A Plundering of Pussy


(Note: This story is part of an ongoing series of One Piece stories)
Previous Story (Part V): [LINK]
Beginning (Part I): [LINK]
Next Story (Part VII): To be Continued…


Waves crashed against the sandy shores of a secluded beach on the far eastern end of the Mushroom Kingdom’s main island. While there were three other islands in close proximity to this one, none of them offered anything interesting, and only had a small village here or there. The one feature that all those islands had in common were the huge and towering mushrooms that sprouted all over the place. There were only a handful of actual forests spotted across the entire island, separated by towns, large rivers or a mountain range that reaches from the north-east of the island all the way to the center. According to the book that Nico Robin stole from the Royal Library a few days ago, there were even rumors about a Sky Island being up there. But since no one was brave enough to climb up there, no one confirmed those rumors. Well, aside from Monkey D. Luffy and Yamato, that is. Both of them were far too bored with everything else this island had to offer and thus decided to climb up the mountain all on their own to satisfy their childlike curiosity.

 

“Ahhh…!” Robin let out a deep and relaxed sigh as she laid the book she was reading just a few minutes ago on a table to her left. She then instead picked up the small cocktail glass that Sanji prepared for her before he and most other crew members left to check out the island some more.

 

The black haired beauty stretched her arms to both sides of her slender body, causing quite a few joints to crack and blinked at the bright burning sun above. Due to her being currently all alone on the beach, with only the Thousand Sunny resting in the shallow water in front of her, Robin was dressed in just the bare minimum. Which, in her case, was nothing more than just a black bikini thong that dug deep into the folds of her pussy. She wanted to regain some of the tan she had lost during her stay with the Revolutionaries during her two years of training and was more than glad to take this opportunity, now that both Sanji and Brook were away.

 

Not that she wouldn’t mind showing them a bit more of her body. But she always assumed that it would distract them more from their daily tasks than it was really worth, so she always decided against it in the end.

 

“Mmmmh” she moaned contentedly and rolled onto her stomach so that her back would get some sunlight as well. Summoning an extra pair of hands, she then reached for a bottle of sunscreen and started rubbing it on her back. Just because she wanted a tan didn’t mean that she would throw all precautions into the wind!

 

Her own hands felt wonderful on her back. Tracing her spine with her index finger alone caused her to moan even louder in pure bliss, “Ohhhh…” She then started to apply the sun lotion on her ass as well, taking extra care with her soft, yet firm buns as she massaged them gently with the two additional hands. It felt nothing short but heavenly to simply sit back, relax and knead her own ass cheeks. They felt so incredibly hot and good in her hands that she couldn’t help but purr in relaxation.

 

And yet, like most often, this moment of peace and quiet had to be interrupted as well!

 

PURURURURURU PURURURURURU PURURURURURU

 

The sound of a Transponder Snail echoed across the beach, breaking the serene silence of the beach. Robin let out a deep sigh and picked up the receiver of the snail underneath her, “Yes?” she asked, having a good idea of who was on the other end of the line.

 

“Hi, Robin. It’s me.” greeted Nami.

 

Robin moaned as her hands moved down her ass and started massaging her long and slender legs now, paying especially good attention to the space between her thighs. “Mmmmh… Hi. What do you need, Nami?”

 

“Oh, nothing. Just wanted to know how things are going at your end.” Nami stated. Like the other members of the crew, the orange haired navigator was currently enjoying some much needed rest and relaxation on the island. She didn’t let herself get discouraged by the first disappointing shopping spree they had in the small town of Mycelton back when they first landed on this island and would simply continue to search for some nice shops in the other towns. “How’s Carrot?”

 

“Nnnnngh.” Robin groaned softly as her own fingers traced the small section between her pussy and her ass, causing a bolt of excitement to course through her body, “Carrot is doing fine. She’s still sleeping in our cabin.” She informed her fellow crewmate after summoning a hand in the women’s quarters to take a quick look.

 

“Good.” Nami’s relief was audible.

 

It took the combined power of her, Nami and Yamato to quell the rabbit Mink’s ever growing lust. And with the full moon being right around the corner, Carrot’s energy and thirst only became stronger. Something simple like a makeout session in the showers just didn’t suffice anymore! But since Nami didn’t want to get the rest of the crew involved, it was up to the three women to keep Carrot satiated and her secret safe.

