him over the edge, and he dug his fingers into the sand as his dick pumped his semen into her tight ass.

 

“Ahhh…that felt amazing…” Harribel breathed, looking first up into the sky and and then over at Mila Rose. “That’s such a relief.”

 

“Yeah, you said it,” Mila Rose agreed, letting go of one of Yushiro’s legs to wipe the sweat from her brow. “Damn, I feel so much better now!”

 

And we’re still being ignored,‘ Hitsugaya thought with a sweat drop over the side of his head. He wanted to be irritated, but the pain in his body wasn’t doing his concentration any favors. He felt like he’d been in a fist fight, not having sex with a beautiful woman.

 

Yushiro was whimpering, which attracted some attention. “Damn, we really did a number on them,” Mila Rose proclaimed, sounding impressed and pleased with herself.

 

“We did…and I still want more.”

 

Yushiro abruptly stopped whimpering and turned to Hitsugaya with eyes as wide as dinner plates, an expression matched by the white haired captain.

 

Mila Rose’s expression shifted, turned sly. “Right here and right now, again?!” When Harribel nodded, Mila Rose cackled. “Trade you!”

 

Yushiro blinked in confusion, and Hitsugaya opened his mouth to try and talk some sense into them both as Harribel got a hungry look in her eyes. “Now hold on-WHOA!” He couldn’t help yelping as he was literally thrown through the air, passing Yushiro along the way.

 

Mila Rose caught him with a wild laugh; slamming him down onto the sand, she wasted no time in getting her ass impaled on his dick, while Harribel happily used Yushiro’s cock on her pussy.

 

Not how I pictured today going! the sex feels great but my body is killing me, especially my dick! I won’t be able to walk tomorrow!


(Story by User: S22132)

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DracielGT
DracielGT
1 year ago

Damn holy shit Mila rose destroying yushiros and toshiro is amazing, mila rose and hallibel look really hot here and the story itself is nice but i wish it’d be more apparent the two enjoyed it even a little

Jonathan
Jonathan
1 year ago

Can you give me a hint of who has the biggest dick that yet to be revealed

Rtenzo
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1 year ago
Reply to  Jonathan

There is a letter “A” in the first and/or last name of the character with the bigger dick than Yushiro.

(By the way, you can just respond to me in your own comment thread instead of always starting a new comment chain lol Just simply respond to my response to your messasge)

Jonathan
Jonathan
1 year ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

Is it aizen

Yasser Montasser
Yasser Montasser
1 year ago

Oh man I really love the amazon position, can you do more of it for other shows too?

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago

We’ll see, no one has requested it on Patreon or commissioned it yet. What motivated me to do this one was me wanting to try somethin different and I can imagine these two acting like this. I wouldn’t do this pose if it didn’t make sense.

Zemthyri
Zemthyri
1 year ago

Quite refreshing to see Yushiro and Hitsugaya being so easily dominated after so many stories of women trying in vain to handle them.

Rtenzo
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1 year ago
Reply to  Zemthyri

Agreed. I wanted somethin different for this chapter since the ongoing theme of all the previous chapters is the cock worship due to Yushiro’s size. This one the girls don’t even care, they just want to climax lol

Jonathan
Jonathan
1 year ago

Who has the biggest dick in bleach?

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago
Reply to  Jonathan

Currently Yushiro, there is one character that is bigger but he hasn’t been revealed yet. 🍆

Clawer250
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Clawer250
1 year ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

My excitement is immeasurable and I can’t contain it for much longer hopefully we can see him soon

Hiryu
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Hiryu
1 year ago

JESUS…! That was totally rough treatment for both Toshiro and Yushiro by both Harribel and Mila Rose! And to make matters worse they were both completely unprepared for it…! O_O

I did thought it was pretty hilarious with how the ladies were looking for guys with good dicks to fuck and how they switched boys in the end, but GOD DAMN! Still, that was really rough.

And the most fucked up part about it? It was anything but mutual. The ladies just used the guys as sex toys, living didloes basically, just to deal with their lust for the day. While the boys definitely weren’t into it for the most part, and it showed. Guess they won’t be walking around OR having any more sex for a while, especially not Yushiro. XD

Not gonna lie or sugarcoat it, I don’t feel particularly good about this one. Which really sucks because I like your writing style. :/

Though criticism aside, I LOVE THE PICTURE ITSELF! This is a great one, no lie. Probably one of the best ones I’ve seen in quite a while.

