Beach Banging Mages


Previous Story (Part LVIII): [LINK]
Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
Next Story (Part LV): To Be Continued…


Why did I agree to this?‘ Ultear thought to herself, already regretting her decision as she watched the other girls getting ready for their dates.

 

The black haired woman was standing on the shores of a beautiful beach, next to Juvia, Lucy and Levy. Three days ago, Jellal was able to bring her back from the despair she felt after many months without a good partner in bed and managed to convince her to at least try out to work for the new Fairy Tail.

 

Which led to where she was now: Standing naked on the beach with nothing on her body than the scandalous tattoo that was written over her ample sized ass. Not that the other girls fared any better; their tattoo’s were just as indecent as hers, if not more! ‘Well, at least my ass is still bigger than Levy’s!

 

“Does Juvia really have to have something like that written on her ass?” Juvia’s voice came from Ultear’s left. The bluette woman was squirming in place, her ass wobbling from side to side with the motion “It’s really embarrassing without Gray-sama around…!”

 

“Really?!” Lucy asked before giving the Water mage a playful spank on her fat butt, making it jiggle around like jello in response “From what I’ve heard, you had a blast a few days ago with your client on the beach. You even missed your next few clients because of it, if I remember correctly.”

 

Juvia’s blush turned almost as red as Erza’s hair as she remembered the time she spent with Lyon that day. “That’s not the same!” she argued “How can Juvia be ‘GRAY’S BITCH’ if he isn’t even here to admire the tattoo she got!?”

 

“Well, maybe we can help you with that…” a male voice came from behind the four girls.

 

As if on command, all girls looked over their shoulders at the same time to look at the newcomer. Behind them, dressed only slightly less scandalous in a pair of way too small swimsuits, were three guys and one girl hungrily eyeing the frames of the four Fairy Tail mages up and down. The guy to the far left was a hunk of a man, almost double in size to Laxus with muscles that put Elfman to shame. The only thing he wore was a comically tiny speedo when compared to the rest of his body.

 

Next to him stood a tall, gorgeous woman with eyes that looked like those of a hawk. Her black hair fell down with two braids at both sides of her face and laid on her tits. Those tits, whose size tripled that of her own head, heaved with every breath she took as her eyes wandered all over the naked behinds of the girls in front of her; sweat ran down her body as the blush on her face turned redder with every passing second. The only thing that covered her pussy was pasty in the shape of a purple heart.

 

“I hope my older cousin didn’t over exaggerate when he told me about how good this guild is supposed to be…” the man on the far right said in an almost apathetic tone. Compared to his three friends he was almost meager by comparison; Lucy could clearly see the outlines of his ribs. His dark complexion made the freckles on his face stand out even more.

 

The last of the four chuckled nervously in response “W- Well, only one way to find o-out, right?!” The man’s bald head glistened with sweat under the pleasantly warm summer sun as he tried to avert his gaze from the four beauties. A black tattoo that depicted a pair of demon wings with a halo above it was right above his raging erection that pointed like a spear towards Lucy.

 

“Hmmm… You’re right!” the dark skinned man to his right said again “Lucy Heartfilia!” he turned towards the blonde Celestial spirit mage, his long, dirty blonde hair flew behind him in a sudden gust of wind “My older cousin, a guy you know as ‘the Ugly Bastard’ praises your guild for having the best bitches on the continent… Is that true?”

 

He’s related to HIM?!?‘ Lucy thought to herself “Hehehe… I don’t know if that’s exactly true but why don’t you come to test his theory?” she asked seductively, leaning forward to give him a good view of her cleavage by pressing her tits together with her arms.

 

“You? Why should I fuck a girl with almost no ass to speak off?!” he asked in the same apathetic tone as earlier, which caused Lucy to blink in surprise before rubbing her butt “You…” the skinny man turned towards Ultear, whose ass and tits were the biggest of the entire group “… I don’t know who you are but you are at least sexy enough to be worth my time, unlike your flat chested friends!”