 

“She should wake up in a little while though, if the prior days are any indication.” she added.

 

Nami didn’t answer for a while as she simply sighed into the speaker, “I know, I know. We’ll get to it when we get to it.” she then said. “Sanji, Franky and I will be back in two hours or so.”

 

“Okay. Have fun, you three.”

 

They ended the call and Robin was left alone again, with only the sound of the waves splashing against the shore and the ship accompanying her. For a moment she considered reading her book again but then instead picked up this day’s newspaper. She didn’t had the time to read it earlier, or rather, didn’t feel like it, but with not much else to do she sprawled the newspaper out on the sun lounger underneath her and started reading. The frontpage was one large article about the battle between the Kid Pirates and the Kuja Pirates a few days ago. According to the newspaper, the Kid Pirates came out victorious. Strangely enough however, both ships later sailed away together, which made the writer assume that there’s more going on than a simple fight to the death between the two crews.

 

While she was reading through the rest of the newspaper, her hands continued roaming all over her lower body, “Hmmm… That’s nice!” she cooed hotly as she took another sip of her cocktail, “Mmmmmh… something big is coming.” she mused to herself, now moving her real right hand underneath her to stimulate her pussy.

 

Within just a few seconds she had her cunt gushing with her juices, enjoying the feel of her own fingers dipping deep into the hot folds. SHLK SHLK SHLK. The sound of her fingers moving in and out of her wet and hot little hole felt like music in her ears and only managed to make her go faster and faster. However, just because none of her crewmates were around, didn’t mean that she was alone on the beach. Robin smiled inwardly and moaned a bit louder, hoping that the three guys at the edge of the beach had a good view. The ear and the eye that she summoned near the trio kept her informed over everything they were talking about.

 

“Damn! You weren’t kidding, boss! That babe is gorgeous!” said the smallest of the three men as he leered at Nico Robin from behind his cover. Though his enormly obese body made it quite hard to hide behind one of the tall mushrooms.

 

BWARHARHARHAR!!!! You seriously didn’t believe me, Wario?!” the boss asked back. He was an imposing man with skin as dark as chocolate, easily over five meters tall and with fiery red hair. Unlike his two partners, who were dressed in purple overalls, the boss wore a pure white suit, adorned with a red rose that peeked out of one of his pockets. “I told you the girls from this weird ship are total cuties!”

 

Wario nodded in acknowledgement and continued watching the black haired woman with his boss, their eyes filled with lecherous intent. Next to them, the largest member of the trio shook his head, “I don’t know about this… I think I’ve seen that face of hers before. And that ship…” his knees trembled slightly, feeling just a little uneasy about the situation he found himself in.

 

“What? Are you still thinking she’s a pirate or something?!” asked the shortest of them again before taking a bite out of an onion. “No pirate crew would sail around in such a weird ship! At best, they’re probably some kind of traveling circus or something, which would make things easier for us since she would have some knowledge about the whole show business.”

 

“Are you an idiot!?” The boss of the trio punched the small man on the head, causing him to yelp out in pain, “We ain’t gonna sell her or anything once we have our hands on her!” upon seeing the surprised expression on his partners’ faces, he simply rolled his eyes. “I’m tired of trying to kidnap the princess all the time and a babe like her would be the perfect way to make the nights a bit more interesting, if you know what I mean.”

 

Wario ate the rest of his onion and rubbed his belly, “Gnahaha! I like your way of thinking, boss!” he burped and scratched his butt. “So how do you wanna go at it?”

 

“She’s a single woman on an open field, you idiot!” The red haired man adjusted his suit and tie before running his fingers through his red hair. “There aren’t that many ways to go at it! Just follow me and learn for yourself!”

 

He stepped out of the shadows of the mushrooms and stepped towards Robin, who couldn’t help but smirk as she heard his heavy footsteps on the ground. She obviously overheard their entire conversation from the moment that they first started gawking at her, and thus was more than interested in finding out what they had in store for her. His two subordinates looked at each other but quickly followed suit, rushing after their leader as he came to a halt just a few feet away from her.