Overall I’m not a big fan of the story itself this time, but I do understand and appreciate your efforts of what you were going for. And excellent picture!

Hopefully the next chapter will blow me away! 🙂

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago
Reply to  Hiryu

I think it’s good to mix things up once awhile and show girls with different personalities and sex preferences. I consider this like the SNU-SNU scene in Futurama, it was painful but the guys still enjoyed it. It doesn’t always have to be the guys dominating the girls, they might meet someone or something that dominates them back.

I’m happy you like the picture, it was fun to do and it came out amazing thanks to my colorist. I enjoyed drawing Mila’s muscles lol

Thank you again Hiryu 😍👍

NamelessR04
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NamelessR04
1 year ago

Great story S22132, but dang talk about a rough treatment toward Yushiro and Hitsugaya, after all that they’re going need a break of having sex for while. Also, it was funny that Harribel and Mila Rose searching for cocks at baech to satisfied themselves like super horny beasts on a sexual hunt. Though I didn’t like how their treated the two boys for their own pleasure. But the sex was still great in regards.

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago
Reply to  NamelessR04

They were once Hollows afterall, their hunger is driven by instinct. But instead of souls, they crave cock.

People don’t like it when the women are in charge of the sex huh? If it’s these two beauties, it’s totally worth the aches and pains imo lol

Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
1 year ago

This was pretty good update this morning I didn’t expect for the last few updates but this was a welcome surprise, the story is short and sweet as Tier Harribel and mila are looking for some grade A cock on the beach. As the straight up jump the two boys they use them a living fuckdolls slamming bodies down on yushiro and toshiro huge fat cocks, they dominated them like no tomorrow especially mila taking yushiro without much struggle which is scary! The two girls switched partners and had round two. Not bad.
Art: 8/10
Story: 7/10
Characters: 7/10
Sex: 7/10
Overall: 8/10

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago

I’m happy you like it man. Your scores are great but they don’t give me insight on the juicy details. Did you like the pose? did you like the pairings? did you like the setting? Did you like the femdom? Just some curiosities.

Unskilled
Member
1 year ago

Not gonna lie, I’m not a fan of this chapter. My past issue of there not being much plot has been amplified here and to make matters worse (for me) the sex was just completely impersonal which defeats the whole act to me.

I understand that was the point of the chapter but it’s kind of a huge mood killer. It doesn’t help that the guys were both not into it and into it at the same time. I’m sure others will be into it, but this chapter was completely not for me.

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago
Reply to  Unskilled

Fair enough. These stories aren’t always gonna be for everyone but I also don’t want to keep doing the same thing where the guy dominates the woman. I like to mix things up. This was a different chapter so I’m glad some people enjoyed it. It’s interesting to see reactions when people aren’t fans of the chapter. It helps me know my audience better. Well the ones that comment regularly that is. I don’t think this will be the last chapter one of the male characters get dominated but I will at least be prepared for the mixed reception lol

Unskilled
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1 year ago
Reply to  Rtenzo

I’m completely fine with the woman being on top and in charge but it’s like Hiryu mentioned in his comment, it’s more the fact that it felt like the guys were more raped and dehumanized rather than just dealing with a dominant partner who had their interests in mind. I don’t like it when it happens to ladies either haha.

Rtenzo
Admin
1 year ago
Reply to  Unskilled

This series is meant to be comedic and erotic. It feels like you’re looking too deep into the story if you think they were raped. I disagree with that observation. How it started may be non-consentual because they came onto the pair out of nowhere but once Toshiro and Yushiro were caught up, they were willing participants. They were never asking them to stop and was never in a state of distress. Yushiro even started his dialogue with saying he didn’t mind their sexual advances. This is not meant to be examined in a vacuum, this is part of a series where comedy is a theme. Their moments of worry OBVIOUSLY were meant to be comedic like when Yushiro was tossed into the air like a ragdoll. Dehumanized? yes that was the joke to have to sexy size queens that only care about a guys dick to milk it to their satisfaction. It’s really common to have a female character in porn/hentai that judges just by the dick.

It’s a hentai story… Loosen up.