 

Ultear did her best to swallow down her pride as she stepped forward to hug herself against the dark skinned man “As you wish~”

 

“In that case, blondie will be mine!” the black haired woman of the group replied before grabbing Lucy by her hand. Drool ran down her chin as she pulled Lucy with her “Come, cutie! Let us have a goooood time…”

 

The big guy simply shrugged his shoulder “Fine by me. I was more looking forward to this cute, little fairy anyways.” he said and walked towards Levy, who observed the ongoings around her with mild concern on her face.

 

“W- Well… It seems that only leaves u- us two, right?” the bald headed man asked as he stumbled towards Juvia.

 

Juvia put on her most sincere smile as she remembered what Mavis told her about this guy’s perverted request “Juvia is looking forward to it!” she purred as she grabbed him by his hand to pull him away from the rest of the group so that they wouldn’t get in the way of each other.

 

And just like that each member of Fairy Tail took on their partner!

 


 

(With Lucy…)

 

“Mmmmh… Yesssss!” the black haired woman moaned as she leaned back even more against the lounger she was laying on. Her thighs clenched almost painfully around Lucy’s head while the younger girl continued licking her moist pussy.

 

Lucy’s nostrils were filled with the sweet smell of the other girl’s arousal; her nose was buried in the thin line of black pubic hair in the shape of a lightning bolt. The many times that she had sucked on her client’s cocks gave her the experience to rock this girl’s world! With the wet slurping sounds of her licking on the soaked twat filling the area, Lucy tried her best to ignore the pain that began to spread across her head as the other girl clamped her thighs even harder around it!

 

“Yes, yes, yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesYEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!” a hefty spray of juices ran down Lucy’s face as the other girl bucked her hips forward and screamed her orgasm out for everyone to hear “FUUUUCCCKKKK!!! You can lick gooood…!”

 

Lucy tried to pull her head away from the other girl’s seemingly never ending orgasm but to no avail! Her black haired partner interlocked her feet behind the young Fairy Tail mage’s back and pressed her even further against her pussy while her nectar continued to spray on Lucy’s face.

 

“Gug… glurgh… gughh… goomph…!” Lucy flailed wildly with her hands, desperate to get some air while she tried her best to gulp down the constant spray of sweet juices.

 

After what felt like an eternity, the black haired woman finally stopped cumming and stopped clenching Lucy’s head with her feet “Gaaaaaahhh!” finally being able to inhale the salty ocean air around them, Lucy took deep breaths after feeling like she almost drowned in the other girl’s arousal.

 

“Aaaah~ that felt wonderful!” the black haired girl said before patting the kneeling mage on her back “What do you say? Ready for round two?”

 

Lucy’s eyes widened in surprise when her client picked up some of the sand from the ground beneath them. She clenched her fist around it a few times and when she opened it again, the sand had transformed into a double sided dildo that continued to grow until its size and girth rivaled that of her forearm “You’re a mage?”

 

“Hahahaha, indeed.” the girl confirmed while grabbing a leaf from a nearby palm tree to mold it with the dildo in her hands together into a very exotic looking strap-on “Me and my friends are from a small guild and because we recently finished a big mission, we wanted to celebrate by trying out the Number 1 Guild in all Fiore.”

 

In one swift motion, the other mage suddenly appeared behind the still kneeling Lucy and pressed the tip of the strap-on, that she put into her pussy as well, against the entrance of her partner’s ass “Pucker up, cause I’m gonna take my time plowing that ‘FREE FUCK’ ass of yours!”

 

As her partner began throwing her hip back and forth, only one thought crossed Lucy’s mind: ‘I wonder how the others fare with their partners…?’

 


 

(With Levy…)

 

“Is there someone ya truly luv? Like, dat ya can’t even imagine to eva leave his side again?”

 

Waves crashed against the beach as Levy thought about her partner’s question. Her fingers were interlocked with his and looked tiny by comparison as they walked down the shore “Hmmmm…” She put a finger to her chin as if she thought hard about it “Well, I love everyone in the guild, they’re my nakama after all.”