 

His burning red eyes were fixed on her back and she could hear his heavy breathing as his cock started to swell just by seeing her so up close, “Ahem.” he cleared his throat, trying to get her attention and to make her look up to him. “I’m sorry for bothering you, missy, but we… I couldn’t help but notice you, laying here all alone by yourself!”

 

Robin blinked innocently, deciding to play along with them for the time being, “Oh. Is this a problem?” she asked whilst sitting up, completely aware of the fact that they would get to see her naked tits in all their glory.

 

A goofy expression spread across the red haired man’s face as a trickle of blood rushed out of his nostrils, “Not at all. I just thought it would be a nice gesture to warn you in advance.” He sat down next to her and somehow managed to not break the sun lounger due to his sheer weight and mass alone. “You see, we have this gang boss here on this island who would be all too happy about taking advantage of a girl in your position, so I thought it would be better if we stick around for a while so that he doesn’t try anything stupid.”

 

While he spoke, he put his arm around her shoulder and pulled her a little bit closer towards himself. His heart beat like drums and Robin could practically feel all the blood in his body rushing towards his erection, which in turn started throbbing and growing inside his pants. In the meantime his two subordinates crossed their hands in front of their chests and nodded approvingly to whatever their boss said.

 

“He’s a real saint, that’s for sure!” Wario assured. When his partner didn’t say anything in response, he bumped his side with his elbow. “Ain’t that right, Waluigi?!”

 

“Ouch! T- Totally.” he answered whilst rubbing his side. His face made it clear that he didn’t feel as certain about the whole thing as his two buddies, “In fact, why don’t you show your gratitude to the boss for protecting you?”

 

“Oh, however could I repay such a kind gesture?” Robin asked, playing the blissfully unaware and innocent girl that so many guys seemed to lust after. In her mind however, she forced herself to not laugh at how easy they seemed to believe her act.

 

The boss’ shining white and sharp teeth flashed in the warm sunlight as he grinned, “Don’t you worry, sweetcakes. I can already think of a way or two.” his arm wandered down her shoulder and towards her breasts. With hands the size of dinner plates he was more than capable of cupping her entire tit, squeezing it firmly and causing her to squeal in a mix of pleasure and pain. “If you know what I mean…”

 

Robin arched her back, relishing in the sensation of the palm of his hand pressing against her painfully stiff nipples, “Ohhhhh… So… straight forward!”

 

“I hope you don’t mind. It’s just… a girl with your proportions… no man in this world would be able to hold back!” he said whilst continuing to knead and grab her tit. His fingers sunk into the soft and pliant flesh with ease and made her squirm slightly in her seat. With his other hand began tracing her leg from her knee upwards, all the way to her dripping pussy. There, he then pushed one finger, which was already thicker than two of her own, inside. “Mmh… and so hot and wet already…! One would almost think that you were waiting for such a moment.”

 

“Haaaaa…!” Robin panted erotically as the man began moving his finger in and out of her pussy, “And… what if I did?”

 

The man’s smile managed to become even brighter, “Well, it certainly makes things way more easier for me, especially since you seem like quite the horny little slut.” he explained, enjoying her moans of arousal that escaped her lips whenever he pushed his finger all the way inside.

 

AAHHH!!!” Saliva dropped out of the black haired woman’s open mouth as the man fingerfucked her closer and closer to her first orgasm, “What… “things” are you talking ahhhh… about?” she then asked, her voice cracking slightly whenever he stirred his finger around inside of her.

 

Instead of the boss answering her question, the short man stepped forward, visibly turned on by the sight in front of him as the bulge in his pants indicated. “Come on, even a slut like you can’t be that oblivious!”

 

“Hey, Wario!” His friend called out and put a hand on his shoulder to hold him back. “She’s-”

 

“No, no! I think he has a point!” the dark skinned man interrupted his subordinate. A silent ‘plop’-sound was followed by a low moan from Robin as he pulled his finger out of her soaking wet pussy. “It’s time to bring this to the next level!”