 

“Dat’s not what I meant!” the huge man shook his head “I was talking about someone who ya want ta spend da rest of ya days with… Someone to build a family with…”

 

Levy’s face turned as red as a tomato as she understood his implication “Erm… Well… You know…”

 

The big man suddenly let go of Levy’s soft hand and waved both of his in a placatory gesture while sweat ran down his face “Ya don’t have ta answer if ya don’t want! Sorry for making dis so weird…”

 

“No no, it’s okay! It’s just… there is this one guy who always calls me ‘shrimp’…” she said after taking a deep breath, unsure about what she should say next.

 

“Hm?”

 

She stamped down “He is a real jerk at times! Teasing me with that smug grin on his face, calling me ‘shrimp’,… fucking me raw whenever I need it with that fat fucking cock of his… supporting me whenever I try something new with my magic…” she turned away from her client to look over the horizon where a couple of seagulls were currently flying over the crystal clear ocean “… I really love him!”

 

“Huh. Dat’s really sweet ta hear!” the older man said and wiped a single tear from the corner of his eye.

 

Levy reached towards his other hand again and put his fingers into his to resume their walk “And you? Anyone you’re particularly fond of?”

 

“Well…” Now it was his time to blush as he ran his unoccupied hand through his long, unkempt hair “Dere’s dis one girl dat I really like. Every time I see her smile, I get dose butterflies in ma stomach and can’t help but feel like I’m da happiest guy in da world, ya know?”

 

“Mhm!” the petite girl nodded her head in agreement, having the same feeling every time she was with Gajeel alone “And? How’s it going? Does she like you as well?”

 

She flinched when the towering man suddenly pressed his hand around hers harder “…I don’t know!” he let out a sigh and gazed towards the sky again “I don’t have da courage ta talk to her really. She’s perfect in every way possible, while I mess things up during C-rank missions… She’s way outta ma league!”

 

Levy shook her head disapprovingly “Don’t say things like that! Everyone has things they’re good at and things they’re bad at. That’s why you have nakama to help you out and to reach new heights that you couldn’t reach alone. Don’t let yourself be defined by the few things that you can’t do but by the many things that you can!”

 

The man looked at her for a while, his long hair nearly covering his completely white eyes “Heh…! Heaheaheaheahea!!” he threw his head back as he started laughing. For a short moment Levy thought that she said something wrong but then he looked back at her with a sincere smile on his face “Yer a pretty smart gal!”

 

A huge blush spread over Levy’s face when she started rubbing her wavy hair “Hehe… I’ll always try my be-EEEEP!” she suddenly squealed when her partner grabbed her by her huge ass and lifted her off the ground to sit her down on his shoulders. His tousled hair tickled against her pussy as he continued his way forward.

 

After five silent minutes, in which Levy simply enjoyed the ride on the giant’s shoulders while the soft ocean breeze brought the scent of freedom and adventure with it, the man looked up towards her. His white eyes went past her perky nipples and met hers “Say, have ya eva thought about da meaning behind our existence?”

 


 

(With Juvia…)

 

“Mmmmph… mmoooomph… mmmh… mmmmph…” the muffled noises of the bald headed man nibbling on Juvia’s labia felt like music to her ears!

 

The blunette in the meantime continued swirling his coconut sized balls around in her hands while trying to come up with something to say next. It was her first time ever to play the role as a dominant sex partner since most of her partners simply enjoyed fucking her raw. Needless to say that she was taken somewhat aback when Mavis told her that her partner wanted her to play the role of some kind of dominatrix!

 

With a crimson red blush on her face, Juvia traced her fingers along the length of her partner’s shaft before putting her index finger and thumb around it to try a trick that Irene told her before she left for this date, while also pressing her lower body further down on the man’s face “Mmmmh~ you’re doing a surprisingly good job… slave…” she started slowly stroking his twitching cock with two fingers while continuing to fondle his nutsacks with her other hand “Continue like this and Juvia might give you a reward later…”

 

And just like Irene predicted, the other mage’s cock began twitching in excitement as the first drops of pre-cum began oozing out of it as soon as Juvia finished her sentence. He momentarily stopped his skilled tongue lashing and tried to poke his head out between her thighs “I- I am doing a good job, right?”

 

“Nnnnngh…” Juvia moaned in frustration as she clenched her thighs more against his head to pull him back towards her pussy again “You certainly do not when you’re doing stuff like this!” she felt his nose poke into her pussy before he continued licking her again ‘Am I too rough on him?

 

Just as the thought occurred to her, she felt his cock twitch between her fingers again as if to prove her wrong “Yesh, mishtresh! Id won’d happen again!” he slurred from beneath her as he licked her with previously lacking vigor. His tongue became a slur of motions as he began trying to please the blue haired mage in the best way possible.

 

Aaaaaahhh~♥” she moaned in response when she climaxed all over his face, her thighs clasped even harder around his head “Who w- would have thought that… that one might be able to make Juvia c- cum just from licking…?! S- Such a good pet!” her breath actually steamed out of her mouth as she panted loud enough for the young man beneath her to hear.

 

With shaking hands Juvia noticed that his shaft in her hands began twitching more and more with every orgasm she sprayed on his face. She continued with slowly moving her fingers up and down his length, just like Irene advised her to do with such a kind of client, and let his two heavy balls swirl between her soft fingers. When she felt like he was about to cum, Juvia let go of his cock and squeezed his balls “No no no… you haven’t earned that yet… slave!” she explained with a blush whose shade rivaled that of Erza’s hair “You have to lick Juvia to at least another twenty orgasms before Juvia even considers letting you cum!”

 

WAAAAAAH!!!‘ steam began shooting out of her ears as she thought about what she just said ‘What would Gray-sama and the others think about Juvia if they could see this???!!

 

Seconds flew by and turned into minutes where Juvia lost herself in a trance of lust and pleasure! Her partner brought her to more orgasm then she could count and actually managed to cum once or twice despite her best efforts to prevent it.

 

“Haaa… Haaa… Haaa…” Juvia panted weakly as she rolled down from her now completely red and sweaty partner and stared up into the gradually setting evening sun “I think you have earned a reward now…!” before he had the chance to respond, Juvia stood up and set herself down on the young man’s face “I’ll grant you the honor of licking the ass that is normally something reserved only for my beloved Gray-sama!”

 

A complete lie, since Natsu has fucked her ass more often than she could remember but Mavis mentioned that some dirty talk like this was exactly this guy’s kink.

 

“Y- Yesh!!”

 


 

(With Ultear…)

 

“Take that, you whore!” the blonde haired man said in the still apathetic tone as earlier while he continued to push his cock in and out of Ultear’s gushing pussy. His ribs pressed hard against her stiff nipples while one of his lanky hands held both of hers above her head to limit her movements. Her back scrubbed against the rough bark of the palm tree that he pressed her against “Take my load!!”

 

“Nnnnngh…” she bit her lower lip when she felt the by now well-known sensation of his sticky load flooding her insides. His hips pressed against her ass while liter after liter of his seed was pumped into the newest Fairy Tail member’s pussy. By now she had completely lost track of the many times that he climaxed into either her cunt, ass or mouth.

 

“Yes, give me your seed! I need it sooo baaaaad!!” she whined exaggeratedly. Despite having fucked her for almost two hours nonstop, he didn’t make her cum even once. Not that she would have thought anything else, given her experience with her other partner’s over the course of the last couple of months “Haa… haa… haaaaaa… So much…!” she made her eyes roll back into her head while letting her tongue hang out of her mouth to give her client the expression that most men were so eager to see. Her own saliva dropped onto her massive and heaving tits, only to disappear between her cleavage.

 

The man pulled his cock out of the mage’s overflowing pussy, which resulted in a lewd PLOP, and spun her around in one swift movement “Mmmmmh…” Ultear’s highly sensitive tits brushed against the palm tree, making her squirm and moan in arousal “Please…”

 

She bucked her lower body right against her partner’s cock, who now pointed directly at her ass “What? Already hungry for my cock again?!” he asked, slowly seesawing his erection between the girl’s buns.