 

He rose to his feet and stripped out of his white suit right in front of Robin’s eyes. Bulging muscles covered every part of his body, making for quite the imposing sight which only got enhanced by the MASSIVE cock that pointed straight at her. The thing was easily thicker than her leg and as long as her entire arm from her shoulder to the tip of her fingers, covered in several throbbing veins that were all thicker than her fingers. Her pussy clamped around thin air just by looking at that beast of a cock!

 

She bit her lower lips as memories of all her years on the run flooded her mind again, ‘Damn! This has to be the biggest cock I’ve ever seen so far!’ she thought to herself.

 

“Who cares if you’re some pirate-chick or not?!” The man then said to Waluigi, clearly proud of her surprised expression, “As long as I have this monster black cock, even some big titty pirate whore wouldn’t stand a chance! Am I right, bitch?!” seeing her reaction seemed to be answer enough for him as he then crossed his hands in front of his muscular chest. “Now then… why don’t you show me some love and thank me for protecting you?!”

 

On the verge of thinking that things might have gone over her head, Robin could only muster a weak smile, ‘Hm… I could always break his neck if I can’t handle this…’ she thought. From what she heard about this man so far, he didn’t seem to be the best or most talented fighter and mainly relied on brute force or his minions to do most of the fighting. In both cases she would have no trouble dealing with him. Something prevented her from going that route however. ‘I can’t have Nami find out that I couldn’t please a man of this caliber! Maybe I’ll even get some money out of it afterwards.

 

“Well, what are you waiting for?!” He urged her, growing impatient due to her hesitation. “Don’t make me wait for too much longer!”

 

Crossing her arms in her favorite pose, she bit down a bit more on her lip as she calmed her mind down, “Very well. I shall please you as best as I can!” She inhaled deeply one last time and closed her eyes. “QUATRO FLEUR!

 

Her voice echoed across the beach while four hands blossomed on the boss’ cock. He and both his subordinates freaked out and screamed in shock upon seeing the four extra limbs appearing out of absolutely nothing!

 

WHAT THE HELL ARRRRRRRRRGH!!!!!” The red haired man’s question turned into a deep and satisfied groan as all four hands wasted no time whatsoever and simply began stroking the massive cock.

 

“D- Devil Fruit Powers!!” Waluigi called out. He punched Wario on the head. “I told you there was something off about her and her friends!”

 

Wario looked as though he would punch his friend back if it weren’t for his trembling legs right now. “G- g- g- good for y- y- you! If you’re so s- s- smart, then why don’t you say what we should do n- next?!”

 

Greatly encouraged by their shocked reactions, Robin smiled and within a second had them stripped out of their clothes as well by some additional hands she summoned, “Boys, boys… There’s no need for you to do anything.” she then said, suppressing the urge to moan as she felt the boss thrusting his hips in accordance with her hand movements. “Just sit back and let me handle it all!”

 

While she was saying that, two new pairs of hands appeared on their thighs, which then instantly started to fondle their balls and reach for their dicks. Wario, surprisingly enough, had the much longer but way thinner cock while Waluigi’s wasn’t even as long as her arm from her wrist to the elbow. Despite this, both felt absolutely marvelous as she stroked them up and down, causing her to moan in open anticipation of how each of them would feel like inside of her.

 

GOD DAMN!!!!” groaned the leader. Sweat pearled down his naked skin as he clenched his hands into fists, “THIS FEELS SO GOOD!!!!!” he roared while all four of Robin’s hands kept rubbing his cock.

 

Robin clenched her thighs as she felt three cocks at once against her hand, “You know what would feel even better?” she then asked, as a mischievous gleam in her eyes.

 

“Hugh??” the dark skinned man grunted but found the answer to her question pretty soon as four mouths appeared at the palms of the additional hands. “No warrrrrrrrrgh!!!”

 

MMMMH, so tasty!” purred Robin. Her four hands dragged their tongues all over the man’s bulging erection, “Your cock feels so good on my tongue.” she moaned whilst carefully watching his every reaction. The hand on his cock kept moving in an almost hypnotic rhythm and ensured that every part of it was covered in her saliva.

 

Meanwhile to the side, both his subordinates moaned in utter ecstasy as two hand-mouths kept sucking and blowing on their nutsacks, swirling their tongues around in a wild and frantic manner. They bucked their hips back and forth uncontrollably, fucking nothing but air in their attempt to experience even more pleasure!