 

YES!” she screamed. She was almost out of patience for this guy’s weird antics and his teasing now didn’t help to make her cum in any way “Please, I need your thick monster cock in my ass NOW!

 

“You truly are a horny whore, aren’t you?!” he shoved the first couple inches of his two feet long cock into her, making Ultear yelp in surprise and arousal as she could already feel an orgasm coming “But what did I expect?! My cousin already told me tha-”

 

STOP TALKING! START FUCKING!!!” Ultear interrupted him loudly, no longer caring that he was her client. He left her on the edge for far too long!

 

The man simply shrugged his shoulders “As you wish, whore!” he very slowly started to push his massive shaft further and further into her soon completely stuffed ass. Her belly visibly distended as almost the entirety of it went inside of her.

 

MMMMMMMMMHHHHH…! FUUCCCCKKKKK!!! MORE! MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!” she screamed. Each centimeter of the thick man-meat brought her closer and closer to the much desired orgasm that he denied of her every time so far. “MY INSIDES ARE BEING REARRANGED BY YOUR THICK COCK!!! I LOOOOOVE ITTTTT!!!!!!

 

When it became clear to him that he couldn’t push any deeper, he gently pulled back. Only to then SLAM his body forward as hard as he could!

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

 

His body turned into a blur of motions as he fucked her with the speed of a jackhammer. Ultear’s tits brushed against the palm that she was pinned against while more and more of her saliva started flinging out of her open mouth.

 

YES!!! HARDER! ROUGHER! DESTROY MY ASS!!!!!

 

Her lewd screams mixed with his grunts and the constant SLAP SLAP SLAP of his heavy balls hitting her ass with every thrust! The world around her started to disappear in a pink mist as every sense was completely overwhelmed by her, hopefully, first orgasm.

 

Just a bit more…‘ she thought to herself as he buried his cock once again as deep as he could into her womb, visibly stretching out her abdomen in the process. And she KNEW that she would cum soon! Her pussy drooled almost as much as her mouth, while his cock started to convulse rapidly as he got ready to shoot his seed once more into her.

 

With his hands on her hips, he thrusted his hips forward one last time, this time burying his cock ballsdeep as cum shot out of it like water from a fire hose!

 

YEEEEEEEEEEEEE… What???” her euphoric scream turned into a question when right as she was about to cum herself, the sensation suddenly left her body without granting her the much needed climax.

 

PLOP! The sound of her partner pulling his cock out of her gaping ass while cum continued to gush out of his ass went completely unnoticed by the black haired mage as she slowly slided the palm downwards until she leaned on her heavy tits like one would sit on a cushion.

 

“Aaaah…” for the first time of the day, Ultear could hear something else in the guy’s voice than the usual apathetic tone “I have to admit, I never had such an amazing sex as this one!” he grabbed his swimming trunks and put them back on whilst admiring the view of the still desperate and denied woman “As a reward I would like to tell you something.”

 

“Huh?” Ultear turned her head around and stared with empty eyes towards the meek mage.

 

“As you probably guessed by now, me and my friends are in a magic guild and as such are mages… Long story short, your inability to cum wasn’t because I wasn’t good enough but because I simply delayed them.”

 

“Huh?” having caught her attention, Ultear now turned around fully and rose to her feet. Sticky, white cum ran down her thighs and dropped onto the ground as she slowly came to understand what he was saying “So that means that…?”

 

“At first I delayed them because you certainly didn’t do a good enough job to earn them.” he told her matter-of-factly, ignoring the stare that he got from her in retaliation “But you were quite eager and never let up, so I decided to grant them to you now!”

 

He turned away and walked back to where they came from. “Have fun with them!”

 

Them? How many did he delay?‘ right as she finished her thought process, she felt as if all her insides were turned around! She fell to her knees and arched her back as orgasm after orgasm came over her stronger than any typhoon ever could!

 

CUUUUUMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGG!!!!!!!


(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

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Anonymous
12 days ago

When will you post a chapter with Natsu x juvia?

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
13 days ago

I really liked this chapter for how much variety it had from both sides. Lucy’s lesbian session, wholesomeness from Levy and her partner, Juvia’s dominatrix play, and finally Ultear possibly having the biggest orgasm explosion in the series to date, (maybe behind Lucy when she fucked Gray for the first time but that’s really all I can remember for the time being)

Hopefully we can get more chapters like this in the future maybe a super orgy of the like would be very satisfying to see

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago
Reply to  souljamantwn

Very happy to hear your (and the other guys) support. After the last story I almost thought that you guys didn’t like my writing anymore but hearing your thoughts here is really reassuring! Thank you!

As for the orgy, it depends on the artwork I’m getting but I would have nothing against it.

AxelRayne44
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AxelRayne44
13 days ago

Honestly I love the picture especially because Ultear is my top tier in fairy tail. I felt that instead of putting all four of their antics together that they should have each had their own chapters. Levy is actually sweet and I can see that happening with anyone if they want to talk. Poor lucy always get it up the ass, impressed with your direction of Juvia. Ultear love the comedic relief at the end.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago
Reply to  AxelRayne44

I really wanted to work with the tattoo version but wasn’t too keen on including Gray, which led to her being somewhat forced into this role.

Glad to hear your thoughts!

Jorge
13 days ago

When will we see irene again

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago
Reply to  Jorge

Patience, my friend! Soon…

Moltenblackbird
13 days ago

great chapter. love how ultear was tricked like that. makes me wonder how many orgasms were actually delayed. lucy getting womanhandled was hot. would say manhandled but no guy XD. juvia moving out of her comfort zone i guess was good. shes always submissive so its not to see her open up and try new types of plays. like the wholesome moment with levy and the huge guy. now i went back to another chapter. spellcasting a pornstar one with lucy levy and gajeel. makes me wonder what would lucy be like if that tattoo was never gone. shes already slutty. how off the rail would she be if she was that horny 24/7. hehe i can just picture in a room of like 20 clients fucking her for days and even then that wont be enough XD.

Mr. Akrononym
Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago

Great to hear that you like the chapter so much! The effect you described with Lucy can still very much be achieved. I just need an artwork with the right tattoo in it and BAM! never-ending sex is on the way XD

Moltenblackbird
13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

idk maybe levy develops a spell that lets you have sex without the need for hunger or thirst and the guild ends up using it for a guild size orgy once they get all the members back. all the members fuck each other in one massive orgy. but its private so its no customers. idk its a good idea imo. they announce like a week break where after all the members are back and all the issues are resolved they all fuck each other for a week straight with no breaks. would be a really long chapter but i think it could be a neat fun ending chapter for the story. idk could name it something like pleasure ever after XD. funny but accurate. i feel like the story is going on way too long which while im fine it would be nice to start a new story once everyone rejoins and they all fuck each other for an ending chapter. lucy and natsu get back together. gray wins juvia back. and so on.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago

I will think about it.

NamelessR04
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NamelessR04
13 days ago

This was a pretty great chapter here, Mr. Akrononym. I really like that you separated parts for each of the four gals and their clients, but Lucy’s part was short when it got to intense part as well as Juvia’s.

The section of Levy’s was kind of surprising and impressive, I was expecting another intense sex action, not a wholesome conversation about loving someone and stuff, not that I hate it or anything, but she’s the only one that didn’t have sex.

As for Ultear’s part, boy this was the best one, that apathetic guy she partnered with not only did he played her like a fool for pretending that he didn’t bang her good enough, but he left her as a spasming mess after releasing all the orgasms that he magically delayed from her, the last sentence of her outburst raise that volume.

Also, it’s crazy that apathetic guy insulted Lucy’s ass and called all the girls except Ultear, flat chested even though they’re not flat just small.

Last edited 13 days ago by NamelessR04
Mr. Akrononym
Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago
Reply to  NamelessR04

The apathetic guy simply has high standards and only bangs the most well endowed women out there. As for his insult, well he is related to the Ugly Bastard afterall and such vulgar speech seems to run in the family XD.