 

WAH!!! HOW CAN THIS BE?!?!” asked Waluigi as he watched the hand-mouth switch from one of his balls to the next while the other hand kept massaging his cock.

 

Next to him, Wario simply closed his eyes and arched his back a bit as he kept giving himself to the wild and bizarre situation. “WHO CARES?! THIS FEELS TOO GOOD TO GIVE A FUCK ANYWAYS!!!!

 

A vein popped on their leader’s forehead, “CAN YOU TWO IDIOTS SHUT UP FOR A MOMENT!? YOU’RE RUINING THE ENTIRE THING!!!!!” he roared from the top of his lungs and caused Robin to giggle in amusement.

 

“Mmmmh… seems like you can’t get enough out of this, hm?” she teased him, “Would you…” she knelt down in front of him and breathed hotly against his balls, causing him to wince and groan at the same time. “Like me to show you another trick?”

 

He couldn’t nod fast enough after hearing her words, “MHMMM!!!! GOD, WHO THE HELL ARE YOU??? YOU’RE WAY TOO GOOD AT THIS!!!!!” the boss said, now completely oblivious to the fact that three hands suddenly disappeared.

 

She licked her lips, getting even more aroused due to his rapid heartbeat that she was able to sense through his balls alone. Her last remaining hand on his cock reached up all the way to the tip where the mouth in its palm would disappear. Instead it became replaced by a perfect replica of her own, positively wet, hot and all too eager pussy. “I hope you’re ready then, big boy!”

 

That was the only warning he got as she pressed her hand against the tip of his cock, “OAAAAARGH!!!!!!!” his guttural roar rang in everybody’s ears as inch after inch of his schlong disappeared in her hand-pussy!

 

OOOOOOOHH, YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!” Robin screamed with him as an orgasm came crashing down on her, “YOUR COCK IS SO FUCKING BIGGGGG!!!!!!” the hands on his subordinates stopped working for a while as she had to get accustomed to the impossible girth and size that now moved through her pussy. “YOU’RE STIRRING AROUND MY INSIDES SO GOOD!!!!

 

“H- How does this even work??” Waluigi sounded genuinely interested and surprised by the whole situation.

 

Wario rolled his eyebrows, “It doesn’t matter! I’m happy as long as she does the same thing with me!” he said. “I’M number one and I won’t go until I busted a nut in that juicy ass of hers!”

 

Mmmmh… You wanna fuck my ass, do you? Well, have at it!’ she declared in her mind and let a copy of her ass appear in the palm of the hand that was still stroking his cock. Her eyes wandered towards Waluigi whom she granted the pleasure of enjoying two tongues dragging from the base of his dick, all the way to the top, where she then quickly started to to wrap one of her lips around the short cock. With one cock buried inside her ass, one deep inside her mouth, and the other pushed all the way inside her pussy, Robin began moving all three hands in unison!

 

OOOOOOOHHH!!!” All of them grunted, moaned and panted at the same time, undoubtedly experiencing the most bizarre foursome they ever had in their entire life.

 

Just like her real pussy, the duplicate clamped around the red haired guy’s cock, squeezing it tight and making it harder for her to move her hand, “AAAAAMPH, THISH PHEELSH WAY THOO GHUUDDD…!!!!!” Robin against the boss’ balls as she climaxed and climaxed and climaxed some more.

 

Drops of precum spurted in her every orifice as all three guys got closer and closer to cumming as well. The leader put his hands on her head to hold her in place while he kept fucking her hand-pussy with monstrous ferocity. “FUCK!!! YOUR CUNT IS WAY TOO TIGHT!!!!!

 

“Tell me about it!” Wario replied. “It feels like she’s trying to rip off my dick with her ass alone!”

 

She ignored their words and instead focused on the salty taste of Waluigi’s precum on her tongue. Her tongue rubbed over the underside of his giant cock as she kept bobbing her hand back and forth, running the tip of her fingers through his pubic hair whenever she got the chance for it. Her jaw ached so wonderfully due to the sheer girth of the whole thing that she couldn’t help but moan even louder. All of them lacked clear skill and experience but she wouldn’t let herself get distracted by something like that. Seeing them all thrust their hips so desperately like this was quite the pleasure in its own right!

 

OH GAWWWWWDD!!! AYE’M CUMMING SO FUGGGING HAWD!!!” she screamed, with her words badly slurred by the dark skinned man’s balls stuffed in her mouth. How she managed to fit both his cock and his balls inside was something that she didn’t quite understand but she didn’t complain. All she needed to know was how good the whole thing felt right now!

 

It had been quite some time since she last was in such a situation but that didn’t mean that she didn’t know when her partners would blow their loads. And such, after not even fifteen minutes of fucking, Robin was able to tell exactly which one of her three partners would cum first!

 

Wario! His strangely long, yet thin cock kept convulsing and throbbing inside of her for a solid two minutes. During this time, he started fucking her hand-ass at even faster and irregular pace, panting like a dog in heat whilst doing so “Haaa… haaa… haaa…!!!” his balls kept slapping against her wrists until he finally climaxed!

 

Waluigi! She could practically taste his cum before it even shot out of his cock. Once it did actually flood her mouth, she almost became overwhelmed by the incredibly salty taste of it and how it seemed to rush straight down her stomach. His eyes widened to comically large extends as he not only came, but also screamed his soul out. “WAAAHAAAA!!!!!!

 

And lastly, the boss! Robin felt his balls pumping blood at an alarmingly fast pace. Like lava from an active volcano, his cum erupted out of his cock and went straight into her pussy, “YEAHHHH!!!! TAKE IT ALL YOU SLUT!!!!!!” he roared as gallon after gallon of gooey hot cum kept pouring her insides. After just half a minute the viscous fluid already oozed out of her pussy again, running down her hand all the way to her wrist from which it then would drop onto the sand beneath.

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!” like a banshee, Robin screamed with each of them, cumming every time their cum would be released inside of her.

 

With loud and thunderous ‘THWOMPS!’ all three guys would fall onto their backs, completely and utterly exhausted by what they just had been through. Waluigi’s and Wario’s eyes kept spinning inside their sockets while their boss looked up into the sky, his eyes devoid of any pride and energy he previously had, “This… was the most intense sex I ever had!” he said after a while.

 

Robin simply looked down on them and gently rubbed her swollen clit, ‘Seems like I was able to handle this cock better than I thought…’ she mused to herself, feeling quite proud of that accomplishment. “It certainly was a nice warmup, yes.”

 

“Mhm, you can say that agAAAAAH!!!” The leader yelped in shock, unable to comprehend what she just said, and tried to push himself to his feet again but found that he was still too weak for that. “Wait! What? Warmup?”

 

“Of course.” Robin smiled brightly, “You did so well right now that I think you earned yourself the right to have fun with a friend of mine.” she then turned towards the ship and shouted as loud as she could, “CARROT!!!! I HAVE SOME NICE GUYS HERE WHO WOULD BE WILLING TO HELP YOU OUT!!!!!” she mainly shouted like this so that the three guys would get a vague idea of what was coming next. After that, she laid down on her sun lounger again and picked up her book. “And don’t worry. Carrot will probably be satisfied after five hours or so.”

 


(Story by: Mr. Akrononym)

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Anonymous
Anonymous
6 days ago

aAn alternate version of the banquet in alabasta where the straw hat crew have an orgy where vivi proves to pell, chaka, and her father that she is no longer a child and they all join in the big orgy.

Hey
Hey
13 days ago

Could you please use luffy more would love that also art is amazing hope we get more chapter of one piece is my favourite

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
12 days ago
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Hi Hey. I’ll see what can be done about Luffy and he’ll definitely make an appearance sooner than later. Images like this one, however, make it pretty hard to include him.

TtRemember
13 days ago

luffy x shirahoshi go

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
13 days ago
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You don’t need to spam this stuff. I will have to include a scene with them one way or another when I get an artwork anyways.

Kielian
Kielian
14 days ago

At first I was thinking that this was going to be another unoriginal and stereotypical story of the woman being defeated by the black cock. And then I would have said that a chapter of daz bones hate or silent fucking robin with his steel tipped dick gyrating like a drill would have been a more creative idea.