As for Levy, I can understand why it can come off as weak but I wasn’t too keen on having four sex scenes and felt like doing something else in this otherwise pretty sex driven chapter.

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
14 days ago

If the four clients were inspired by other series… I actually have no clue as to which.

At this point, I’m pretty sure Juvia just dodged a bullet with Levy not marking her ass as “Natsu’s Bitch”. XD

And it looks like I was right (somewhat) about Ultear being perfect to handle Ugly Bastard’s party. It also seems that Gray isn’t the only one capable of delivering the super orgasm; varied uses of magic can be fun to see, and more so the reactions from the ladies. And good too, since Ultear finally got her long overdue climax!

P.S.
Once the ladies roster is booked, will we get this FT’s version of the Miss Fairy Tail contest?

Mr. Akrononym
Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  Dr. Pervert

The 4 guild mages were some random characters that I just made into mages. No easter eggs or similar. I doubt that Ultear’s partner will return but I wanted to at least make two of them use some magic, which is why I gave him this.

The idea of a Miss Fairy Tail contest does seem really nice, ngl!

Dr. Pervert
Dr. Pervert
13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Oh, really? Well, hopefully Ultear’s next clients will be able to get the job done… or would it be better to have her desperate for release?

Anonymous
14 days ago

When will Natsu appear again?

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  Anonymous

So far I have nothing with him, sorry.

Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
13 days ago
Reply to  Anonymous

Remember it’s just him, other people write other stories as well. Just he will come back again I’m sure.

Hiryu
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Hiryu
14 days ago

I have to agree with the others. The concept of the story was good, but its execution was just all over the place. Not only that, it quickly became hard to follow.

That being said, I definitely liked the beginning part and out of the four girls, I really liked Levy’s and Juvia’s parts the most, but I didn’t expect Lucy’s and Ultear’s to go the way they did. Especially Ultear. XD

Still, good try though. 🙂

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  Hiryu

Since I already made the girl mention that they are from a magic guild, I felt it only appropriate to make use of some magic at least during one sex scene. It just so happened that it was Ultear who got to enjoy some delayed orgasms.

And sorry for making such an underwhelming chapter!

Anon
Anon
14 days ago

I like the art but there wasn’t a lot of action in the story. It was alright though and I’m glad we got to see levy again! Keep up the good work!

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  Anon

Thanks for your kind words, despite disappointing you! I will keep in mind what you people said today for the future!

IsItImportant?
IsItImportant?
14 days ago

It’s so easy to forget that they’re a sex guild LOL

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  IsItImportant?

Which is why I included this scene with some clients. I know, not everyone liked it but I felt it worth giving a try!

Michael H McFadden
Michael H McFadden
14 days ago

That artwork is great as usual but I’m gonna have to agree this is just all over the place for me. The story is alright but just to much to take in, not bad though. 8/10

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago

I can definitely see what you mean. I can reassure you though, the next (Fairy Tail) chapter will be much easier to take in!

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Combodestroyer( nalu forver)
14 days ago

This is hmmm interesting I can’t say it was amazing cause it wasn’t but it was ok. The art was great as always having a list of fairy sluts on the beach. I think this is a disappointing chapter cause their is too much going on as it doesn’t flow well when you start one then jumps to the other like Lucy’s part was so short and that was the best one! I didn’t care for ultear part and juvia being a dom is a good touch but the 2nd best was the wholesome levy part. I’m sure some people liked this and it had great parts and ideas but jamming all four into one update didn’t work, next time maybe do only two parts per person, cause if this update was just juvia and ultear then have levy and lucy in a separate update it would have worked better.
Good try a honest 7/10

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago

Thanks for your honest words. Yeah, it probably would have worked better if I put two girls together for one partner. I just wasn’t too keen by having all four girls fucked as I thought that would be a bit too dull. I understand that the other stuff wasn’t for anyone, so I really appreciate your input!