But color me impressed that you subverted my expectations. Also for whatever reason the three bandits were reminding me of the pirates that abducted a princess and were going to attack Rebecca and viola’s ship if not for koby’s intervention. Now I’m thinking of a chapter of Rebecca and villa rewarding koby and helmeppo with a foursome.

Speaking of which the only odd think about this chapter is what happened after robins last chapter with koby, this feels like an odd smash cut.

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
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Yeah, I could have probably expanded more on the Koby stuff but simply didn’t came up with a way to bring it into the story without distracting too much from the main plot. But what you can’t forget in that regard is that there’s an entire week separating the Robin X Koby story and this one. So it stands to reason that he left them somewhere during those seven days. I’ll probaby explain the Koby stuff more in a future chapter.

Xcelsior
Xcelsior
14 days ago

“Nico Robin vs Monster Black Cock” makes me laugh XD

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
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Had me chuckling at first as well. Make sure to tell Rtenzo your thoughts as well. I’m sure he will appreciate them.

Connor J O'Carroll
14 days ago

um idk what’s going on but i’m pretty sure this ???(awaiting for approvel)???thing was never here before or during sunrise/morning today :/

Last edited 14 days ago by Connor J O'Carroll
Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago

Maybe the site had some issues. All seems fine now.

Connor J O'Carroll
13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

oh ok

way2dumb2live
way2dumb2live
14 days ago

Nice job. I hope we see a sequel with Carrot in it, since the overall plot is actually interesting, assuming you haven’t changed it yet. Not to say that I’d blame you if you did, I would too if I was in your position, but I hope you don’t since it’s actually good.

Onto the mandatory Usopp segment: I hope he always wears a condom in the sex scenes he gets. Hear me out: He doesn’t want to become his dad. Let’s be real here, Usopp probably harbours at least some hate for Yasopp since the man legit abandoned him. But, Usopp also knows he is a lot like Yasopp. So, he knows he is nowhere near ready to be a dad, otherwise he’d end up just like Yasopp.

Honestly you don’t even have to make this a whole chapter. Just put in a few lines and voila, you’ve given Usopp more characterization than he ever got in Wano and if we’re being honest even Dressrosa.

Still, it’s your story. You can reject all of my suggestions if you wanted to. I still have some hope that you put in Usopp x Ulti, but Ulti x *SPOILER* also works. All of my suggestions in the first place weren’t supposed to be for the main storyline either, more just background stuff like Usopp being a narrator or Usopp and Ulti appearing at the end of each chapter like they were just on a date. Y’know, little things that give Usopp some much deserved love.

Still, keep it up. And to anyone else reading this comment, take it from someone who almost worked on this project, you have no idea what you’re in for. You’ll definitely love it though!

Mr. Akrononym
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Mr. Akrononym
14 days ago
Reply to  way2dumb2live

Happy to read about your support. It will probably take some time until Usopp makes an appearance in an actual sex scene. Thanks for your ideas.

souljamantwn
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souljamantwn
14 days ago

The super Mario references had me dying xD very funny. Great seeing Robin taking on multiple cocks with next to no effort at all almost reminds me of Satsuki how quick shes able to rebound. Damn that Nami for still trying to keep the horny rabbit mink away from the rest of the crew, out of all the females she definitely deserves to get her brains fucked out the most. One Piece manga has been 🔥 so hopefully we once again don’t have to wait too long for the next chapter.

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14 days ago
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I mean, there is no reason for Nami to tell the boys about Carrot’s problem. It’s not like a matter of life or death or anything and something much more private than anything else Nami (and the other girls) had faced before. In my opinion it makes sense that she doesn’t instantly go for the boys, especially when, so far, the girls are capable of handling Carrot on their own.

And yeah, One Piece is pretty great right now and I already have the next artwork ready. I only need to start writing.

Jdogzero
14 days ago

Rest in piece residence of the mushroom kingdom.

Mr. Akrononym
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14 days ago
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Just for clarification, as mentioned in my comment below, this is all just an easter egg. I needed them to stay on some island and since it felt boring to create some lame-ass island like I did in the last series, I simply went with this little thing. Happy to read that it resonates so well with you.

Jdogzero
14 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

? All I did was make a joke. Never cared for the stories. Yours more than the other writers tbh. Hate ntr and it seems like your main focus in your stories.

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14 days ago
Reply to  Jdogzero

My apologies. A certain someone told me that I went too far with the Mario references in this story, so I’m overly cautious.

Also, the only story where NTR is a prominent factor is the Naruto one. And I’m literally only writing what S22132 and later SailorIo began. If you’re not a fan of it, that’s fine.

Jdogzero
13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Yea I have nothing against you personally. Ntr just flat out pisses me off. Mainly the type that has the guy steal the girl then constantly sends videos and torments the guy he stole her from. If they steal the girl and the guy is never shown and hardly mentioned I’m fine with it.

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13 days ago
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To each their own. I for one find the idea of NTR/cuckolding to be rather enticing and fascinating, which is the primary reason to write Naruto after the site was down and all those stories were lost back in January.

Connor J O'Carroll
14 days ago

Damn man I just finished reading it & I now feel really bad 4 what’s about 2 happen 2 waluigi, wario, & ??bowser?? XD

Last edited 14 days ago by Connor J O'Carroll
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14 days ago

Well, given the ending of the chapter I would say that all three of them are in for about five hours or more of rough bunny sex XD. Glad you like it.

Connor J O'Carroll
13 days ago

& now i can’t stop seeing Wario, Waluigi, & ?? Bowser ?? in the next chapter looking the same as Raizou & Shinobu after they were sucked dry by Admiral Ryokugyu XD

Connor J O'Carroll
14 days ago

ok then & idk if anyone read my long/massive helpful advice comments in the comment section of the Monet chapters thumbnail page (not the chapter page itself) but I can’t tell for 100% certain this early in the new OP story but it seems like nami, robin, hancock, carrot, r already crossed out shipping wise but things may change down the line so anyway i was wondering if their’s any plans for luffy & whoever he may/may not get shipped with so given he’s now the 2nt Joyboy/god of liberation & freedom how does a Luffy x N. Vivi, Rebecca, Yamato, & Uta harem sound??? with Yamato as a crewmate girlfriend & V/R/U as long distance girlfriends & if u can’t imagine how that’d work out my advice comments include stuff on the Sea-Train system & I would’ve said Shirahoshi too but that’d be difficult given her natural size :/

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14 days ago

Spoiler ahead, you’re right with the Harem-thingy. Even partially with the members included. It’s gonna play out differently though and not the way you would expect. Also, Rtenzo doesn’t seem to be interested in Uta and I haven’t watched Film Red (yet) since it didn’t come out where I live, so including her will be hard, if not impossible.

As always, thanks for your support and kind words!

Connor J O'Carroll
14 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

yeah but maybe when the English dub One Piece Film: Red comes out maybe Uta will be a possibility given the ancient childhood friends turned lovers trope/theme :p

Connor J O'Carroll
14 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

ok & when the English dub of One Piece Film: Red comes out/is available in America Uta might be a 50% possibility given the ancient childhood friends turned boyfriend/girlfriend lovers trope/theme 😛 also I’m psyched that there’ll be a Luffy x Harem for the new OP story even if it won’t turn out like my suggestion 🙂

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14 days ago

As I said, Rtenzo doesn’t seem to be interested in her whatsoever, so I’m not sure if that can become a real thing.

Roger Goga
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13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

Who is gonna be in the harem? Is it Yamato and carrot and Nami?

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13 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Two no. One yes.

Roger Goga
Roger Goga
13 days ago
Reply to  Mr. Akrononym

So nami is going to be in the harem with luffy

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13 days ago
Reply to  Roger Goga

Who knows?! I didn’t say that the order in which I said it alligned with yours.

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14 days ago

Little disclaimer before anyone gets confused or interprets too much into this story:

The characters, names, and locations featured in this, and potentially following, chapters are nothing more than Easter eggs. I’m not doing any crossover stuff in this One Piece series and merely used already existing names to make this feel more dynamic than just referring to the characters as “the fat/tall/big man” or something else. We cool?

I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter!

Last edited 14 days ago by Mr. Akrononym